My Little Story

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Chaos'Wake

Chaos'Wake

Chaos'Wake
So how do you like it?

Dark Exile
Whats its meaning.

Chaos'Wake
if ure talkin about the story: ummm it doesnt really have one that im conciously aware of, i just kinda wrote it, but I'll think about that.
please sspecify if ure talkin about sumtin else

Chaos'Wake
can sum1 plz give me sum feedback

hotsauce6548
I began to read, but then I noticed that you've blocked your paragraphs together. You did good with putting spaces in between the paragraphs (KMC doesn't recognize indents). However, when I scrolled down more, I saw that you have two or more quotes of two or more people in a single paragraph.

As soon as somebody new begins to speak, a new paragraph starts. When you have more paragraphs spaced off, the text doesn't look like a blob of writing, and the reader is more willig to read. yes

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