I began to read, but then I noticed that you've blocked your paragraphs together. You did good with putting spaces in between the paragraphs (KMC doesn't recognize indents). However, when I scrolled down more, I saw that you have two or more quotes of two or more people in a single paragraph.
As soon as somebody new begins to speak, a new paragraph starts. When you have more paragraphs spaced off, the text doesn't look like a blob of writing, and the reader is more willig to read.