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can u all tell me if my story title is ok

im going to write a bit of my story .

Chapter 1- The long end less summer .

Harry is once again back at the derslys for summer , he has only been back there for a week and he is now living back under the stairs as his unwelcoming aunt is coming to stay.
“Harry get up , now were going to pick up aunt Marge “ said petunia
“alright I’m up “ said Harry in a angry voice
“ right im warning you now and magic used you will not have any food for 2 weeks, do you understand “ said uncle Vernon
“yes uncle Vernon” said Harry with a smile on his face .
“ come on move get in the car” said uncle Vernon
Its now 5`oclock and the have just arrived at the train station waiting, for aunt Marge

Good, But Proper Puncuation and Capitization go A long Way
The Title is what Caught my attention, By the Way.

Chapter 1- The long EndLess summer .

Harry is once again back at the Dursley's for summer, he has only been back there for a week and he is now living back under the stairs as his unwelcoming aunt is coming to stay.
"Harry get up, we're going to pick up Aunt Marge" said Petunia.
"Alright I’m up", said Harry in a angry voice.
"Right, I'm warning you now boy, any magic used you will not have any food for Two weeks, Do you understand?" Asked Uncle Vernon.
"Yes Uncle Vernon" said Harry with a smile on his face.
"Come on, move, get in the car” said Uncle Vernon.
It's now 5`oclock, and they have just arrived at the train station waiting, for Aunt Marge.

Don't Shoot me for Editing your Post.

thanx can u help me plz

it's okay

can u help me plz

i love your title

can i help you harry lover? well that is if you want me to. i could be your beta.

lol....nice editing barker, oh and cool story, keep it up harrylover13