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This is what I love to do, write poetry. So i would like to share it with you guys. You can tell me what you think about it if you what. Some of the poems are deep, funny, sad, happy, angry, and all of the above. Feel free to tell me if you ever felt the same way of how the poems are expressed.

i'm looking out the window
it's raining so hard that the glass is gonna break
break any second
just like my heart

i'm looking out the window
i wanna see your face
but i'm afraid if you look at my face
you'll see a huge disgrace

i'm looking out the window
can't seem to find anything else to do
all i can do is sit and think of you

i'm looking out the window
should i cry should i not
are you worth it are you not
should i stop, think, say you were never on the top
never at my number 1 spot

i'm looking out the window
i can't find a place to start
can't pick up the pieces
the pieces to this broken heart

i'm looking out the window
can't you see me
am i that obvious
am i invisible to you
should you be invisible to me
is this the way it was meant to be

i'm not looking out the window
i can't look at your face
i have to get over you
no matter how long it takes

i sit at the edge of the world holding daggers in my hand am i ready to end my life befor the apcolpys can no i will drop my blades sit and wait my head aches from the pain thinking that i alone could of stoped all of this......was my choice right? or should i have warned every one else no matter now cuz every one is dead any how. ( i just made some of this up i dont right poems but i wanan make a coimic book so i have had some ideas)

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
i'm looking out the window
it's raining so hard that the glass is gonna break
break any second
just like my heart

i'm looking out the window
i wanna see your face
but i'm afraid if you look at my face
you'll see a huge disgrace

i'm looking out the window
can't seem to find anything else to do
all i can do is sit and think of you

i'm looking out the window
should i cry should i not
are you worth it are you not
should i stop, think, say you were never on the top
never at my number 1 spot

i'm looking out the window
i can't find a place to start
can't pick up the pieces
the pieces to this broken heart

i'm looking out the window
can't you see me
am i that obvious
am i invisible to you
should you be invisible to me
is this the way it was meant to be

i'm not looking out the window
i can't look at your face
i have to get over you
no matter how long it takes
good poem

thanks

It's good yes

GO AWAY
why are you here
i don't want near
your just the kind of person that i fear

fear to see
fear to be
fear to know that your in love with me

i fear to love
i fear to care
cuz' every time i always share
i only end up in dark times of dispare

so GO AWAY
i don't want you here.
i don't want you near
your just the kind of person that i fear

I enjoy your poems, but I have a question that kinda goes out to all those ladies that are kinda young. "How do you fill up with so much hurt so young???" Just kinda reviewing the poems from the posters, and from the folks I know. Kinda strange to see such pain in the youth. Sorry, tangent.... Write more soon, oK?

i never had a first time
i don't know what it's like
i told my friends I'm not a virgin
Ha, yea right, sike

i never had a first
thats how my parents want it to stay
but they don't know my friend are trin to get in the way

i never had a first time
i don't know, am i scared
is it something thats always supposed to be shared

i never had a first time
got to much on my plate
please, i never even really went on a date

i never had a first time
is that such a bad thing
i heard that you should wait until you get a wedding ring

i never had a first time
does it hurt do you cry
should i not just ask questions and give it a try

i never had a first time
don't plan to anytime soon too
Hey I'm just a kid thinkin the same things other kids do

yea, alot of these poems are not all about me. i have alot of older friends so sometimes i write about them. they like the poems i wright most of the time. don't worry i don't have any problems or anything...lol
Oh by the way thanks and i should be writing more soon

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
yea, alot of these poems are not all about me. i have alot of older friends so sometimes i write about them. they like the poems i wright most of the time. don't worry i don't have any problems or anything...lol
Oh by the way thanks and i should be writing more soon
Haha. groovy.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
i never had a first time
i don't know what it's like
i told my friends I'm not a virgin
Ha, yea right, sike

i never had a first
thats how my parents want it to stay
but they don't know my friend are trin to get in the way

i never had a first time
i don't know, am i scared
is it something thats always supposed to be shared

i never had a first time
got to much on my plate
please, i never even really went on a date

i never had a first time
is that such a bad thing
i heard that you should wait until you get a wedding ring

i never had a first time
does it hurt do you cry
should i not just ask questions and give it a try

i never had a first time
don't plan to anytime soon too
Hey I'm just a kid thinkin the same things other kids do

Ok, now ya get me started! I hope you are still hangin onto virginity. I am, barely. (kinda fell in with a bad girlfriend a while ago, not with her now.) Too many folks don't know what it means. Lotta friends ended up with STD's and pregnancy, even when "protected". That is most definitely the best gift you could ever give anyone, and it is better saved for a husband or wife. Trust me.

Yea i know. Thats why i'm hangin on to it for a while. To, me i don't think there's really a rush.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
Yea i know. Thats why i'm hangin on to it for a while. To, me i don't think there's really a rush.
No, there is not. It seems to take forever, (trust me, I know.) but it really only is moments before you and your true love meet, and ya'll settle in for life. Just let it come naturally, and ignore folks who tell you otherwise. If nothing else, think about this: I am a 23-year-old GUY, who has kept himself for one woman. The amount of bs I have heard is incomprehensible, especially when I work in construction. But I just say, "You know what, do what you will with your body, let me do what I want with mine." And 9 outta 10 times folks who find out I am a virgin say that is a great thing, and that they wished they would have done so.
Ya ain't alone, and you most definitely are not less than those who have given it up.

Ha.... sorry. longwinded.... anyway, new stuff?? yes???

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
No, there is not. It seems to take forever, (trust me, I know.) but it really only is moments before you and your true love meet, and ya'll settle in for life. Just let it come naturally, and ignore folks who tell you otherwise. If nothing else, think about this: I am a 23-year-old GUY, who has kept himself for one woman. The amount of bs I have heard is incomprehensible, especially when I work in construction. But I just say, "You know what, do what you will with your body, let me do what I want with mine." And 9 outta 10 times folks who find out I am a virgin say that is a great thing, and that they wished they would have done so.
Ya ain't alone, and you most definitely are not less than those who have given it up.

Thanks for the encouragement. I never really encountered a guy who was in his twenty's, and is a virgin. I think there should be more guys following the same thing your doing. Some of the guys I know think they have to do it and then brag about it but i just ignore what they have to say most of the time.

And for your second question,yes, the is more to come

look at her
walkin down the street
wearin that tight short skirt
and that small behind shirt
thinkin she's cute but she need to go on mute
she talks way to much junk
sayin, oooo, look at all this in my trunk

every boy sees her as some kind of play toy
every girl looks at her and sees nothin but a stash of trash
all the desperate men stand in line
sayin to themselves, oh damn, she fine
all the women wonder why
they say she used to be so shy

to herself she would always lie
she never even had a pie
to scared to go to a size 0 to a size 1
thinkin she would weigh a ton

her family is to ashamed of her
her parent never even claimed of her
her brothers and sisters allways named her
you know the kind of names they call the girls that are" out there"
the ones that get talked about for the nothing they wear

look at her
talkin to every boy she meet
trin to act all neat
but she need to take a back seat
not realizin she's throwin her life away
not realizin that she has gone astray
to busy doin her so called job every day

she's just walkin down the street
watchin the boys look at her like she some kind'a treat
but noin deep in her heart
that she's really smart
but what other people don't know
is that she's fallin apart

she's worth so much more
she has so much in store
i just hope she knows that before she walks out that door
the same exact door that leads to the same exact street
the street were she talks to every boy she meet.

i wrote this in like 15 minutes. so what do you guys think. it's not my favorite but it's a poem.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
Thanks for the encouragement. I never really encountered a guy who was in his twenty's, and is a virgin. I think there should be more guys following the same thing your doing. Some of the guys I know think they have to do it and then brag about it but i just ignore what they have to say most of the time.

And for your second question,yes, the is more to come
yeah, I can only name 2 other dudes my age that maintain it... well, at least on purpose.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
look at her
walkin down the street
wearin that tight short skirt
and that small behind shirt
thinkin she's cute but she need to go on mute
she talks way to much junk
sayin, oooo, look at all this in my trunk

every boy sees her as some kind of play toy
every girl looks at her and sees nothin but a stash of trash
all the desperate men stand in line
sayin to themselves, oh damn, she fine
all the women wonder why
they say she used to be so shy

to herself she would always lie
she never even had a pie
to scared to go to a size 0 to a size 1
thinkin she would weigh a ton

her family is to ashamed of her
her parent never even claimed of her
her brothers and sisters allways named her
you know the kind of names they call the girls that are" out there"
the ones that get talked about for the nothing they wear

look at her
talkin to every boy she meet
trin to act all neat
but she need to take a back seat
not realizin she's throwin her life away
not realizin that she has gone astray
to busy doin her so called job every day

she's just walkin down the street
watchin the boys look at her like she some kind'a treat
but noin deep in her heart
that she's really smart
but what other people don't know
is that she's fallin apart

she's worth so much more
she has so much in store
i just hope she knows that before she walks out that door
the same exact door that leads to the same exact street
the street were she talks to every boy she meet.

Hmmm describes most young females I see today. Thinking that showing it all off and starving is the way to live, and not loved by any, just lusted after. Fegh. *sigh* They should know that they are worthy of the best, and that, unfortunately as Travolta put it, " dress like haloween, ghouls will try to get into your pants." Very true. I like it. Truth in poems is a fave of mine. more please!!!

Thanks. I like writing poems that have to do with real life;makes things more interesting and people may pay alittle more attention to it. I'll write alittle tommorow but only one because of school, my soccer game, homework, and lord knows what else. It seems like there's never enough time in a day when you reach high school.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
I enjoy your poems, but I have a question that kinda goes out to all those ladies that are kinda young. "How do you fill up with so much hurt so young???" Just kinda reviewing the poems from the posters, and from the folks I know. Kinda strange to see such pain in the youth. Sorry, tangent.... Write more soon, oK?
*shrugs* Cuz life's funny that way I guess....
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Ok, now ya get me started! I hope you are still hangin onto virginity. I am, barely. (kinda fell in with a bad girlfriend a while ago, not with her now.) Too many folks don't know what it means. Lotta friends ended up with STD's and pregnancy, even when "protected". That is most definitely the best gift you could ever give anyone, and it is better saved for a husband or wife. Trust me.
That's my belief as well yes
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
Thanks for the encouragement. I never really encountered a guy who was in his twenty's, and is a virgin. I think there should be more guys following the same thing your doing. Some of the guys I know think they have to do it and then brag about it but i just ignore what they have to say most of the time.

And for your second question,yes, the is more to come
I agree with you
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
Thanks. I like writing poems that have to do with real life;makes things more interesting and people may pay alittle more attention to it. I'll write alittle tommorow but only one because of school, my soccer game, homework, and lord knows what else. It seems like there's never enough time in a day when you reach high school.
Trust me I know the feeling, especially when you get into the higher grades... I haven't had much of a chance to sit down and write stuff in a while

Sheesh I quoted all that stuff and forgot to say anything bout your poem! doh It was very good yes

thanks coldfire, glad you like my poem and you agree with me. i'm only in 9th grade but i'm sure i'll figure out that the higher the grades are, the much harder it is by next year. i just can't wait to get it over with. i already have a whole bunch of homework.

oh yea, i'll but a poem out sometime later

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
Thanks. I like writing poems that have to do with real life;makes things more interesting and people may pay alittle more attention to it. I'll write alittle tommorow but only one because of school, my soccer game, homework, and lord knows what else. It seems like there's never enough time in a day when you reach high school.
hahahhaa oh man yeah. I remember that.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
thanks coldfire, glad you like my poem and you agree with me. i'm only in 9th grade but i'm sure i'll figure out that the higher the grades are, the much harder it is by next year. i just can't wait to get it over with. i already have a whole bunch of homework.
Haha... yeah, 9th is ok. 11th is the best.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Haha... yeah, 9th is ok. 11th is the best.

I always thought that 12th would be the best. I still have 3 more years to figure that out though. Any way here is that poem i promised.

I just got back from a pool party man
you should take a look at my dark new tan
i can't even walk in a line that is strait
i feel bad cause' i just got dropped from my date
oh wait, i can't feel
I'm head over a heal

when i walk i feel dizzy
i tried calling my house but the phone line's to busy
hold on, where did i park
i can't see in the dark
oh yea, there's my car
why does it seem so far
wait i don't remember buyin two red cars

i looked to my my left, i looked to my right
then i crossed sayin to myself that party was tight
i go up to my car door and open it
then i just hop in and sit in it
what happened i can't think
then i look at myself through the view mirror
hey my face is turning pink
oh no, here it comes, i try to open the door
but oh great i couldn't, it's all over my floor

i can't remember anything after that
i think i passed out after i sat
and today man, i think I'm out of my lucks
because this hangover, yea dude, it really sucks


It's differnent then the rest of the poem so what do you think. Any thing i need to fix?

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
thanks coldfire, glad you like my poem and you agree with me. i'm only in 9th grade but i'm sure i'll figure out that the higher the grades are, the much harder it is by next year. i just can't wait to get it over with. i already have a whole bunch of homework.
You're welcome

Ahhh I remember my 9th grade year... it was pretty interesting Good times, good times...
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Haha... yeah, 9th is ok. 11th is the best.
Yeah except for the homework! LOL. But it's good cuz I'm finally a senior hehehehe

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
I always thought that 12th would be the best. I still have 3 more years to figure that out though. Any way here is that poem i promised.

I just got back from a pool party man
you should take a look at my dark new tan
i can't even walk in a line that is strait
i feel bad cause' i just got dropped from my date
oh wait, i can't feel
I'm head over a heal

when i walk i feel dizzy
i tried calling my house but the phone line's to busy
hold on, where did i park
i can't see in the dark
oh yea, there's my car
why does it seem so far
wait i don't remember buyin two red cars

i looked to my my left, i looked to my right
then i crossed sayin to myself that party was tight
i go up to my car door and open it
then i just hop in and sit in it
what happened i can't think
then i look at myself through the view mirror
hey my face is turning pink
oh no, here it comes, i try to open the door
but oh great i couldn't, it's all over my floor

i can't remember anything after that
i think i passed out after i sat
and today man, i think I'm out of my lucks
because this hangover, yea dude, it really sucks


It's differnent then the rest of the poem so what do you think. Any thing i need to fix?
hmm yeah it's definitely different... it's interesting

Originally posted by Coldfire
You're welcome

Ahhh I remember my 9th grade year... it was pretty interesting Good times, good times...

Yeah except for the homework! LOL. But it's good cuz I'm finally a senior hehehehe

Sissy..hahahaha!


hmmm.... hopefully seen from outside the poem, and not a personal experience. but, yeah, that describes some of my old highschool buds.... and their idiotic habit.

Originally posted by Coldfire
hmm yeah it's definitely different... it's interesting

Yea I know. I just felt like writing it because a friend of mine got drunk and almost passed out before. She almost barfed all over her car too. Yea I know, kinda gross but thats usually what happens if you drink 2 much. Anyway, she woke up with this huge hangover the next morning.....Not cool. I'm not the person to say I told you so, so I just let her learn by herself. Then again it's not very new when people get wasted at parties.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Sissy..hahahaha!


hmmm.... hopefully seen from outside the poem, and not a personal experience. but, yeah, that describes some of my old highschool buds.... and their idiotic habit.

yea right, I can't even lie 2 my mom and dad about a simple bad quiz grade. So no to answer your question, I've never got wasted. i might have tried like a sip of something here in there, like a little wine but never a whole row of drinks. I'm kind of 2 Innocent for that stuff. I couldn't do it if I tried.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
yea right, I can't even lie 2 my mom and dad about a simple bad quiz grade. So no to answer your question, I've never got wasted. i might have tried like a sip of something here in there, like a little wine but never a whole row of drinks. I'm kind of 2 Innocent for that stuff. I couldn't do it if I tried.
Ha.... innocence lost. I have seen 3 of the 5 closest friends of mine from highschool become alcoholics by age 17. I suggest never starting down that path. Life is easier when you A: can remember who and where you were with the night before, and B: what you did.

true, i never really liked the taste of it anyway. It's kind of disgusting to me. but some of my friends don't think so. One is 15 and shes already been high and drunk at parties. i'ts a shame but she doesn't want to listen to me.


oh, and i should have another poem coming up later tonight maybe. if i have time

sweet. haha.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
yea right, I can't even lie 2 my mom and dad about a simple bad quiz grade. So no to answer your question, I've never got wasted. i might have tried like a sip of something here in there, like a little wine but never a whole row of drinks. I'm kind of 2 Innocent for that stuff. I couldn't do it if I tried.
I'm the same way... hell I don't even LIKE alcohol

Originally posted by Coldfire
I'm the same way... hell I don't even LIKE alcohol

good thing.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
good thing.
yes That way I can look out for my friends that do

Originally posted by Coldfire
yes That way I can look out for my friends that do

indeed. now more poems, eh wot wot?

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
indeed. now more poems, eh wot wot?
haha you betcha

sorry guys i havn't been on in a while. we had a storm a few days ago and every thing turned off including the coumputer. which means i lost what i was working on. i was so pissed that i could have picked up a pencil and wrote like 50 poems of how angry i was but i thought i would stab the coumputer with it. oh, well i'm cool now. to tell u the truth, i don't know when the next poem is going to be but hopefully soon. i'll try my best to post at least three times a week. oh and were're 3 and 0 in soccer. i know thats off topic but i just needed to tell some one that.

if you want, tell me what you want me to write about in a poem and i'll write something about it

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
sorry guys i havn't been on in a while. we had a storm a few days ago and every thing turned off including the coumputer. which means i lost what i was working on. i was so pissed that i could have picked up a pencil and wrote like 50 poems of how angry i was but i thought i would stab the coumputer with it. oh, well i'm cool now. to tell u the truth, i don't know when the next poem is going to be but hopefully soon. i'll try my best to post at least three times a week. oh and were're 3 and 0 in soccer. i know thats off topic but i just needed to tell some one that.

if you want, tell me what you want me to write about in a poem and i'll write something about it

haha yeah, sorry hon. well, good for you and the team!!! umm..... how bout writing one on your most recent dream?

AWWwW,he is so cute
especially in that brand new suit
he is so sweet in he dresses so neat
but i know there is know chance
the only time i talked to him was at the school dance
he only said on word and that was hi
but when he said that i thought i was going to die
his confidence shows in the way he walks
i always love the way he talks
it seems like music to my ears
i stare at him he takes away some of my fears
all the girls see him, they want to be a couple
put it this way, Even some boys want to double
i have some of my other fears
fears that he will bring me to tears
man is it me or is he just so fine
in a dream he will ever truly be mine
i feel sticky, stuck, sort of like tar
what do i do, just stay, adore from a far
i guess this is how it's just gonna be
i don't know if there's a chance, maybe we'll see
at least right now or for today
and the next day and the next day
and the next day in the next day
sooner or latter I'll find the right things to say.
but until then I'll find another way

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha yeah, sorry hon. well, good for you and the team!!! umm..... how bout writing one on your most recent dream?

Thanks. Hmmm, i usually don't dream that often. If i do, there like really stupid. Last time i dreamed about getting chased by a 8 foot spider and that was about a month ago. but lets not get into that, it still sort of creeps me out a bit. anyway if I do have a dream I'll be sure to write a poem about it and post it. ( just as long as it's not like my last one)

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
AWWwW,he is so cute
especially in that brand new suit
he is so sweet in he dresses so neat
but i know there is know chance
the only time i talked to him was at the school dance
he only said on word and that was hi
but when he said that i thought i was going to die
his confidence shows in the way he walks
i always love the way he talks
it seems like music to my ears
i stare at him he takes away some of my fears
all the girls see him, they want to be a couple
put it this way, Even some boys want to double
i have some of my other fears
fears that he will bring me to tears
man is it me or is he just so fine
in a dream he will ever truly be mine
i feel sticky, stuck, sort of like tar
what do i do, just stay, adore from a far
i guess this is how it's just gonna be
i don't know if there's a chance, maybe we'll see
at least right now or for today
and the next day and the next day
and the next day in the next day
sooner or latter I'll find the right things to say.
but until then I'll find another way
oh I've been there lol. Nice work
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha yeah, sorry hon. well, good for you and the team!!! umm..... how bout writing one on your most recent dream?
HAHAHA please don't ask me to do that when I get stuck

Originally posted by Coldfire
oh I've been there lol. Nice work

HAHAHA please don't ask me to do that when I get stuck

I'm sure every girl has been there. including yours truly

i'll post a poem as soon as i get an idea in my head which will be maybe tonight or hopefully tomorrow

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
AWWwW,he is so cute
especially in that brand new suit
he is so sweet in he dresses so neat
but i know there is know chance
the only time i talked to him was at the school dance
he only said on word and that was hi
but when he said that i thought i was going to die
his confidence shows in the way he walks
i always love the way he talks
it seems like music to my ears
i stare at him he takes away some of my fears
all the girls see him, they want to be a couple
put it this way, Even some boys want to double
i have some of my other fears
fears that he will bring me to tears
man is it me or is he just so fine
in a dream he will ever truly be mine
i feel sticky, stuck, sort of like tar
what do i do, just stay, adore from a far
i guess this is how it's just gonna be
i don't know if there's a chance, maybe we'll see
at least right now or for today
and the next day and the next day
and the next day in the next day
sooner or latter I'll find the right things to say.
but until then I'll find another way

Very nice, and yes, talk to HIM!!!! Jeez.... LOL! weiber...Originally posted by Coldfire
oh I've been there lol. Nice work

HAHAHA please don't ask me to do that when I get stuck
Hey, just an Idea... coolness J. some more poems would be great!

she's so scared to be in sight
so no one can see her, she only goes out at night
she's scared to look at herself in the light
some people tease her, they say that she gives the little kids a fright
she wishes she was a kite
high up in the air were she wouldn't even dare to give a care
she wishes she could fly away with all her might
up to the clouds that are puffy and white
i don't know for some reason she thinks it would feel so right
she wants someone to hold her tight but no one really wants to
I'm scared to know were her life goes or were it may lead up to

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Very nice, and yes, talk to HIM!!!! Jeez.... LOL! weiber...
Hey, just an Idea... coolness J. some more poems would be great!

lol, don't worry i talked to him about 4 months ago. then we went out for about 3 months and we just broke up about 2 week ago. and i don't feel one bit of sadness now. boys can be such jerks sometimes( no offence dreamingwarrior, nothin against you). i was just thinking of the feeling i had before we even went out. well, i don't sweat it, I'm young i got nothin to worry about. oh that poem i wrote took me only 15 min. feel free to tell me what you think.

oh and sorry dreamingwarrior, no dream yet.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
lol, don't worry i talked to him about 4 months ago. then we went out for about 3 months and we just broke up about 2 week ago. and i don't feel one bit of sadness now. boys can be such jerks sometimes( no offence dreamingwarrior, nothin against you). i was just thinking of the feeling i had before we even went out. well, i don't sweat it, I'm young i got nothin to worry about. oh that poem i wrote took me only 15 min. feel free to tell me what you think.

oh and sorry dreamingwarrior, no dream yet.
Very cool.

Like most young females, she wants someone to hold her tight but no one really wants to
I'm scared to know were her life goes or were it may lead up to
That pair lets me see a bit, (if you dont mind me getting all psyche on ya) that you really feel like you lack security in life... uncertain future, split family, etc... been there myself.

And hey, no off. taken. that is what happens with BOYS. haah I am a MAN. mebbe young, but a man nonetheless. I enjoy your stuff girl, is nice.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
I'm sure every girl has been there. including yours truly
lol yeah unfortunately
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Very cool.

Like most young females, she wants someone to hold her tight but no one really wants to
I'm scared to know were her life goes or were it may lead up to
That pair lets me see a bit, (if you dont mind me getting all psyche on ya) that you really feel like you lack security in life... uncertain future, split family, etc... been there myself.

And hey, no off. taken. that is what happens with BOYS. haah I am a MAN. mebbe young, but a man nonetheless. I enjoy your stuff girl, is nice.
lol yes yes you are a man And you're absolutely right; only BOYS pull sh*t like that......

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Very cool.

Like most young females, she wants someone to hold her tight but no one really wants to
I'm scared to know were her life goes or were it may lead up to
That pair lets me see a bit, (if you dont mind me getting all psyche on ya) that you really feel like you lack security in life... uncertain future, split family, etc... been there myself.

And hey, no off. taken. that is what happens with BOYS. haah I am a MAN. mebbe young, but a man nonetheless. I enjoy your stuff girl, is nice.

yea i might have had a day when i just felt really ugly and a little insecure. but i had people who but me on the right track. they told me it wasn't true so i try to ignore the negative thoughts that come in my head. in a matter of fact, i think thats what my next poem might be about in the future, how people look at themselves and see the negative instead of the positive

And yes, you are a young MAN.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
yea i might have had a day when i just felt really ugly and a little insecure. but i had people who but me on the right track. they told me it wasn't true so i try to ignore the negative thoughts that come in my head. in a matter of fact, i think thats what my next poem might be about in the future, how people look at themselves and see the negative instead of the positive

And yes, you are a young MAN.
haha groovy. and young, mebbe. still a MAN! hysterical

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
yea i might have had a day when i just felt really ugly and a little insecure. but i had people who but me on the right track. they told me it wasn't true so i try to ignore the negative thoughts that come in my head. in a matter of fact, i think thats what my next poem might be about in the future, how people look at themselves and see the negative instead of the positive

And yes, you are a young MAN.
That's exactly how I felt a couple days ago yes
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha groovy. and young, mebbe. still a MAN! hysterical
You are still young so deal with it

Originally posted by Coldfire
That's exactly how I felt a couple days ago yes

You are still young so deal with it

yea me to

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
yea me to
Thank goodness for all the wonderful ppl in the poetry forum who are so great at making ya feel better

Originally posted by Coldfire
That's exactly how I felt a couple days ago yes

You are still young so deal with it
so are you girly.

glad to see ya smilin! haha

all right peeps. there sould be another poem comeing up later tonight. just thought i would give you the heads up

cool!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
so are you girly.

glad to see ya smilin! haha
lol but of course
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
all right peeps. there sould be another poem comeing up later tonight. just thought i would give you the heads up
yay

sorry didn't have time to post. maybe tomorrow.
i ended up having to do homework instead. but school comes first. at least thats what every one else saids

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
sorry didn't have time to post. maybe tomorrow.
i ended up having to do homework instead. but school comes first. at least thats what every one else saids
That's a really good attitude girl yes If you had to do homework instead, then it's alright I've had to do that a number of times myself lol

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
sorry didn't have time to post. maybe tomorrow.
i ended up having to do homework instead. but school comes first. at least thats what every one else saids
keep it that way. get into college now, while it is easy! hahha...

Here is my next poem. This one is more for anyone who has that one person that just won't leave them alone. I have that problem right now.

I'm so bored
there's nothing to do
the last thing i want to do is sit and look at you
man you make me sick
your just like some kind of tick
no matter what i do, you always find a way to stick
geesh, is that what you do, always talk
your so annoying just go away and take a walk
man just for one minute, please shut up
right now i just want to hit you with this huge glass cup
know i don't care about the last person you hit
please read my lips I DON"T GIVE SHIT
i sware if i here your voice i'm gonna have a fit
there you go, your talking again, this is just my luck
how many times do i have to tell you. i just don't give a f--k
for Christ sake leave me alone
i don't care if you don't like my tone
is there a reason why your always around
just pretty please give me a favor and don't make a sound
name 10 top reasons why i should pay you any attention
i'm so busy ignoring you, i forgot what you mentioned
if your still trying to talk to me your wasting your time
I'll give you a favor and just give you this rhyme
and maybe you'll see when you speak to me. your words are nothing
not even worth a dime

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
Here is my next poem. This one is more for anyone who has that one person that just won't leave them alone. I have that problem right now.

I'm so bored
there's nothing to do
the last thing i want to do is sit and look at you
man you make me sick
your just like some kind of tick
no matter what i do, you always find a way to stick
geesh, is that what you do, always talk
your so annoying just go away and take a walk
man just for one minute, please shut up
right now i just want to hit you with this huge glass cup
know i don't care about the last person you hit
please read my lips I DON"T GIVE SHIT
i sware if i here your voice i'm gonna have a fit
there you go, your talking again, this is just my luck
how many times do i have to tell you. i just don't give a f--k
for Christ sake leave me alone
i don't care if you don't like my tone
is there a reason why your always around
just pretty please give me a favor and don't make a sound
name 10 top reasons why i should pay you any attention
i'm so busy ignoring you, i forgot what you mentioned
if your still trying to talk to me your wasting your time
I'll give you a favor and just give you this rhyme
and maybe you'll see when you speak to me. your words are nothing
not even worth a dime Hmmm teach or parental unit? ha... sorry babe. good lyricismal style, more rap than poem. I like.

lol......thanks. yea someone is really getting on my nerves and getting me pissed off so i just wrote about it

i'll post alittle more tommorow :

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
Here is my next poem. This one is more for anyone who has that one person that just won't leave them alone. I have that problem right now.

I'm so bored
there's nothing to do
the last thing i want to do is sit and look at you
man you make me sick
your just like some kind of tick
no matter what i do, you always find a way to stick
geesh, is that what you do, always talk
your so annoying just go away and take a walk
man just for one minute, please shut up
right now i just want to hit you with this huge glass cup
know i don't care about the last person you hit
please read my lips I DON"T GIVE SHIT
i sware if i here your voice i'm gonna have a fit
there you go, your talking again, this is just my luck
how many times do i have to tell you. i just don't give a f--k
for Christ sake leave me alone
i don't care if you don't like my tone
is there a reason why your always around
just pretty please give me a favor and don't make a sound
name 10 top reasons why i should pay you any attention
i'm so busy ignoring you, i forgot what you mentioned
if your still trying to talk to me your wasting your time
I'll give you a favor and just give you this rhyme
and maybe you'll see when you speak to me. your words are nothing
not even worth a dime
oooo I liked that a lot! And it could very well describe a few ppl I know lol

my grandmother.
mum-mum i use to call her
i was only two when she died but O do i remember her
she had a personality that made you seem like you knew her forever
and her smile, that radiant smile could light up a room for miles.
she had a voice of an angel. i mean boy could she sing
yea, cancer couldn't take her joy away
cause you know what, she would laugh and smile anyway
i remember going to her house every Sunday for dinner.
i might have only been two but i carried my little legs up them stairs just to go to her room and see her beautiful face
when she saw me her smile always got even bigger
she use to say''come give mum-mum some sugar"
yea thats what she use to say
but there is another memory i have.
that memory was the day i found out that i wasn't gonna see her anymore
it was Christmas day and i was still two
we went right to my mum-mums house for Christmas dinner
as soon as my mother opened up the doors to her house
i took my little legs right to them big stairs to go see her
my mother stopped me she said where do you think your going
i said three simple words. to see mum-mum.
she just looked at me and said she's not here
she's an angle now.
of course, since i was only two i didn't know what she was talking about
so again when, know one was looking i took my little legs right up them stairs to her room to see her
to see that lady with the voice of an angel
but when i went up there i couldn't find her
i tried looking for that radiant smile but i couldn' find it
all i saw was in empty bed with white sheets and nothing in it
i was probably about five when i realized she would never really come back
but you better believe through them three years i was looking and waiting for her to come back, but she didn't
to this day when things go wrong, all i have to do is close my eyes...
close my eyes and think about her beautiful smile and her voice like an angle
thats how i alway know that things are gonna turn out just fine
i was young but I'm proud to say that my grandmother was a strong woman.
she never let anyone take her joy away
i might have only know her for two years of my life but yes i remember
carrying my little legs up the stairs to see her smile
out of all the memories i have I'll tell you this
thats one memory i wouldn't dare give up for anything
and it's the one that i will always miss

this ones more of a poem/memory
i also use to dream about her sometimes so i guess you can call this part of a dream too.

aww that's sooo sad

yea this poem is a lot more personal and of course this time it's about me. this one has to be my most favorite so far so i decided to post it on.

ouch..... very nice... pain, ha... what an inspiring emotion.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ouch..... very nice... pain, ha... what an inspiring emotion.

thanks

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ouch..... very nice... pain, ha... what an inspiring emotion.
yeah no kidding... almost made me cry....

awwww...don't cry

more poems coming up alittle later

I'm looking in the mirror
i look and i see me
but this isn't the me that i wanted to see
the mirror is huge, it has a big giant crack
sort of like me and the confidence i lack
just sit and listen to what my conscience say
they say the same things like almost every day
but then there's another side that says things in a different way
your so ugly you should die(don't say that you know thats a lie)
every day my hairs a mess( that doesn't mean you should think of yourself any less)
no one likes me, they don't care(cause' you don't let them, thats not fair)
look at my body, i look like a stick
people should just call me a tooth pick
look at me, I'm all skin and bone( you keep thinking negative like that you'll end up alone)
i hate my feet there ugly and long( do i really have to hear anther episode of your sad sad songs.
it's not what you see on the outside, it's whats in the in
so stop looking at yourself thinking your some kind of sin
think of the positive instead of the negative
trust me, you have what it can take
it all depend on you and the positive decisions you make)
........

ooo I like it Like how you went from all depressive to a more positive side

Nicely done. very rappish... ha.. everyone is bustin rhymes as of late!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Nicely done. very rappish... ha.. everyone is bustin rhymes as of late!

lol...yea thanks. i might seem like an o.k rapper put the truth is i really suck. ha i probably couldn't keep a beat if i tried.

here is my next poem. tell me what you think.

This body is weak, but this soul it couldn't be any stronger
People ask how i can stay up any longer
I've gained friends, I lost friends
I've been down that road, wonderin if it ever ends
I been knocked out, beat up, beat down, kicked too the ground
But still i kept my mouth shut, i didn't make a sound
Nope, got right back up and was on my way
Had my time of pains but still i knew one day it was gonna be okay
Yup, I had my moments, when i asked myself why
When i just wanted to give up, stop, break down and cry
But nooooooo i didn't stop
I knew some how I was gonna make it to the top
There were times on my back when i had a load
But you better believe i kept going right up that road
There were some high hills I had to climb too
How i got up most of um, I never knew
I have so many cuts, marks,bruises,scratches and scores
But i kept going knowing there was going to be more
Yea,this body may be week,but this soul, it couldn't be any stronger
People still ask me how can i stay up any longer
For there answer they sit and wait a while
I just look at um and give um a smile
I tell um, I still got more blocks to go,I'm not done
going down that road has not always been much fun
But still aint no stopin me
cause soon, very soon I'll have the key
then I'll be able to open that door
the door I always been waitin for
then i won't have to travel those hard bumpy road no more

you're so good at rhyming

^aww..thanks i try but it's not always easy. sometimes i have to make up my own words.

hahaha nice chicky. nice. you oughtta put it to a beat!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahaha nice chicky. nice. you oughtta put it to a beat!
yeah that'd be cool yes

ha...maybe but i'm tellin you, i'm still not good with beats.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
ha...maybe but i'm tellin you, i'm still not good with beats.

here, lemme throw one down.

boom, da boom... boom da boom.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
here, lemme throw one down.

boom, da boom... boom da boom.


Niiiiiiice

Originally posted by Coldfire
Niiiiiiice

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
here, lemme throw one down.

boom, da boom... boom da boom.



..........maybe you should be the famous rapper

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
..........maybe you should be the famous rapper
Oh totally

funny women.

hehehe

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
funny women.

i try

And it's not hard to make Will laugh anyway

Originally posted by Coldfire
And it's not hard to make Will laugh anyway

yea i guess you can say the same thing about me too. i don't know i just laugh at the corniest things sometimes. i guess you can say i'm dorky like that..ha. Anyway I should post some more poems alittle later tomorrow.

^^ haha. And cool yeah, i like laughter!

every person wants a fairy tale
some one to help them if they fail
to sweep them up when times get rough
you know when, things get really tough
every person wants that one day
the day when every thing goes perfect and goes your way
every Girl wants that perfect guy
the one that saids nothing wrong and will never lie
where things never go wrong
and for dreams to happen, you didn't have to wait to long
ha, yea wouldn't that be nice
but this is reality so we have to think twice
so when you choose you have to be wise
don't do anything that would jeopardize
life isn't a fairy tail
you can't tun back time every time you fail

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
every person wants a fairy tale
some one to help them if they fail
to sweep them up when times get rough
you know when, things get really tough
every person wants that one day
the day when every thing goes perfect and goes your way
every Girl wants that perfect guy
the one that saids nothing wrong and will never lie
where things never go wrong
and for dreams to happen, you didn't have to wait to long
ha, yea wouldn't that be nice
but this is reality so we have to think twice
so when you choose you have to be wise
don't do anything that would jeopardize
life isn't a fairy tail
you can't tun back time every time you fail
I really dig this piece, ha... gotta write one now.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
I really dig this piece, ha... gotta write one now.

thank ya much

YW. I wanna see more, more!!!!

ha ha... okay i'll post more tomorrow

its tomorrow!!!

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
yea i guess you can say the same thing about me too. i don't know i just laugh at the corniest things sometimes. i guess you can say i'm dorky like that..ha. Anyway I should post some more poems alittle later tomorrow.
me too
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
^^ haha. And cool yeah, i like laughter!
but of course
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
every person wants a fairy tale
some one to help them if they fail
to sweep them up when times get rough
you know when, things get really tough
every person wants that one day
the day when every thing goes perfect and goes your way
every Girl wants that perfect guy
the one that saids nothing wrong and will never lie
where things never go wrong
and for dreams to happen, you didn't have to wait to long
ha, yea wouldn't that be nice
but this is reality so we have to think twice
so when you choose you have to be wise
don't do anything that would jeopardize
life isn't a fairy tail
you can't tun back time every time you fail
The harsh realities of life..... but I like it
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
its tomorrow!!!
shush you!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
its tomorrow!!!

ok ok i'm here

this next poem isn't the longest and it's not my best but oh well. i was just thinking about it one day so here it is.

black and white
so we're not all tight
some people even want to start a fight
so what the color's not the same
is all that hatred so hard to tame
yes so what we may have different color hair
is that going to stop us from whats really fair
so what people may have different skin than the other
but still in my eyes, i don't see color

Originally posted by Coldfire
me too

but of course

The harsh realities of life..... but I like it

shush you! uh oh, you gonna get the whip out again? heh heh heh/.... Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
ok ok i'm here

this next poem isn't the longest and it's not my best but oh well. i was just thinking about it one day so here it is.

black and white
so we're not all tight
some people even want to start a fight
so what the color's not the same
is all that hatred so hard to tame
yes so what we may have different color hair
is that going to stop us from whats really fair
so what people may have different skin than the other
but still in my eyes, i don't see color very cool. and i agree, as long as you bleed red, we are family. when you start bleeding green i am gonna stop watching sci fi and start wondering....

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
uh oh, you gonna get the whip out again? heh heh heh/....

If you're bad I might have to whip

Originally posted by Coldfire
If you're bad I might have to whip



devil heh heh heh... oh do!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
devil heh heh heh... oh do!
or should I not hmmmm shifty

Originally posted by Coldfire
or should I not hmmmm shifty

awww no whipping????

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
awww no whipping????
well if you were so looking forward to it maybe i should

Originally posted by Coldfire
well if you were so looking forward to it maybe i should

uh oh, now we are getting dirty in another thread..

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
uh oh, now we are getting dirty in another thread..
HAHAHA you're right hysterical

Originally posted by Coldfire
HAHAHA you're right hysterical hysterical now Jlee is gonna hate us! sorry babe!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hysterical now Jlee is gonna hate us! sorry babe!
Yeah sorry Jlee!


hysterical

it's okay, you guys are crazy...well aren't we all
Here is my next poem tell me if you like

Music
Music is my life, it's what i love to do
people who know me know i sing all the time, to them it's nothing new
musics always in my head
even when it's time for bed
i sing in the car on the way to the mall
punk, rap, rock, soul, please i know it all
From nickleback with photograph to
jamie foxx who makes me laugh
from all the artist you can name
whether there different or even the same
music is more than a sound it's a feeling
some music makes me want to dance on the ceiling.......lol
you should look at my Cd's there plies and piles
they could probably go on for miles and miles
I'll listen to a CD till it can't play anymore
then go back and by anther one from the store
with rap i love the rhythm and rhyme
even though i can't rap, i try all the time
ha..... life without music what would that be like
i couldn't go a month without looking at a mike
thats why i say music is my life

If you don't know who nickleback is, they are a rock band and jamie foxx is of course a singer. Just thought i say that just in case. Well hope you liked it. If you really want to see what other music i listen to just go to my link luuuuuuuuuuuv ya........lol

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
it's okay, you guys are crazy...well aren't we all
Here is my next poem tell me if you like

Music
Music is my life, it's what i love to do
people who know me know i sing all the time, to them it's nothing new
musics always in my head
even when it's time for bed
i sing in the car on the way to the mall
punk, rap, rock, soul, please i know it all
From nickleback with photograph to
jamie foxx who makes me laugh
from all the artist you can name
whether there different or even the same
music is more than a sound it's a feeling
some music makes me want to dance on the ceiling.......lol
you should look at my Cd's there plies and piles
they could probably go on for miles and miles
I'll listen to a CD till it can't play anymore
then go back and by anther one from the store
with rap i love the rhythm and rhyme
even though i can't rap, i try all the time
ha..... life without music what would that be like
i couldn't go a month without looking at a mike
thats why i say music is my life

If you don't know who nickleback is, they are a rock band and jamie foxx is of course a singer. Just thought i say that just in case. Well hope you liked it. If you really want to see what other music i listen to just go to my link luuuuuuuuuuuv ya........lol
nice! And I love the song Photograph

Originally posted by Coldfire
nice! And I love the song Photograph

Thanks. I love that song too

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
it's okay, you guys are crazy...well aren't we all
Here is my next poem tell me if you like

Music
Music is my life, it's what i love to do
people who know me know i sing all the time, to them it's nothing new
musics always in my head
even when it's time for bed
i sing in the car on the way to the mall
punk, rap, rock, soul, please i know it all
From nickleback with photograph to
jamie foxx who makes me laugh
from all the artist you can name
whether there different or even the same
music is more than a sound it's a feeling
some music makes me want to dance on the ceiling.......lol
you should look at my Cd's there plies and piles
they could probably go on for miles and miles
I'll listen to a CD till it can't play anymore
then go back and by anther one from the store
with rap i love the rhythm and rhyme
even though i can't rap, i try all the time
ha..... life without music what would that be like
i couldn't go a month without looking at a mike
thats why i say music is my life

If you don't know who nickleback is, they are a rock band and jamie foxx is of course a singer. Just thought i say that just in case. Well hope you liked it. If you really want to see what other music i listen to just go to my link luuuuuuuuuuuv ya........lol
notworthy coollll..... and I love NB. very awesome band!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
notworthy coollll..... and I love NB. very awesome band!

thank ya much

i don't know if i'll have time to post over the week, i might but if i don't i'll post somemore on monday

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
thank ya much

i don't know if i'll have time to post over the week, i might but if i don't i'll post somemore on monday groovy yo. see ya!

omg....guys this next poem is so corney. I made it about a year ago but i guess I'll post it anyway.


Sounds
i lie in my bed listening to sounds
i hear a basketball pounding the ground
i can hear the cars flying by
and my little cousin sounds like she's going to cry
i here kids laughing, screaming, and singing
while my sister picks up the phone 'cause it's ringing
all these sounds i here almost every day
i just sit and listen to what they have to say

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
omg....guys this next poem is so corney. I made it about a year ago but i guess I'll post it anyway.


Sounds
i lie in my bed listening to sounds
i hear a basketball pounding the ground
i can hear the cars flying by
and my little cousin sounds like she's going to cry
i here kids laughing, screaming, and singing
while my sister picks up the phone 'cause it's ringing
all these sounds i here almost every day
i just sit and listen to what they have to say
haha cute

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
omg....guys this next poem is so corney. I made it about a year ago but i guess I'll post it anyway.


Sounds
i lie in my bed listening to sounds
i hear a basketball pounding the ground
i can hear the cars flying by
and my little cousin sounds like she's going to cry
i here kids laughing, screaming, and singing
while my sister picks up the phone 'cause it's ringing
all these sounds i here almost every day
i just sit and listen to what they have to say corny? nahhh.... just you describing your environment. a cool thing to do. good poetic exercise.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
corny? nahhh.... just you describing your environment. a cool thing to do. good poetic exercise.


thanks, this poem is acaually one of the ones that got me started about a year ago. i didn't relize i liked writing poems untill i just sat down and did an assignment for school. next thing you know i have like 20 poems done in like 30 min, since then i stared putting words and feeling into rhymes and well there you have it.

Originally posted by Coldfire
haha cute

lol..thanks

dang... good going. and hey, keep going! how is the team doing?

Were doing awesome. We're acaually in first place right now and today i'm pretty happy because we just beat one of our rival teams so..yay..lol .

More poems tonight or t/m

groovy! glad you are doin well! haha and more poems? excellent. smithers, get me my belt!

hey guys here is my next poem.

my grandmother never lets us young people go
she said,''Back in our day things were never done that way
you did that back then,
people would consider that a sin
she asked me is that how ya'll dress
is that how you really try to impress
back in our day there was know getting a tattoo
we had so much better things to do
she asked me, whatever happened to English
why does it always seem you young people speak anther language
she told me when she was young there was never a word date
you were married at age 16, that was the right rate
yea my grandma says a lot of things
about how all we care about is million dollar rings
i just listen to her, laugh and then i think about time
because i know maybe one day these words will be mine.

the other poem i did was about my dads mom. This poem is about my other grandmother (my moms mother)Just so you guys don't get confused....
anyway what do you think

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
hey guys here is my next poem.

my grandmother never lets us young people go
she said,''Back in our day things were never done that way
you did that back then,
people would consider that a sin
she asked me is that how ya'll dress
is that how you really try to impress
back in our day there was know getting a tattoo
we had so much better things to do
she asked me, whatever happened to English
why does it always seem you young people speak anther language
she told me when she was young there was never a word date
you were married at age 16, that was the right rate
yea my grandma says a lot of things
about how all we care about is million dollar rings
i just listen to her, laugh and then i think about time
because i know maybe one day these words will be mine.

the other poem i did was about my dads mom. This poem is about my other grandmother (my moms mother)Just so you guys don't get confused....
anyway what do you think hahaha sounds like most elderly folks i know. neat.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahaha sounds like most elderly folks i know. neat.

yea i here that from them sometimes too

i don't know if i have time to post over the weekend because i have alot of things to do and soccer and stuff. but of corce on monday i'll post.

cool.

ha...sorry for the long wait...got grounded. i guess i'm not that good and sweet as people think...lol..jp. naw, i just didn't clean my room so i got in trouble. i still don't see the point of cleaning it when i just know i'm going to screw it back up anyway...lol. well here is the next poem

WHY
why do people ask why
why do people always have to lie
why in the world is there always crime
and why when it happens, people are at the wrong place at the wrong time
why when it's time to forgive people wait
and when they want to forgive they find out it's to late
why do some men treat women like trash
why do some women just do it for cash
why is one of the richest country's the united states
but still we can't even but food on some peoples plates
i just don't know how many more wars i can take
i don't know how many more bad comments people are going to make
why do some people think killing is for fun
why do some people think when it comes to the point of living, there is none
why do some people play life as a game
and every day the game is played the same
a change has to come, we have to take a chance
even if that means taking a second glance

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
ha...sorry for the long wait...got grounded. i guess i'm not that good and sweet as people think...lol..jp. naw, i just didn't clean my room so i got in trouble. i still don't see the point of cleaning it when i just know i'm going to screw it back up anyway...lol. well here is the next poem heh... yeah, well.... the parental units say, you gotta do, until you move out.
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
WHY
why do people ask why
why do people always have to lie
why in the world is there always crime
and why when it happens, people are at the wrong place at the wrong time
why when it's time to forgive people wait
and when they want to forgive they find out it's to late
why do some men treat women like trash
why do some women just do it for cash
why is one of the richest country's the united states
but still we can't even but food on some peoples plates
i just don't know how many more wars i can take
i don't know how many more bad comments people are going to make
why do some people think killing is for fun
why do some people think when it comes to the point of living, there is none
why do some people play life as a game
and every day the game is played the same
a change has to come, we have to take a chance
even if that means taking a second glance ask meself the same question..... all I get in return is "wait" ..... the time shall come.... and we may fight hand in hand when it does. good stuff yo, keep outta trouble! c ya.

Good stuff!

thank ya much....and don't worry...I'm staying out of trouble, at least trying to....lol. But today is mischief night so that means it's time for some real fun....mwaahaahahaha(evil laugh)
sly

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
thank ya much....and don't worry...I'm staying out of trouble, at least trying to....lol. But today is mischief night so that means it's time for some real fun....mwaahaahahaha(evil laugh)
sly no, TOMORROW is. it's only the 30th today. hahaha but, tomorrow.... heh heh heh devil

lol...yea for you it is but today was mischeif night for us. I live on the east coast of the united states so we might get things earlier than you do. In a way it kinda sucks because i got shaving cream all in my mouth and in my hair but oh well...lol... the peaple who got me....they will pay.....they will pay big time
sly


I'll try for more poems tomorrow

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
lol...yea for you it is but today was mischeif night for us. I live on the east coast of the united states so we might get things earlier than you do. In a way it kinda sucks because i got shaving cream all in my mouth and in my hair but oh well...lol... the peaple who got me....they will pay.....they will pay big time
sly


I'll try for more poems tomorrow


hahahahah sorry yo. hahah yeah, well yeah yeah, i live only one time zone from ya, so it is like 8 here, 9 where you are. so shaddup heh cool. see ya! and be safe yo

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
lol...yea for you it is but today was mischeif night for us. I live on the east coast of the united states so we might get things earlier than you do. In a way it kinda sucks because i got shaving cream all in my mouth and in my hair but oh well...lol... the peaple who got me....they will pay.....they will pay big time
sly


I'll try for more poems tomorrow

haha niiiiiice

sorry, been really busey. trin to make time but it's been realy hard. i'll try either later or tommorow

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
sorry, been really busey. trin to make time but it's been realy hard. i'll try either later or tommorow no, now!!!! ok. take it easy yo.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
sorry, been really busey. trin to make time but it's been realy hard. i'll try either later or tommorow
take all the time you need I'm not exactly spilling out the poems either haha

here is another poem that i wrote about a week ago. i wrote it because we lost a game to a town called riverside. But the good thing is that we recovered and won a game on Tues. Now were the division champions and we entered the playoffs...so...yay...lol
but anyway to get back on the topic, here is the poem

The Word DEFEAT

it's not a word that wants to come out of a persons mouth
it's one word that some people might even fear to hear
when some people look at the word, they might see a loss, a failure, a loser
they say the better team always wins, they always defeat
but is that always true
not every team wins
not every team loses
i don't see a defeat as the worst play or the worst team
sometimes the better team loses
sometimes the worst team wins
but sometimes the word defeat
the word that some people think mean a loser,a failure, a loss
that word can only sometimes make you stronger

Yay! Playoffs! Go Lee! glad for ya hon! and truly enough, defeat can spur you on more than a victory... if you use it right.

A wise man once said, :" Hannibal, you know how to win a victory, but you don't know how to USE it!"

same with not winning, which you have learned, and then to go win right afterwards... haha awesome.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Yay! Playoffs! Go Lee! glad for ya hon! and truly enough, defeat can spur you on more than a victory... if you use it right.

A wise man once said, :" Hannibal, you know how to win a victory, but you don't know how to USE it!"

same with not winning, which you have learned, and then to go win right afterwards... haha awesome.

aww......thank ya much.

more poems comin at ya on mon or tues. can't post because i have a game and homecoming

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
aww......thank ya much.

more poems comin at ya on mon or tues. can't post because i have a game and homecoming yay and cool.