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This thread wil be dedacated to my weird poems and an area for you guys to tell me what you think. Be honest

ANGEL ON EARTH

You had a twinkle in your eye and smile on your face at all times
You held on to others and never wanted t let go
You were weak and feeble but that didnt matter
You always gave your love with out holding back
But sadly you left this world, To a better place where you would no longer hurt
You are free now and one i will met up with you agian
You have changed my life in many ways
The way i look at the world has changed has changed
Little brother i miss you so, but i know you are well off now

Aww... that's sad weep

crybaby yeah i know... sowwie..

THE ONE WE FEAR

The pain the tears the cries the lies
The deep dark shadows are unforgiving
They will hide you but they will also haunt you
Pain is what he loves
He sucks it up in emornas gulps
The strives of the treas of the inocent
The muffeled slience is peircing and eckos all around
The little ones cry of the fear of their lves
They know he is comming and they know what he does
He does not touch them in anway
But plays with their minds so to say
Filling to mind with thoughtsand images of death and suffering
Thats why he is the most feared
We know he is there, we just chooses not to see it

OMG, that's is dark and scary. shock But it's also great!

Thanks... im a lil weird.. like i said "weird poems"
More to come later today

Oh wow I didn't know you wrote poetry! Good stuff

Bun, interesting poems, but don't rock the boat, yo! haha, is difficult enough to see others leave freely than to see you get banned....

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Bun, interesting poems, but don't rock the boat, yo! haha, is difficult enough to see others leave freely than to see you get banned....
Yeah seeing people banned is not fun AT ALL... kinda surprised I didn't get banned yet

what are you guys talking about??

Together as one we become
As our bodies twist and twirl
We begin the thrill ride of our love
Our eyes lock on one another
We become entwined in a mystirious kissas our hands wonder
Having minds of their oun they find places that never see the light of day
We embrace eachotehr never wanteing to let go
Tastes take over our bodies and entrance us in a lushious glorie
Sinsations run high and numbs our bodies
As we meet, max and peak
I found you, you found me
The way you make me feel, numb so numb im confused, so confused...
Im yours uneeklyconfused

Originally posted by Bun Bun
Together as one we become
As our bodies twist and twirl
We begin the thrill ride of our love
Our eyes lock on one another
We become entwined in a mystirious kissas our hands wonder
Having minds of their oun they find places that never see the light of day
We embrace eachotehr never wanteing to let go
Tastes take over our bodies and entrance us in a lushious glorie
Sinsations run high and numbs our bodies
As we meet, max and peak
I found you, you found me
The way you make me feel, numb so numb im confused, so confused...
Im yours uneeklyconfused
wow... it's quite... ahh steamy...

Cept for the spelling errors it's good

Thanks amber
sowwie.... my spelling is very bad...

Hey all... i have a very... ahh... interesting one but im not sure if its ok to post... if u wanna read it PM me k... its ahhhh pretty dark

Originally posted by Bun Bun
Thanks amber
sowwie.... my spelling is very bad...
Mine too somedays

I was told that this one is not to but for the thread.... so if it is just tell me and ill take it off.. Thanks

Drip, drip i hear the blood, I see the dager
A flash so fast i didn't see it comming
Down on the ground my body lay
You stariring down at it like you unsuspecting prey
You the discusting bastered who did this to me
The attack so abroupt i had no chance to flee
My body shrivled up seems to flow with a redish glow
Now what do you do
Of course mane and molest me for your oun gulity pleasures
As you walk away leaving me mangled body to rot
You get hit by a car get on the spot
See what goes around comes around you distcusting fool
Now we both lie here dead in our oun blood pools.

my spellings suck but hey tis good in an angle and bad in another poetry and books are tht way i likies it tho

Thanks hug

Originally posted by Bun Bun
Thanks hug np tis smthin i can smile bout atleast!!in a weird way any i smiled when i read this

Together as one we become
As our bodies twist and twirl
We begin the thrill ride of our love
Our eyes lock on one another
We become entwined in a mystirious kissas our hands wonder
Having minds of their oun they find places that never see the light of day
We embrace eachotehr never wanteing to let go
Tastes take over our bodies and entrance us in a lushious glorie
Sinsations run high and numbs our bodies
As we meet, max and peak
I found you, you found me
The way you make me feel, numb so numb im confused, so confused...

Originally posted by snehin
np tis smthin i can smile bout atleast!!in a weird way any i smiled when i read this

Together as one we become
As our bodies twist and twirl
We begin the thrill ride of our love
Our eyes lock on one another
We become entwined in a mystirious kissas our hands wonder
Having minds of their oun they find places that never see the light of day
We embrace eachotehr never wanteing to let go
Tastes take over our bodies and entrance us in a lushious glorie
Sinsations run high and numbs our bodies
As we meet, max and peak
I found you, you found me
The way you make me feel, numb so numb im confused, so confused...

hehe its about my love... livy... i really really wish i really knew her.. she is just a great girl

Originally posted by Bun Bun
hehe its about my love... livy... i really really wish i really knew her.. she is just a great girl yup i haven't seen her in ages

Originally posted by snehin
yup i haven't seen her in ages
I haven't either

hehe

Sowwie.... i ahvt writen anything in a while.... My writings come out of the blue.... so i always for get to write them down...

But heres one
_________________________
How I say,
How, there are so many ways
Ways, to show you
Show you the inside of me.
Inside of me, the inner thoughts
The inner thoughts and feelings
The feelings that are followed by actions
The actions, which show you
Show you something that is secret
Something that is secret, is only between you and I
You and I share a connection
A connection which is called love
Love is what you and I have and there is no stopping this love.
__________________________

I like your poems yes

Thanks

Im gonna write some more soon

Good stuff girly! Can't wait for more

Originally posted by Coldfire
Good stuff girly! Can't wait for more same

neat stuff. an hey, bearing the cares of others is just a sign you still bleed. and that means you are worth living.

Thank you.

I have one that i have been thinking about for almost a whole year... and i have never writen a word of it down. I shall try tho. Its based around one thing that has really really affected my life. Ill work on it and try to get what i mean to say down... might take a while tho. I will surely post it.... plus when i do theres a thing i must ask.... but ill wait untill i post it.

Originally posted by Bun Bun
Thank you.

I have one that i have been thinking about for almost a whole year... and i have never writen a word of it down. I shall try tho. Its based around one thing that has really really affected my life. Ill work on it and try to get what i mean to say down... might take a while tho. I will surely post it.... plus when i do theres a thing i must ask.... but ill wait untill i post it. kool cant wait.

like all these

ill explanin to you guys if u want..

night for now tho! hug

Originally posted by Bun Bun
ill explanin to you guys if u want..

night for now tho! hug nighty

so what did the rest of you guys think of it?

I was a little bit confused for a while... but I think I figured it out....

Originally posted by Coldfire
I was a little bit confused for a while... but I think I figured it out....

A few hidden meanings are in there

I can always explaine if wanted

Originally posted by Bun Bun
A few hidden meanings are in there

I can always explaine if wanted
Sure, that's always a good thing.... see if I'm right

Well that peom/letter (call it whatever) was writen about my ex best friend. And like the poem said we basicly took her in as part of our oun family. She was CONSTATNLY over our house, never went home. We fed her and loved her so much. She wasnt brought up great and hsa a tendinsy to be shifty... and light fingured. We never really caught her stealing from us before red handed that is and when we did.... it hurt so bad. Also she was like my 1st love... hidden of course .. because then bi/lez was not excepted at all. So now our family moved and i have weird emotions about the whole thing... like i said i miss so alot... but im still glad i got away from her.

Originally posted by Bun Bun
Well that peom/letter (call it whatever) was writen about my ex best friend. And like the poem said we basicly took her in as part of our oun family. She was CONSTATNLY over our house, never went home. We fed her and loved her so much. She wasnt brought up great and hsa a tendinsy to be shifty... and light fingured. We never really caught her stealing from us before red handed that is and when we did.... it hurt so bad. Also she was like my 1st love... hidden of course .. because then bi/lez was not excepted at all. So now our family moved and i have weird emotions about the whole thing... like i said i miss so alot... but im still glad i got away from her.
aww that sucks hun hug But yeah it was for the best to be away from her I think yes

Originally posted by Bun Bun
Well that peom/letter (call it whatever) was writen about my ex best friend. And like the poem said we basicly took her in as part of our oun family. She was CONSTATNLY over our house, never went home. We fed her and loved her so much. She wasnt brought up great and hsa a tendinsy to be shifty... and light fingured. We never really caught her stealing from us before red handed that is and when we did.... it hurt so bad. Also she was like my 1st love... hidden of course .. because then bi/lez was not excepted at all. So now our family moved and i have weird emotions about the whole thing... like i said i miss so alot... but im still glad i got away from her. aww babes bites im glad too i mean if u grew more feelings for her it would hurt a lot more

also even if u moved babe maybe u should think i mean ive done some bad things too but bein a good bff is looking past that i know ur family moved but do try gettin in touch with her and remaining a friend if she had to steal from her bff she must hav a good reason even if not she has problems and needs support

still im glad u dont hurt {do you} about this

Very cool bun.

And this next one i asked my sister for a subject and i would write on it.

The subject- Honesty.

A lie there, a lie there the lies are everywhere.
Where is the honesty?
Simple lies or big lies they are all the same.
Where is the honesty?
A man lies to his wife when she asks where he has been.
Where is the honesty?
A child lies to his teacher about a missing piece of homework.
Where is the honesty?
A young teenage girl lies to a guy about her age.
Where is the honesty?
Everyone lies but I wonder if we even know why?
Could be fear of the truth but yet some will say they do not have fear.
So again I ask where is the honesty?

One tear for it all

Looking into your eyes I melt inside.
I can see the passion in the wau they sparkle.
A rush of emotion fluds threw my body.
A singel tear runs down my cheek.
A tear of passion
A tear of love
A tear of what we have become
A tear of the past
A tear of the furture
A tear of now
And most of all
A tear for you.

Its DARK

It's dark down here
In this hole i dug
No speck of light
Surrounded by nothing
No sliver of happieness in sight
I tryed to big myself out but I only fell deeper
Deeper and deeper i fell
Into absolute nothingness
The only sound I hear
All the voices of those who i disopointed
Those voices ringing in my ears
And yet i hear nothing
It's dark down here
In this hole I dug.

ur poems are awesome!!! i liked the one Lost a whole lot, but its all good, absolutely wonderful

I ask where is the honesty?

In all sincerity. In all honesty.. Splendid !!!!!


dear bunny :


your poems are beautiful simple and innocent .. i like it too much .. indeed just I was reading and asking my self .. is there any body can write like this nice poems? and i found the answer yes .. she is bunny !!!


good Start and we wait more .

best

silver heart

Thank you! I didn't think they were that good.. But i guess I'm my worst critic eh

I'll post more once i write them. My writing is... very random

Okay okay lets not get hostel here.
I am not the only one at fault my dear.
Tho I will not stoop down to your level
The words you speak are like words of the devil.
Now let me ask you just one thing
Why was it you ever gave me that ring?
Some how inside I don't want to believe that I was blind
Blind to the fact that this road of love had so many twists and twines.
You speak of how you felt mummified.
Was it because you had so much to hide.
I think you are forgetting one thing
Who is the one who took care of you when you were bleeding
I never really felt your side
Even when all i wanted to do was run and hide.
Terrell. S. Baxter I really did love you
And I will never be the same because whats left of my heart
Beats only for you.
I don't want to believe it no make it go away.
This can't be the end and it ended in such a bad way.
But whats done is done
I'll move on somehow someday.

Thats really beatiful, and very deep, but sooo sad. Is that based on anything you personally experienced? I hope it isnt, and i hope that everything is ok I hope you post some more

auctally yeah. I was engaged but he cheated on me. And that wasnt the only thing either. But oh well eh.

Oh wow, thats gotta hurt. Im really sorry to hear that, i thought it i had it bad, with my bf lying to me . I really hope things are getting better.

It still hurts alot inside but I am feeling better thanks for readin my friend. Your very kind hug

I like them, and am sorry that you had to go through that hun hug

Originally posted by Coldfire
I like them, and am sorry that you had to go through that hun hug

Thanks amber.

Why is it that i can't move on
Even when your love is so far gone
I don't think you ever understood
How much you meant to me
For the first time in my life someone paid attention
And cared unconditionally
But now I question it all
As I let you in
I watched myself fall
Now that your gone
I have nowhere to run and nowhere to hide
Now I'm forced to live with how much i hurt inside
The pain is unbearable
This invisible knife has become way to dull
I said it before
I will move on somehow someway
But just so you know
I will continue to love you until my final day.

A new beginning

I feel like a new born
When the world is so big
And hugs are so warm
I want to reach up and grab the sky
Always exploring and never tell a lie

I feel like a new born
With my whole life ahead of me
Learning new things
Beginning to stretch my wings
When the time is right
I will sore sky high

I feel like a new born
With a new beginning

I had to... my brothers into rap alot and i was messin around and tryin to come up with stuff

Walkin threw tha streets
But my kicks anit nike
Ya don't know my name
But I'll drive ya f**kin crazy
Da name be Bunny B
Ya know I'm rockin dis beat
In tha club postin V.I.P
I be that thick chick that ery body wantin
Ya think you got it but cha only be frontin
I anit like them otha chicks
All they is, is fake

hysterical

Originally posted by Bunny B
A new beginning

I feel like a new born
When the world is so big
And hugs are so warm
I want to reach up and grab the sky
Always exploring and never tell a lie

I feel like a new born
With my whole life ahead of me
Learning new things
Beginning to stretch my wings
When the time is right
I will sore sky high

I feel like a new born
With a new beginning

Really good. Throw in some hyphins, some commas, runnons, incomplete words, and my friend you have a Dickinson poem


But seriously, it is really good.

Originally posted by AOR
hysterical

I know and my bro auctally thought it was good..

Originally posted by AOR
Really good. Throw in some hyphins, some commas, runnons, incomplete words, and my friend you have a Dickinson poem


But seriously, it is really good.

Why thanks buddy hug

My heart it beats for you my love
The distance has killed me
The silence has torn me apart
I weep for your touch
Screaming out your name in my sleep
I can't rest
Me without you is like me without life
You give me life
We have never seen one another
And yet I have always though of you as my closest lover
You are my beauty
And darkness is my beast
But along with life you bring light
The light to help me fight the darkness
Never leave me, my life
Never leave me, my light
Never leave me, my beautiful wife

-Written for UneeklyConfused-

beautiful poem , very well written and heart felt

in_love

Thanks girl

It was defently from my heart

Take me away...
No I'll never go back
My heart is at rest
My mind is at peace

Take me away...
No I'll never go back
My scars have healed
My life renewed

Take me away...
No I'll never go back
Friendships stronger
My shell a little harder

Take me away...
I'll never go back
The chapter of you ended
Another one has began

Take me away...
No I'll never go back
I am stronger than before
I can finally close this door

Take me away...
NO...
I'll live buy my own words...
Forgive but never forget
Live free but grow wise

Take me away...
NO I'm never going back!

Back off can't you see I'm threw
You pleading me to care just out of the blue
Oh please give me a break
I can see right threw you
Your words to me are so fake
I want to leave you behind
Because I am no longer blind
The only feelings I left have all gone sour
I care about you as much as i care about a rotten dead flower
You did this to yourself you see
Took the closest person you had
And hurt me so bad I became your enemy
Now give me my peace
Want someone to care
Go find a priest

Give me fight
Or give me hell
Give me peace
It'll do you well
Pet the puppy
Or tempt the tiger
See what happens
When you play with fire
Seize the moment
Seize the day
But quit now
If your gunna
Run away afraid
Take a moment
Take a breath
Or you'll see what its like
To have nothing left

(This one is just gunna be like a journal post read if you want I guess.)

~~ The past six months were crazy for me. Ups and downs, drama and fighting. I had enough i was about to give up but a great friend of mine conforted me. A interesting realtionship found its end but after the break up tensions wore off that person still now remains a great freind. I know some people will judge me harshly for letting this friendship remain but you know what? I relized something.... Who the hell am i tryin to make happy here... OH YEAH MYSELF! So for those who think I'm foolish for doing so I don't care. That your opinion I have my own. I am not one to drop a person out of my life those who truely know me, know thats true. I have moved on, I relized this chatting with the very person I am talking about now. You see I am happy thats all that should matter at this point. I will live my life the way i believe to be the right way. I said this in a poem before "Forgive but never forget, Live free but grow wise" Thats how I will live. I will forgive those who screw up but I won't forget. I will live the way I please and I will grow and learn from my mistakes I make along the way. Thats it... No more trying to please others if i believe its agenst who I am. To my family: I love each and every one of you. You are all very different and have your own opinions. Mommy, You in my eyes are the strongest women alive. You have pulled threw so much and came such a long way. You are so amazing. Daddy-o, Dad you are such a great parent. I love the way you are willing to talk about anything. It really helps more than you think. You think positivly and that has helped our family grow and move on in life. Dad I appreciate everything you have done for this family and for me. Lets just say I want to take alot of you with me when my oun children come along. Jessica, Girl I have said it so many times before but i am dead serious. I wish i could be more like you. You don't take crap from anyone and you are your own person. You are very unique and I'm so happy that we are so close now a days. You will grow up and go far and I'll be here whenever you need me. Jeremy, You are a soft hearted person jer. I know you will grow up and not want your bestfriend to be your sister but you know I got you for anything jer. You keep it real thats what I like about you and you know that family is inportant. I think we all learned that from joshy. Julia, You will go far in life swetie. You are a good girl but have alot of growing up to do. You are very out going and careing and i love you. Joshua, Rest in peace baby brother. You have taugh this family and those around them so much about life. Like life is to short to worrie about the small things. And also you brought us closer when we seemed to be drifting apart. We own you everything joshy. I will see agian one day I'm sure of it. I want to thank you and dedicate my life to you I'll amke you proud. Oh yes and one more person, Mark, Where do I start. With out sounding all mushy I love ya! You helped me out when I needed it the most and you are always there for me and will always listen thank you. You know I got you too. Ride or die for life.

For those who read all that thank you. Means you really care. My love goes out to all of you and I am always here.

I feel I have grown a bit and I'm happy.

Peace ~~

Blah its my thread.. if u dont wana read that then dont.

My life is out of control
Spiraling down a dark gloomy drain
The open wounds sting as a reminder
The hurt is unbearable
But I'm suppose to be in love
His problems have became my own
They tried to warn me but i did not listen
Now stuck in my mistake i have to right my wrongs
But i know it will hurt him
He says he cant live without me so its hard to leave
They say if your love in strong you can over come all odds
But not this time my love for him keeps sliping
I know i will miss him but i will live on
Is has to be done or i will no longer exist


I wrote this when I was with my ex, just found it.

Years ago a spark between two people glows red
Neither one of them knowing what the other really thought
Age was to blame for this
Once high-school was over the two became ghosts to one an other
Both going on with their life's and growing up
Many long years and bad relationships later
The guy sets out on a search for the one who which once had a spark
Finally finding her on a ever growing site on the web.
Him not knowing he found her at the right time
She had just been threw the worst 6 months of her life.
She reaches out for him with open arms and hopes for a new beginning
He works up the never to ask her out after many signals thrown his way.
The girl taken by surprise now can't be any happier
Now more grown up the girl is ready to this on and hopes for the best.

Wow. Great stuff!! It's all really deep and heartfelt. Great job!

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
Wow. Great stuff!! It's all really deep and heartfelt. Great job!

Aww thanks

Love with your heart
Love with your soul
Love all the above
Love all those below
Love with passion
Love with pain
Love even when theres none to gain
Love your neighbor
Love that stranger
Love yourself, It'll make you happier.
Love father time
Love mother nature
Love the ocean blue
Love all of nature
Love the past
Love the present
Love the future all the same
Love the living
Love the lost
Love whom fight with such great cost
Love the beginning
Love the end
Love our world and all thats within.

Amazing!!

Alwayz N Foeva numba 1
Ride or die
Till the end
We'll have fun
Tight as hell
Family 1st
Threw the best
And the worst
Love foreva
Friendz foralwayz
You and me
We're bestest buddies

-Written for my cousin Mark-

Originally posted by Bunny B
Love with your heart
Love with your soul
Love all the above
Love all those below
Love with passion
Love with pain
Love even when theres none to gain
Love your neighbor
Love that stranger
Love yourself, It'll make you happier.
Love father time
Love mother nature
Love the ocean blue
Love all of nature
Love the past
Love the present
Love the future all the same
Love the living
Love the lost
Love whom fight with such great cost
Love the beginning
Love the end
Love our world and all thats within.


Oh i like this alot, Love is the main word in this poem and thats why i like it. It's very straight froward and it reminds me of lifes lessons
Very nice

Why do I look back
I know what happened last time
I've been down that pathway
Now you look so inviting
I've done searched and found none
who hold me like you do
I know what is to come of this
It happened once before
But i can't help but miss you.
I'm so confused
We talk as none of it happened
Like we live in a fairytale
And everything will be okay in the end
But when is the end
Why do I feel as if I'm giving in
When I keep saying noway
You broke my heart
And I'm still working on making it okay
All I'm trying to say
Your great as a friend
But there's no way in hell
Never again

wow bun bun, sooo amazing. awesomely heartfelt, and stunningly deep. i hope all is well wit u.

I live my life day by day
But I do have a few plans to come my way
I am growing older now
Thats a sign of moving on
And fending for myself
I still sit beside the two who took care of me
I know they will love me forever
But someday soon I'll have to rely on my own feathers
I am not scared
Tho I don't know
What is to come my way
I will make good choices
And bad choices
But I will my live my life to the fullest
And love in every which way
One day I will become a caretaker
For little runts of my own
Thats far from now tho
Right now I'ma sit back, enjoy life
Balance work and play
And
Live my life day by day

I am Harry
You are the bad guy
Running threw endless time
Voices all around
Screams in the dark
There is no safety to be found
Running for eternity
My feet don't even hit the ground
Always in fear of the one behind me
He Screams my name
But its not Harry
"Jamie, Quit running from me"
But run is what I must do
Never let my fear catch up to me
Surrounded by color
So i think
A swirl of blue, reds, pinks,and greens
I feel it closing in
It's suffocating touch
This dream must end
I wake with such a rush

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
aaaahhhh that is awesome!!! i totally kno wat ur talkin about, an how u feel. awesome awesome job

Awww thankies darlin! I really like that one too.

Why is it so hard when you like someone to jsut sit back and relax.
Your mind is always racing about what they think and how they'll react
Makes it even harder when they don't know themselves
Their just as confused as you. but it's so hard to just say oh well.
Nothing seems to come easy even when you work for it.
Tie up loose ends in hope for a sunrise not a sunset.
Wanting to move on and not worry so much
But still feeling that damn guilt rush
Drunken confession and conversations
Lightening the rejection feeling tho it still burns inside
When all you want is someone to hug and confide in
Hard to let go of something you want so badly
Reaching for something you can't have, it's maddening

damn girl, that is amazing! thats true talent right there, cuz it really comes from the heart

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
damn girl, that is amazing! thats true talent right there, cuz it really comes from the heart

Thankiess!!! hug hug

The Women

Strong as a rock and yet as soft as cloud
A women who started from nothing and turned it into a tight nit family.
Always made something out of nothing
My on earth angle
My soft landing
My sense of surcity when everything is dark.
My good feeling when every-things gone wrong
After the dusk she is my dawn.
A women of unmeasurable inner strength and an everlasting heart
Her name i still call out
When all my lights have gone out.
Mommy you are my world
I owe you my all.

The Man

A tough outside with a sensitive inside
A heart of gold with never ending intelligence
A man of many words with passion in his voice
A smile that lights up a room
Watching as his children grow and bloom.
One by one they will grow up and begin lifes of their own but not one will forget the man who put up with it all.
I love you daddy
One day i will return everything you have done for me.

A Real Man

One moment
Thats all i need
I'll gaze into your eyes
And drop to my knees
Such a short time
But you've given me what i need
A real man
Who likes me for me
With nothing but respect
You kept me close and cared endlessly
For this i thank you
You've set an example
That will be hard to live up to
Weather is ends or continues to be
I thank you and will love you unconditionally

amazing, truly amazing!

Normal is nonexistent
Perfection is a lie
The best of you
Is for what we strive
Take life by the hand
Prepare for the ride
Hold your head up
And keep your dreams alive

Like a deadly disease
It never goes away
Cover it up all you want
It can still get in the way
Like a 2nd personality
You fight the battle everyday
You win some, You loose some
But in the end we'll be okay

I feel I've changed for the best
But now I fear that side of me
Afraid to shed a tear
Afraid to get to deep
Almost afraid of what thumps in my chest
I feel I've become stronger
But have I only become weaker?...

Life, Love, Friends And Trust
Money, Lust, Drinking And Drugs
HighBall, LowBall, Call Or Bluff
Goth, Prep, Skater Or Thug
Hug From A Lover
Kiss From A Cutie
Life Can Be Wild
Hold On Tight
Were Young And The Weathers Mild
So Let Take A Ride Tonight

wow...O.o those were some awsome poems bun bun...i like the one bout the little brother...the only thing i wanna ask is is it a true story kinda of poem?

Originally posted by XvampbenjiiX666
wow...O.o those were some awsome poems bun bun...i like the one bout the little brother...the only thing i wanna ask is is it a true story kinda of poem?
Ahh, Your talking about my 1st poem. "Angel on earth"
And yes it's true. I lost my baby brother Jan 9th 2001 @ 3am.
That was when I started writing actually.
So that's truly my 1st poem, It's what I read at the funeral.

Too skinny, Too fat
Too white, Too black
Too foreign, Too religious
Too boring, Too spontaneous
Too flirty, Too prude
Too quiet, Too rude
Too little, Too much
Never seems quite enough...

Originally posted by ~Bun Bun~
Too skinny, Too fat
Too white, Too black
Too foreign, Too religious
Too boring, Too spontaneous
Too flirty, Too prude
Too quiet, Too rude
Too little, Too much
Never seems quite enough...

That one is amazing.

Originally posted by danielle marie.
That one is amazing.

Thank You!

With one breath I'd say I Love You
With another I'd say your name
With one more I'd say I'll die for you
With my last I'll say it again...

If truth is what you preach
Then truth is what you should live
If you call others out on being fake
You shouldn't be fake yourself
Don't say what you can do
When you know its not true
Don't say your different
When your all the same it's all about you
If you make up a character draw some lines
Don't become your character and tell his lies

Originally posted by ~Bun Bun~
With one breath I'd say I Love You
With another I'd say your name
With one more I'd say I'll die for you
With my last I'll say it again...

I like this one

You know who you are
There's no need to say any names
You've crossed the line
No wonder your ashamed
She was your best-friend...
WE were your best-friends
What happened to chicks before dicks
Or friends till the end
All your words mean nothing now
A speck of dust in my forgotten past now
I knew you were a flake from the get go
But a bond grew and a friendship started to grow
When I say I'm there for my friends I mean it
When you say it, it's nothing but a jumble of words falling out of your over sized mouth.
This is completely your fault just so you know
We try-ed and put up with your bullshit for to long

To the greatest friend
In the Internet land
I offer you my heart
I offer you my hand
On your special day
Your wish is my command
Never be afraid
Make life go your way
If you ever feel down
Always try to smile
I'll always be here
No matter how far
No matter how near
Written for Leo. M

My mind is blank
I don't know what to write
I said I'd particapate
Yet I run in fright
No words seem to come
But I've written may others
I can't seem to write that one.

I don't understand
Why I feel this way
I'm happy for you
But my feelings still havn't gone away
I've passed you on to a friend
With the hopes you see what was out there
But never did I think she'd be your one.
I don't mean that in a bad way
I'm just not over you I'm afraid.
Guess I had it right
I don't need another in my life
I'm really happy for you two
All my thoughts will be with you
I care about you both
And wish you nothing but happiness

One more thing
Don't feel bad if you read this
I'll be okay

I stand alone
I need nobody extra by my side
I can do it for myself
And hold my head up high

I stand alone
I'll build my life
I'll become someone
And get my sh*t done

I stand alone...
I'll make it on my own

so whats up in the bun bune little world?

When will people open their hearts and shut their eyes
When will they learn that truth and love beats out lies
When will they see a person is their mind not their outsides
When will their be a day.... when

wow....pretty deep nice bun bun

I had you in my arms
I had you so close
Why'd I let you get away?

You were mine
I was yours
Why'd I let you get away?

Now your gone
I wish you were here
Why'd I let you get away?

Now shes yours
Now your happy
Why'd I let you get away

I'm left here lonely...
Why'd I let you get away....?

Originally posted by XvampbenjiiX666
wow....pretty deep nice bun bun

Thank You!

wow i know how that feels...it hurts

I want it to stop
I feel closed in
I can't move forward
I feel lost within

Nothing to reach for
Nothing I can see

Everyday is the same
What will tomorrow be?

Never believe you're less than you are
If he makes you feel low then its time to go
You're heart is worth more than all his lies
He is just useing you to have a toy
Don't believe his game, its your game
Play by your rules.

Be carefull with your heart
Don't just let any more see
Make them earn their way in
Or you'll be the one paying the fee.
Never hide your heart but protect it

Remember yourself before up take that step
If your not strong it'll come crashing down

I give up
I can't fight this fight
It's not even mine to fight
I was fighting for you
But I can't make you see
Guess you'll learn the hard way
Only you can decide
But with this one
We'll never see eye to eye.

Sing me a song
Sing it to me
Let me feel your love
Through the words you say
The sound comming from your soft lips
Speak words I dream about
I feel like I'm floating
On a cloud of words
Whispering to me softly
Clearing everything but you from my mind

I think I realized something
I love you.
Not just a bestfriend love either...
An honest true love.
That'd explain why I feel I need to fight for you.
Now that I think about it...
It all makes sense
I know you'd never feel the same
Even with as much we joke about the 2 for 1 game
I know your love and lust rest with men
Wow... I love you Amanda Krim.

I don't know how to express how I'm feeling. I've never felt so incompitedent. People take for granted what they have all the time. Just let alone the ability to see. You see becuase I am extreamly visuially impaired there are things that harder for me to accomplish. But I can to them. I can read, I am cook, I can type on a computer, many things. One thing i can not do is drive. You may never think about it but i have to everyday. "What if". I always think how would it be if i could see like the rest of the population does. Also I am gratefull for the vision i do have becuase i have friends who could not see a thing and they get by. I wish other people could realize how good they have it. I don't want pity, no all i want is understanding. Don't treat me different but understand that i learn things a different way. People always ask me why don't i open my eyes all the way, now im asking you the samw thing.

Originally posted by ~Bun Bun~
I think I realized something
I love you.
Not just a bestfriend love either...
An honest true love.
That'd explain why I feel I need to fight for you.
Now that I think about it...
It all makes sense
I know you'd never feel the same
Even with as much we joke about the 2 for 1 game
I know your love and lust rest with men
Wow... I love you Amanda Krim.

We write of equal love, but different lovers.

I'll be your angel
I'll carrie you through

The light and the dark
The black and the blue

I'll be you angel
I'll carrie your through

The ups and downs
The old and the new

I'll be your angel
I'll carrie you through

(May turn this one into a song.... not sure)

On my knees

I saw a twinkle in your eye, every time you looked at me.
The smile on your face was such a sight to see.
Theres not a mile I would walk to bring you back to me

But baby

Can't you see
I'm on my knees
I can't move on
Because your gone
Can't you see
I'm on my knees
I can't move on
Because your gone

Looking back I'd change my ways
I'd give you my all for just a chance to say
I love you so much my love my dear
I'd hold you so close and chase away your fears.

Can't you see
I'm on my knees
I can't move on
Because your gone
Can't you see
I'm on my knees
I can't move on
Because your gone

I love you so much my love my dear

Smile for me, wipe away my tears
I reach you but nothings there
The ground so soft I sink beneath
I offer you my heart forever to keep

Can't you see
I'm on my knees
I can't move on
Because you gone

Can't you see
I'm on my knees...

She said she loved me...
I said it back
We were young and wild...
But I keep looking back
Life has changed...
I wanna have her back.

How do you stay strong
... when the one you love left you alone
How do you stay strong
... when you opened your heart just to have it broken
How do you stay dtrong
... when your bleeding on the inside

The warmth of your touch
Felt ever so right
The taste of your lips
Made my heart fly
Every time I look at you
I feel alive inside
You made me so happy
I wanted to cry
Words can't express
How happy you made me feel

When your world falls apart
I'll be there
When that special person does you wrong
I'll be there
When it seems like every ones out to get you
I'll be there
When you have no one to turn to
I'll be there
Even when you push me away
I'll be there

Look my way
I'll try not to hide
Look my way
I'll dare to open my eyes
Look my way
I'm looking right at you

The search is never ending
We as humans are unable to see
Everything we could possibly need
Is always within reach
But those who are to blind in their hearts to see
Will end up being the loneliest ONE there could be.

I feel it bubbling
Wanting to burst free
Escape from everyday
Away from the mundane
A spirit inside so carefree...
...so untamed
Trapped by a world of obligations
Aways need to impress, succeed and conform
...always being judged by those whom are not any more superior in life....
I find myself welcoming an end...
... more like a beginning
To be able to sore free...
.... free from this so called "reality"
This may be societies "reality" but not mine...
I hate these feelings this world causes...
I crave an escape, an end... a beginning


I am going crazy.

Something needs to change
Not sure what yet but....

Maybe a change of scenery...
Maybe occupying my mind will help...
Maybe my beginning is all a matter of the steps I take...
Maybe I'm thinking to much
Maybe I'm not
Maybe I need help.

This is my silent cry
My mind is wondering in ways I never though passable....again
Selfish yes I know.
Though I am not wanting any spot lights.
So marks won't be necessary.
They don't know... well one does
But this time I can hide it.
I hate this
No matter how much I argue with myself...
It's bad but I smile when I think of ...
I can't say it....
Imposable
I can't
No!

I have not shed one tear though it's all I think of.
I show just about no signs
Their not looking
Ha I just grinned in accomplishment
Geeze I gotta get away.... my mind ...
Why am I thinking this


... a silent cry...

Lol sorry about the emo posts. Had a little breakdown.

I'm good tho

My Personal Mission Statement

To live and to love
To learn to live
To guide and to strive
To survive to guide
To help and to hope
To hope to help
To leave an embrace
... A smiling face
... My peaceful trace

that is so thoughtful and beautiful. truly words to live by...

Aw thank you! I'm proud of that one

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