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Liola stared up at her rooms ceiling, and hoped that by some miracle it was all a dream, but even she was to old to believe that her whole life was a dream!
She used to play this came and sometimes still does, it was called the dream world, where she would close her eyes and make up this whole imaginary life that was absolutely perfect!! She knew that she had to face it, this was her life even if she liked it or not!
Liola was 13 years old and that was about the only thing that was normal about her. She had no siblings and no friends, she did have one friend called Lila but she had different interests from Liola, the only reason that they had not broken up was because Liola overheard her telling one of her other stuck – up friends that her mother said that Liola was going through a hard time and that Lila had to be there for her. Liola hated the fact that her parents had to get divorced, she had pleaded with both of them but even she knew there was nothing that could be done, her dad told her that they would have divorced earlier but they feared that it might affect Liola’s childhood but now that she was grown up, her parents could no longer take it!
Liola never had anyone that she could really relate to, she felt that she was alone in this world and she had so many thoughts stuffed up in her, her mum once recommended that she keep a diary, but Liola couldn’t trust a diary she had grown up believing that she couldn’t trust anyone, because so many people had betrayed her!..........

So is anybody reading?

I AM I AM I AM

'tis very good. keep on going.

awww thanks

Liola’s mum walked into her bedroom, “honey, are you ready the car is waiting outside”, hilary (Liola’s mum)
“yes I’m ready” said Liola putting on a half smile and walking out.
After the divorce Hilary decided that it would be better to move and leave all of the past over here, of course it would give Liola the oppurtunity to make new friends and start all over again, but Liola did not want to leave even though there were so many bad memories, the city of san fransisco is the only thing that had been with her all her life, so many things had come and gone, but over the years Liole had gotten used to letting go, so it was not that hard.

Beside everybody in her here neighbourhood knew about the divorce, and everywhere she went everybody they gave her pity looks, and she hated the fact that they pitied her.
Liole jumped into the car and her mum said “one last look honbun”. Liola gave one last longing look at their house and her mum said “and here we come New York”
Even though her mum was trying to act all cheerful she knew that her mum was depressed, she didn’t know if she liked her mum being happy and lying or if she wanted her mum to tell her the truth. But she didn’t care, because and that sudden moment it all hit her, everybody was lying nobody cared about her, so why should she care?………….

Liola pondered over this suggestion all the way to the airport, could it really be true she thought? Hilary looked at her with a half smile “whats on your mind, honbun?”, she said.
Liola looked at her mum and said “oh nothing”, but then she had a sudden urge and said “just thinking about all the great things we can do in New York”.
Hilary smiled “now that’s the spirit”, and squeezed Liola’s hand.
Liola could not come to terms with this, she hated the fact that she could not ask her Hilary about this thought. Because of course she knew what Hilary would say, she would not go and say no hon I hate you and I don’t love you!
Liola thought that it was safer to keep this to herself and usually did with everything!!! “mum what school will I being to?”, questioned Liola.
“well I got several interviews for you, about 5 and some of the are all girls school, but-”, said Hilary.
“but what?”, asked Liola
“well it’s just that I don’t think you will get into the all girls school, because they believe that children with divorced parents, become a nuisance!”, said Hilary “but of course that’s not true!, right?”
Liola took a while to think about it, I mean she could understand what the school was talking about when they said divorced parents children became a nuisance, she had seen them on T.v the ones that went into drugs and stuff, but she hated to think that, that would happen to her!! So her answer to her mum was a very weary “no, of course not”.

Okay I am going to skip the part where they go to the airport and take the flight etc.
So the next time I post it will be from when they land in New York!!!!

so is anybody reading this?, because if not, then i will stop writing!!

k well i will post this and then i will close of!!:

“Ladies and gentle man we have landed safely, I would to like to welcome you to the city of New York, enjoy you stay!”, said the hostess.

Liola and he mum climbed down the stairs of the plane to receive their luggage, “well this is nice isn’t it?”, said Hilary

“Yeah, I suppose so, mum can we just get our luggage and go to our hotel I’m really tired “, said Liola.

“Sure Hon, but I have got a surprise for you”, said Hilary eyes gleaming with excitement.

So Hilary dragged Liola to the nearest cab and gave them an address no. 12 Stert street, “ooh mum do we have to, I just really- all I wanna do is sleep”, said Liola

“Yes we have to”, said Hilary

The cab dropped them of and emptied all their luggage Liola woke up from her daze “mum, oh my gosh you forgot to book a hotel! No I refuse o stay with other people just because of your mistake, I want to go to our hotel NOW”, said Liola partially fuming with rage.

“Hon I sincerely hope that your stupidness is because you're sleepy and not your natural self! Do I have to spell it out to you, I BOUGHT A HOUSE”, said Hilary jumping up and down.

“What”, Said Liola and stormed of not knowing where to go because this city was new to her, so in the end decided to stand facing a big oak tree

“Hon I thought you would be happy isn’t it great?”, said Hilary anxious

“Great, mum how could this be great? It’s horrible!”, said Liola

“What the house? Oh well I think it looks quite pretty and I choose because I thought you would like, but obviously not!”, said Hilary.

“it’s not the house”, said Liola taking her first proper look at the house and thought to herself it did look very nice. “The house looks great - nevermind you wont understand”, said Liola sighing to herself.

“Try me”, said Hilary pleadingly

Liola looked at her mum in the eyes and said “I have tried mum, I have tried a million times”………..

sorry, didn't come in a few days. keep on going. please keep on going. you have great writing skills, and it shouldn't go to waste. KEEP GOING OR I SHALL PM YOU EVERY MINUTE, EVERY HALF AN HOUR, EVERY HOUR, EVERY DAY, EVERY WEEK, EVERY MONTH, EVERY YEAR...

thanx ok i will, but im a bit busy at the moment, so maybe tomorrow or something!!

ok . i shall be a waiting for you to post. but you have your warning, so as long as you don't take as long as me... :P

okay, but believe saratn nobody takes as loooooong as you do to post (talking from experiance) just kidding
okay heres more!!

CHAPTER TWO

….. “Well please tell me again because I don’t seem to remember you telling me”, said Hilary half crying, half pleading with Liola.

Liola looked at he mother and took a deep breathe in “Ok mum you want me to tell you, well then I will tell you –“

“Wait”, said Hilary “Just lets go inside the house, its our first day, well night and we standing out on the lawn and yelling at each other, imagine what the neighbours will think of us”. she let a deep breathe out “lets just go nside and settle down and have this talk”, said Hilary.

“No, mum im sick of you caring about what everybody thinks about us”, said Liola. “We have issues mum, you have got to accept that we are not normal, okay and I am tired of keeping this all bunched up, I am gonna tell you everything now on our new lawn with tears trickling down my face and the neighbours peeping through their curtains, thinking that I cant see them. No mum I don’t care I am going to tell you now”, said Liola, her heart thumping so hard and so loud, her breathes uneven and her eyes full of rage and anger.

“Ever since this divorce thing happened my whole life changed, but did you care, noooo you were just to busy worring about yourself, you never cared, I have had a hard life mum, and I have lived through it better than most people did, I don’t take drugs, I don’t smoke, like most children in situation do. Then you decide to move, because you want to get rid of your past, did you ever think about me and how it was going to effect me? did you think about all my friends and how I was going to adapt to living some place new and goingi nto a new school, huh?” Liola took a breathe in, and carried on.

“But because I knew you really did want to move I didn’t make a fuss, and I thought that It could not be all that bad, but then you go and buy a new house and expect me to be all excitd about it, mum we have just moved I am still getting used to the idea of New York and a life without dad, and you suddenly go out of the blue and buy a new house, and in not any one of these decisions you never consulted me, never asked me about my opinion. Well guess what mum I’ve had it, I have been so patient with you and dad, I have been undestanding. But do you want to know how I feel, I feel unloved and unwanted, I mean I know what you guys must have been thinking, how life and the divorce would be so easy if I was not born, well sometimes I WISH THAT I WAS NOT BORN”, Liola screamed the last part out, and knelt on the wet grass and cried her heart out.

Liola managed to dry up her tears and say “how is all the furniture going to come huh?” and with that she ran into the house. it was cold and had the smell of an untouched house, to her surprise all the furniture from the old house was already there neatly set out, her bed was there along with the duvets ready to be slept on , Liola did not even care to wash her face she just jumped onto her bed and closed her eyes and prayed that she would dream of something other than her life!

Meanwhile outside still on the lawn, Hilary sat weeping to herself, she whispered to herself “everything was supposed to be perfect, but obviously that is not an option for our family”. And with that got up and entered the house.

this is good, and a little sad...how could Liola be so cold? Hilary was doing what was best for them! sorry sorry continue at your leisure.
and she's right. I take forever to post in my stories.

oh, and i was wondering if i could take the first part of your story to my site. i am making something called writers of the month. I want your consent first, and that no one will continue it. I will give you a link to the site, so you can check from time to time. After the month is over, it will be deleted, and a new one will take it's place. if you say yes, great, if not, then no hard feelings, cause it is up to you.

yeah, no problem, its cool.
dont mind at all

now im tryin to figure out whats going to happen next in this, hmmmm

thanks. i am only borrowing the first post of the story, nothing more than that.
I hope get something soon...this is turning out really really good. maybe i should open another story, try writing from a different angle...

Liola woke up the next morning, with the sun blazing on her face, her eyes lids split open adjusting to the suns rays, for a moment she had forgotten where she was and what she had done last night! But as she sat up everything flashed back in her mind, she was shocked at herself and could not believe that, that was her, it was almost a fake her. She was a quite introverted girl hardly ever spoke her mind and had a habit of always lying about her feelings.

She got out of bed and trudged around the house looking for the bathroom, at last she found! After that she walked around exploring the house amazed that everything was already set up. She thought to herself that this must have taken a while, and a lot of planning. She wanted to run up to her mum and give her a great big hug and apologise, and then everything would be back to normal, no she knew she could not do that, everything would never be the same because now her mother knows everything about her feelings and emotions. But in any case she wanted to go apologise she hated having fights with her mom, especially when they were in their new house and she did not know where the breakfast was!

She climbed up the stairs, thinking to herself that she had to perfect the art of sliding down the twirly stairs! Her mom’s door was closed, Liola turned the knob and the door was locked. Liola started to panick “Mum”, she said “Mum are you there”, her voice getting high and squeaky. Lila had watched many movies where the parents get divorced and then the mom does something crazy, and she feared the thought that had lingered into her mind that maybe her mom had done the same!

She ran around the house trying to think of a way to get into the room swearing to herself while at it. She found a long pole but it was way to heavy to carry up all the stairs. She stood silently on the staircase thinking, her heart racing.

She had an idea running outside the house into the garage she grabbed the ladder, which she had noticed there night before. She searched all the windows and finally guessed it was the window with the peach curtain. Liola’s mum had a bad habit of always never closing the curtain, she placed the ladder steadily praying that it would not fall, she started to climb step by step chanting to herself “one, two, one two” over and over again. She reached the window top and peered into the window afraid, she gasped “MUM”………………….

so i guess nobdy is reading!!!!!

sorry, I am. post more....please. and something i have learned. don't write for others, but for yourself. so don't wait for people to respond to continue.

very true

yeah, you guys are right

so you read this too? how'd you like it? i think it is well done, and i want to see more.

I like it! I want more!!!!!!!

the reader is always right.....
you have two people reading this....and we are dying......

*choking* need ... more

wonder who voted needs more work...

I didn't I voted "It was absoulutly fantastic"

who posted that? show yourself. *looks everywhere* this does not need work. this is perfect!

lol, thanx but you cant expect everyone to like my story!!! yah so happy more people are reading i will try and post more as soon as i can

okie dokie, i will be waiting

I'm reading your story too and i really like it! keep up the good work!

awww thanks, im touched

yay you gots another reader

Hilary woke up, grumbling to herself as she could not recall herself putting her alarm on, as she reached out to her cellphone, she realized that it was not her alarm. She sat up in bed her uncombed hair hanging all over her face, her eyes adjusting to the light, she turned her head and to her surprise saw Liola frantically banging on the window, Hilary was so confused, she got up and tried opening the window, it was broken. She mouthed that the window was broken to Liola.

Liola started mumbling to herself, she was so stupid she thought to herself. ”Of course my mum would not do that”, she whispered, and for a second she thought everything was going to be all right. But she realized her mum was going to be asking why was she on a ladder looking into her window. Liola had a feeling that this day was going to be long and hard.

Hilary walked into the kitchen grumpy and tired, she switched on the expresso machine and waited, remembering what had happened last night. Liola walked into the kitchen, and plastered a smile on her face “morning mum”, she said, in a fake cherry voice.
“Morning”, said Hilary, not making any effort to be nice. Liola sighed she was right this is going to be a long day she thought to herself. She found her cereal in the cupboard and happily munched on it. “Was it true?” Hilary asked liola, without making any eye contact to her.
“What, was it true?” asked liola, even though she already knew the answer.
“About what happened last night, the things you said, were they true”, said Hilary
“Well mum –“, said Liola.
“Yes or no Liola, I just want yes or no”, said Hilary raising her voice.
Liola sighed “yes”. She took a breath and said “I did not mean it mum, I really didn’t its okay, I love our new house its great, and I’m glad we are having a change, really I am”, said Liola with a pleading voice.


Sorry its so little, but I will be posting soon

Great

well at least it is something...i've been DYING...

im soooooo sorry people i will b posting soon, but i have got exams comin up and i have to study really hard!!!!

GOOD LUCK!

thanx im gonna need it!!!!!

Hilary really wanted to believe liola, but she knew it was not true! She sighed and said “let’s forget what happened last night, and move on!”
Liola looked up at her mother and smiled “what are you talking about mum, what happened last night?”, she said.
“That’s my girl”, Hilary smiled as she spoke. “Well let’s go take a look at the house then shall we?”
“Yup, we didn’t have time to last night”, liola at her mother.

They walked around the house looking at everything, smiling and laughing like nothing had happened!
“So you want go see your new school?”, asked Hilary.
Liola turned around shocked “you got me into a school”, said liola
“Of course I did, what did you think? I was going to leave you schooless?”, smiled Hilary “well it is not that all girls school, because they wouldn’t let you in, but it is still a very nice school!”, said Hilary.
“Yes lets go”, said liola
“Okay, come on, we'll take a cab" said Hilary.

So so very sorry I cant post more, but I promise after exams I will!!

okay! just try to post soo. and good luck.

don't worry. none of us are going anywhere soon right?
*no answer*
RIGHT?
*still no answer.*

heh... right.

we got a taker.

*raises hand*

awww thanx u guys

i just finished my english paper, and it was the best and math sucked and we got science tommorow!!!
im gonna find that idiot who invented exams and make his life hell, if he isn't dead yet!

As they were driving the car, Liola thought to herself if what she did was right, even though it had calmed things down, she wasn’t sure she should keep all these secrets to herself. She had given up on keeping diaries for a long time!
They stopped at the school, Hilary tipped the guy and they jumped out of the cab, Liola looked up at the school, it was called St. Ridge high school it was grey and blue and looked very glum! Hilary said “well you know your not supposed to judge book by its cover, so I guess the same applies to a school!”.
Liola looked at her mum and glumly replied, “yeah I guess so”.

They entered the principals office, which had ornament and trinkets displayed every where.
The principles, Mrs. lockert was a very sweet lady, warm and welcoming, she gave many compliments to liola. She also hinted that there was therapy for those who wanted it. Liola for some reason got angry and hotly said, “I don’t need therapy”
Mrs. Lockert looked up in surprise to Liola and said in a stern tone, “I did not implicate in any such way that you needed it”, and smiled sweetly.
Hilary tried to break the tension between the two by questioning what extra curriculum they offered at the school. Mrs. Lockert showed them the brochure and said, “I am not implying that you have to do any of these, Liola”.
Liola looked at her mother and politely said where the bathrooms were. Mrs. Lockert gave the directions and she walked out.

Liola didn’t really want to go to the bathroom, she wanted to explore the school by herself, she entered the main building and walked down the corridors, she could hear the teachers talking to the pupils in the classrooms. The graffiti on the wall was disgusting and to think that nobody bothered to clean it up. She grimly looked at the notice boards, mostly filled with out of date notices and decided to go back o the office.

go on...

Please go on!

yes please go on...
well, good luck finding that idiot...*runs and hides.* joking

As she walked past the classrooms, she suddenly started to miss home, her school and everything else. Even though she had no friends, she liked her school because nobody ever made fun of her because of her parents. She wondered to herself if people would pick on her here, it seemed like a very un-orderly school. She could imagine it, everyone crowding around her and laughing and pointing fingers. A tear trickled down her face smudging her eyeliner; she gave a small sniff, and then began to realize that she was being stupid, crying over something that hadn’t happened yet.

Like a bolt out of the blue, the school bell rang and surprised her, here heart beated fast and her breaths becoming uneven. She started to run before she got trampled by the crowds of children who were waiting to get home. But for some reason her legs were stiff she couldn’t move very well, she had been standing in one spot for too long. All she could do was a barely a hobble. She let out a quiet yelp of pain as she strained her leg. Her eyes darting everywhere any minute now she was going to be trampled. The second bell rung, the classroom doors burst open as children screamed and chatted and laughed. She felt as if she was invisible, everybody bumped into her, nobody even glanced her way. She thought of maybe asking for some help, but for some reason all the children had backed away from the middle and leaned against the lockers. She was so confused, maybe there was a parade or something she thought to herself, she swore under her breath she was in the middle. She tried again to move her stiff leg, but it was no use.

Everybody went silent. Liola looked round, she saw three tall girls, with great figures; they had short skirts and halter necks. Everybody was awed. As they got near her she got scared, she couldn’t understand why she got scared, I mean they were just three girls, but they seemed to give of this vibe of coolness.

The three girls stopped and inch away from liola. Everybody’s eyes were on her. Liola wanted to scream, but she couldn’t. She realized one thing; she was going to have an awful time at school!

Ooh, please go on!

:O

what does :O mean, good or bad?????

The girls looked at her, glaring with their beady eyes. Liola stuttered speechless, a shiver ran down her spin. She decided to tell the truth. “Sorry, my legs are stiff and it hurts real bad when I walk”, she whispered softly looking down at the floor. The three girls said nothing and instead went around Liola. A sigh was about to come out of her mouth as she thought they had forgiven her, but the girl in the middle turned around and said in a soft but harsh voice, “you will pay for this”.

The girls left an aww in the corridor, as the students heard the door slam they all went back to their usual self. A girl came up to Liola and helped her up, as she was saying thanks, she saw her mom running towards, “O there you are I was worried about you”.
“Thanks mum I’m fine, lets go”.

As they were sitting in the cab, Hilary asked Liola what she liked about the school.
Liola looked down at the seat and worriedly said, “do you think any of the other schools will accept me?”.
“But, Liola I thought you liked the school, did something happen?”, questioned Hilary
“err no, but the vibe I get isn’t that nice”, replied Liola
“o well I thought it was nice, but if you want I can phone the other schools and check”, said Hilary.
“thanks mum, that would be great”.

They sat in silence right until they got home. Hilary started the kettle ready for tea, when the phone rang. Hilary answered the phone and started talking in a very serious voice, nodding and saying tank-you so much.
Liola looke dat her mother, when she had put the phone down, “who was that”, she asked.
“the school, said hilary beaming, they have given us an excellent price for the school fees”.
“o” said liola. “so I guess I will have to be going to that school then”.
“Well look hon I don’t see anything wrong with it, so I think you should go”, said Hilary.
“Yeah, you right”, said Liola sighing.

that's obviously good.

I agree

yeah thought so, but i was just checkin!!!

anyway will post more soon, but im a bit busy at the moment!!!

She jumped of the stool and trudged to the room and welcomed herself to hell…………

~
The morning was dull, everything was so glum, so was Liola. Hilary on the other hand was way too happy to notice her daughters despair. Hilary went on and on about how they were going to get school uniforms and stationery. Liola had been putting on a fake smile all day. She had no clue how she was going to sort her problem out, she thought of maybe writing a letter of apology and explaining it to them, but for all she knew they might not be able to read. It was all she could think of, what were they going to do to her, would they beat her up or hijack her she was so scared. She couldn’t of course tell her mum, because her mum would tell the princable and then the princable would tell the three girls and they would tell the school what a baby she is!!!!!! There was no way out of it. Liola was deep I in thought about her horrible situation when the phone rang. Hilary bouncily went up to the phone and answered. Suddenly her face drooped a little bit and spoke in a more business tone; she looked up at Liola and said to her that it was her father.

Liola’s eyes went big, “dad”, she gasped. She hadn’t spoke to him since the move and she thought to herself that maybe he would be able to help her. Running up to the phone she said, “hey dad”.
“Hi darling, I miss you so much” he said.
Hilary had wandered out of the room to give them some privacy. “Me to, I got so many things to tell you”, Liola said
“Well Hun- I don’t really have much time, but maybe you can email it to me. I only called to tell you some very exciting news that your mother thinks I must tell you”; he said leaning towards a more fatherly tone.
“Yeah yeah, do tell”, she replied
“Ok well, I think you will be so happy to hear, but your mother thinks not”, he said
“Awww come on dad, just tell me”, she said
“Ok well here goes……………………………

Mwhahahahaahaha I will just have to keep you waiting for the next part!!!!!!!

AAHHHH! What is it!?! I must know.

lol, lol, lol

and now 4 the best part i wont be able to write 2day or tommorow!!!!!!

im sorry i no its mean of me, to leave it like that, but i really thought i would be able to post more today!!!
turns out i cant coz of 'exams'!!

Awww, that's okay. But good luck on your exams. By the way, I like your sig!

great sig! keep up the good work, and TAKE YOUR TIME

thanx, i like the siggie to

hmm i will try write some tomorrow, coz i have no exams to write, if i have time!

how long do you have exams?

well, it finishes on the 17 november

Best of luck to you.

wow. good luck!

Yah I managed to write just a ‘lil bit to keep you people happy


“Liola, Hun, I getting married”, Liola’s dad lifted up his voice.
“WHAT”, she screamed down the phone, causing Hilary to sigh in the next room and whispered to herself, I knew it!
“Yeah I’m starting a new family and everything, but Liola you will always be my hun bun”, he said.
There was silence down the phone, Liola mind was full of so many things, her dad had officially moved on, she already hated her new school and she hadn’t even started attending, everything was going way wrong.
“Liola? hun are you okay”, he said in a questioning voice. Liola slammed down the receiver and ran knocking into her mum outside the door, she ran past, jumped up on her bed and cried her eyes out.
Everybody had given up on her deserted her, and all she wanted to do was stay like this, her face thrust into her vanilla smelling pillow and crying. But she knew she couldn’t because she had to get up and go by uniforms for her new school, and then put on a smile and as always pretend everything was all right!
But nothing was alright everything was wrong, she used to wonder to herself what she had ever done to get punished like this, and the answer struck her like a bolt out of the blue……. She was born!

yep. I'm happ.

awww... she's so depressed! that's so sad...

so good!

:'(

hey people, will be postin here soon, promise promise!!

o by the way like your avy saratn!

thank you cutie. take your time once again.

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS exams are ova!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yah yah yah im so happy so that means i will be postin more soon soon just after i go celebrate

cool! congrats!

have fun celebrating.

thank i did

Liola woke, up forgetting what had happened, she realized it was morning, she looked around her and there on her bed was Hilary, head bent down, un-brushed hair. “Mum” she whispered.
Her mum looked up and smiled “ o liola, I’m so sorry, I didn’t want your father to tell you, but he really wanted to” she said.
“Mum its okay, don’t worry I am fine” she said, as she plastered on a fake smile, as she was way to good at doing.
~
Situation: Her mum and her were going on a exciting trip to the mall to buy some stuff, of course Hilary was excited about this, but liola on the other hand wasn’t really.

As they got in to the car liola said, “mum, I really have to tell you something –”
“O Hun come on, stop being so depressed. We need FUN forget about your father”
“But mum this isn’t about dad its about sch – ”
Hilary blasted the music and started singing as loud as possible, pretending to not hear was liola was saying! But inside Hilary knew the hurtful truth, she knew she had to take her to the doctor, she knew that her daughter was suffering a depression sickness, but she just couldn’t accept it!!!!
As they pulled up into the carpark, Hilary smiled at her daughter; liola looked up at her mum, “what? Is there something on my hair?”
“no no, nothing” you just look so……..Nice!”
“Err thanks I guess”
Hilary put on her big smile, and bounced o to the stall with liola who was very confused followed!

I’m getting to depressed writing this. So I’m going to liven it up a bit in the next post!

Okay! It is kinda sad... I have to admit.

i like it

Originally posted by Brunette Angel
Okay! It is kinda sad... I have to admit.


yeah.....................i think so to........i hate writin sad stories..........so im gonna liven it up a bit!!!!!!!!!!!

were is the next part?

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it has been like 2 months since the last piece