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yes well my friend wrote this story and its about a girl who kills her family and no one suspects her and a lot of inocent people die and her newest best friends is killed by the police because hes a suspect, but she set him up, and then in the end she gets away with it.


so the story needs a title... please, any suggestion?

shock

How about "Crazy girl who kills her family and no one suspects her and a lot of inocent people die and her newest best friends is killed by the police because hes a suspect, but she set him up, and then in the end she gets away with it."?

wow thats a really crappy long title
no offense or anything but i need a real suggestion.

mhm

Name it after the main character's first name.

wow thats a good suggestion ty dark c

I still think my suggestion is better schmoll

Friends are Forever.

Little does he know, his forever is in jail..

actually he died in the story, he was shot by the police.

How about "Shatter" or "Shattered" because of all the chaos in the story?

hmmm... but nothning gets broken though... lots of people are sliced up though!!

Originally posted by leana marie
hmmm... but nothning gets broken though... lots of people are sliced up though!!
it's a metaphor

so call it "A slice of life: the ____ ____ story.
...sorry. that was terrible. i'm crawling back under my rock now.

Originally posted by leana marie
hmmm... but nothning gets broken though... lots of people are sliced up though!!

Wow

err whats a metaphor?

Originally posted by leana marie
err whats a metaphor?

And you're how old?

i just forgot!! too much pot in this room seriously

Originally posted by leana marie
i just forgot!! too much pot in this room seriously

Yeah, ok.

Originally posted by leana marie
err whats a metaphor?
Oh my god...

Originally posted by DarkC
Oh my god...



You don't say.

Originally posted by leana marie
err whats a metaphor?

For example....



Your IQ number is the equal of a shoe size.



^ That's more into the area of a Simile, but a Simile would be a sub-category under Metaphorical terms.