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Since I currently have nothing to do and write peoms constantly this is going to be my outlet. So feedback would be nice thaks. ^_^

Newborn
So softly now
I hear it beating
So gently now
I touch its skin
Like a fleece comforter it feels
Smells like baby powder
I stare in wonder
At the baby in my arms
The newborn sister I had acquired
Feeling the jealousy and envy melt away
As I realize all of that was pointless
Nothing mattered
When I held her
So softly now

Night
Star show at night
When they shine so very bright
Sky dark as midnight

that Haiku poem is so cute to me for some unknown reason

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
that Haiku poem is so cute to me for some unknown reason
I agree, it is soooo cute

They were all pretty good yes But I liked Dreams and the Haiku the most

those are my favorite too!

Mrs. Big
Beautiful
Intelligent
Great

that was a by product of my boredom *points to Mrs. Big*

Okay i'm really bored now so the results may be disatrous.........



The new beat
I was walking up the street
When I heard this great new beat
I tripped and stumbled
Plus started to mumble
Then walked right up the street

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
Okay i'm really bored now so the results may be disatrous.........



The new beat
I was walking up the street
When I heard this great new beat
I tripped and stumbled
Plus started to mumble
Then walked right up the street


that was just sad. so very sad

Bottom of the Bottle
What do you see at the
bottom of the bottle?
Do you see your love lost
forever gone?
Do you see yourself?
Or do you see me ?
Crying for all that's lost
and what was never
ment to be

Sidewalks
You left me
running away
from the sidewalks
dear to me
rubbish to you

you should submit something to our contest!

Transparent
I've gone away
but nobody noticed
me fading into the background
just a whisper on the wind
just a rustle in the trees

Because
Because? Because?
because it just does
you don't understand
because....?

That seems to be
the answer for everything
the anthem of teenagers
worried about fickle problems
because.....

er....Because was supposed to be a conversation between a teen and his/her parents...but now i don't know what it is. its just thoughts that were swirling in my head...

Not so pretty
Those lines spelling destruction
Unsafe for any coming near
Caught up in your own world
Your own game
Foolish problems
Trying to forget
Drowning the pain
Scars disfiguring your body
This is not the way
Pain for pain
Playing games
With a razor

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
Mrs. Big
Beautiful
Intelligent
Great

This is an more...animated...version of Mrs Big:


Mrs. Big
"Who are you?"
"Mrs. Big"
"The B stands for?"
"BEAUTIFUL"
"The I stands for?"
"INTELLIGENT"
"And the G stands for"
"GREAT!!!!"




My grandma is actrully came up with Mrs. BIG. I just put into a poem, if you can call it that.

i like

thanx i like ur poems too.

i finally found it! MOS, you are really really good with your poems. keep up the good work. i will check here again later...

Find compassion in your heart
Please look at me
Why is there scorn in your smile?
Why is there disgust upon your face?
What happened to I love you?
Have the words dried up and blown away?

that poem is about my sister, which is just sad. it just tells you about our relationship but i don't think she actully notices it

Screams echo in my mind
from not long ago
Your solution is yell
but noone is hearing you
Tuning you out
uncaring for your pain

Gone
Just the noises come as one
And the world blurs
My vision blacks
My ears here the num
Of the constant talk
Yet I hear no words
And feel no feelings
Taste not the spit
That fills my mouth as
I become the wind
And float away

Hopeless
Permanent tears
On a ashen face
A star falls
Into the palm
Of a hopeful child
And it burns
Through his skin
I watch as he screams
Into the black hopeless night

wow.... neat works. different style too. cool.

hmmm... reminiscent of young women i knew in high school. as in they disguised all their pain and the wounds upon their flesh with lies, flattery, and jewelry or long sleeves... very nice.

I've had no one
For a long time
So when you
Lefted me
Relazation hit
Like a fist
To the gut
I'll never
Have anyone
Me and loneliness
Were ment to be

now i lay me
down to sleep
i pray to hell
my soul will reap
and should i die
before i wake
expect my heart
to find a stake

Landrymat
I leave today
the palce where
i used to wash
my clothes
gossip with friends
i leave the
thundering rythm
of the washing machines
behind and the telly
all black-and-white
maybe never coming back
to dicuss the
rise and fall
of detergent prices

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
now i lay me
down to sleep
i pray to hell
my soul will reap
and should i die
before i wake
expect my heart
to find a stake

wow... i like em all, sans the grammatical errors, but this really hits me. why so down yo? used to be in deed necromancy, blood magic... so this hits home like nothing else. talk to me!

You like? FINALLY SOMEBODY! Everybody else I showed this poem to kinda cautiously backed away as if to say demon child!

It hurts
when they don't
understand the pain
and they ridicule you
with sniggers

This is just
another day
just another day
in the life
of a high school
outcast

maybe i'm not perfect
or have high grades
it may be that
i'm not popular
or have any friends
but at least
i'm not fake
unlike you
hiding behind
the label society
gave you

why are we here on earth?
was it ment to be?
or is heaven really hell,
we refuse to see?

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
You like? FINALLY SOMEBODY! Everybody else I showed this poem to kinda cautiously backed away as if to say demon child! HAHAHAHAH!!!! well, i used to walk a very dark path. so stuff like that dont bother me any. Originally posted by MistressofSnape
It hurts
when they don't
understand the pain
and they ridicule you
with sniggers

This is just
another day
just another day
in the life
of a high school
outcast pssht. good poems, yo. but outcast? bull$#!!. there are more like you and I than you think. ha... i was the guy in school everyone thought was gonna blow everything up, and even after i changed my ways they still made fun of me and were afraid of me too. fools... You are not some outcast, leftover, unwanted. You are a part of this world that is very much needed, a unique individual with no fear to express herself. clap and you got neat poetry!

cool...everybody at school still thinks i'm gonna kill them. the idoits actully ask me if their on my hit list. i don't even have a hit list. IDOITS!

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
cool...everybody at school still thinks i'm gonna kill them. the idoits actully ask me if their on my hit list. i don't even have a hit list. IDOITS! man.... heard the same $#!!, and i started asking em why they thought that... did they think they needed to be on alist? then, i got to go to the principle's office under escort. so dont do that... just be you, and know thy limits.

And good poem, yet one thing: the demonic forces, i have seen, come in two forms. The screamer, constantly yelling to hurt you, hurt them, kill, die, etc.... i fight him daily. The snake, who almost feels like he is licking my brain and ear as he whispers insidious things of pain and torment. I fight him daily as well... These can be ignore, you must choose to say "NO! I AM I! NOT YOU! And I shall do right!" stand up for yourself, and listen to the voice that just speaks to you, only with words of wisdom and comfort. He is who you should listen to. (ie, the one that warns you not to piss off teachers, or to say hello to a friend who is down) even if you dont believe in God, He believes in you. Ha... call it what you may, there is equal and greater good for all the evil here. It just moves slower. hug more poems yo! hahah!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
man.... heard the same $#!!, and i started asking em why they thought that... did they think they needed to be on alist? then, i got to go to the principle's office under escort. so dont do that... just be you, and know thy limits.

i got in trouble for that too. i said why would i have a hit list on paper? i got it all in my head. that create some commotion and i had to go to counseling.

yeah id guess so! hahahaa.... well, hopefully you shall meet up with some more mature individuals in your near future.

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
now i lay me
down to sleep
i pray to hell
my soul will reap
and should i die
before i wake
expect my heart
to find a stake
This one is sooo cool!


Your stuff is good girly And you're a cool person, so don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise

Originally posted by Coldfire
This one is sooo cool!


Your stuff is good girly And you're a cool person, so don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise damn straight.

thanx at least somebody has faith! ^_^

hahah always.

A warped love
Time and time again
You bash, hit, and scream
Is this your love?
These cuts and bruises
Is this your love?
Never once was there
A gentle word
This is a very warped love
You have for me

hmmm... good ones, like the first, the second is too much like my mom and stepdad's relationship. yech.... may you never have that come upon thee.

Never again will I look at you
You've losted me
I gave everything to you
My heart, my soul, my love
You've taken them away
Leaving me empty and cold
Delud ing myself
Thinking it might just work
But nothing can happen
In a one-sided relationship

Stupid pop-ups keep
getting in my way
DIE POPUPS DIE
may you choke upon
your own greed and
float in cyberspace
lost and helpless

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
Stupid pop-ups keep
getting in my way
DIE POPUPS DIE
may you choke upon
your own greed and
float in cyberspace
lost and helpless

um...okay...i'm kinda wondering why i wrote that...

Regular boring days
make us change
our regular boring ways
into falling leaves of atumn
old and yellowed
ready to be renewed


alas... another product of boredom,,,but it sounds...kinda good

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
Regular boring days
make us change
our regular boring ways
into falling leaves of atumn
old and yellowed
ready to be renewed


alas... another product of boredom...but it sounds...kinda good

Another version...


Regular boring ways
make us change
our regular boring days
filled with
endless foggy gray



this one sounds even worse

Interesting stuff

LOL!!! funny.... and die popups!!!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
LOL!!! funny.... and die popups!!!
lol yeah no kidding eh

Originally posted by Coldfire
lol yeah no kidding eh lol omfg, you said eh!!!! LOL!!!!! ohhhh i can just hear the canadia on that!!!! LOL!!!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
lol omfg, you said eh!!!! LOL!!!!! ohhhh i can just hear the canadia on that!!!! LOL!!!
Haven't you ever heard me say that before??

Originally posted by Coldfire
Haven't you ever heard me say that before?? LOL!!!! not like this!!!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
LOL!!!! not like this!!!
Well I would have thought you would have by now!

um...okay....


Stormy eyes look back into mine
remembering the days
long since blown away
into the never-endinding
blue of yesterday

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
um...okay....


Stormy eyes look back into mine
remembering the days
long since blown away
into the never-endinding
blue of yesterday
.... yeah sorry.... we tend to do that in a lot of ppl's threads lol.... if you don't want us to then just say so and we'll stop right away...

and I like that little piece