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I AM NO POET AND NO ARTIST I CAN ONLY RELEVE MY SELF MY MY DRAMA/ACTING SO I WILL TRY MY BEST TO MAKE SENCE FROM THESE POEMS...

hiya lewis!! (Hug)

def a work in progress

yes yes it is indeed

I SIT AND HOLD THE LAST THING YOU LEFT IN MY HAND KNOWING WHAT IT IS I LEAVE MY HANDS CLOSED AS THE YEARS GO BY I BEGIN TO FORGET AS THE DAYS GROW OLD MY HANDS OPEN LIKE A BUTTERFLY AND A COCOON TO FIND YOU LEFT THE SECOND HALF OF MY HEART...

I have already commented on this poem, but I will say this

GREAT job!!

LIFE IS LIKE. . .A. . .A FLOCK SHEEP THERE IS ALWAYS THAT ODD SHEEP AND WE. . . ARE THAT ODD SHEEP WITH THE DULEST WOOL AND THE SMALLEST HORNS. . .BUT ARE WOOL MAYBE DULL BUT IT IS THE SOFTEST. . .
(PLZ LEAVE A COMENT)

very good

I HAD A DREAM LAST NIGHT ALL ABOUT YOU... I TOSS AND TURN IN MY SLEEP WITH THOUGHTS OF YOU IN MY HEAD...THE MAGIC SPARKEL IN YOUR EYES DRAWS ME CLOSER TO YOUR HEART...AND MY LOVE FOR YOU GROWS...AND TO THE TIME WHEN I WAKE UP AND TURN ON MY SIDE TO FIND YOU STILL THERE.

Those are good. Kind of short though

ya i know

don't be sad! The poems are great

i miss u so much but i dont love u
i am only young and dont want to think of love
y do u try n push into things i dont wanna do
all of my mates think ur not the one for me
i dont feel confident around u
u make me sad when other people make me smile
i dont want a future with u

u know i love u n how long i have loved u
u are the one that makes me
happy or sad, lonely or hyper
some days u cant be bothered with me
some days u talk
some days u ignore
i love the times wen u no i am there
i hate the times wen u dont think of me
i no u dont feel the same way as i do
but a smile here, a text there wouldnt be a miss
i no i ruined the chance we had
n if i could change time then i wood
people tell me that they think that u still like me
but
i dont have a clue
the time i neva see u again will be heart broking n i no i will cry
i try to like others but everytime i see u
u make my butterflies reappear
u are the only one that does that
i no in my heart
u r the one for me

nobody knows my life
nobody knows wot i have been through
nobody wants to no the real me
i dont even want to no more bowt the real me
obviously other people dont get me
but that is wot makes me unique

i no y i am not the right person for u
its becausei dont want to get hurt
because
i saw a person i really idolise get hurt by some one that she idolised
its wasnt very nice to see n i was only only young b it was the people i look up to
so people dont be like that
i tried so much but u dont care n like u said i aint worth it n u deserve better but u shouldnt be so hurtful towards me
its hurts n i no i have hurt u
i am not going to bother with u
u spread so much shit
u try n get everyone on ur side
but u will lose everytime
i am a betta person than u n always will be

well donen i am happy for ya
n welcome to my life
u call me names still but hey
i am going be in ya life foreva even wen i am doing me own thing
u will still be there in the background
yet not actually apart of me life
u have neva been there through our lives
but the person i idolise was n always will be
y did u not bother telling me bowt the person who has walked into our lives
but neva mind cos life i have now is ok

i am me n if u dont like it then just **** off!!!

that poem wasgreat keep up thre good work

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
that poem was great keep up thre good work

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
that poem wasgreat keep up thre good work

thnx

MY WINGS GET HEAVY
MY HEART GOES SOFTLY
MY EYES CLOSE GENTLY
MY LUNGS BREATH SLOWLY
MY EARS HEAR NOTHING
MY CLAWS GROW LONGER
MY LIFE GOES ON FOREVER

MY LOVE FOR YOU FEELS

HEAVY FROM ALL THE PRESURE
MY HEART BEETS SORTLY AROUND YOU
I CLOSE MY EYES WHEN I FEEL YOUR GENTEL FACE
TIME GOES SLOW WHEN WE KISS
ARE LOVE MEANS NOTHING TO ME
BUT MY LOVE STILL GROWS LONGER
AND WE WILL STAY TOGETHER FOREVER.

wow that is the best u've written

WOW!! Great work!! I missed so much in my absecence.

THNX I didnt know they were that good

you ARE better than you give yourself credit for!!

SO lew when are you going to write a new poem?