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Just Another Sad Goodbye?

Wishing for the impossible
Is not unlike me
But just this once
I'd like my desires to be
I often ask you questions
In hopes of breaking through
Yet the more I try
The further away I am to you
I spend hours upon hours
Searching for the words
That will one day convince you
All I have ever wanted to be
Is the one who loves and protects you
For a time you let me
But for reasons I do not know
You decided that we were for not
I'd give anything to
Hold you in my arms once more
But if your heart is
Unwilling to believe in love
Then surely heaven is a lie

Gorgeous.

thnx. I didn't know I still had fans around here.

Of course you do.

Thats nice to believe.

Its amazing how easily one can be be ignored with a simple name change. muahahahaha

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
Just Another Sad Goodbye?

Wishing for the impossible
Is not unlike me
But just this once
I'd like my desires to be
I often ask you questions
In hopes of breaking through
Yet the more I try
The further away I am to you
I spend hours upon hours
Searching for the words
That will one day convince you
All I have ever wanted to be
Is the one who loves and protects you
For a time you let me
But for reasons I do not know
You decided that we were for not
I'd give anything to
Hold you in my arms once more
But if your heart is
Unwilling to believe in love
Then surely heaven is a lie
I really liked that one

How many times have I heard that?

When It Hurts To Live

I gave you so many chances
To tell me the truth
Time after time you put your lies
Before what I believed to be a friendship
After all that we have been through
I know I deserved better than this
And even though the pain may never stop
This time I truly must say goodbye
I sincerely hope your actions
Were worth it to you in the end
Because you are the one
Who has to live with the resolution

I love your poetry TVOTI

Nice work man. both of em. and yeah, we pay attention... just had to figure out which person you were!!! lol on my bud list i had to go through a few... too many namechangers! DRAT YOU ALL!!!

Unforgivable

I gave you so much of my time
Trying To prove to you that I loved you
But what am I to do now
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my energy
Fighting to prove that I loved you
But what am I to do mow
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my trust
Believing to prove to you that I loved you
But what am I to do now
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my love
Caring to prove to you that loved you
And for what?
So you could play your games,
And turn my love into hate?

Originally posted by French Tip
I love your poetry TVOTI

thnx that makes 3 people who like my work.

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
Unforgivable

I gave you so much of my time
Trying To prove to you that I loved you
But what am I to do now
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my energy
Fighting to prove that I loved you
But what am I to do mow
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my trust
Believing to prove to you that I loved you
But what am I to do now
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my love
Caring to prove to you that loved you
And for what?
So you could play your games,
And turn my love into hate?



thnx that makes 3 people who like my work. 4 peeps man.

You sure you're not just looking for someone to talk to?

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
You sure you're not just looking for someone to talk to? no, i got that here. I really do enjoy your work man. From your beginnings as Mistah Devil on up.

thought i noticed those poems there all very good

lol I guess I am not as sneaky as I thought.

center]Incapable

I see the direction
That arrows the point me to
And I know that I should
Let my feet follow them
My problem is that
My heart has weighed me down
Somehow You have become my pleasure,
My desire, my misery and and my fear
Though my heart weeps
And aches at the knives imbedded in it
I can't find the will to turn away
As if I am bound to you in some way
Some might label me "fool" wishing for your love
Instead of praying for freedom
All of this confuses me to no end
But one thing always remains constant
My love for you makes me
Incapable of ever saying a final goodbye

very gd

thnx. I must be back to my old self if I am writing about torment and sorrow. lol

btw if anyone quotes that last poem, could you put a"[" in front of that open tag? thnx in advance.

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
center]Incapable

I see the direction
That arrows the point me to
And I know that I should
Let my feet follow them
My problem is that
My heart has weighed me down
Somehow You have become my pleasure,
My desire, my misery and and my fear
Though my heart weeps
And aches at the knives imbedded in it
I can't find the will to turn away
As if I am bound to you in some way
Some might label me "fool" wishing for your love
Instead of praying for freedom
All of this confuses me to no end
But one thing always remains constant
My love for you makes me
Incapable of ever saying a final goodbye nicely done man....

Does anyone ever listen to me?

Listen When I Sigh

*sigh*
Sighs seem to be the only way to convey my emotions as of late
you do so very many things to contradict yourself almost daily
You say that it's my fault for the state that I am in
After all was not it you who said that love was not for us
*sigh*
Sighs seem to be the only way to convey my emotions as of late
you spend hours crying on the shoulders of sympathetic men
Having them believe that your sorrow was caused by me
And here I wait in hopes that your heart lead you back to me
*sigh*
Sighs seem to be the only way to convey my emotions as of late
You send me secret letters behind the backs of those you entertain
Always keeping them distracted from seeing the truth
As time progresses I can not help but feel that I to am one of your fools
*sigh*
I guess it's true what they say
we all play the part in the name of love
*sigh*
Sighs seem to be the only way to convey my emotions as of late

good stuff better thn mine

I think your stuff is pretty awesome. I really am not anything special.

Black-Winged Angel


I have been down this road many times before
I thought that I would be able to get past this
But she has a hold on me and I can't break free
She's a black-winged angel that refuses to love
I should have foreseen that things would turn out this way
I promised myself that sorrow would never will again
But she has a hold on me and I can't break free
She's a black-winged angel that refuses to love
I know I could never say goodbye trapped under her spell
I had hoped that someone could save me before it was too late
But she has a hold on me and I can't break free
She's a black-winged angel,
That refuses to love...me in return

nice work mario


damn been a while since i browsed the poetry sections

u dont lose ur touch do u i like the first one a hell of a lot

thnx

Hey there you... glad to see you're alive and {hopefully} well! Good stuff, as usual

Originally posted by Syren
Hey there you... glad to see you're alive and {hopefully} well! Good stuff, as usual
I could say the same about you...(I think I will)


Hey there you... glad to see you're alive and {hopefully} well!

I am alive and well. Even though things have been "interesting" lately I am really happy atm.

In a life before this one
I promised that for you
I would spend my life
Finding ways to prove
How much I love you
For a while I was not able to
Due to inevitable circumstances
Thankfully fate has granted me
For better or worse
A second chance to keep that promise
In the past my promises
were of little value to anyone
But I mean to show you
That you are the only one
It has always been you
I knew that from the first moment
I ever laid eyes on you
So many nights while lying next to
the would be someone
who finally replaced you
Wishing to God that she was you
I prayed for just one more night with you
Now that my desires have been fulfilled
I don't want to ever see you go
Promise me you never leave

Very good

thnx luv

Nice stuff Mario!

seriously...
Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.


Does anyone ever listen to me?

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
seriously...
What do you mean?

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.


Does anyone ever listen to me?

I wanted so desperately to have
something I could write about
It seems no matter how many times
the lesson is thought
I never learn to be careful
If I seem a little bitter
It is because I am
I took a chance on someone
Opened up my heart once more
Only to be betrayed again
Like so many times before
Maybe it was her beauty
Maybe I just wanted to believe
But what does it matter
When my heart cannot find truth
And longs to remain broken

i love it mario

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
Unforgivable

I gave you so much of my time
Trying To prove to you that I loved you
But what am I to do now
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my energy
Fighting to prove that I loved you
But what am I to do mow
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my trust
Believing to prove to you that I loved you
But what am I to do now
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my love
Caring to prove to you that loved you
And for what?
So you could play your games,
And turn my love into hate?


Way to make me feel bad! After reading this I feel SO guilty about earlier.. I really went to far...

that poem is really good

Originally posted by Coldfire
I really liked that one


dats realli gd

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.

I wanted so desperately to have
something I could write about
It seems no matter how many times
the lesson is thought
I never learn to be careful
If I seem a little bitter
It is because I am
I took a chance on someone
Opened up my heart once more
Only to be betrayed again
Like so many times before
Maybe it was her beauty
Maybe I just wanted to believe
But what does it matter
When my heart cannot find truth
And longs to remain broken
awww hug It's good hun

I love it, your poems are so great, I love them!!!

V. intense
V. beautiful

ty to all of you.

Nothing Left

Countless times in my mind
I have questioned if we were friends
I kept my many doubts unspoken
So afraid of what you might think
The person I taught myself to be
Always thought it best to ranaway from truth
I have learned that only leads me in circles
Repeating past mistakes over and over
When last we spoke I realized
This charade could no longer be upheld
I am hoping these words will not fall upon deaf ears
And you accept them without much offense
If our friendship does not survive this
Then I guess we never were truly friends

I really like that one.

Originally posted by Kharhmah
I really like that one.
Thank You "woman"

cool poem... love it, tis gud clapping

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
Thank You "woman"
Your welcome.

Originally posted by starmovie-jaina
cool poem... love it, tis gud clapping
that makes 2 ppl who read it.
Originally posted by Kharhmah
Your welcome.

v good as always

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
v good as always
Thnx. I have had the worst case of writer's block lately. It was nice ti finally ge something down on paper. Amyways, I am working on something new ATM. I sure hope it does turn out to be craptacular. lol

I love them all....they are so good

Originally posted by xtheusedxbillyx
that poem is really good

Originally posted by bloody_tears
dats realli gd

Check out these two, it's like seeing double shock

nice mario....

thnx


I still cant think of anything to write cry

Searching For Words To Explain


Lately I have not had a lot to write about
It would only be me being me
To question why that might be
It is a saddening thought to think
That my life has lost all of it's spontaneity
I remember times when smiling came easy
And although crying isn't pleasant
At least I felt some type of emotion
I guess my life could be
Summed up as a ballad-less ballad
Confusion has been a part of me for such a long time
That now I cannot shake the feeling
That a piece of me is somehow forever lost
How am I ever to be whole in the proverbial sense
When what I am missing is forgotten

I feel ya bro... I really do...

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
Searching For Words To Explain


Lately I have not had a lot to write about
It would only be me being me
To question why that might be
It is a saddening thought to think
That my life has lost all of it's spontaneity
I remember times when smiling came easy
And although crying isn't pleasant
At least I felt some type of emotion
I guess my life could be
Summed up as a ballad-less ballad
Confusion has been a part of me for such a long time
That now I cannot shake the feeling
That a piece of me is somehow forever lost
How am I ever to be whole in the proverbial sense
When what I am missing is forgotten

wow, that really reminds me of how I feel some of the time,
good one

Its always nice to write something someone can relate to.

The Way She Feels Inside


It always starts the same way
With a random hello between strangers
Moment pass and you find yourself
Captivated by the hope that this could be the one
Your walls become paper thin
Still he doesn't see through the masquerade
Just like the black and white waterfall in your dreams
No one ever seems to see the beauty inside

I know what thats like... and not just for myself... ironically.

I dont think it's that ironic. Initially I was going to write a general piece, but I let a friend's emotions influence this poem.

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
I dont think it's that ironic. Initially I was going to write a general piece, but I let a friend's emotions influence this poem.
Hey, haven't talked to you in a while! hug How you been hun?

Originally posted by Coldfire
Hey, haven't talked to you in a while! hug How you been hun?
I thought you were avoiding me like a lot of people around here. I am bored atm, but happy. I had my fave pie just a few mins ago. APPLE!!

Differences

You push me away
She starts to fall as it all fades away
She surrenders her everything to him
There's beauty in goodbye
Broken with nothing left to say
In silence I will love her still
You push me away
She loses herself in his touch
She feels comfort wrapped in his arms
There's beauty in goodbye
Broken with nothing left to say
In silence I will love her still
You push me away
She says that he completes her
She believes with him is where she belongs
There's beauty in goodbye
Broken with nothing left to say
In silence I will love her still
You pushed me away
I have no reason left to fight
"Where is the beauty in goodbye?"

I just went through that, I see so much more meaning in your poems now...

thnx C

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
I thought you were avoiding me like a lot of people around here. I am bored atm, but happy. I had my fave pie just a few mins ago. APPLE!!
Avoiding you? I wouldn't do that! hug

Apple pie?!?! Yummers!!! droolio

And keep up the good work

Originally posted by Coldfire
Avoiding you? I wouldn't do that! hug

Apple pie?!?! Yummers!!! droolio

And keep up the good work
well I still havent seen much of you?

hello ppl this is a song about my friend Dara. I am sharing it with you guys first in hopes of getting some feed back before I present it to her.




she woke up monday mornin'
still confused from yesterday
how could she trust the boy
who made her hate today
Sitting in an empty room
She doesn't know what to do, but...


(Chorus)
'though she's lost her way
Her beating heart won't die
Lost in her pain
her starry eyes will sing
I'll find my way through
I'll find my way through
I'll find my way through

she finds comfort in her dress of black
What does it matter that her soul is masked
No one can see beauty she holds inside
Alone she waits for the heartache to pass
Strumming her guitar under the night sky
She doesn't know what to do, but...

(Chorus 2x)

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
hello ppl this is a song about my friend Dara. I am sharing it with you guys first in hopes of getting some feed back before I present it to her.




she woke up monday mornin'
still confused from yesterday
how could she trust the boy
who made her hate today
Sitting in an empty room
She doesn't know what to do, but...


(Chorus)
'though she's lost her way
Her beating heart won't die
Lost in her pain
her starry eyes will sing
I'll find my way through
I'll find my way through
I'll find my way through

she finds comfort in her dress of black
What does it matter that her soul is masked
No one can see beauty she holds inside
Alone she waits for the heartache to pass
Strumming her guitar under the night sky
She doesn't know what to do, but...

(Chorus 2x)
That's great! I love it!

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
hello ppl this is a song about my friend Dara. I am sharing it with you guys first in hopes of getting some feed back before I present it to her.




she woke up monday mornin'
still confused from yesterday
how could she trust the boy
who made her hate today
Sitting in an empty room
She doesn't know what to do, but...


(Chorus)
'though she's lost her way
Her beating heart won't die
Lost in her pain
her starry eyes will sing
I'll find my way through
I'll find my way through
I'll find my way through

she finds comfort in her dress of black
What does it matter that her soul is masked
No one can see beauty she holds inside
Alone she waits for the heartache to pass
Strumming her guitar under the night sky
She doesn't know what to do, but...

(Chorus 2x)
That's brilliant.

I'm sure she'll love it.

It is very sweet - its great BUT ummm the first and last stanzas/verses have completely different feels to them - ie short vs long etc.... so it doesn't quite flowyes

to all of you who know Stacey...I have some very bad news.

Stacey was hit by a bus today. I don't know too much about the specifics. Hell I dont even know if she made it or not. I will keep you guys updated.

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
well I still havent seen much of you?
I know, cuz I've been soooo busy disgust
Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
hello ppl this is a song about my friend Dara. I am sharing it with you guys first in hopes of getting some feed back before I present it to her.




she woke up monday mornin'
still confused from yesterday
how could she trust the boy
who made her hate today
Sitting in an empty room
She doesn't know what to do, but...


(Chorus)
'though she's lost her way
Her beating heart won't die
Lost in her pain
her starry eyes will sing
I'll find my way through
I'll find my way through
I'll find my way through

she finds comfort in her dress of black
What does it matter that her soul is masked
No one can see beauty she holds inside
Alone she waits for the heartache to pass
Strumming her guitar under the night sky
She doesn't know what to do, but...

(Chorus 2x)
omg it's great!
Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
to all of you who know Stacey...I have some very bad news.

Stacey was hit by a bus today. I don't know too much about the specifics. Hell I dont even know if she made it or not. I will keep you guys updated.
eek omg no way!

cry

Linkin Park "from the inside"

cry

Hey guys and gals I know this next poem is just shy of being crap, but It's what came to me lastnight. The muse for it is this girl I met Saturday. I still can't stop thinking about her. lol

A Single Cigarette


I met you in the midst of my sorrow
Not sure I wanted to see tomorrow
But you found me and knew just what to say
And to think we were complete strangers yesterday
We talked and laughed like the best of friends
My only regret was that our time together had to end
I hope you know you are that someone I will never forget
Pity that all I have to remember you by is a single cigarette

yeah I'll admit it's not one of your best poems lol, but the sentiment is there

Originally posted by Coldfire
yeah I'll admit it's not one of your best poems lol, but the sentiment is there


Well, her name is Megan and I still can't stop thinking about her!!!

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.


Well, her name is Megan and I still can't stop thinking about her!!!
Awww well that's great!

I am working on something and i know its going to be good

T.V.O.T.I.-
I love your poems!

Originally posted by Violet_Byatch
T.V.O.T.I.-
I love your poems!
I dont have a valentine either cry

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
I dont have a valentine either cry
awww you didn't? hug I miss you! How you been??

I have been fecking great!! I met this awesome chica, Meagan aka (my) kinky twinky. I wrote this poem about her.


center]I Can Still Feel You
(Dedicated To Meagan aka Kinky Twinky)


In a moment months ago from today
You felt a strong connection towards me
I have to admit in that same moment
I felt a connection to you also
But for whatever reason,
There were things left unsaid

(I can still feel you)

In a moment weeks after that fateful day
What we felt then was still there for all to see
The smile you brought to my face I'll never forget
I hope that this feeling will not ever have to go
But for now I'll just pray that
Never again will we leave things unsaid

(Because I can still feel you)

In a moment hours later in this day
I knew how I would wish it to always be
You and I together feeling no regret
Finally finding that someone who completes us so
But only time will tell,
Just how much of our story is left unsaid

(Because I can still feel you,
And it brings a tear to my eye)

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
I have been fecking great!! I met this awesome chica, Meagan aka (my) kinky twinky. I wrote this poem about her.


center]I Can Still Feel You
(Dedicated To Meagan aka Kinky Twinky)


In a moment months ago from today
You felt a strong connection towards me
I have to admit in that same moment
I felt a connection to you also
But for whatever reason,
There were things left unsaid

(I can still feel you)

In a moment weeks after that fateful day
What we felt then was still there for all to see
The smile you brought to my face I'll never forget
I hope that this feeling will not ever have to go
But for now I'll just pray that
Never again will we leave things unsaid

(Because I can still feel you)

In a moment hours later in this day
I knew how I would wish it to always be
You and I together feeling no regret
Finally finding that someone who completes us so
But only time will tell,
Just how much of our story is left unsaid

(Because I can still feel you,
And it brings a tear to my eye)
I'm so glad to hear that!!!

And nice poem

I think you are the only one who's happy for me.

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
I think you are the only one who's happy for me.
why would I be the only one hun?

Originally posted by Coldfire
why would I be the only one hun?
most of my friends are girls thats why



Just Believe

You tear away at pieces of your heart
Still the sorrow you hold inside lingers unchanged
Over and over you have fallen in darkness

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

There have been times when you tried to believe
Only to have your faith and trust betrayed
And here I am trying to convince you otherwise

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

I know my words may be too little too late
But I want your soul to see the beauty in this world
All that's needed is the willingness of your heart

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

Originally posted by Dante Vlada
most of my friends are girls thats why



Just Believe

You tear away at pieces of your heart
Still the sorrow you hold inside lingers unchanged
Over and over you have fallen in darkness

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

There have been times when you tried to believe
Only to have your faith and trust betrayed
And here I am trying to convince you otherwise

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid

I know my words may be too little too late
But I want your soul to see the beauty in this world
All that's needed is the willingness of your heart

So when you ask yourself
why should this time be any different

Remember you're not alone anymore
and you dont have to be afraid
Oh I see lol


Very nice poem

thanks

"...he was born into this world with the hope that,
he would find that which he desired most..."

Here I Stand

Here I stand once again with my reflection staring back at me
As I gaze into the eyes that have seen so much in this lifetime
I am amazed at the changes I promised myself I would make
Surprised at how I've yet to make any attempt to fulfill them

Here I find myself standing asking those familiar questions...

Do I have a chance at changing this person who stands before me
Am I destined to keep following the same path I've been going
Who is this man who seems to become more and more of a stranger
How did I lose so much of myself over the years and not notice

Here I stand once again with my relfection staring back at me
As I gaze into the eyes that have seen so much in this lifetime
For so I have remained motionless without any conviction
I can't allow the remnants of my soul to wither away and die

Here I find myself standing asking those familiar questions...

Do I have a chance at changing this person who stands before me
Am I destined to keep following the same path I've been going
Who is this man who seems to become more and more of a stranger
How did I lose so much of myself over the years and not notice

Here I stand...Unchanged.

Originally posted by Dante Vlada
"...he was born into this world with the hope that,
he would find that which he desired most..."

Here I Stand

Here I stand once again with my reflection staring back at me
As I gaze into the eyes that have seen so much in this lifetime
I am amazed at the changes I promised myself I would make
Surprised at how I've yet to make any attempt to fulfill them

Here I find myself standing asking those familiar questions...

Do I have a chance at changing this person who stands before me
Am I destined to keep following the same path I've been going
Who is this man who seems to become more and more of a stranger
How did I lose so much of myself over the years and not notice

Here I stand once again with my relfection staring back at me
As I gaze into the eyes that have seen so much in this lifetime
For so I have remained motionless without any conviction
I can't allow the remnants of my soul to wither away and die

Here I find myself standing asking those familiar questions...

Do I have a chance at changing this person who stands before me
Am I destined to keep following the same path I've been going
Who is this man who seems to become more and more of a stranger
How did I lose so much of myself over the years and not notice

Here I stand...Unchanged.
Wow. It's great

that last one, fascinating...

i love it!

Originally posted by _Sanctuary_
Wow. It's great
thats an interesting sig quote you have
Originally posted by Lovely Murder
that last one, fascinating...

i love it!
well it's just an insight into where I am in my life

he dreams a dream
crawling inside to bury everything
no one will ever care

as long as you're alive I'm here

I am long past that
I am the living ending
what a beautiful thing
watching the dying decay

the dagger pierces his flesh
still his sins refuse to fall
no one will ever care

as long as you're alive I'm here

I am long past that
I am the living ending
what a beautiful thing
watching the dying decay

just like a memory forgotten
he is convinced he never existed
no one will ever care

as long as you're alive I'm here

spending so much time believing
he is haunted by the visions
what a beautiful thing
watching the dying decay

I am long past that
I am the living ending
And this is the ending to my ending.

omg those last two are beautiful! hug

I am glad you are so impressed

Originally posted by Dante Vlada
I am glad you are so impressed


What's new with you??

Originally posted by Dante Vlada
he dreams a dream
crawling inside to bury everything
no one will ever care

as long as you're alive I'm here

I am long past that
I am the living ending
what a beautiful thing
watching the dying decay

the dagger pierces his flesh
still his sins refuse to fall
no one will ever care

as long as you're alive I'm here

I am long past that
I am the living ending
what a beautiful thing
watching the dying decay

just like a memory forgotten
he is convinced he never existed
no one will ever care

as long as you're alive I'm here

spending so much time believing
he is haunted by the visions
what a beautiful thing
watching the dying decay

I am long past that
I am the living ending
And this is the ending to my ending.
Sad but pretty, it's really good

i have a question....

im doing a poetry project in english and i need to find three poems and sya what i think about them....

may i use one of yours?


Please please please?


i will also need your full name....

I really dont like the idea of giving you my full name but I will in a PM of course.

I have another thread on here too in case you were wondering.

"the works of a devil"

Of Wings and Rain

I have wandered on this path,
Daunted at my every turn.
I long for the wings of change.
The wings that will somehow save me,
As I leap out into the blackened unknown.
I have been plagued by relentless thoughts.
They bombard me preventing change.
I wish for days filled with rain.
Rain powerful enough to muffle the echoes,
As I sort through thoughts and emotions.
With the desire of rain drenched wings
I journey forth with the hope that one day
I will become that which I am destined to be
fin

I still really like this one

lol

Originally posted by Dante Vlada
Of Wings and Rain

I have wandered on this path,
Daunted at my every turn.
I long for the wings of change.
The wings that will somehow save me,
As I leap out into the blackened unknown.
I have been plagued by relentless thoughts.
They bombard me preventing change.
I wish for days filled with rain.
Rain powerful enough to muffle the echoes,
As I sort through thoughts and emotions.
With the desire of rain drenched wings
I journey forth with the hope that one day
I will become that which I am destined to be
fin

I love it

I miss you. Why did you join the navy and leave me?

Originally posted by Dante Vlada
I miss you. Why did you join the navy and leave me?
Hey you!! I miss talking to you hug How you been ???

I have returned!!

-Dante Vlada