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~Anyone~

Does anyone ever notice all the pain around them
The girl crying under the bleachers at a football game
The parents outliving their children
The lovers forever seperate
The friends forver gone
The child holding his raggedy, grimy teddy bear in the middle of the ruins of his Lousiana house calling for "Mommy"

Does anyone else feel the pain surrounding us
Feel the walls closing in as another joy is lost
Feel the sky come crashing down around someone
Feel the sadness behind the giddy smiles
Or the loneliness behind the quaterback's eyes

Our world is filled with sorrow and pain
It shows in our everyday world
But too many people block it all out
Choosing to live in their happier, controlled world
Choosing their friends and the pain that they feel
And not having to be sympathetic to one from somewhere else

The answer is no
No, no one notices the girl under the bleachers
No one feels the sky come crashing in
No one loves or looses what they don't have to.

It is said that God answers all prayers, but all too often, the answer is no.

~Untitled~

I sit by myself,
with the razor in hand.
thinking "god help",
yet wanting blood again.
The scars are those of knowledge
a sign thats says beware
they all know the edge,
I'd jump if i wasn't so scared.

the metal is so inviting,
my one and only friend
the one who knows im leaving
because it brought me my end.

cold voices in my head
crying out for more,
they love the crimson that ive bled
but only they know how.


I sit here by myself
the razor in hand
begging god for help
knowing this is the end.........

wow there really good keep up the good work

Thanks so much! I'll post more of mine if other people like them

i hope u will keep posting i love them keep it up

Thanks so much you too, i personaly hate my poems..lol

but here are some more..

~Untitled-Pain~
I sit here by myself
thinking why am i here,
why cant i end it

I want to end it for good
no one knows me,
my pain, my hate

My razor slices my skin
violent red tears come out
they tell of the fear of real tears,
for i am afraid to let fall,
of the fear they won't stop

1,2,3,4,slices against already red skin
i fell no pain in the cuts
I fell dizzy,
for i have finally found my escape
I turn over my wrist and slice once again and finally ending the pain

the numbness
the tears
my eyes heavy
my eyes close, I sigh,
"Its finally over"

Make it all go away!

Make it all go away she says,make it all go away she fells.She wants to fell nothing,not the pain,not the tears of worthlessness,she wants all of her two so called friends to stop pretending to be her friend and acting like they care!

She wears a smile at school for the teachers,the kids,and her classmates,when inside of her head is rageing hateness for herself,and how she is.She smiles so noone knows the pain and hate she fell's,so noone ealse can hurt only her.

But one day they will know what she felt!

You might wonder how she keeps it in, how she gets through the day, you wonder is it drugs, is it alcohol, you wonder. Well you will always wonder because she has her secrets just like all the other people hideing the fellings inside!

Make it all go away she says, well one day it will, it will go away for GOOD!

Dark Angel

In the house accross the street,
there is a 14 year old girl who
was tortured with pure pressure,
from her friends, and classmates,
and family. She cant take it all!
these people looking at her like
some kind of alien from the planet
Neptune. Yeah well they dont
know where or what shes been
through. Everyday she plasters
a stupid smile on her face trying
to please everyone and make them
happy,and helping them, but how is
it she cant even help herself?


In the house accross the street sits a 14 year old girl
on her bed looking at her stupid, fat, and ugly reflection.
She see's the sharp beautiful razor blade,and fills with
red angery tears that come from her wrists, her tears fall
on the razor makeing it glistin in the moonlight, she looks
again in the mirror, but all she sees stairing back at her a
dark angel. That girl sists on her bed everyday not knowing
what to do is me.

wow they are so kick arse lol keep it up!!

Aww why do you hate them Gothly? hug

I jsut think there horrible the only poem i have ever written that i loved was ~Untitled-pain~ that i wrote in 5 mins.(lol)...

Originally posted by Gothlybeautiful
I jsut think there horrible the only poem i have ever written that i loved was ~Untitled-pain~ that i wrote in 5 mins.(lol)...
Well I can see what you mean.... I don't like some of my poems either lol. But I'd like to see more of yours yes

lol well thank you and i will be glade to post some more for you as soon as i get them on my cmputer the rest are in my jurnel..lol

Originally posted by Gothlybeautiful
lol well thank you and i will be glade to post some more for you as soon as i get them on my cmputer the rest are in my jurnel..lol
You're welcome

Awesome I have like a writer's block right now lol

Originally posted by Coldfire
You're welcome

Awesome I have like a writer's block right now lol

I hate that when it happens

whats gone on here why u hate ur work its wonderful

wow..... that is really good

damn.......you are so good at poems!!!! i suck at them....keep writing...they are awesome!!

OMG, I love your poems, they manage to really feel, I always feel that mine are lacking any emotions so I hate that.

Yours are so good............ please write some more..................