Two Daughters(two girls that have unknown connections to harry come to HW (6th yr))
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~dorkerina~
Ok, my friend and i wrote this a while ago, it was before the sixth book came out. But I promise it's still good! We have a couple of crazy author notes though... you'll probbably like them or you won't, but don't let them keep you from the story if you don't. Oh and the second chapter is better than the first, so bear with me!
Enjoy!
A/N: Hi I’m Jessie and I’m really excited, this is our first story! Yay!
Hi! I’m Ashley, the other writer and I have a thing for duckbill platypuses!
It’s kind of her fetish. (Yeah she’s weird that way)
Well these are some story title options we thought about. We thought we'd post them for your enjoyment:
Harry pothead and the sorcerer may very well be stoned
Platypuses (Ashley’s idea not mine)
Two daughters one beautiful and the other plain
More to follow
Maybe
For sure maybe!
Hope you enjoy
If you don't enjoy I’ll turn you into a platypus
Disclaimer: we do not own Harry potter (only in our fondest dreams) J K Rowling’s does lucky person darnit the genius.
Chapter one: Introductions
“Hogwarts, what kind of name is that? Seriously, are all English wizarding schools so bizarre sounding, none in America are,” as Serine finished her comment their conversation suddenly came to a stop. This was because the bus had stopped and they thrown from their seats.
“I hope the rest of the people around here aren’t such crazy driver,” Serine huffed hopefully as she rose from the ground.
“Really, I like how this guy drives, especially for an old man,” Sukura commented off handedly coming up next to her sister.
The Girls and their mother stepped off the Knight Bus and saw they where between two houses. Their mother held a piece of paper up in front of them.
“Memorize what it says and repeat it in your mind,” Their mother said before it disappeared in her had at the incantation she whispered. As they did what she said an old house appeared in front of them.
They went up to the porch and rang a door bell. Moments later a blood curdling scream could be herd from inside, which turned to a steady flow of curses and insults aimed at them and unseen persons inside the house.
“Why do people always feel they have to ring the doorbell?” a frustrated voice from inside said.
“Are you sure this is safe?” Sukura asked.
Just then they where quickly ushered inside by a wizard in shabby robes with graying brown hair.
“This just keeps getting weirder and weirder,” Sukura said, before Serine promptly shushed her.
A woman down the hall was trying to shove a pair of curtains over a painting of a woman; the woman in the painting was apparently the one screaming.
After succeeding in this the screams stopped and the woman brushed her hair out of her eyes before rushing over to greet them.
“Hi you must be Teresa, and these must be you two lovely daughters serine and Sukura. Now dears come to the kitchen, you must be starving.”
“Starving for sanity,” Sukura mumbled, “Ouch! what was that for?” she asked after Serine stepped on her foot.
“What do you think?” she shot back.
“Shush,” their mother said herding them into the kitchen after the woman.
Upon entering the room they spotted another wizard in a shabby robe and a bulging overcoat sitting at a large table. Standing on either side of the large fireplace behind the table where two tall, freckled, and red headed young men apparently twins.
“Gee I think I’m seeing a pattern here,” Sukura commented as Serine glared at her.
“By the way it’s nice to meet you,” The reed headed woman said as she bustled around the kitchen getting things out of various cupboards while a pot filled itself with water in the sink. “These are my boys Fred and George, the one who let you in is Remus Lupin, and this,” she said with a strange edge in her voice “is Mundungus.”
Just as she finished an older man in dark blue robes with long silver hair the same color as his also long beard entered. Most prominent among his features where his twinkling eyes beneath half moon spectacles and his long crooked nose.
As the man opened his mouth to speak Sukura interrupted by saying “Great, the crazy old guy broke the pattern,” In a sarcastic voice and received and elbow in her ribs from her sister.
The old man surprised both girls (they could tell he was a man of authority) by looking down at his robes, then around the room and replying with a smile and “Yes, I see what you mean” then winking at Sukura. Immediately her mouth twitched in an upward motion as though she was trying to stop herself from smiling.
“Do you have any idea who you’re talking to?” the man called Mundungus asked angrily.
A/N: We'll cut it of there, more to come it will get a little more exciting in the next chappy. See ya (Ashley went off somewhere so you won’t hear from her)
~dorkerina~
Well at least people have viewed! i'll post part two now!
~dorkerina~
A/N: Hi! Where back with another chapter!
Penguin!
You’re weird.
I’m not weird I’m awkward!
Anywho back to what I was saying. So, after long painstaking hours (actually only three minutes) we’re back with another part! Yay!
Yawn.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Harry potter.
No comment.
Well neither does Ashley.
That’s what you think.
No that’s one thing I know. Well I’ll say it again neither of us owns Harry Potter or any of the characters but the sisters.
Prove it
(don’t sue me!)
Chapter two:
“A crazy old guy?” Sukura suggested.
“Actually that’s half way there.” Dumbledore said.
Again the corners of Sukura’s mouth twitched upward ever so slightly. From the corners of the room they herd the twin snickering.
“This girls, is Albus Dumbledore, one of the most powerful wizards of our time. He is also you’re new head master.” Lupin cut in.
“Aww crap.” Sukura muttered.
“Oh my gosh, you’re kidding!” Serine said in aw, “I’ve read all about you! I never thought I’d actually meet you in person. This is so cool!”
Dumbledore put out his hand and said “It’ nice to meet you to, I think I know just the person you’d get along with. Her name is Hermione Granger.”
Before the conversation could continue another group of people entered the room.
“Oh the rest of them are here,” Mrs. Weasley said “Fred, George, would you please escort these ladies to their room?”
“Do we have to?” asked Fred.
“That wasn’t a request.” Mrs. Weasley warned.
“Alright, alright.” Said George in defeat.
“Wait a second what’s going on!” Serine asked “who are they and why do we have to leave. I’m not going anywhere with out answers!”
“This is none of your concern,” their mother answered.
As the twins went to usher the girls out of the room Serine gave a look of defeat and Sukura said quietly to the twins “Touch me and you die.”
A look passed between the two boys and they both shoved her as they went passed before taking off up the stairs.
A/N: So that’s the end of the chapter.
Or is it dun dun dun.
Yes, yes it is.
Aw.
Tune in next time for more fun and Ashley, I mean games.
Stop mocking my insanity!
Never!
~dorkerina~
SURE!

~dorkerina~
Disclaimer: We do not own Harry Potter.
Actually, I beg to differ.
Huh, Oh my gosh! You kidnapped Harry!
Did not! He followed me home.
Then why is he tied up?
I dunno.
Is that a gag in his mouth?
It’s not a gag it’s a penguin.
Why is there a penguin in his mouth!
He was hungry.
A/N: sorry about Ashley, (Ashley crying in back ground) stop crying! You took my Harry away (sob)
he is not yours!
(Sniffle) but he loves me.
You kidnapped him.
It was a mutual thing.
How do ya figure that!
He didn’t try to run away!
He was tied and gagged!Excuse me readers enjoy the next chapter as I try to straiten this mess caused by the insanity that is ash….. Oh hello Mr. Ministry of magic person........ASHLEY!
(In a perky voice) Oh who are they!
Chapter 3:
As the two girls left the room, Lupin turned to their mother saying “So, Teresa, was that her?”
“Yes”
“Does she know?”
Teresa shook her head.
“What about the other gir…”
“Not now,” she said interrupting him, “Please?” she added in a tired voice.
Meanwhile….
“If you touch me one more time-“
“Sukura, shhhh” George said pointing to the black curtain covering a certain screaming picture (screaming screaming whooo Ashley shut up!)
Following this comment the twin’s disaparated with a crack.
Before the girls could take another step there was a second crack followed by a crash and angry shouts.
“Do you have to do that every five seconds!?”
“Watch where you aparating!”
“My foot!”
“Get off me”
The two girls quickly ran up the stairs to see what the commotion was about and reached the landing in time to find an entanglement of bodies trying to sort themselves out. After getting themselves untangled facing them where a freckled, and yes red haired, boy and girl of the dame description as well as a girl with bushy brown hair all about their same age.
The brown haired girl asked “what were you doing?”
“Running away from the white haired demon!” both replied.
Sukura gave them an icy glair with her steel gray eyes. (She’s creepy. Stop interrupting! Uncle, uncle, mercy, mercy, just stop hitting me!)
“Who are they?” Ron interrupted.
Both twins shrugged.
“How rude of us, I’m sorry, my name is Serine and this is my sister Sukura.”
“It’s nice to meet you, I’m Hermione, this is Ron, his sister Ginny, and well I’m guessing you already know who they-“
“What are you doing here?” Ron interrupted once again.
“Stop being so rude Ronald” Hermione said elbowing him
“Ronald?” Sukura mocked making Him turn beet-red. “If we told you that we’d have to kill you.”
“Well as much as we’d like to stick around..” said Fred,
“Which as much as we like classes” added George,
“We’ve got a meeting we need to go to.” Finished
George. And before dissaparating again they slapped Sukura on the back.
“What was that all about?” Ron asked.
“Doesn’t matter.” Sukura growled.
“Well I guess we should get back to the room,” Hermione said in a slightly dull voice.
“What’s wrong with the room?” Serine asked.
“Harry’s there,” said Ron. Hermione smacked him on the arm and gave a warning look.
“Harry, what’s wrong with that?” Serine asked.
“He’s being a teenage boy,” explained Ginny.
“Hey, I resent that!” Ron interjected.
“Sorry, I mean, well he’s brooding, or mourning, or something…” Ginny said
“Well that means he’ll get along well with Sukura, she’s moody too!” Serine joked receiving a glare from Sukura.
As they started down the hall Serine gestured to Hermione and said “So, your Hermione, Dumbledore said we’d get long.”
“Really?” Hermione asked.
“Okay everyone brace yourselves, were going into a war zone, and yes looks may very well kill!” Ron joked half seriously.
“Knock it off Ron,” Hermione said.
Ron smiled and opened the door, and Serine upon seeing who was in the room let out a squeal (like a pig, Knock it off!), “ Oh my gosh it’s Harry Po-“ Sukura quickly put a hand over her sisters mouth and gave a slight shake of the head.
Harry who had been staring at the ceiling before Serine’s outbreak went back to his previous task.
Sukura looked up at the ceiling before walking over to the wall pulling up a chair and sitting down. She then leaned it back and joined Harry at staring at the wall.
Serine also looked up and said “Gee nothing interesting up there, as always.”
A/N: Well would have liked to make the chapter longer
(not)
but its getting late and Ashley has to get home, so Ashley any closing comments (she’s finally worn out)?
Sleep, and if you wake me up I’ll turn you into a platypus!
~dorkerina~
there are two more finnished and ready hen you want them, but someone has to ask for them for me to post them!

~dorkerina~
Thanks for responding!!!
so i shall add...
sometime this week! muahahahahahaha .......
maybe if there is one more post it will be before friday......
or maybe just whenever i feel like it ....
cutie_pie13
tis very good

~dorkerina~
well, here it is... oh and if you don't like the author notes, say the word and they are gone, they're with the chapter becuase this is not the first place i've copied them.
A/N: silence……… (Chirping crickets)………
ASHLEY!!!!!!!! (two people running in background)
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
GET BACK HERE AND GIVE ME THAT KEY!!!!!!!!!!!!
NEVER!!!!
DON’T MAKE ME HURT YOU!!!!
YOU’RE ALREADY GOING TO AS SOON AS I STOP!!!!
YOURE SICK YA KNOW THAT?!?!?!?!
I AM NOT!! (The pursuer finally collapses and perused stops and is gasping for breath)
honestly *gasp* what kind of a person locks someone in a closet?
So you only saw one?
WHAT?!?!?! You mean there are more?
Yep!
(With a final burst of speed Jessie wrestled Ashley’s closet key away from her and ran to Ashley’s closet and opened the door, upon the door opening several comments could be herd including “ahh the light it burns” “air!!” “nooo she’s back!!” “Wait it’s someone else!! “Help us” “its ok now!” cheers erupt)
how big is this? And how long have you had them locked up in here?
No idea, and I can’t count that high
*gasp* how may are there?
I dunno I just told you, I can’t count that high.
wait a sec is that Johnny Depp? Will turner, Frodo Baggins, oh, Vin Desel, hi you can stay!
(Ashley smacks Jessie)
Harry Potter, again? Hugh Jackman Josh Groban there are too many to count!
Told you so!!

Argh! well, enjoy the new chapter while I go straighten this out with the police!
Disclaimer: we do not own Harry Potter and he is now free. Ashley has signed a restraining order. (though heaven knows that wont keep her away, we can only hope for a while) Harry Potter is now locked in the closet of, oh, i mean, belongs to JK Rowling.
CH4:
They had been sitting in an uncomfortable silence for about an hour when Hermione decided it was too much and they should get out and do something.
“What can we do?” Ron asked.
“Well Buckbeak still needs to be fed.” Ginny suggested.
“What’s a Buckbeak?” Serine asked.
“Not a what really, but a who,” Hermione suggested.
“Buckbeack is a hippogriff.” Harry said, getting up for the first time all day.
“Oh he moved,” Ron said under his breath. Hermione stepped on his foot and glared.
“A hippogriff?” Sukura said looking interested walking across the room and commenting, “Well lets go I don’t know the way myself now do I.”
Hermione hesitated before Serine gave a look that said, please do it before the bad mood sets in again. They then started up another flight of stairs to an attic door.
Serine then turned to Hermione and said in a whisper “Sometimes she gets along better with animals that people.”
Before entering the room Hermione turned to them and said “Now, do you know what to do when greeting a hippogriff?”
“Yes, yes we know” Sukura said pushing Hermione out of the way, strided purposefully into the room, and took a deep bow after stopping about six feet away. The hippogriff didn’t even pause before bowing himself, sensing her confidence and unafraid attitude. Next the rest of the group entered Harry at the head and all but him bowed a little nervously. After greetings the group set to feeding the large and powerful creature.
“I’m impressed” Harry said to Sukura, “Not many people have so much confidence when it comes to being near hippogriffs.”
“Hippogriffs are nothing after Draco.”
“Come again?” asked Harry.
“Draco, my dragon, I used to breed them till mom caught me.” Sukura clarified.
“The Government was so mad; when they had to deal with the muggle swat team that showed up, they threatened to take her wand.”
“Stupid swat team! Mom wouldn’t have known if it wasn’t for them, and that little accident.” Sukura huffed.
“Little, he caught a school on fire!?!?!?” Serine said.
“Why do you keep coming back to that? The kids where happy they had no school!!”
A look of horror crossed a Hermione’s face “No school?”
“What kind of a mom wouldn’t know about that?” Ron asked.
“She was on a business trip!!!” Serine defended.
“Didn’t the neighbors notice?” asked Harry
“I don’t know, did they survive?” Serine asked, Sukura shrugged. Before she could make a comment there was a loud crack and the twins appeared.
“Meetings over,” said George.
“You guys have to go now,” Explained Fred.
“K, see you guys! Or should I say… cheereo chaps,” Serine said and smiled as she started out the door.
“Please forgive her and her horrible accent, she was dropped on her head at a very young age” Sukura in reply to blank stares and said “Bye” before slinking out the door.
“Was not!!” Serine defended, turning to say a last word.
A/N: well that’s the end of the chapter!

Ashley what are you doing? Burning my restraining orders!
You know they have copies at the police station.
Don’t worry, I already set it to fire!
You what!!?!?!?!?!? (Knock at the door)
I was here the whole time!!
Oh, well you know the people you kidnapped probably have a copy too. Not for long!!!!
shoot! Well, better deal with this, bye!
~*Lover_girl1*~
I'm loving this. hhmmm...Serine and Surka sound a bit like our authors...
~dorkerina~
you've got that right. there more about that in the author note!
i'll give you the next chapter now.

~dorkerina~
A/N: Hi! Sorry it took so long to update, school been tough and Ashley has been learning the hard way not to violate, steal, or burn restraining orders! I have no idea where Ashley is at the moment, it’s a little weird I mean she was so excited to finally update…. uh oh.
*Ashley walk is in carrying a pan full of flaming something* Look I made Flambé isn’t it pretty!
Ashley you’re scorching the sealing! Wait, you’re a minor, where did you get alcohol?!?!?!!?
It’s not alcohol it’s gasoline! What kinda kid do you think I am?
*Fire alarm goes off in background and Jessie tackles Ashley in attempt to put the flames out* Read on!!! (We’ll sort this out at the end of the chapter)
In response to some of our reviews ( thanks for them!) we feel the need to explain ourselves a bit so here it goes: things have been a bit sketchy, so you know you aren’t supposed to know much about the characters or their backgrounds yet, we mean for it to be this way, things will be explained! There is not much detail because we mean to keep you in the dark for a bit. We haven’t gone into much detail because we are going by the book’s description and feel that you know what places we’ve been to look like already. Now we’re going to give you a description of our characters:
Teresa (the mom): Long Curly red hair, green eyes, and a freckled nose. She is 5’ 6”.
Serine: Green eyes, and slightly curly black hair to her shoulders. She is 5’ 3” and has to wear small silver framed rectangular glasses when in school. (Jessie’s character)
Sukura: she is 5’ 1”, has white hair that is curly and frizzy, and has fierce silver eyes. (Ashley’s character)
Disclaimer: wheeze…wheeze….. Harry…wheeze… I am your owner. Ashley, no more Star Wars for you!! We do not own Harry Potter and Ashley has no ties to Darth Vader.
That’s what you think!
Chapter five:
Teresa sat at the window of a room in the Leaky Caldron staring out at the street below. The bustle and movement of the place held no thrill for her as it normally would have; she’d been so excited about seeing England, but now… after what she’d found out.
“What about the other gir…”
“Not now,” she said interrupting him, “Please?” she added in a tired voice.
“I can see that your tired Teresa,” Dumbledore interrupted “But we know why you’ve come and it’s best to tell you this now.”
“Tell me what?” she asked expecting the worse.
“We know you were corresponding, and what you where planning,” He continued trying to put it off.
“Just come out with it” She replied anxiously.
“He’s dead, it happened a few months ago… I’m so sorry; I know you’ve been through so much, only now to have you hopes be crushed I can..” Dumbledore was sympathetic, but Teresa cut him off not wanting to continue on the subject.
“Do you have a job for me to do; it would be suspicious to my girls to have to come here just to go back.”
“Yes I have just the job for you...” Dumbledore seemed pleased.
“Mom we’re going to Diagon Alley for our supplies!” Serine called from the open door, interrupting her thoughts.
“Okay girls, but stay together. There is some money in my purse, you may buy some lunch but don’t spend too much. Look out for strangers!” Teresa replied.
“We wouldn’t have too look out for strangers if you’d let me take Silver with us.” Sukura mumbled looking at the gray wolf sleeping by the fire.
“You know how protective that wolf gets, there’s no way he’d make it in a crowd.” Teresa reminded.
“More like no way the crowd would make it.” Serine said only half joking. Sukura and Serine then left for Diagon Alley, Leaving Teresa to her thoughts.
As the two where walking down the crowded streets they where silent for a moment. Then Sukura broke the silence saying “Something’s bothering mom”
“How do you know?” Serine asked a little put off by Sukura’s gloom and doom attitude.
“Do you really have to ask? You know how it is.”
“I guess I should know, but it’s all a little weird don’t you think, I mean she was in such a good mood just before we went to that creepy old house.”
“Yeah, maybe we should get her a pet that might cheer her up! Do you think she’d mind?” Sukura asked perking up immediately.
“Wow, that was random, even for you,” Serine commented wryly pushing the issue to the back of her mind reluctantly.
“No it wasn’t, look, pet shop,” Sukura said pointing ahead.
“No we need to get our books,” Serine said as she pulled her sister into a book shop on the other side of the street.
Within the hour they had finished their shopping and began wandering around. Soon they found themselves in front of a newer-looking shop with a large sign reading WEASLY’S WIZZARDING WEEZES.
“Weasly, sounds familiar, wasn’t that the name of those two twins?” Sukura asked.
“I think so, let’s check it out.” Serine said.
When they entered the empty shop sure enough, the twins were behind the counter. At the ring of the bell on the door one looked up and the other continued to sleep. Serine smiled and waved enthusiastically about to shout in greeting when Sukura put a quieting finger up to her lips. Smiling manically she approached the counter and bent over the sleeping twin then whispered in his ear, “I’m here,” and it sounded like a threat more than warning.
He opened his eyes, startled from his sleep, and took a few steps back, mouth agape. Before anything else could happen the door opened and Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, and Neville entered the shop. Neville paused in the door way reluctant to enter.
“Neville what’s wrong?” Hermione asked.
“Every time I come in here something bad happens!” Neville said looking around nervously.
“Oh it’s Harry, hi Harry!” Serine said in an overly excited voice.
“Oh hi, what are you doing here?” Hermione asked politely.
“We we’re just looking around,” Serine replied, “you?”
“We’re just visiting,” Hermione said and turning to Neville made introductions, “this is Serine and this is Sukura.”
When Neville held out his hand to shake Sukura’s, she glared at it then at him. (In the back ground horror music plays, Ashley stop interrupting!)
“Stop being so scary, you’re acting like an axe murderer!” Serine scolded, and then she held out her hand to Neville in a gesture of peace as Sukura muttered something no one caught.
Introductions made, the group split up and started wandering around the shop. Next, Neville approached Sukura.
“S..s..so,” Neville stuttered “Do you die your hair white?”
“Excuse me?” She grabbed him by the shirt, pulling him closer and said threateningly “What was that, I didn’t quite catch it?”
“Oh no, he asked about her hair!” Serine said alarmed looking around desperately for something to pull Sukura away from Neville.
“Does my hair look died?” She whispered harshly. Neville squeaked, unable to answer. “What, do you think I’m wearing colored contacts too? Do you think I’m some kinda fake?”
“Sukura, knock it off!” Serine said in a calm serious voice that was not very fitting to her character. Sukura threw Neville back onto some shelves then stalked out of the shop.
“Sorry about my sister,” Serine said regaining her normal, perky voice “if there is anything that needs to be replaced, let me know, we’re staying at the Leaky Cauldron. Well, cheerio chaps” She said in a terrible imitation of the British accent closing the door behind her as she left the shop.
“I told you, every time I come in here…” Neville said getting up from the ground.
A/N: *Ashley and Jessie get up off the ground, the fire successfully extinguished. Suddenly the door is broken down and a firefighter who looks alarmingly like Gerard Butler (tall, dark, and handsome) steps in.* ooh hot guy!!!!
*Ashley jumps into his arms.* You’re my new boyfriend!!!
*Suddenly a man wearing dark clothes and a mask walks in.*
wheeze… Ashley…..wheeze…..I am your boy friend, what are you doing???
It’s his fault!!!
*Ashley jumps out of the firefighters arms and run up and hugs Darth Vader.*
Ashley you traitor!!! Why have you turned to the Dark side???
He scares me!! I thought he was supposed to be hot!!!
Didn’t you ever see the trilogy!?!?!?!?
NO! only the previews from the third movie!!!!
You…wheeze…..will…wheeze...suffer!!
*He draws his light saber and goes for the fireman.*
I’ll save you!!!!!
*Jessie tackles Vader.*
reply please, and i'll continue the story (ok i know this author note was a little out there....)
danagrint
MORE! i really like this
~*Lover_girl1*~
No I KNOW that Jessie and Ashley are exactly like the characters. Anywhos, waiting for more!
~dorkerina~
We're holding the next chapter hostage untill we get five more replys! muahahahahahaha!

~*Lover_girl1*~
Aw man! This is not fair...
div
five reply's , now slowly! let the chapter go unharmed! back away from the chapter!!
`~lion_heart1~`
Liking this alot! Its so freakin good!
cutie_pie13
its awesome
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WldGrnAgel
i like it
i find it some what amusing (the authors writing)
hope to see more
~dorkerina~

nice div! thanks everyone! but ummm....
*cluches chapter closer* my baby!!! no! you'll never get her!!
umm maybe not yet..... how's about three more posts, even if they are to complain that i demand them....
~*Lover_girl1*~
Ok, I'll post again! We want more! we want more! We want more! We want more!
~dorkerina~
we?....do you have a mouse in your pocket??

cutie_pie13
well ........................ i could be part of the 'we' want more!!!!
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so you betta watch out

~dorkerina~
*shudders* gasp!
div
!More! grrr!More!
a good writer always meets the publics demands...i made that up but i'm sure someone famous has said it already so tht makes it true!!
~dorkerina~
if you can find an exacty quote i'll post the next chapter sooner.... maybe
div
HuH! such violence...
I never , ever ever deny my readers a chapter unless its not written yet.....
Please give us the chapter!!
TigerEyes
wow it's pretty good. You guys are kinda nuts but it reminds me of my best friend and me. Were even worse sometimes. Anyway please post more!
~dorkerina~
thanks!
well, the truth is the next chapter isn't done yet.... it was just fun teasin ya'all. umm i'll take sugestions, it's just a qestion of wether ashley has the time... and.... oh, great, now i'll just be bugged to write it ....
div
WRITE IT !!GRrRrRrR!!
not but seriously write it , (now)
or when u have a chance(preferabbly now)
only when u have time (now)
ps.(now)
~dorkerina~
alright!
's all ya had to say.... hahahaha
div
still waiting, *tapping foot impatiently*
~dorkerina~
hehe *nervious look*
div
LoL, oh well i guess i will wait
hey dudes
post more cause this story rockes... post post post post post
ps. POST pplz
~dorkerina~
A/N: Jessie walks in with a cast on her leg supported by the firefighter. So Ashley what where you up to while I was in the hospital? Or do I really want to know? I haven’t been up to anything. Jessie gives a skeptical look No, honest all I’ve done is gone to France and gone spelunking. It seems so odd yet harmless…. Why? What, I didn’t do anything. I don’t know I’ve got a bad feeling about this…. Let’s just get on with the story.
Disclaimer: Though we own an extensive collection of Harry Potter merchandise we do not own the actual story. sob
Chapter six:
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The night before Serine and Sukura left for Hogwarts Dumbledore and Hagrid had come by with the sorting hat, to place both girls in their houses. Both girls had been placed into Gryffindor. Surprisingly enough Sukura opened up to Hagrid, a very rare thing. The two spent nearly two hours talking about certain illegal and dangerous creatures they would like as pets. Before he left Hagrid offered to take Silver (Sukura’s wolf) to his house that night, and take care of him while she was in school. Sukura let him.
The next morning the two found themselves sitting in one of the compartments of the Hogwarts Express.
“I’ve seen better.” Sukura said, looking around their compartment.
“Well I think it’s absolutely wonderful!” Seine said just as the door opened.
“Is this compartment fu…” Neville stopped upon seeing Sukura and went pale.
“Hey, Neville isn’t it?” Serine said brightly, “Come on, sit with us! There’s still plenty of room.” Neville started to stutter a nervous no when Harry stepped up behind him.
“Is that invitation open to me?” He asked.
“Of course it is!” Serine affirmed, “You can sit by me!” Harry smiled and nudged Neville into the compartment so he could take the proffered seat. When he smiled Serine thought it was nice, if not a little odd, that Harry seemed to be a little bit happier every time they saw him. Neville ended up in the seat opposite Sukura and shrunk under her malicious gaze that Serine was too busy talking to Harry to stop. His discomfort continued until Sukura turned away from him when the compartment door opened again about a half hour later.
(That’s sad, a whole half hour
Ashley, shut up!)
“There you are Harry,” Said Ron, “We thought we’d never find you.”
“Our prefect meeting was cut short,” Hermione said.
“Oh, hello,” Serine said cheerfully, “What is a prefect?”
“It’s a school officer,” Hermione said, walking into the compartment and sitting down next to Harry.
Ron, because there where no other seats left open, went to sit down next to Sukura, as he lowered himself onto the seat she let out a low growl. Quietly, but very quickly, Ron rose from his seat and stood in the middle of the compartment looking lost.
“Harry,” Ron whispered, more for himself than for secrecy because by now every one in the compartment was watching, “switch me seats,” he paused risking a quick look back at Sukura, who was still glaring, “please!”
Harry rolled his eyes but nevertheless got and switched seats.
“Well that was awkward,” Serine whispered to Ron, thought due to the silence that filled the compartment, everyone herd. Sukura glared at her sister. “What? You did growl.”
Uncomfortable in the angry silenced that followed, Hermione said, “By the way, have either of you read Hogwarts, A History?”
“Well, if my presence makes you uncomfortable...” Sukura stated angrily.
“Well, if you refrained from growling at us!” Serine shot back.
“Senetca tonatca!” Sukura spat. Serine’s eyes went wide, and though no one knew exactly what was said, they knew it was not very nice.
At that moment the compartment door opened, and a group of people, headed by a tall blond boy, collectively sneered. “Pothead, weasel, and the mud blood, your company has not improved I see,” the boy said, looking in disgust at Neville. Serine got the look on her face of someone with a bad taste in their mouth.
Sukura got up, approached Malfoy and started to stare intently into his eyes, her face expressionless. Everybody watched curiously as Malfoy became increasingly nervous, and looked as if he wanted to break eye contact, but was unable to. Slowly a mischievous smile spread across Sukuras face. As it did, Malfoy’s body relaxed.
Turning to the group Sukura said, “I like him.”
“What?” Harry shouted, standing up outraged.
“Silence,” Sukura said in a cool tone, holding up her hand. She went over to Harry, “I no longer desire to be in your presence.” She placed one hand upon his chest and pushed him back into his seat. After she walked over to the door she turned around, “Pothead” and left.
Malfoy turned to the group and gave them triumphant smirk, then left.
“That was creepy, on so many levels,” Ron said, and Neville whimpered from the corner in agreement.
“Um, no. That was so bad on so many levels,” Serine said in a sad exasperated tone.
“What’s wrong with her?” Harry asked angrily.
“What I want to know, is what just happened,” Hermione said turning to Serine, “And you know exactly what I mean.”
“What kind of a freak is your sister?” Ron asked.
“Never call my sister a freak!” Serine said then addressing Hermione, “I don’t want to talk about it either,” she sighed, and looked down for a minute, tracing the seat with her finger, “I’m sorry, it’s just not my place to tell.”
“But-“ Ron started to ask, but was cut off by Neville, who miraculously found some courage.
“Stop it! Can’t you see it’s bothering her!” he said. Serine looked up and gave Neville an amused smile.
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A/N: Yay! We’re done!
Don’t get your pantyhose (Ashley that’s not proper!) in a bunch, right after this, we are immediately going to work on the next chapter!
We just thought it would be a nice (insert holiday of choice), present.
Oh, and for your gee wiz, in the language that Sukura was speaking (you’ll find out what it is later), the words are sharp, but the tone and fluency are beautiful.
(Breathtakingly so!
Shut it Ashley)
Review!
~dorkerina~
OK, so this time around we need some input. Would you guys like this story longer, or shorter? If it is shorter, it will have the same plot, only it will move faster, all the important stuff will happen quickly. IF it is longer, it will have some added stuff, there will be more chapters, and most likely it will show more school, and some of the less important situations. Basically more depth. We would like opinions from five different people, and if they are before the new year(2006 ha!), it is likely the chapter will be done faster, as we are out of school.
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Ok then? couldn't you just post ..........Please ;^)
heh.
~*LoverGirl21*~
cool story.
post more.
~dorkerina~
Ok........ I'll take that as an awkward silence and move on.... (muahahahaha, now if you wanted a short story too bad for you!!!)
more will be here soon
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good...
didn't you start another story aswell? i read one it was really gd..
~dorkerina~
Thanks! That means a lot to me!
I don't really have too many ideas for harry potter either except this and the one i think your talking about, quiet peace.
I do have fics for other stuff, like gone with the wind, phantom of the opera and romeo and juliett in the general fiction section.
Sry i am behind right now.....I guess if I work on anything right now I want it to be my original story idea that I hope will someday be a published book. And besides that I have to get Ashley over here when she's in the right mood.
I swear I'll do my best to get ashley to get a move on this though!

dumbledorez.gal
please post more its getting really good and we want it
POSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
*please post so jessa will stop bugging me. shes my sister.*
POSTPOSTPOSTPOST PLEASEEEEEEEE
GO AWAY LAURA
*jessa shut it. this is getting annoying. im going to bed and grabbing your money from under your bed inside your diary*
WHAT!! HOW DO YOU KNOW BOUT DAT LAURA!
*there are some things twins know about their sister. good story ashley and jessie. lovin it. check out my and jessa's DKP if you can!*
POSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOST......
~dorkerina~
LOL, I'm on it! I swear!!!
I'll check it out you two.
dumbledorez.gal
ty jessa is away *sick* at the moment. she loves ur story. god! she's annoying
LaUrA
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cutie_pie13
hey your story is AWESOME!!!!! post more plezzzzzzz
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Waitin , still been waitin for ages heh....
~dorkerina~
we started finally!
Just thought you should know...

Scotty Brockman
yet that was in Jan. lol Post more soon or I will PM YOU LIKE CRAZY
~dorkerina~
Hey! A DBZ fan! I love that show.

Ahem.... I uh... actually totally forgot about this story...wow. I guess I'd better get on it huh? hehe...

I promise to contact my friend about getting to it today, kay.
~dorkerina~
When I told Ashley there where now 1,107 views she was said, "huh, and only one more reply?"
But hey, it's Friday, we can hope to get it done today....

~dorkerina~
*sigh*
Due to our inexplicably short attention span and lack of planing Ashley and I were unable to get very far this weekend.
Well, on the bright side I can guarantee this chapter will get done faster now that I have been reminded of it's existence.....
And we'll pm any reviewers (before or after this post) the second we post it, to notify them that it's done.
Namine Etoile
*Hugh*
If I didn't know any better I'd say you were twins. Luckily. WE"RE CRAZ;lkahg;kl;jhagd!!
Namine: Ahem. That was MY twin. Crazy little Boogerhead...
Natasha: Hi! I"M HYPER! AND CRAZY! How about you? Huh? Huh? HUH?
Namine: We live in Bayuex, France.
Natasha: WATER! SWIMMING BEACH!
Namine: Please remind me not to let her near the keyboard *Shoves Tasha in closet and throws key out window. Anyway.... where were we? Ah Yes. KEEP WRITING! If you don't. You shall die. A very HORRIBLE Death. Oh. Sorry. I'm still working on the 'no death threats' thing.
Natasha: *Knocks down closet door with chainsaw and cuts the Telly in half.* MWUAHAHAHAAHAA!
Namine: Merde. Crap. *Mildly Dead*
Natasha: Anyway. We love your story. And we're glad your like us. Wich is cool. I'm crazy. Heehee. Uh... No! GEROFF! Mine! Keyboard!
Namine: I'm back from the dead. I have a restraining order. We like your story. So keep writing.
Natasha:

PARTY TIME! WOOOO!
Namine Etoile
THis is MY profile. And Natasha keeps butting in. So.... she'll be popping in and out. But it'll be mostly me unless I ask her to wreak havoc.
Namine Etoile
POST! POST! POST! POST! POST!
~dorkerina~
Omgosh! Ashley is going to love you guys! Especially since you used the word telly.
And yeah, we do almost sound like twins, when we first became friends we were started to notice how alarmingly similar we were. And we've kinda been stuck at the hip ever since. *glomps Ashley*
I, personally, blame the older brother factor.
Anysho, We should plot together sometime.
And in my defense I'll just say I'm still working on Ashley.

*whispers* She can be stubborn.
In the meantime I encourage Crazy little boogerhead to wreak havoc.
Have fun!

~dorkerina~
Originally posted by Namine Etoile
Namine: We live in Bayuex, France.
Namine: KEEP WRITING! If you don't. You shall die. A very HORRIBLE Death. Oh. Sorry. I'm still working on the 'no death threats' thing.
In greeting and in response to this, Ashley would like to say the following:
"A horrible death for us would be by Jello, because we live in Utah."
(she's still working on the no death threats too)
Oh, and we'll probably have to wait for end of level tests to be over to update.
Ashley:

I like bananas.
Namine Etoile
This is Natasha! The crazy one! I'm soliel fille! (sun girl) while my twin is luna fille (Moon girl)
Crazy nicknames for each other. YAY! I like bananas! Too! I'm french! *Grabs chainsaw and cuts Telly in half*.
We have jello... it's blue. Do you know what jello is made out of?!?! Horse Neck! Of course Namine likes to eat snails. . . .
Meena: So what? You eat frogs....
Natasha: That was only once!
Meena: But you like them! You said they were salty!
Tasha: They were salty..... hm.
Meena: I wish that you would be normal.
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Namine is only older than me by 2 minutes. I wanted to be first. *pout* Oh well. I'm still the crazy one.
~Natasha
Namine Etoile
Only cause she got dropped on her head....
~dorkerina~
hahahahahaha nice.

I had snail once, at a crazy french restaurant (actually it was really cool, they had peacocks and a grass roof over one area

). It's good if you don't chew too long...
Namine Etoile
Yea! EXACTLY!
~dorkerina~
It was sad, one person in our group (it was a school activity
thing-a-mabob) couldn't stop chewing. *shivers*

~dorkerina~
Guess what! It's friday! That means it's the weekend, and I get to try to hound Ashley into writing up the next chapter. Wish me luck!

Namine Etoile
Good luck! And hurry up! Yea! Yay! Woopee!
~dorkerina~
*sigh* unsuccessful again. Actually I spent 5 hours doing homework on Saturday (gets out teacher voodoo doll grr)

, and Ashely babysat Friday. probably next week since it's memorial day weekend..

Namine Etoile
Poo upon you. Poo upon you both.
~dorkerina~
WE have an ouline!!! *does snooy dance* and tomorrow is free!
wink wink nudge nudge.
Namine Etoile
Then get to writing your story buster!
~dorkerina~
I'm trying!!!
we got a little further.... only a little....again.
it IS coming.
Namine Etoile
Sure it is.... sure....
~dorkerina~
I swear, it is!
We did get farther, and this chapter really exists, it's not just a myth I promise.

~Midnight_Miss~
I have two words for you... HURRY UP.
Ginny Rules 94
HURRY UP OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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P.S. I love your story but post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ginny Rules 94
great story post
~dorkerina~
Argh! I'm trying!
Hmmm, maybe I'll call Ashley right now.

~dorkerina~
We're half way through!!!!

Namine Etoile
YAY! So hurry up? OK"?
Namine: INDEED!
Natasha: *revschainsaw* If you don't... you'll be sorry.
~dorkerina~
I see you avoided a direct death threat. Brovo!

Namine Etoile
You mean 'Brava'. I'm a girl.
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yeah...wow...and yes yes i'm bck...if u dont remember me look at previous posts...and ehm i havent been here for lyk 5 months .....
just wanting to raise the issue of there being no new chapter.....
in lyk 5 months..
dumbledorez.gal
post or die by voodoo doll.
TRUST ME, LAURA'S GOT PLENTY
yah, i do
HEHE, -PLAYS WITH VOODOO DOLLS- FUN!
hey gimme that! it's mine!!!
NO ITS MINEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE NOWWWWWWWW
gimme the doll jess
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-snatches doll- plz post more before you die
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
i need ear plugs!!!!!!!
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA -TAKES NEW DOLL OF LAURA AND POKES WITH KNIFE-
ouch! give me the knife Jess.
NOOOO
-takes knife slowly- u die now, jess.
PLZ POST STORY
JESS aNd laura
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ehm yeah...what she said
d-fly_girl008
post more soon!!
Brit531
your story is good post more soon
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it will probs be about 5 more months

d-fly_girl008
5 months until they post again... I hope not!
x_hp_fan
I think they forgot about this story.
I hope they didn't though. I really liked it.
Ginny Rules 94
(sobs) 5 (sniff) months ( sniff) say it ain`t so I love the story please post
Brit531
post soon post soon
x_hp_fan
How long has it been since the last time they posted?
~dorkerina~
A/N: First off, I'd like to say in our defense, that this is a good sized chapter. But, sorry it took us so long; Ashley was in Juvenile hall for a while, and I was a cat…..
Then we lost our lonely family hobo Jake, it was a tough time. But he was found, and so was our muse (it was in the fridge under the broccoli-
Actually, Ashley that was your sauerkraut, that’s why our muse smells like pickles
That was Jakes sauerkraut, *sniff* I missed him so much he ate the whole jar when he got back
(That’s why Jake smells like pickles too!)
Anyway, so here we are with a finished chapter.
(Explanation courtesy of Ashley, though the lonely family hobo Jake belongs to Jessica)
Disclaimer: We do not own Harry Potter, but we do have JK Rowling locked in our closet. Ha ha, and you thought she was working on the seventh book, and you thought this story was really our work.
Ch 7
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Serine stared at Neville a few more seconds and seemed to make up her mind about something. Then she turned to Hermione and said, “Actually, I found it rather intriguing.”
“What the bloody heck are you talking about,” (Yes, we don’t cuss in this story. Ashley, enough with the insignificant interruptions!) Asked Ron, perplexed, then turned to Harry, “You see, now this ones gone loony too!”
“Do shut up Ronald!” Hermione said, and asked Serine, “What do you mean?”
“Hogwarts, a History,” Serine replied, “It was positively enlightening. I picked it up at flourish and blots when we got our books, and read it in one night.”
“Ohh! What else did you pick up?” Hermione said, wedging herself between Ron and Serine. The conversation that followed encompassed the topics of several different books, ended with three heated debates, and eventually drove everybody out of the compartment but the two girls, and a very confused Neville. Neville had been the go-to guy in each debate and for the life of him couldn’t make either girl happy.
“Alright, that’s my cue. I’m going to go find Ron and Harry.” Neville said getting up when the subject changed to house elves (Neville had had a rather traumatizing experience with S.P.E.W. when it was first started, involving the twins, complicated charms homework, and a cauldron sticker designed by Hermione as an advertisement. Need I say more?) . But just as he reached the door the train jolted to a stop, and Neville was sent sprawling sideways.
After helping Neville up, he, Serine, and Hermione joined the rest of the confused students following the instructions blaring through the train to exit as normal. Once outside they found themselves on a makeshift platform where you could see the top spires of Hogwarts castle in the distance. Soon Hermione found Ron and Harry, and joined Serine and Neville in a carriage.
“We seem to have arrived here rather early,” Hermione commented, looking at the light blue sky, as the carriage jolted to a start.
“And how long did it take you to figure that out?” a voice cackled from above them. (Ack! The keys on the keyboard are so slick. My fingers are falling off. You mean they’re slipping off of the keys? Of course that’s what I mean. You’d be the first to realize it if my fingers were actually falling off. Get your head out of the clouds.) Everyone looked up in search of the bodiless voice.
“Sweet Phanny Feeney! Is that a ghost?” Serine shouted, more shocked than scared.
“Interesting choice of words,” Harry said dryly, “But yes, this is Peeves; Hogwarts’ most annoying ghost.”
“He’s more accurately a poltergeist,” Hermione corrected, cutting in.
“Oh no, don’t think that you’re going to live down the stupidity of your last statement by using your knowledge of a ghost’s position in the afterlife,” Peeves said becoming visible.
“Get the bloody heck out of here Peeves,” Ron snapped.
Peeves smiled mischievously and…(We will not burden you with the knowledge of Peeves’ next move. I still have nightmares. We will, though, tell you that it involved a Spork (yes wizards have them), a bag of Bertie Bots every flavored beans, Ron’s scarf, Neville’s left shoe, and a very irked niffler. All manipulated in a way that only Peeves’ twisted mind could scheme and achieve)
When Peeves had finally sparked the highest amount of chaos possible he left the carriage, which was no longer headed for Hogwarts but deeper into the Forbidden Forest.
Now to make a long and terrifying story short, the carriage ended upside down, several miles into the forest, with no one knowing which way led back to Hogwarts.
When everyone had finally disentangled themselves they agreed that something had to be done. It was originally decided that everyone would leave the carriage and together search for Hogwarts. But with much complaining and grumbling from Ron and Neville, mostly about certain lost, or rather stolen articles of clothing, it was decided that the two would stay behind, and wait for a rescue party of sorts in case one should come.
“Now, my shoe is the real reason I don’t want to leave,” Neville said looking at Ron, once the others where gone, “let’s hear yours.”
“It’s the bloody forest spiders,” Ron said trying to sound somewhat justified, “I’m an arachnophobe, and these aren’t your average creepy crawlies. They’re twenty times bigger, hairier, twitchier, aggressiver,” Ron said a note of hysteria creeping farther into his voice with every adjective, “and did I mention the traumatizing 50 yard dash for my life!?!?! And-“ A thud sounded on the top (or in this case the bottom, which was facing up) of the carriage interrupting Ron’s rant.
“What was that?” Neville whispered.
“The spiders, they’ve come for me. I’m going to die, I’m gonna die.” Ron raved, before starting to scream outright. When a thud landed beside the door of the carriage Ron started from his screaming “I need a weapon!” With this he went for the window across form the door and started yanking at the curtain rod.
The door handle started to rattle, and Neville grabbed Ron away from the window, “Keep it together man,” he shouted, not quite ‘together’ himself, but having the presence mind to pull Ron to the back of the carriage. The door started to rattle harder, and the two found themselves holding onto each other tightly when the door opened. Neville let out an ear piercing scream.
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“We’re lost! Hopelessly, completely, and utterly lost. And it’s getting dark.” Ginny moaned, turning around in a circle and seeing, again, nothing but trees, bushes, dead leaves on dirt, and only a slight bit of fading blue sky above it all. “I thought you said you had a good sense of direction!” Ginny snapped, marching up to the front of the group next to Serine.
“I do!” Serine said cheerily, keeping her eyes straight ahead.
“Then, why aren’t we at Hogwarts!?” Ginny challenged.
“We almost were a half hour ago, but then I saw a light and couldn’t help but follow it!” Serine said, as if that was all fine and dandy. Everyone but Serine stopped dead in their tracks; Harry was completely speechless, Ginny was growing red in the face, and Hermione looked as if her suspicions had been confirmed.
“What!?” Ginny shouted, “Why didn’t you tell us!?”
“Hey, that never occurred to me! I just thought it would be obvious.” Serine called back to them matter-of-factly, walking on ahead, unhindered.
“Stop walking,” Harry called, “Following this thing isn’t going to lead you anywhere you want to be.”
“Already tried,” Serine called back in a singsong tone, adding, “silly Harry.” When she said Harry’s name something had changed in her voice, and her speed had increased. Serine reached out and grabbed a branch, stumbling a bit before breaking into a fast skip.
“Oh, crap,” Harry said, and broke out into a run to catch up with Serine. After following her through some high bushes Harry faltered. Up ahead was a good sized drop off, not a cliff, but a hazard none the less. With a last burst of speed, Harry caught up to Serine at the edge. He grabbed her shoulders as she made to jump, and lost his balance coming back from the edge. Maneuvering the best he could, they landed, somewhat (no very) conveniently in a dip. Looking down at Serine, Harry saw something flicker, and change in her eyes, like a fog lifting.
“That was scary,” Serine breathed.
“Yeah,” Harry replied.
“How did you know?” She asked, slightly ashamed, “I was being so stupid.”
“The branch, I thought you’d tried to stop yourself with it,” he started, but before Harry could finish his answer, a low, and familiar, growl issued from beside him. Harry looked up and saw Sukura, glaring menacingly at him. He promptly dropped Serine, and as she fell she grabbed his shirt pulling him down with her. Not a moment later he was up on his feet again, and pinned against a tree, with Sukura right in his face.
“You saving my sister and ending up in that ridiculous position, fine.” She spat, “But staying in that position, not fine.”
“Sukura, don’t hurt him!” Serine wailed, sitting up, “Please, back away slowly.”
“Which one?” Neville asked.
“Wait, what,” Harry said, looking up and seeing Ron standing by Ginny and Hermione, and Neville helping Serine up. “How did you guys get here?” Both pointed at Sukura. “Huh?”
“Well…” Ron began.
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FLASHBACK (Dee dee dee dee, dee dee dee dee)
“Shut up.” Sukura snarled, standing in the doorway. Ron quickly put a hand over Neville’s mouth. “Wasn’t interrupting anything was I?” she said, looking at the two hugging boys and lifting an eye brow. Neville simply began to stutter, and an indignant Ron pushed him away.
“Blimy, why did you sneak up like that?” Ron asked angrily.
“I wouldn’t exactly call that sneaking. Besides, I heard your pathetically hysterical voice before I even saw the carriage.” Sukura shot back, “Now, more importantly, where is my sister?” her tone was threatening. Neville raised a shaking finger and pointed in the direction the group had left. Sukura looked in the indicated direction, closed her eyes, tilted her head, and after a moment, seemed to resolve something.
“Right,” she commented, and forcefully pulled the two boys out of the carriage. When Neville stumbled as they hit the ground, Sukura spotted his sock clad left foot, and seemed about to say something. Instead she shook her head, grabbed the front of each boy’s shirts, and proceeded with her search.
END FLASHBACK
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“That explains a lot,” Hermione said, pulling a leaf from Ron’s hair.
“So what exactly happened here?” Sukura said, eyeing Harry, then growling at Neville, who was, in her opinion, standing to close to Serine. Neville backed away.
“Serine was following a hinkypunk,” Hermione sighed.
“I don’t know if that’s what it was.” Harry said.
“It wasn’t.” Sukura said harshly.
“What was it then,” Ginny asked quietly.
“Spiders.” Ron said softly. Hermione rolled her eyes.
“I don’t think that’s it.” said Neville looking at Sukura.
“So what, we should stick around and see what it was?” Ginny said sarcastically.
“I vote not!” Serine said, raising her hand.
“Then let’s go.” Sukura said, turning to leave.
“Wait, you know which way the castle is?” asked Harry.
“Uh, yeah.” Sukura said, rolling her eyes and pointing off into the distance. Above the tops of the trees that were down hill a little from the drop off, they saw the distant spires of Hogwarts castle. They were easy to miss due to the fading light. “Now, let’s get back before morning shall we?”
After a few minutes of walking Hermione broke the silence, “How did you find up anyway.” She asked Serine.
“You leave a messy trail.” Sukura shrugged, not bothering to look at Hermione.
Noticing Sukura’s unfazeing forward stare, Hermione asked nervously, “You’re not following a light are you?” Sukura turned and glared, “Just checking,” Hermione said defensively.
“Well, how did you know we were in trouble in the first place?” Ginny asked, disconcerted by the fact that Sukura was now walking backwards to prove her point.
“I saw a carriage careening off into the forest,” Serine smiled, amused, “but I didn’t know it was any of you guy’s until the feast started, and you weren’t there.”
“So, then you told the teachers and snuck off to look, right?” Hermione asked hopefully, but already knowing the answer.
“No, but they must know by now.” Serine said, turning around and giving McGonagall, who had just emerged from between trees, a pointed look.
“Indeed.” McGonagall replied sternly.
“We’re saved,” Serine squealed in delight.
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A/N: Finally!!!
Duck!
*gasp* Where!? *gets hit by a voodoo doll* Ow, hey! That’s not what I look like.
Yes it is.
*Sigh* I guess you deserve a real, sauerkraut free explanation. I promise that at least two of the five months are justified. You see, one was spent dealing with end of school fun *gags*, and the other in moving, and being internetless *sigh*. Now another month, true, though it’s not that justifiable, was spent in a Buffy coma, *squee* Spike!!
Too tired to go on! *collapses*
Oh, no, Ashley! You’ve collapsed. *collapse*
Gah! Three straight hours of typing, hope your happy.
Brit531
that was really good post soon
d-fly_girl008
YES!!! I love it!!
Ginny Rules 94
you posted i stopped crying its great my best friend is moving (sniff) besides the last 1 yeah for us
Ginny Rules 94
did u know bloody is a cuse word u do cuse
x_hp_fan
I loved it! I barely got to read it though you sent me that pm a while back! So Sorry! I've been busy. I've been wanting to read it for a while. I hope you post more soon. I really like this story.
dondo
hi, it's really good... post soon...
p.s check out my fanfic Harry Potter 7....if you have time
Brunette Angel
It's amazing! Keep it up, and don't leave us hanging forever like last time!
Brit531
^^I agree with you
Ginny Rules 15
HI GUYS!!!!!!!!!!I changed my name from ginny rul;es 94to ginny rules15
d-fly_girl008
Awesome... you going to post soon??
Ginny Rules 94
IM BACK as Ginnyu Rules 94
ninja-grl3
its good. i really looking forward to read the next chapter.
Ginny Rules 94
HEY I'VE SENT YOU GUYS LIKE 15000 P.M.s ANSWER! PLEASE POST!SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!IT'S BEEN AGES!
~dorkerina~
Thanks to running mascara's prod, (

theres no hiding from you) Ashley and I revived the idea, and we're both a lot more excited now. So hopefully we can turn out the next chapter soon.
Running Mascara
Hopefully

Running Mascara
cryYou lied to usweep
iluvmonkeys
how do u make a new story
Running Mascara
You mean a new thread??
iluvmonkeys
i want 2 start 1
Running Mascara
In the forum where it says all the names of the stories you can read there should be a button near the top that says "new thread" ermm
shattered heart
u leid to me u guys still aint posted crycrycrycrycry
Running Mascara
I know weep
They lied to all of us bawling
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