Originally posted by xtheusedxbillyx
sad and alone
in this darkened room
you promised you'd be back
but you haven't returned home
the dust on the cabinet
the dirt on the floor
you can tell it hasn't been cleaned
since you'd left from that door
waiting by the phone
as if to receive a call
i never wanted you to go
i didn't want that at all
i remember the day that black car came
to tell me you had passed
i cried for days and days
seemed my world was suddenly dark
i still have all the photos
of the day you left for war
all the letters that you sent me
still sitting in that drawer
you told me you'd come back for me
and lived the dream we shared
but they made you do another shift
it's like they never cared
they made you be the look-out
and they gave you a gun
if only they had realised
the end of your life had just begun
the enemy was hiding
in the bushed not far away
they saw you and they fired their shots
it's your life you had to pay
i'm walking around this empty house
with your photos on the wall
i wonder if life is worth it
without you here at all
my page is filling up now
my emotions line by line
i haven't been outside for days
i'm crying all the time
my tears are dripping on the page
smudging all my words
imagine how different it would be
if you didn't leave this earth
when we said "i do"
at that wedding stand
i imagined us growing old together
well...that as my plan
i dreamed we'd have some children
one or maybe two
we'd bring them up together
and show them what to do
all these things we'd do in love
and never be apart
i'm trying to get through this
trying to mend my broken heart
i'm locking up my feelings
and throwing away the key
my world is slowly fading
without you here with me
you helped me when i struggled
you always made my day
you lightened up my world
when my sky was grey
i'll guess i'll have to do it
somewhere down the track
i'll guess i'll have to believe
that your never coming back
I thought it was pretty good
However, this one stanza sort of bugged me:
waiting by the phone
as if to receive a call
i never wanted you to go
i didn't want that at all
i remember the day that black car came
to tell me you had passed
i cried for days and days
seemed my world was suddenly dark
It doesn't have the same rhyming scheme as the rest of it... but other than that it was pretty good
Originally posted by xtheusedxbillyx
is lonlisome even a word?
Don't think so