do you understand this

me and my friends have to write a crime oriented play for our drama class i was just wondering if the following made any sense:

A girl has died. She was being stalked by a man. He is one suspect. There is also another 2 suspects for the murder. A crazy guy who had a dream he did it and so is telling the police he did, (dream sequence acted out) and a woman who had a history with her in bank robbery.

If your getting me so far then good. The woman with the history is the killer, and her motive was she wanted to reclaim her mothers rose quartz necklace the victim stole.

At the end of the play we find out that the stalker, secretly loved the victim and had left a note at her bed side the night she was murdered. As the stalker is put in his cell, the letter is read out by the real killer who found it, after the murder.

thats the play please tell me if u have no idea wot i just said 🙂

That sounds really cool, but the end confused me... so is the real killer found out?

no, the stalker goes down for it. I think its quite sad.

cry A sad ending? Well... on the one hand, the stalker's off the streets, and the woman got revenge on the other girl for stealing the necklace. But on the other hand, there is no justice.

It sounds really good ✅

thanks although its going to be hard to act do you know sanctuary?

Yeah, I've seen her around... I think it's a her 😕

yeh shes my friend she plays the killer!

Really? Cool... how far into the play have you got? Are you rehearsing etc?

started today...... but its going to be hard. especially the dream sequence

I'm sure.. I loved doing stuff like that in school, but it was hard work. So satisfying when everyone in the audience gives you all a standing ovation though 😄

yeh cant wait, i play the victim though. No fun🙁 but at least i gte to write the script!

I thought we were writing the script together!

oh yeh sorry! everyone sarah is too!

Nice script. Good plot. Painfully, sad ending. But, life has a way of evening things out.

I think playing the victim could be interesting, even if you do die... you're like one of the main characters, right?

thnx and true very true. karma comes full circle

yeh i guess i would be, i gotta think positive

your so lucky! we have a rubbish teacher for drama! Great story line it does make sense!!!

Thanks! 😄
Vicky and me are going to be in charge!

The others are going to wreck it 🙁