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Molly was walking to her majoir ( drama) when she ran into her boyfriend collin
"did you leave a note outside my window last night "
"no i was doing my homework why is everuything ok" he replied
Molly walked off when she got in she saw karen
"molly hurry get changed its starting in 10 minutes"
karen ran off and she ran into king kang
"derek is that you"
" you wish"
he grabed karen stabed her then hung her in the cloak room.
Molly was acting when a girl ran out screaming
"KAREN'S DEAD SHES HANGING IN THE CLOAK ROOM" she shouted
molly ran and saw karen she burst out into tears.Collin was in the toilet washing his face when king kang said "COLLIN NICE GIRLFRIEND YOU GOT"
collin said "Derek is that you"
king kang grabed collin and smashed his face in the mirror.That night Molly was out by her window when derek came
"you ok"
"you know i knew this was coming " Molly said
then derek said "i need to tell you something ...i love you"
molly kissed him then they were having sex when king kang said
"DEREK YOURE THE ONE WHO KILLED MY DAUGHTER"
then ripped dereks face off.Molly started to cry
"MOLLY YOURE GOING TOO"
he grabed her and threw her out the window
then king kang laughed at the top of his voice.Then Mollys mother came and choped his head off
"you bastard i loved you once but now i will see you in hell"
she killed herself and no one knows why to this day
THE END!!!!

it is the end i think

I'd like to thank you for drowning the forum with six incomprehensible topics that have nothign to do with horror.

im flatterd you read them all witch one you like

part 7 coming soon

i fooled you all part 7 is coming out

I think you should end it here.

yeah maybe i should

just stop. that last one was so tastless, and the grammar was awful. Nothing was flowing together.

I guess you like being banned, thomasgeorge, cuz BackFire specifically warned you not to make any more of these incoherant 5th grade wannabe horror story threads in the horror forum again. Put them in the General Fiction forum. Preferably just STOP making them 'cause they are awful.

I agree. They are pitiful. Burn them after you use spellcheck.

lol! Yeah, seriously thomasgeorge. I bet you've gotten NO private messages about these dumb monster mash stories. By the way, there are no freakin monsters in this dumb little series.

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Why does Backfire leave this crap open?

seriosly! He'll close down other things, yet he says that this should be in the fiction category. I don't get it.