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Most Exellent, Of Course.

nice... a few spelling mistakes but who really cares about that. i can't wait till you continue

Originally posted by Barker
Most Exellent, Of Course.

Thankies.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
nice... a few spelling mistakes but who really cares about that. i can't wait till you continue

Please point them out. I did kind of glance for spelling, but I'm mostly worried about the grammar and content at this point.

Loving it so far!

Much better than mine. Brilliant.

More up soon.

plssss continue plssss continue plssss continue plssss continue plssss continue

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
More up soon.

Yea! Can't wait!

quite good>I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

drool

Awesome. You Know It is.

For now, updates should be pretty freqent, as the story is coming along nice and quickly for me.

More soon.

that.....was awesome

it is really goood plsss continue.... post more

More will be up soon. I haven't been on because my internet's been poo.

Pleeease Continue

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
More will be up soon. I haven't been on because my internet's been poo.
Damn Internet. disgust

plsss continue

the more you wright the more i like...lol
very good so far

Great, of couse. george

great story

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
the more you wright the more i like...lol
very good so far
Originally posted by Barker
Great, of couse. george
Originally posted by devifire
great story

Thanks... oh, and Barker, might want to check the mirror. Growing a little stubble.

pls continue to post

this book is wickid... write more...post post post post post post post post
post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post post

Originally posted by darthvader_fan
is that really from the book

Huh?

From my story? Yes...

pooooooooost.......lol

omg, its unbelievable, im in such suspense! one thing though- it struck me a little weird how harry just went out right away and said to mr weasley"what am i going to do?"-it doesnt fit with JK's style, know what i mean, not that you arent sick awesome, POST MORE

Originally posted by dagurlhoolived
omg, its unbelievable, im in such suspense! one thing though- it struck me a little weird how harry just went out right away and said to mr weasley"what am i going to do?"-it doesnt fit with JK's style, know what i mean, not that you arent sick awesome, POST MORE

Thank you very much.

Yeah, I know what you mean. That scene's purpose was to show that Harry is becoming an adult--or already has--and is ready for his journey, but he doesn't want to do it alone, but he thinks he has to. I wanted to show Harry and Mr. Weasley's relationship a bit more.

What!!!!! How could it end there????? You're really good! Waiting patiently for the next one. ...patiently... patiently... ...patiently... Hurry up!!!

Won't be long.

Didn't want to swamp anyone with a giant post.

I was planning on updating later tonight, but it may be delayed. I have decided to change a portion of the story ahead of it, but some of the things that happened before it wouldn't make sense with the changes.

If I can, more will be up later tonight. If not, tomorow.

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
Didn't want to swamp anyone with a giant post.
schmoll Swamp me anytime...

*Waits for someone to somehow make a suggestive pun out of that*

Originally posted by Barker
*Waits for someone to somehow make a suggestive pun out of that*

If I was gay, I would.

But, alas, I am not.

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
If I was gay, I would.

But, alas, I am not.
I meant some half-assed n00b that wanders into threads he know's he won't like the material, and intending to harrass people would do it.

Now post Dammit.

since barker's approach doesnt seem to getting you to post, ill beg...pleeeeeeeeeease post, i love your style

Sorry, sorry, sorry. I got kicked off last night because my sister needed to finish a damn project. Now how stupid is that?

Anyway, the next part will be up by later tonight, even if I have to dropkick my sister... and I've done it before.

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
Anyway, the next part will be up by later tonight, even if I have to dropkick my sister... and I've done it before.


It Damn well Better be up.

I'm revising right this moment, actually.

Feeble? mhm

I can, Without Regret, Say that you are the Best Hp Fic Writer on the Forum.

Period.

Originally posted by Barker
Feeble? mhm

I can, Without Regret, Say that you are the Best Hp Fic Writer on the Forum.

Period.

I thought I was being nice when I said feeble.


And... well... I'm honored, to say the least.

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
I thought I was being nice when I said feeble.


And... well... I'm honored, to say the least.
Ouch

But yeah, You really are the Best. Sounds Just like Jk.

i caaaaaaaaant wait, you rock , so jk style, loving it loving it........

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
Barker, might want to check the mirror. Growing a little stubble.
About Ten Years Later....

Stubble tends to happen when waiting five months for a post.


That, and Bump

Originally posted by Barker
About Ten Years Later....

Stubble tends to happen when waiting five months for a post.


That, and Bump

Five months? I resent that.

Last post was 2 days ago. mhm

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
Five months? I resent that.

Last post was 2 days ago. mhm

Make that Four.

nahuh

Sauce....are you actualy J.K if you say no. I dont believe you.

Originally posted by The Ones
Sauce....are you actualy J.K if you say no. I dont believe you.



My lawyer tells me not to answer.

Originally posted by Barker
Make that Four.

nahuh

Sorry, sorry, sorry. The next update may take a bit. I won't have my computer (upgrading it), but I'll try to get it up ASAP.

hope its soon

I just read your story and I love it. I can't wait to read more!

What was wrong with the paper work?
I wanna no more please hurry.. im in love with the series and im trying to find out as much as i can about the next book!
you're writing's so kool, i just wish it was all there already lol
sorry!!
love claire.

awesome

Thanks.

Updates may be delayed. Sorry.

lol post post

I'm in a bit of a pickle right now. I won't be able to write tonight, and tomorow my computer will be ripped from my desperately clinging hands. It needs to be done, however, so I can get more space on my harddrive.

I absolutely hate writing on paper. It's a problem I have, I know, but my writing literally sucks on paper.

I may be able to use my Dad's laptop, but the next update still may not come until the weekend.

My apologies.

dats ok confused

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
See you in a few years.
The Way you Post Updates, Most likely.

Exellent again, Sauce.

Thankie kindly, Barker.

(I don't believe you...)

wow

good work! hope u update often

nice work

Hey i really hope u update often! ur work is cool!

Thank you all, and to lzyjosh, thanks for adding me to your signature. I appreciate it.

Next update shouldn't be long away. It's basically a flashback bit of the last book; Harry has to retell what happened on that awful, awful night.

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
Thank you all, and to lzyjosh, thanks for adding me to your signature. I appreciate it.

Next update shouldn't be long away. It's basically a flashback bit of the last book; Harry has to retell what happened on that awful, awful night.
You've made it onto Lazy Josh's Wall of Fame!
Originally posted by Barker
Great, of couse. george

Im loving it.. good job and keep up the good work

post already... u take forever!

lol wall of fame? haha no problem
hope u will post again when i come back on friday

Next post could be up by tonight, or it could be up in a few days, at max.

please post 2night. ur stories one of the best ive read

really awesome, so glad youre continuing, i hope theres a lot to that little girl, you could do so much with her .....

OH MY GOD!!
YOU ARE AWESOME!!clapping YOU WRITE JUST LIKE J.K. I FEEL LIKE IM READING THE ACTUAL BOOK YOU KNOW!
PLEASE POST SOON, IM LOVING THIS!!!

great story really loving it please post soon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeese

come on, we could flatter you forever, you know youre good, enough already, dont keep us waiting any longer...post!!

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
Next post could be up by tonight, or it could be up in a few days, at max.
omg i jst fod ur stori iz teh bezt in teh forumn no dout u shud go pro lol pwz post i need ur story or u'll die i mean ill dy ok so post when i cum on there shud be mor storee k ok by ur a good bye!!1!!!1

tick tock tick tock the clock is ticking Jumpy

Sorry, everyone. (Except Barker. You just gave me a headache. mhm

But the update may take a bit. Lot of stuff going on, finding it hard to find good time to write.

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
Sorry, everyone. (Except Barker. You just gave me a headache. mhm

But the update may take a bit. Lot of stuff going on, finding it hard to find good time to write.
I see you can take time to make Mods Signatures, But you can't take time to Keep the Hp Crazed 'Aug 2005ers or Laters' at Bay.

That Hurts. mhm

haha maybe sigs dun take up as much time or energy as writing fanfics eh?

hey barker wad u mean 'Aug2005ers or Laters'??

Originally posted by Barker
I see you can take time to make Mods Signatures, But you can't take time to Keep the Hp Crazed 'Aug 2005ers or Laters' at Bay.

That Hurts. mhm

awww. u hert hot sauce's feelings...now look what uhave done!!!!!!!
ahhhh!

If I can find my flash drive, the next bit will be up tonight.

Accio Flash drive!

Originally posted by IcyMag3
Accio Flash drive!

nerd

Please post soon

I suppose I can lie in bed tonight and Fantasise about what might have been..

Originally posted by Barker
I suppose I can lie in bed tonight and Fantasise about what might have been..





I'm sorry. I really am. I thought I would get it up the day before yesterday, and I couldn't. Then I thought I could get it up yesterday, and I couldn't. Now I have to reload Front Page, so hopefully I can get it up tonight.

But I'm not promising anything, as I may get hunted down and killed painfully by an angry mob.

This sucks. Really. I'm ready to update, and Word isn't working right. It won't let me Save, Open, or even edit any documents. It won't even let me copy and friggin paste!

I'm going to see if I can get it working. Sorry, guys.

Exellent, the Pictures really Spiced it up.

very good... write more soon

nooooooooo this mean's I cant copy them

write more plsss

yeah just post soon.

Dude!?!
Your writing skills are ****in' Rad!
How old are you?? It's really Jk style. You got talent man!

Thanks, guys. Hopefully, I'll get Word working soon.

Originally posted by IcyMag3
nooooooooo this mean's I cant copy them

I'm going to post the text version once I can get it. Don't worry.

juz asking, y did u put them in pics? y not juz type them on a post?

Originally posted by IcyMag3
juz asking, y did u put them in pics? y not juz type them on a post?

My story is typed in Word first. No way a story can be typed in posts if you want it to be as good as it can be.

Unfortunately, my Word hasn't been working, as I need to re-load FrontPage, and the guy that fixes my computer has the disk. I'll be getting it tomorow, so the text version shall be up then too.

Originally posted by H. S. 6
Good news. Got the disk I needed, so Word is up and running.
And where the hell is the Bad News?

Originally posted by Barker
And where the hell is the Bad News?

I'm saving it for another excuse.

Now that your word is up and running again, is there any kind of pacing we can expect? Not deadlines, not pressure, just an approximation? Another post every night? Every two or three nights?

Your writing is magnificent, I am really astounded. It may not be the real story, but it sounds pretty close. Except in a couple scenes, Harry doesn't seem as serious as I'd expect. I don't remember exactly where, but I think you said something about pushing Voldemort and the Horcruxes from his mind, whereas I thought he'd be dead-set on them. But maybe he isn't all grown up yet, and doesn't want to face the responsibility. Who knows.

Your style really is astounding though, and so far, the story seems VERY believable. Nothing at all like some of the fan fics I've read. Thank you much for this, and PLEASE post more.

Originally posted by Soljer
Now that your word is up and running again, is there any kind of pacing we can expect? Not deadlines, not pressure, just an approximation? Another post every night? Every two or three nights?

Your writing is magnificent, I am really astounded. It may not be the real story, but it sounds pretty close. Except in a couple scenes, Harry doesn't seem as serious as I'd expect. I don't remember exactly where, but I think you said something about pushing Voldemort and the Horcruxes from his mind, whereas I thought he'd be dead-set on them. But maybe he isn't all grown up yet, and doesn't want to face the responsibility. Who knows.

Your style really is astounding though, and so far, the story seems VERY believable. Nothing at all like some of the fan fics I've read. Thank you much for this, and PLEASE post more.



Thanks very much.

And you hit the nail on the head: I wanted the purpose of my story so far to show that Harry is still in a stage between being an adult and accepting his fate fully and completely, and being a child, attempting in vain to ignore what is set before him.


Sorry, but I can't give an apporximation, besides this: My story will probably never be updated nightly. I apologize for this, but for all my stories--this one no exception--I take my time. I take my time... very slowly, compared to others.

But, alas, if I don't take my time, I wouldn't be happy with my story, so there is some kind of trade-off there.


And again, thanks for the post.


As for the next update, which I can give you a ballpark, possibly tonight, probably tomorow or Saturday. Could be tonight as I'm sick, and have a bit of free time to kill.

Originally posted by H. S. 6
Thanks very much.

And you hit the nail on the head: I wanted the purpose of my story so far to show that Harry is still in a stage between being an adult and accepting his fate fully and completely, and being a child, attempting in vain to ignore what is set before him.


Sorry, but I can't give an apporximation, besides this: My story will probably never be updated nightly. I apologize for this, but for all my stories--this one no exception--I take my time. I take my time... very slowly, compared to others.

But, alas, if I don't take my time, I wouldn't be happy with my story, so there is some kind of trade-off there.


And again, thanks for the post.


As for the next update, which I can give you a ballpark, possibly tonight, probably tomorow or Saturday. Could be tonight as I'm sick, and have a bit of free time to kill.

No worries, I wasn't suggesting you update nightly, I was just giving an example of approximation. Taking your time is a good thing, Im very sure the story wouldnt be as high quality as it is if you didnt take your time, continue to do so.

Thanks for putting in the effort, and I really hope we get to read the next bit tonight!

It's really good.. Im writing my own harry potter version of the seventh book and i understand... it takes a lot of time to write and think. Well good luck and post soon!!!
i give it two thumbs up!!!

not to be a pill becase i love the writing...but her name is nympadora tonks...sorry...

Originally posted by chibiruto
not to be a pill becase i love the writing...but her name is nympadora tonks...sorry...

Thank you, very much.

I knew I got it wrong, but I must have forgotten and never went back to fix it.

Don't ever be shy to tell me about mistakes I make. Sometimes, things like that slip my mind.

droolio

You know, Your story is the only one I bother to Read Throughly.

Originally posted by Barker
droolio

You know, Your story is the only one I bother to Read Throughly.

That's because you are teh sex. naughty



















































There was a line somewhere. It is sitting in a corner, now, crying, as I stepped over it, and then proceeded to rape it... painfully. For that, I am sorry.

*Slaps your story's Ass (naughty) and Pats H.S.06 on the Shoulder*

What's that about the Corner?

Originally posted by Barker
*Slaps your story's Ass (naughty) and Pats H.S.06 on the Shoulder*

What's that about the Corner?

By saying you are teh sex, I not only crossed the line, but I bent it over and raped it... and now it's crying somewhere in a corner.

hmmm...this harry potter is getting very interesting...


Originally posted by H. S. 6
By saying you are teh sex, I not only crossed the line, but I bent it over and raped it... and now it's crying somewhere in a corner.

hmmm...

hurry the **** up, you flaming fairie

keep writing I take Shits faster than you write

you better hurry, nothing else but write write write, i feel like i already have book seven, when i finally get the real one, im going to be like "what, no, this is not what happens!!!" really, your stuff is awesome, just post more quick

hurry up and right hs6, or ill start an angry mob with the rest of us. muahaha

its soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud plz keep it updated cause i like it and if i was stupid i would say that u were jk rowling herself but i know ur not keep up the gud work

Originally posted by mud_blood_princ
hurry the **** up, you flaming fairie

keep writing I take Shits faster than you write


Insert the usual "I'd hit/Hump Sauce's Work if I knew how" Comment here.

I Really Like Your Story. Its as good as j.k.rowlings. I have one i might post on here. its called DKP

hmmm....

I stay away for 5 days and looks what happens to my thread? doh

Originally posted by H. S. 6
I stay away for 5 days and looks what happens to my thread? doh
Sauce!

Might as well add to the Shit pile.....


*Shits*

next time dont stay away for five days

it's awesome! plzzzzzz hurry & continue. ure doing a great job! clapping


(quote)
Sauce!

Might as well add to the Shit pile.....


*Shits*
(unquote)

...nice

blowup no more story plz post more soon i really lyk ur story

*Hump*


















I mean 'Bump'





















(Or do I?)

update please!!!!!!

Oh my god! I've totally disrepected this thread! z0mg!

Well, good news: I've hit a bit of a rock, but I've begun writing again. The next post will see the end of Harry's re-living of that night, and then, like I said to the Bark, the real fun will begin...

I can finally shave my 3 Foot beard!

..

Gred and Forge?

And just because the Steelers won, !

its really gud. even betta than mine. but mines from a different point of view! ur is gr8!!!
lovin it

I just read all. I'll add this to my favourites. WOW! Keep it coming...
1 point: the only thing is that you use American slang which is a bit distracting... stuff like puke. Its nothing major but doesnt sound quite right...

Originally posted by Barker
I can finally shave my 3 Foot beard!

..

Gred and Forge?

And just because the Steelers won, !



Originally posted by dumbledorez.gal
its really gud. even betta than mine. but mines from a different point of view! ur is gr8!!!
lovin it

Thanks.

Originally posted by Knightfall93
I just read all. I'll add this to my favourites. WOW! Keep it coming...
1 point: the only thing is that you use American slang which is a bit distracting... stuff like puke. Its nothing major but doesnt sound quite right...

Damn, I didn't even realize puke was an American slang. disgust

Thanks for the comment. I realize I might not be the best at writing British dialogue, but I can't help it; I'm American.

finally u posted, i was beginning to think u gave up!

Originally posted by silver_stars
finally u posted, i was beginning to think u gave up!

I was beginning to think that myself, actually.

Post more please!

Hurry! Do you actually know whats going to happen or do you just write and work out as you go along?

When will you write next? Have you considered a career as an author?

Not sure when I'll post next. I usually have a long interim between posts, compared to the other stories on here.

Not sure if I want to be an author, straight up, with no other choices. I'd rather find a steady career, and perhaps, one day...

it was sooooo good, you intimidate me its so sick awesome, you must continue QUICK...

HURRY

You'll have to wait a bit, sorry.

Damn you! HURRY OR PAY THE PRICE OF FAILURE, MORTAL IMBECILE!

Dude, it's really good. You should consider becoming an author, if you are not one. But you probably have already thought of that. Yeah, just nice job and keep up the good........ Great work.