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Wow, that's a strong piece... I hope you don't mind me asking, but is it yours? Thanks for sharing

Hi again,

It's good to see a new member sharing their work, but I'd like to let you know that we all have our own, single threads where we post each of our pieces, rather than opening a new thread for each poem. This helps the forum to stay relatively orderly. I hope you don't mind

wow is all i can say really good keep it up

That's cool....I'll keep that in mind next time. Ermm....is there a way to move the two poems in one thread?

Yeah...it's my peice I wrote it back when I was living with my mom in LA...wow...that was about five or six years ago...lol. I'm glad that ya'll liked it

Whisper of Destruction:

See
I see inside
Allas I see
I see your soul
The makings of a virgin god
Were never meant
To withhold.
Allas I see
I see your mind
The whirling thoughts within
The lasing strike
Of our damnation
You were never really Kin.
I knew
You knew
Where we always stood
Outside the door
Upon your ground
The things we saw
We were kept silent
We knew what we had found.
Through stitched lips
We spoke to you
In whipsers in your ear
Our gentle but pained lips
Knew yours
In time
But you were never really here.
The kiss of destruction
The Eyes of a killer
Could see our world of pain
When all was spoken
And when all went silent
We were hushed away
So take our hearts
With your bitter hands
And tuck them in your place
But when your death comes for you
You will remember this face.
~Nehmahati Kerosna (Kala)

((I'll just post my works here under this one ))

I like Whisper of destruction v good

Thank you One of those poems where I have no idea where it came from...lol.

((New poem I wrote two nights ago.))

LITTLE ANTIDOTE:

Right or Wrong
You're always strong
Yet barely even breathing....

Condemned, you fell
It's easy to tell
Pick up the peices to feed them.

TELL ME
The peices fit.
YOU'RE NOTHING
That I can't fix.

It's burning...
But I can hardly even tell...
The perfect little antidote
To your little spell.

Sear the flesh
And harden the eyes
To a world that you can't
COMPROMISE!


PROMISE ME
The world for ashes
EMPTY
Another promise lacking

WHY CAN'T WE
Escape from here
The monster within is only
Feeding your FEARS!

Through stitched lips
And swollen eyes...
For all the years...
Eating nothing but lies...

Coming to call...
Coming to call...
ANGER IS BETTER THAN FEELING NOTHING AT ALL!

~Nehmahati Kerosna (Kala)

This is really some great work man... congrats.