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hpfanatic123456
First of all, those who dont like fantasy stories, get out. Second, id like ur critiscism. This is a story i write in my spare, time, so dont judge it too harshly.... ok? Read and enjoy!

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hpfanatic123456
Thanks for the criticism! I'll have to fix it so I'll post more tonight!

hpfanatic123456
okay im scrapping this story and starting it over under a different name

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