Harry Potter 7...my style
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I have relitively goten bored so im going to start my own story. I have not yet come up with a name, because I only do it when i finish. So This is the first FanFic ive made, so be patient. I hope to update when ever possible and for my readers to enjoy it. Thanx
Chapter 1, Part 1
It was a chilling night in the residence of the Dursley’s. Even in the summer there is a nice gentle breeze that come and goes, but not tonight. There was an odd presence that only few can depict. A feeling of nothing good or nice can survive.
All was asleep on Private Drive except for one person. Harry Potter was still awake, looking out the window, and thinking. He hadn’t been able to sleep with this presence in the air. Dementors, he thought; Dementors were foul creatures that suck all the happiness out of a place. He had been attacked by them two years previously.
Harry had been writing to Ron and Hermione, spilling his thoughts into them. He still was contemplating whether he was going to Hogwarts for his final year. There where his pros and cons, but how was he going to destroy all of the Horcruxes when he has his studies. Harry needed Hedwig back so he could send the letters. Hedwig was out hunting.
He looked at his watch and noticed that it was 11:58 PM. It was two minutes until his seventeenth birthday. He would now be of age and able to perform magic. He would have to go take an Apparation Exam, so he could legally Apparate. Harry heard a tap at the window and looked over to see Hedwig looking chilled outside. Harry opened up the window and Hedwig Flew in with a dead mouse in her beak. Harry was just about to close the window when something caught his eyes. It looked like a puff ball flying around. He soon recognized it was Pig, Ron’s owl. Pig Flew right into Harry and suddenly dropped to the floor. Pig looked absolutely exhausted.
Harry noticed a thick envelope tied to Pig’s ankle. Harry stooped down to untie it from the tired owls leg. Harry hurriedly opened the envelope and something fell from a thick letter.
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Chapter 1 Part 2
Harry didn’t notice that something fell, so he sat down on his bed. There was a letter was from the Ministry of Magic, Ron, and Hermione. Harry tossed the Ministry of Magic one aside, wanting to read that later, and opened Ron’s letter. It said:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! How are you? Are you surviving the muggles? Hey when are you coming to the Burrow? Next week is the wedding and your invited. Well hope you can come and stay. Hermione is already here and missing you. Mum say that your welcome to come and stay for the rest of the summer. So send Pig back when he is feeling better. I’ve been hearing that Dementors have been hanging around in Britain. So I’ll talk to you later.
Harry set the letter down and picked up Hermione’s.
Oh, Happy Birthday Harry!!! You’re now of age. Congratulations! Now you can go and take the Apparation Exam and perform magic. I’m so happy for you. Ron still hasn’t retaken the exam, so he’s willing to take it with you. Oh I hope that you’ll spend the rest of the summer with us. Next week is the wedding. I hope that you’ll be able to make it. Well, I will hopefully see you before summer ends.
Harry felt his cheeks go warm when he finished reading the letter. He set down the letter to look at what the Ministry had sent him. He really didn’t want to read what it had to say but she picked up the thick letter any ways. Harry skimmed through it and all it had was a congratulations about being of age, and the laws that would be in place and enforced, now that it was legal to perform magic.
Harry felt the heaviness of his eyelids and decided to go to sleep. He figured that he would make up his mind of what he was to do with his future tomorrow. He gave Hedwig and Pig an owl treat each and took off his glasses and fell asleep.
It's good, your posts needs to be lenghtier although i keep getting told the same thing so... u don't need to take my advice .... ;^)
it's just that i've been busy with school... so i'll post asap
good!!! i like it keep up the with the story
hey good work *thumbs up*
I'm glad ur grammar and spelling are good too
Thanks guys... It might be a while before i post... i hate essays and studying for finals...
exams in january? mine's in may...anyway gd luck & i hope u will continue posting afterwards
i like it keep it up
Chapter 2 Part One
Harry found himself around in a graveyard. He felt a similarity somehow, like he has been there before. He was stumbling across some tombstones. Harry tripped over a tree root and stumbled to the ground. His glasses lay askew on the ground. He got up, picked up his glasses, and wiped the dew off of them. As he put on his glasses, he saw a strange mist forming around him. Harry looked around and noticed two tombstones in front of him. He tried to read what they say, but at that same instant, his scar seared with pain.
Harry awoke abruptly with sweat dripping down his face. His scar felt as though his head just had been branded. I rubbed it to take the pain away, but found no relief. He looked at the clock, it was 1: 30 P.M. Harry jumped up quickly, realizing that he had been asleep for thirteen hours. He changed his clothes and went into the bathroom. He tried to comb his hair, but it kept on popping up. He put the comb down.
Harry looked in the mirror and noticed something behind him. He saw red glowing eyes and nostrils like slits. His heart stopped beating for a split second and his body froze with fear. He spun around and saw nothing. He rushed out of the bathroom, and into his room. He picked up his wand, yet nothing. Maybe it was an after effect from the dream? Harry didn’t know.
A couple of hours later, Harry had packed all of his stuff into his trunk, cleaned out hedwigs cage of droppings. He worked so hard, that at the very end, he finally realized that he could do magic now. That made him angry.
2 B continued
I'll post more sooner or later... thanks for the support
hey your story is really good
post more soon
me likey. when ya gonna post again? i am sooo bored and really want to read some more of this!!!
there is more to come i have written out like to chapter 6... but im sick... cough cough.. and having so personal issues i have to deal with... so i will get some more done asap!!!!
thanx for the support
this is some story, its really gr8 its so good, plz write more soon,
im new here, well not exactly, iv read some other h/p fics but havnt really been able to comment on them cause i didnt no how to register on dis thing, i started to read from kmc just last christmas,
well its gr8
keep up da good work
by da way, how do u write ur own stories on here?
you start a topic in the area you want to write
and update it buy posting comments
that's how i do it
0o0o0o0ohhh! I like it. :smile: please resume to the story soon!
I understand if u have tests and lots of essays due soon. I have those CTBS test things next week, so I might not be on much.
please keep writing...your story is great!
I like it a lot too!! please DO continue soon please
Hey ya'll i have been busy with school work and such, but i have managd to write a bit. I know it's not much, but i am working hard.
Harry was packing to leave Private Drive, never to return. He thought he had no reason to return, since there was no love in this house towards him. He didn’t know where to go. He had been planning to visit his mother and father’s graves, but he made a promise to attend Bill and Fluer’s wedding. He sat down to plan on what he was going to do. If he were going to the Weasley’s, he would have to send an owl telling them. This would be the best plan of action. Harry took the spare parchment that was on his desk, sat down and began to write.
Hedwig was sleeping in her cage when Harry disturbed her. She stuck out her leg and accepted the letter.
“Take his to Ron immediately,” Harry whispered. Hedwig took off through the open window. All the sudden, Pig started hooting excitedly and flapping his wings. Harry saw something glint from the inside of his wing. He walked over to him and calmed him down.
keep goin plz your story is great
i love cliff hangers plz write more its really good
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yea its great
I have written....yeah....hope you enjoy!!!!
Harry stretched out Pig’s wing and say that it was a shard of glass. Harry decided to wrap the wing to keep the piece of glass from moving any more. “When did you get this?” he asked Pig, but all that was responded was a small hoot.
Harry was getting hungry, for he hadn’t eaten breakfast or even lunch. It was nearly five o’clock when Harry decided to go down into the kitchen. He crept down the stairs and silently slid into the kitchen. Petunia was sitting at the dining table, staring out the window. She had a strange look on her face, like she was hurt by something. Harry opened the fridge as quietly as possible but the little squeak was heard but Petunia.
“There’s some leftovers in a container on the second shelf if you’re hungry,” she said. Harry noticed that her voice was shaky. He looked over to her and she was now facing him. “When ever I see you, you remind me of your wretched father, but when I look into your eyes, I can see the calmness of your mother. I miss her, I really do, even know I hated her after all the attention she got from our parents.” A tear rolled down her cheek. I don’t know why I hated her boyfriend so much. He would come over sometimes during the summer holidays. When he was around, I felt like an old rag doll thrown in a corner. She would never talk to me when he was around. I guess that’s why I treated you the way I have been the past sixteen years. All of the anger I had towards him was focused on you, because you look like a mirror image of him.” Petunia’s eyes were swollen and puffy from all the tears. “I’m so sorry about what has happened and that I haven’t been a better aunt. You’re my only nephew, I should be grateful.”
Harry lost his appetite, turned around and left the kitchen.
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HEY!!!!!! j/p good post, so when are you going to post????
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great post. i love your story!
Go on with the story I really like it so far. Please write some more.I can't wait until chapter three.Thw suspense is killing me!I give it a
Harry stayed in his room the rest of the day. At 11:00 p.m., Harry regained his appetite, and it had come back with reinforcements. Harry opened the door and stood there silently trying to hear if there was any life in the house, He figured that everyone was asleep, and walked down the stairs, He entered the kitchen and turned on the stove light.
Harry felt a slight chill run down his spine making the hairs on his neck stand up. He looked around and noticed something rustle in a dark corner of the kitchen. Harry took his wand from his back pocket and pointed it at the unknown creature. All the sudden there was a loud shriek and yelp.
“Oh! Please don’t hurt Dobby, Harry Potter sir. Dobby only came to give Harry Potter an urgent message.” Harry, relieved that it was only Dobby, lowered his wand.
“What is it Dobby?” Harry whispered, not wanting to awaken anyone.
“Harry Potter sir, Dobby has been sent from McGonagall! She say’s Harry Potter isn’t safe where he resides now. He must leave immediately.
“Why do I have to leave now?” Harry said in a stern voice. “Is someone after me?”
“All that was said was that Who-Must-Not-Be-Named’s followers are coming, they know that Harry Potter is seventeen!” Dobby shivered out. Harry then remembered what was said before he laft last year. The protection that love had given Harry, would be broken, along with other age old spells. ‘As long as you can call this home, Harry, then it will protect you.’ Dumbledore had said this.
“Fine Dobby, I’ll leave as soon as possible, but how will I get to the Burrow when I’m not allowed to Apparation legally?”
“Dobby can take Harry Potter there.” said Dobby and poofed out of sight and reappeared by Harry’s side. Of course, Harry thought, Side Apparation. “Harry Potter must hurry.” Harry rushed upstairs and collected his possessions and put Pig into Hedwig’s cage. Harry jotted down a quick note fot his aunt.
I am no longer safe to stay here, and I suggest you do the same. Lord Voldemort’s followers are aafter me. Even after the fact of all the years you have treated me like a piece of dirt, you don’t deserve the same fate as my parents. I may never see you again, so I wish you all a good life, or what’s left of it. Thanks for letting be be protected by the love in this house.
Harry took the note downstairs and put it on the kitchen counter. He ran back upstairs and summoned Dobby. He now had the Burrow and what awaited him there was clear in his mind. He grabbed his trunk and Pig and held onto Dobby. Harry’s stomach felt as though it was spinning in a blender, he wasn’t used to the feeling of Apparation at all.
very good post!!!and also as a reminder about apparation it feels as if ur being sucked through a rubber tube
very good but id like to point out that Petunia doesnt like Harry one single bit and also despised her sister.
but other then that its really gr8 and cant wait for the next part.
yes i know that in the other books that petunia was mean to harry, but it explains that the hatred that she felt toward him is originally from harry's father...so like yea...anyways....
hope to update soon!!!
I like the CLIFFHANGERS!!!
woot!! school is out for me so hopefully i willed get kicked into writing again
sry it's been a while.. been so hectic trying to finad a job and finals and essays!!!
now im finished for two months!
Sorry you guys for like not posting in like a freaking year.. well not that long.. but long enough... i had an okay summer and i totally lost a lot of stuff... which really sucked... oh well. but I have taken what i have writen from here and gettign ready to start chapter 4. I know that these chapters are kinda short... but i have been really really really busy with being a junior, and yet again school drama(the bad kind) but tis all good..hopefully ill get some replies and ill but up the next section up soon
i need to read and brainstorm,... or as pooh says.... think think think....
Miss S Malfoy
Yeah Thats Really good and I disagree it needs to be longer at all mine are all really short chapters there like less than 15 lines each. mine is Called Luna and its A DM/LL shipper
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