love poems

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bloody bows1
will someone post a few love poems here to get because i am not talented enough to write a true love poem thank you. p.s. this is my attempt at a love poem

love is something the blind can see
love is something the deaf can hear

Coldfire
Well it's a good start, now just continue on with it happy

leana marie
damn you know, just this morning i gave the library back the love poem book i had been reading!

Victor Von Doom
Originally posted by bloody bows1
will someone post a few love poems here to get because i am not talented enough to write a true love poem thank you. p.s. this is my attempt at a love poem

love is something the blind can see
love is something the deaf can hear

If it was about talent the forum would be empty.

That was a good idea. As Coldfire said, you could go on with it, although I guess as it stands it would qualify as an imagist poem.

BroggoGF
K!
Love is something I don't have.
Love is something I can't have.
I am blind but can see the darkness in my own heart you see.
Once a flower now a beast
A wingless angel fallen asleep
I deny my heart as my wings are dipped and burned into the firey sea
I don't have this thing called love for I am wingless like the dove....

Hows that for you!

leana marie
with love


the heart, beating with love,
feels a tender warmth,
like sitting 'neath the hearth,
bye the glowing embers,
of passionate fire,

anyway...

Coldfire
Originally posted by Victor Von Doom
If it was about talent the forum would be empty.

That was a good idea. As Coldfire said, you could go on with it, although I guess as it stands it would qualify as an imagist poem.
lol yeah. This is a place to help improve the writing ability of anyone who wants to improve happy

Yeah I guess it could be, but I think it has great potential to be a longer poem yes

bloody bows1
sweet those poems are awesome and lovely you gave me an idea why dont i just go chedck out a love poem book

Ladyluck
Originally posted by bloody bows1
will someone post a few love poems here to get because i am not talented enough to write a true love poem thank you. p.s. this is my attempt at a love poem

love is something the blind can see
love is something the deaf can hear
That poem would be nice if you had actually come up with it yourself.

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ladyluck
That poem would be nice if you had actually come up with it yourself.
Uh oh... Quite the predicament now lol

Ladyluck
Originally posted by Coldfire
Uh oh... Quite the predicament now lol

Quite the predicament indeed. hmm stick out tongue

Coldfire
Originally posted by Ladyluck
Quite the predicament indeed. hmm stick out tongue
haha stuff like this makes me wonder just how much of the stuff I've read is actually the person's who posted it stick out tongue

Ladyluck
Originally posted by Coldfire
haha stuff like this makes me wonder just how much of the stuff I've read is actually the person's who posted it stick out tongue
I know. Anyone could post anything anybody's written. Woah. messed

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