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Ellie fingered her blaster. Its been 3 months sice she first joined the rebellion. Heck, they haven't even give me an assignment. But what would I expect? Ive only been 3 months with them. But, I'm basically all around from being a medic to a front liner in battles. I'm pre- A knock disrupted Ellie's Thoughts. It opened, Ellie pointed her blaster towards it.
"Put her down Ellie, its only me." Lieuttenant Joel said. SOrry to interrupt your quiet time my friend, but i got orders from the high. we're to go to Gallimoore and fetch the new, smuggled x-wing parts for our squadron."
Wow! my boring day just turned around."But sir, isn';t Gallimoore have that tree that releases poisonous pollen? Heck, we'll be going there?"
Joel nodded. "We know that. That's why we are making the pick-ups there, cause there is very little chance that the Empire would try to find it there. besides, we have you."
"ME?' What is this joke?
"You come in as a medic. And also, you'll be helping us get the smuggled parts. We're only few going there you know, and everyone has to work. So, i'll get busy... "So, When'll we leave?Also, who would provide the serum and whatever else?"
"That I'll arranged. We'll be going tomorrow." Joel tapped her shoulder lightly and left.

Okay, honest truth. i thought it was a pretty decent beginning. Could have been stronger, but it was a good begining. some advice, more detail could be used. and a different beginning could be helpful.

if you have a plot made already, could you send me it? I could try to help you make up a title name for you.

it's looking good so far, and i hope their's going to be more soon.

thanks very much, um, i'll send you one as soon as i write it down.

okay, i'll be looking foward to it.

It was a trifle tough to read.

I believe it switched form first person to 3rd person Narrative, without letting us know.

the italics was the main character thinking to herself.

yep, she's right...

*coughs* he

oh......................................... I'm so 100% sorry..................


Im lame at guessing genders............

Anyway:

Ellie almost vomited. Good thing she bought trinolux for it. She hates flying, even though she's very good at it. heck, i hate this.
"We're touching down in a few moments. every one get ready." a voice over the speakers announced. Ellie sighed now that's better. oh no, did he say touch down? that's so nauseating! Sithspawn!
Ellie closed her eyes and did her best to keep it down.

After touch down....
"Glad that was done!!!"
Joel looked at her. "Sorry Ellie, i forgot you hate flying. did you bring trinolux?"
"Yeah, thank goodness i did."
Joel laughed. "oh, and by the way, i haven't introduced you to the crew... this is Marriette." Joel pointed to a female beside him. Next, he walked toward a bothan. "He's Aldrek." next, joel walked to a male sitting under a tree. "He's Lance."
"Hi, my name's Ellie." Ellie waved then placed her hand down. heck, i sound like a preschooler.
Marriette and Aldrek waved back. Lance acted like he didn't even see her. Heck, he's like, cold-blooded! Ellie thought. Would i like him? Naaaaaaaaaaaah. i dont think so...
"So guys, lets move. May the force be with us."

^this is very "long"
sorry, but i'm pretty busy so tidbit by tidbit. Lordzeb, waitin for your corrections!!!

don't be sorry jaeh. no hard feelings at all, everyone makes that mistake...that's why i changed from my old name.

hehehe...only found one mistake. thank goodness. it does mistakes, but doesn't really fit.

btw, if it'll be easier for you, you can pm me what you have typed, i can read what you have, correct the mistakes beforehand, and you can post it.

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Ellie watched over Lance's shoulder as he connected a wire to another, putting a clamp over both pieces, and then connecting them to a power charge, and he turned on a series of connected data pads, scopes, and spare droid parts. the circuitry blew up. Lance threw the thing in bitter frustration.

"You see, you're doing it all wrong." Ellie said as she picked up the device and handing it back to Lance kindly. Lance took it reluctantly and fiddled with it again.

"You're making a scoping device aren't you? Here, get that red wire and connect this to a jack and lead it to the I/O port here. Then adjust - "

"Okay, okay, will you shut up? I'm the one working here..."
Lance got up from the ground and went to his pack under a nearby tree. He rummaged through it with irritation before turning to Ellie. "Don't touch anything!" he snapped at ellie.

Ellie pouted and glanced at him. "You just couldn't admit I'm right..."

She looked at the unfinished device and pulled it to herself. She tinkered with it, until it was finished. Pressing a button, the device jumped to life. Quickly she turned it off, as lance walked towards her, carrying a tool kit. It was strange how she had fixed it so quickly, and how Lance couldn't fix it so easily. It was quite amazing indeed, seeing how she never really fixed something before, though it wasn't that complex. Lance made it seem so though.

When Lance came over to where she was, he looked at the device, and seeing it fixed, he stared at Ellie with a foul look. She looked back at him, and rolled her eyes. Lance gave his attention back to the device and turned it on. It worked, just like it had worked for Ellie, and the scopes were clear.

He cleared his throat, trying to find the words for what he wanted to say. He didn't want to admit defeat, nor did he want to be cruel to her. He then spoke slowly, choosing what he wanted to say carefully. "So, what did you do?"

Ellie smirked a little when he asked her what she had done to fix the mechanism. It gave her great pride that she had proven Lance wrong. "Just, what i told you to..."
"Don't get too cocky." Lance said. "It isn't that impressive, and nor do I find it too good to show off skills that a woman shouldn't know."

Ellie sighed irritably. Marriette sat beside her and whispered lowly, "Don't pay any attention to him. he's really like that."

Ellie was about to say something when bursts of plasma shot through. Fear was going through Ellie, since she didn't know what was going on, nor did she know where it was coming from, or who was shooting the plasma. She looked at Marriette with a worried expression.

"Ambush!" Aldrek shouted, running towards a big rock for cover.

Ellie and Marriette knew what to do even before Aldrek said ambush. They both were already on the ground, protecting themselves. Ellie hesitantly looked up over at Lance, who wasn't paying attention to what was going on. Swearing under her breath, she hissed at Lance to take cover, before he was killed.

Thanks to Lordzeb for the editing!

gotta suggestion. why'd don't you edit them all for me lordzeb when they're done? then i'll repost them here. thanks for the first edited edition by the way...

Lance finally came to his senses and ran for cover. He hid behind a tree and pulled out his blaster. Firing a couple of random shots, Lance leaned down and pulled Ellie up as she crawled towards his tree for cover.

Ellie got up slowly, looking around, making sure no more shots were coming her way, before she whispered.. "Who are they?" She then suddenly noticed a flash of white from afar. "Empire? but i thought..."

"We said the Empire had very little chance to look for us here, but that didn't mean that they couldn't find us here." Lance muttered, doing his shoot and hide pattern. surprisingly, the random shots were hitting someone or something.

Ellie took out her blaster out and fired also, killing a couple of Stormtroopers. Remarkably, the shots were accurate even though they weren't as precise as she would have liked them to be. Ellie felt a quick sense of danger and pushed Lance down. It was a tinglingn sensation flowing through her, telling her that something was going to happen. She looked to the right and saw a Trooper, who made his way towards them, re-loading his plaster with a stun bolt.

She shot him by the throat. armor was no use no use to him.... she thought, laughing quietly to herself as she continued shooting. She risked a glance to the left and saw the stun bolt fired earlier.

Lance took a fierce look at Ellie. "why'd you push me?" he asked roughly, not liking the fact that Ellie was taking charge of the situation.

"A Trooper made his way here, and tried to knock us out." Ellie indicated to the Trooper she just shot.

Lance turned around angrily. He hated it when someone seemed better than he, someone who worked hard to get this far, where people like Ellie barely did anything, and everything was handed down to her, or so it seemed to him. All of a sudden all the shooting stopped, as if nothing happened at all, as if they were doing what they were doing before the Stormtroopers had started to fire at them. Ellie risked another glance, and saw about twenty-five storm troopers heading their way. Five were already dead, including one, whom she had shot.

A voice through her comlink had stated that he'll distract them. Ellie looked around and saw Joel run, followed by five or six troopers. She thought angrily to herself, out of fear, and frustration. What the hell is he doing?!?!

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I liked it but can any of you help with mine (Starcraft vs. Star Wars: Battle Scouts)?

i wouldn't mind helping you twilight

i remember this thread... my first Star WArs fan fic... hmm... anyway i totally forgot to put the ending, so here it is..

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Out of anger, Ellie picked up her blaster and reloaded it. She motioned to Aldrek to throw her some thermal-detonators, those which are near him. Darn it! Why’d he need to do that?!?! Ellie turned one on, and threw it into the direction of the remaining troopers. About 5 troopers fell, sprawling lifeless on the forest floor. Heck, why did the Empire pick up soldiers so dumb, Ellie thought as she moved quickly to follow Joel. But that is a good thing. If these guys were so smart, I’d be dead right now. She crept behind a tree, just in time to flag into a running trooper. Ellie got her knife and stabbed the soldier in the throat, blood splattering over the white armor. She looked behind her and saw that her friends dealing with the remaining Stormtroopers.

As she followed Joel and his followers through the forest, Ellie turned and threw a detonator at the running troopers following Joel. Two of them were killed, leaving 3 behind. One stayed to find Ellie; the two others still followed Joel. He can take care of those two. Ellie thought. Joel could do it. Ellie crept behind the Stormtrooper and killed him silently with her knife. She heard two blaster shots. She looked up just in time to see the two remaining Stormtroopers down.

Joel ran to her. “Are you ok?” He asked.

“Are you nuts?!” Ellie shouted at him. She was fuming at him, partly because he did that stupid thing and partly because of making her worry. “You were almost killed!”

Joel just laughed. “I forgot you’re just a new one. Ask them. I do it almost all the time and always end up alive.”

“Yes, but one day your sithspawn luck will run out you idiot!”

Joel showed a lopsided grin. Ellie just pouted and shook her head. He’s a sadist!! Doesn’t he know people worry about him?! He’s not only endangering the mission, he’s doing stupid things that make me worry!! Absurdity kills!! Uh!!!! Ellie shivered in anger as she returned to camp. Joel is already giving orders.

“We need to move out people. They already know where our camp is. By the way, the shipment would arrive sooner or later. But, home base says shipment’ll arrive quick. And also, try to expect company. They already know we are here.” Joel emphasized.

Ellie checked the crew for wounds. Aldrek’s shoulder was hit by a blaster shot, and Joel’s arm got burned by a plasma bolt. Lance’s foot was bleeding because of debris that hit it which is caused by a thermal-detonator’s explosion caused. Marriette was otherwise unharmed.

As they were packing, Lance finally got past his mood swing. “Hey Ellie…”

“What??” Ellie answered, definitely bugged. She’s really concentrating on what she’s doing right now.

“I- well um, I-” Lance swallowed hard. “Look, I’m not going to repeat this again. So please listen carefully. I – I’m sorry for my behavior. We are on the same team, on the same mission. We need to cooperate. And… I am grateful for what you’ve done for me. You saved me from the trooper who almost pumped into me a stun bolt. You also really did a neat handiwork on that scope system. We really need that device to detect enemies. I just haven’t prepared it yet when the stormtroopers came. The device you worked on is doing great. Really!”

Ellie pretend to not hear him, but she is truly touched with the apology. Oh… he sounds so cute, innocent and adorable! Ellie giggled as she thought to herself. She decided to return the kind words. “It’s ok. No need to bother with it.”
Lance grinned. “I never do that apology thing. It’s too… formal and serious. Oh, and one more thing, if my temper explodes again, it’s just that I’m really like that. I have mood swings.”

“Yes I have noticed.” Ellie said quietly. “Hey, pack your things and get that scoping device ready. We might need it.”

Lance nodded and got up to finish packing. The team moved to another part of the jungle, farther from the pick-up place. Ellie was puzzled, and resolved to ask Joel about this.

“Lieutenant, why did we move farther away from the rendezvous point? How could we pick up those parts??” Ellie questioned.

“We couldn’t lead the Empire to the pick-up place, can’t we?”

Ellie nodded. “I see your point sir.”

Ellie got back to preparing her things while talking to Marriette. “So, how long have you both been in the rebellion?”

“About, um, two years I guess. I’ve been here since I was 15. I ran away from home because mom and dad are too afraid to oppose the empire. Don’t get them wrong, they hate the empire too, but-“

“They say that they couldn’t do anything about them right now because the Imp’s might do something to ‘em.” Ellie sighed. “Yup, mine too.”

Marriette grinned. “Then welcome to the club kid!” They both laughed. “How old are you anyway?”

“Just turned 15.” Ellie replied. “Well, gotta follow ‘em. Don’t wanna be left behind.”

Marriette laughed. The two followed after the guys, chatting about life and stuff when they came across a transport of some kind. “What could that be?” Marriette whispered to Ellie, who suddenly kept quiet.

“A vehicle. Why are there many – wait a second, that’s a slavery transpo. There are slavers here...?” Ellie realized. She saw a bunch of wookies, each chained to each other, and a group of troopers guarding them. “Heck, they ship those from here. They hide them here! They use those wookies as workers, don’t they? We gotta get outta here. I bet there are many Imp’s are guarding ‘em.”

Marriette’s eyes widened and seemed not paying attention to what Ellie just said. “We got to help them Ellie!!”

“What?!”

“We just, got to!” Marriette went forward about two steps towards the vehicle when Joel caught her arm.

“What are you doing?!” Joel demanded.

“I want to help those poor creatures Joel!” Marriette pleaded. “They’re about to be shipped.”

Joel shook his head. She always has been how do I put this, helpful. She really has a soft heart. “Oh alright…” Let’s do this suicidal thing. He didn’t say.

Marriette smiled and got hold of her blaster. Ellie shook her head and re-loaded her blaster pistol and got hold of a thermal-detonator. Here we go again… She said to herself. She’s actually excited about this. Even though she hates killing, she loves action.

Joel called Lance and Aldrek, telling them of the plan. “WHAT?!” Lance shouted.

Joel shushed him. “Heck Lance! Do you want them to hear us!?”

Lance gritted his teeth. Aldrek however, just nodded his head in agreement.

Marriette told them that she and Ellie will handle the freeing of the wookies while the guys will lure the stormtroopers away.

“I knew we’d get the hard part.” Aldrek said.

Marriette shrugged. “I know. But don’t worry. Once we released those wookies, I’m sure they’ll help. I’m sure we’ll go home ship full; because I’m sure they’ll think of this as a life debt.”

“I thought so. So we’ll need to use those transports…” Ellie said.

“Uh-huh…” Marriette nodded.

Ellie shook her head. “Come on… Let’s get this over with…”


* * *

Ellie crept to the transport. She held her blaster firmly. She pulled her knife from its sheath, peeked around the transport and saw about 3 troopers guarding. Crawling to them silently, she tripped one and sliced its throat; the other troopers noticed her and drew their blasters. But they weren’t quick enough, Ellie slit off all their throats first. She called Marriette, who stealthily ran to her.

Ellie watched as the guys threw a thermal detonator by the vehicle. About ten Stormtroopers followed them. Huh, they’ll never learn not to underestimate those guys…. She thought. She took the lead towards the control room and signaled Marriette to follow her. They both shot the two troopers in there and took control of the vehicle. Marriette told Ellie to watch the panels to see if there are additional troopers coming. She slipped on to Ellie’s head a com-link headset.

“Hey, call if there’s trouble.” She said. Marriette set out to find the trooper who controls the chains of the wookies.

“Sith! I hate being left behind doing nothing.” Ellie complained to herself quietly. “I want to do something, but they treat me as if I’m a newbie that can’t do anything.” She cursed under her breath. She smirked. She has a plan, even though it’s not fool-proof, it’s worth a try…

Ellie looked at the panels. Nobody’s there. She got her blaster. She checked again, and saw two troopers running towards the control room. “I bet Joel’s team dispatched the other 8, and these guys are back to call headquarters and collect others.” She has the knack for guessing things, and it turns out, she’s right. The two Stormtroopers jiggled the switches, and when it didn’t open, they blasted the thing. The door opened, and Ellie was nowhere in sight. The troopers seemed a bit puzzled for a moment, their companions not around. Ellie was hiding behind junk, and found the bodies of the two troopers whom they killed earlier. “It’s now or never,” she thought, “If they find those bodies, I’m toast.”

Ellie shot the two behind their backs. “Wow, these guys really suck at this.” She said. “I wish they didn’t send the transmission, or we’re doomed.” But, when she checked, the transmission was a success. “Oh blast!”

She studied Marriette on a screen. “For a soft hearted gal, she kicks butts.” Ellie just saw Marriette kick a trooper and shot him, and retrieving the remote, she released the wookies. “It can’t be that easy…” She thought. Ellie ran outside, and spotted a new battalion of troopers making their way. “By the Force! The whitehats never seem to run out!”

Ellie gritted her teeth, and made her way to Marriette. “They’re coming Marriette! Let’s go! Load everyone in the transpo! They’re too many, even with the wookies around!” Marriette nodded, reassured to the wookies that they’re safe with them, and loaded everyone in the vehicle, and jumped in themselves. “I guess, we should, floor it or else we’ll be sitting ducks.”

Marriette agreed. She was on the wheel, and drove. She headed to where the rendezvous point is. “Hey, we need to head over to a stop over, there in the clearing.” Ellie pointed out.

“Why?” Marriette struggled at the wheel. “What for??”

“Well, let’s just say that we have someone and something to collect.”

“What?”

Ellie rolled her eyes. “Just do it Mar!”

Marriette steered sharply and headed towards the clearing. “Here! Ya happy?”

“Yep.” The two saw Joel, Aldrek, and Lance. And the plane that dropped the parts off. “Told ya we should go here…”

“Ok... You win…” Marriette said. Just got aboard when tons of yellow stuff came falling right out of the sky.

Ellie shook her head worryingly. “Oh no… The pollen.” She faced the passengers. “Guys, we’re in a major problem here.”

“Why, what is it?” Joel asked. He was being thanked by the wookies, more like being hugged to death by some. “Ok, ok guys. We get the picture. Can you please just stop now?”

Ellie laughed for a moment. “Looks like they like you Lt. Joel.”

“Stop the formalities Ellie. And what’s that you’re telling me?”

“Pollen. They’re falling right outta the trees. We gotta get outta here, fast, and we mustn’t inhale, or come in contact with those things.” Ellie said. “They’re poisonous. Ya all heard that? And oh, I remember spotting a ship-of-sorts in that clearing.” She pointed towards a patch of sunlight.

Marriette nodded. “Heading that way. You guys back there hold on!” Marriette drove smoothly, well, as smooth as possible, and drove straight into the clearing, straight into 10 clustered troopers.

“Mar look out!” Ellie shouted. Marriette tried to move out of the way, but no use. She tried turning to the left, but the vehicle didn’t completely turn. It just skidded and hit the Stormtroopers dead.

Marriette laughed. “Well, at least now troopers are the least of our problems.” Marriette was about to step out when Ellie stopped her. “No. It’s too dangerous. You can’t come in contact with those things.”

“But – Ok, so how do you propose we get to that ship?” Marriette pointed towards a large starcruiser used to transport the wookies.

“One person should be enough to go there and open the cargo hold. Then, we should be able to drive in.”

Marriette rolled her eyes. “So, how does someone get there if you said we can’t get in contact with those pollen thingy?”

Ellie smirked. “You just gotta run fast, get a stormtrooper suit from one of those dead guys, come back to this vehicle, and dress someone up. The armor of the white hats are enough to protect someone. Then, you will be free to kill those guys inside and hijack the cruiser, then do as planned.” Ellie looked at the passengers behind them. “Any volunteers?”

Marriette smiled sheepishly. “I’m backing out. I can’t run that fast.”

Ellie smiled. “Anyone else? Or else I’d go for it.”

Lance sounded out. “I’ll do it. I’m the fastest runner here. And besides, you’re the only person trained as a med person here El, -“

“It’s called medic Lance.” Ellie pointed out.

Lance rolled his eyes. He hates it when he’s interrupted. “Yeah, yeah whatever doc. Anyway, you can’t go coz no one would treat you if you do go El. So, I’m thinking, I’d go, then bring back what I need to bring back, then Joel could dress up, and take the ship, and do as planned. Well, Marriette would be here to drive this thing in. Then we’ll all get into our –“

“We get the pic Lance. So, let’s do it?” Aldrek said, clearly bored.

Ellie shook her head. “Wait a sec guys. Lance, can you do that in record time?”

“It’ll be easy. Like winning a race.”

Ellie rolled her eyes. He is so full of himself. Ellie sighed.

“Ok, its settled guys.” Joel said. “So Lance, get ready. We’re opening the vehicle.”

The wookies opened the van up, and Lance ran through the field, all the while holding his breath. After a while, it was clear the pollen is already affecting Lance. He is slowing and with great effort pulled a dead trooper in. Lance threw the guy in, and fell on the floor. The wookies pulled him in and closed the doors. Ellie jumped out of her chair and started digging in her bag for the serum. Finally getting the automatic syringe gun, she loaded it and punched directly in Lance’s neck.

“Joel! Hey! Go already!” Ellie shouted. “I’ll take care of this guy!”

Joel put on the uniform and ran out to the cruiser. Ellie almost started to panic when Lance didn’t wake up. “For the galaxy’s sake Lance wake up!”

Lance coughed, and a little bit of color crept into his cheeks. “Hey, so, did I do well or what?” He smiled, and tried to stand up.

“Don’t you dare try to Lance! You scared us! You scared me!” Ellie raised a brow. Lance looked at the x-wing parts they collected.

“Well, when are we going? I don’t feel so well.” Lance said.

Ellie shrugged. “It depends if Joel can make it.”

The door of the cargo hold opened up. Joel removed his helmet, and waved. He placed his helmet back again and signaled again.

“Marriette, lets go.” Aldrek shouted from the back.

Ellie looked at Marriette. She was staring at something. Ellie turned her head, and saw a stormtrooper headed for Joel, and was about to pounce on him when –

“Marriette no!!” Ellie stared at Marriette as she ran through the forest and pounced on the trooper that is sneaking behind Joel.

Ellie moved into the driver’s seat and headed to the cargo hold. She parked it in like a pro and brought out her blaster. She aimed it at Marriette and the white hat, but couldn’t get a clear shot.

Aldrek climbed out, and got hold of the trooper. He shook the guy up, and threw him outside. He closed the hold, and raced out to the cockpit. “I’m going to fly this plane outta here. Anyone gonna be my co-pilot?”

Marriette called out. “Me… though I’d be late a few minutes.” Ellie had insisted she should be injected with serum, to be on the safe side. The cargo hold was closed.

Joel manned the guns. “I bet those troopers alerted those who’re above. We’d be in trouble any second now, so lemme suggest that we head over in another direction, then just double back.”

Ellie shook her head as she settled into the navigator’s chair. “No chance Joel. We’re almost outta juice. Its just enough to make it back…”

“The kid’s right. We just gotta take our chances.” Aldrek said. “Where’s Lance?”

“Dropped him at the quarters. A couple of wookies are watching over him.” Marriette said, as she made her way to the co-pilot’s seat.

“I’m going.” Aldrek took off, and was surprised to find no one in the space waiting for them. “Oh well, I’m punching it.”

“I’ve got bad feeling about this.” Ellie said. She walked over to the quarters and was just going to check on Lance when the whole ship shook. Ellie ran over to the cockpit. “What in the space was that?”

Aldrek gritted his teeth. “No time to bug us kid. We’re caught under the tractor beam of the interdictor ship.”

Ellie sighed. “Anybody got a plan?”

“Yeah. Put those on, and follow me.” Joel said, who just came from the gun turrets.

* * *

Marriette complained in her stormtrooper outfit. “Its hot in here guys!”

Ellie pouted. “I was supposed to be in there.” She told her self quietly. Joel told her that she’ll be a prisoner, the one whom they ‘caught’ at Gallimoore. All the wookies now wear binders, so that they’ll be the guys who are being shipped. Aldrek is a ‘captive’ too, and Lance is just another trooper who got hurt. Joel is the imperial officer who’s in-charge.

“Unknown driver, please Identify.”

Joel coughed. “Captain Keshnel, imperial officer.”

“Where are you from and where are you heading?”

“Gallimoore. We are off to Endor, to drop these wookies off.”

“Sorry if we stopped your course captain. You may go.”

Joel punched it, and they were all back to base.

* * *

“I never believed it would be that easy. Those guys are like… amateurs.” Joel said to Ellie, as she settled back in the sick bay of the ship. She injected Lance with the serum again and checked his foot. It was completely healed, and Joel’s few injuries from that crazy hijack plan they had was bandaged.

“I wonder why we’re never hurt Mar.” Ellie smiled at Mariette. “And yeah, They’re like amateurs. Never even thought we’re not really from the empire. Maybe they got a plan or something.”

“Kid, all I know is you’re a lucky member to our team.” Aldrek laughed, as he walked in the sick bay. “Come on guys, we need to head to the briefing room.”

Joel laughed. “I’m ready to take down that second death star.” The team walked over to the briefing room. “How’re you feeling kid?”

Ellie waved at the other medics. “Like I can take down the whole empire by myself.”

Marriette laughed, and mussed Ellie’s hair. “I know the feeling.” They all laughed, and walked over to the briefing room, ready to start another mission. *END*

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pretty crappy.. but hey, it was my first time...