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Encore!

More still to come

Patience is a virtue...

Forget the RPG, this is going well, I could probably supply these for a while...

Well then. Why stop?

Is the RP worth joining?

The RP is practically dead, others could join it if they want, i was pretty dissapointed because i had two really great character ideas.

***Barrier encountered;*** i have to retype over 2 thousand words as when i tried a data transfer the file copied onto a bad region of the floppydisk...

stupid ancient technology...

I'll do my best to resume it, I have the entire story worked out in my head.

I managed to recover most of the lost info from what i remembered when proof-reading it and it's almost as good as the original... i'll post it and the next part very soon! I am so smart, I am so smart; S-M-R-T... I mean; S-M-A-R-T !!!

Hope everyone enjoyed reading it as much as i did writing it... except for the part with those 2000 lost words

NOW...

Questions?

Comments?

Criticism?

Ice Cream?
mmm, honey icecream too...

One thing though, the last chapter was meant to be called ADEPTA TRATORIS but as this revealed prematurely that there is a traitor...
so i canned it dots

bravo, bravo, well done Aliies well done.

I must concur. Excellent! I really enjoyed reading it.

But... "Psyke"?

What can I say, he acts serious when needed but he's a playfull Vampire whos been alive long enough to realize that you can't be serious the whole time...

By the way you may have noticed that I've left the possibility open for a sequel... if others think thats a good idea where she hunts for her sister; already thought of the first few pages...

cool man, a sequel would be cool.

Something said... So shall it be done!

I'll get to work on it, do you reckon I could make a second thread so I can tally the popularity of either?

i think it would be wise to make another thread, some people might not pick-up on the sequel. so start as the sequel.

Good, i just started on the second page as i type it in Word first...
Should be able to post it soon!

kool, i'll be lookin for it.

It is done, I may not post as fast as i did with the last one until i get some more feed back on the idea and the first story...

Need more feedback peoples, please pile

Hey!

I'm reading and waiting for the next one. There's very little I can say except well done on the first part! The sequel sounds good, and it is very well set up.

EDIT - Just saw the sequel - about to read it.

BTW, these have almost nothing in common to the movies;

My characters, (Except for the mentioning of Micahel Corvin and Vickor in the prologue) my settings and all of my ideas

This is like an alternate ending type of thing, i heven't even seen Underworld; Evolution yet...
Though i hope to soon

So, I'm looking to resume/restart the sequel, any questions/comments before I do?

I had planned the storyline to unravel to a third, the idea still burns within me skull...