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i hope u like this story i aint tha good at writing so tell me if u dont like me story an i will stop writing

i have been think on wat to put as a title i have 1n idea

its Harry Potter and the crown of fire

heres something im goin to start my story off with

will any 1n type her plz tell me wats wrong wiv it

yes, the story has its potential but im gonna have to give u some criticscim

1. Reread your stories. Make punctuation, grammar, and spelling right

2. Make the quotations right

3. Don't rush! Its better if you slow it down, add a ton more detail

4. Don't use numbers, instead spell it out; two instead of 2 and so on


Hey, plz dont feel bad, i want to be an editor or author some day, so i go around here and criticize just about everyone. The story has potential, just bulk it up!

oh, but i love the title idea!

thanx willu help me wiv the story cos im no good with writen storys