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Number One:

I bang on your door,

I hope your awake,

My hand twists the doorknob,

My mind screams "MISTAKE!!",

My eyes fail to close,

My lungs won't release

A gasp as the world falters,

And begins to cease.

An eternity of shrieks, sighs and a scream,

As I try to condemn this as a bad dream.

Number Two:

Forever, darkness will be my abode,

Forever, my soul will slowly erode,

My grief, my pain, my hurt, my toil

It is what I am, it is Eternal Turmoil

Hope you like... leave a comment (it would be very much appreciated)

Awesome stuff! I'd love to read more.

Thank you

Good stuff. I, too, would like to read more

There should be one hiding in my desk somewhere hehe

Number Three - Demonica

Hell is where she will always reside,

With darkness she is forever allied,

A stroke of blood painted on each nail,

Her soul non-existent, her skin deathly pale,

On their knees her minions quake,

Quivering, trembling, their fear awake.

Her alliances intimidated,

Her home a crypt,

Her beverages ghastly,

And slowly sipped.

The light a repellant,

The shadows a host,

Not possibly human, improbably ghost.

By night she lies,

Waiting for a

Victim for Demonica

And heres a sig I made for it

wow, cool... love the rhyming

Thank you

nice stuff dude, keep it up.

very nice

Originally posted by Eternal Turmoil
Number Three - Demonica

Hell is where she will always reside,

With darkness she is forever allied,

A stroke of blood painted on each nail,

Her soul non-existent, her skin deathly pale,

On their knees her minions quake,

Quivering, trembling, their fear awake.

Her alliances intimidated,

Her home a crypt,

Her beverages ghastly,

And slowly sipped.

The light a repellant,

The shadows a host,

Not possibly human, improbably ghost.

By night she lies,

Waiting for a

Victim for Demonica

And heres a sig I made for it
Good job

wow - you write so powerfully................ very strong in word and meaning....

Thx guys! I thought this thread was forgotten lol

Number Four -

I glance around

And hope nobody can see

The cruel fate

You have bestowed on me.

The sleepless nights

And breathless sighs

The eternal lows

And short-lived highs.

I'd love to hear what you think

Number 5 -

I want to say I love you,
I want to say I care,
But the emotions I am feeling,
Are too hard to bear.

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very nice

Originally posted by Eternal Turmoil
Number Four -

I glance around

And hope nobody can see

The cruel fate

You have bestowed on me.

The sleepless nights

And breathless sighs

The eternal lows

And short-lived highs.

I'd love to hear what you think
ooo very nice!

Thanks

Originally posted by Eternal Turmoil
Thanks
You're welcome So glad to see more people posting here! I was kind of lonely here for a while lol

Number 6

Ripples perturb the
Immense miles of fresh ocean
As the pebble sinks.

(Haiku lol )

i love your poems! yours are some of the few i actually read on here!

I'm flattered!!!

Originally posted by Eternal Turmoil
Number 6

Ripples perturb the
Immense miles of fresh ocean
As the pebble sinks.

(Haiku lol )
Very nice

Thanks!!!

Number 7 -

Angels watch us, their eyes agleam,
Minds filled with wisdom, hearts filled with love,
The Demons glare, wanting this dream:
A full human life and adoring eyes from above.

ooooo very nice

Now i don't even read that many poems but these are some of the best ever

Thank you!