Batman Esculation

Hay guys I decided for fun to write a Batman script, its a direct sequel to BB and I am following the story that David Goyer has said that will be the story of BB2 and BB3. Anyway I have only written a synpois. Post your opinions about it. And wheather or not you want me to write more.

Synopsis of Batman Escalation
The fight for injustice continues. A year after Batman took on cape and cowl he faces new challenges. Around Gothem a new killer has been leaving Joker cards and his victims smiling at scenes of the crime. While under the investigations of this new killer, three mob bosses plan for war to take over Carmine Folcone place and ultimately to rule Gothem City. As well as that Batman life becomes harder when a female jewel thief known as Catwomen comes on the scene and turns out to be the women affecting his choice for giving up the cowl for good, to seek a better life. Allied with Lt James Gordon and his collage friend as well as new DA Harvey Dent, Batman tries to stop the Joker from unleashing his vengeance upon Gothem City.

Sounds good but you can't spell "escalation"!

Do you want me to write more because I have just thought up a great idea for the beginning scene.

Go ahead. And what about BB3...

Oh yeah, in my version of BB3 Harvey Dent is going to become Two-Face and the three mob bosses are going to vage war against each. Batman is caught in the middle, Harvey Dent wages war on the mob bosses and Catwomen returns to Gothem City. I think the name will be Batman: Mob Wars or Batman: War Erupts.

Here is the opening scene for Batman Escalation.
A place near the Docks.
Random Cop: What is it this time?
Random Cop: Just another killing, but the victim is smiling.
Cop: Seems this been happening all over the city.
Cop: What da mean.
Cop: There`s been loads of bodies found with the victims smiling.
Cop: Strange times these are.
Cop: Hey guys I found this.
Cop: A Joker Card
Suddenly a huge explosion erupts and all cops die soon a lone figure emerges from the fire.
Joker: Aren`t Tragedies extremely funny.
Suddenly he throws a Joker Card and lands Joker faced up.
Roll into Credits.

*Gotham isn't that how it's spelled. What Id do for the opening sequence is have Batman come across a a victim himself, maybe have a faint laugh from down the alley...i dunno thats what id imagine.

why batman 'Escalation?

cool

which 3 mob bosses? Maroni? Sionis? Cobblepot?

Hay guys I need your opinions on this, do you think Batman and Joker first confrontation should be in Arkham Asylum or the Oprah where I also intoduce Catwomen. And by the way the three Mob bosses I am puting in the story are Cobblepot, Black Mask and Rupert Thorn.

Originally posted by Scarecrow756
Hay guys I need your opinions on this, do you think Batman and Joker first confrontation should be in Arkham Asylum or the Oprah where I also intoduce Catwomen.

💃 Cool idea, Batman and Joker on Oprah, having marital problems, getting a DNA test to see who the 'Daddy' is. My idea is that Oprah will turn evil and attempt to bludgeon Batman with a crappy-looking award, then marry joker and become Harley Quinn, what you Guys think??

LMAO Oprah ... someone must have mean Opera

Jesus Christ... he can't spell opera!

Damn you all for beating me to taking the piss out of Scarecrow! Oh, and when 2 cops are talking, make it clear by saying "Cop 1" and "Cop 2" or even "Archibald" and "Algernon"

Sorry about the spellings guys, more scenes are coming soon and don`t worry I have taken all your critisms on board.

By the way what do you guys think about my first Batman and Joker confrontation ideas.

maybe in bb 2 batman would have visions like in batman tas: nothing to fear

keep it coming, thick an' fast

Here is the first confretion between The Joker and Batman.
Batman is in Arkham Asylum, he hears whispers of the Joker who is not to far from him.
Joker: Why does a man dress like a Bat I wonder.
Batman: Who`s there answer me!
Joker: One day is all it takes to drive a man insane.
Batman: Come out who ever you are.
Joker: I smell the fear in you.
Batman: What are you?
Joker An artist in what I do, like you I wear a mask. You could call me the Prince of Crime, the maker of tragedy but I would just prefer it if you called me The Joker.
Batman: Show yourself Joker.
Joker: As you command.
Out of the shadows comes a tall figure who has dark green hair, white skin, a fixed smile and a dark purple suit.
Batman: Your the murderer, who has been leaving the victums with fixed smiles.
Joker: Took your time Batman, to figure it out.
Batman: How do you know my name.
Joker: Your a wanted man, please you make me laugh.

creepy but a little punctuation never harmed anyone!