darkjedi132
I got a rough draft of a poem due tommarow! Could you give some helpfull advise to wat ive got?
My Poem...
How far did I take this, how long will it go
It started with me being so shalow.
If I would have stopped, and didnt go so far
Are deception with each other woundt be as black as tar.
But i didnt stop, I went to far,
And now i'm left with this one scar.
That cant be erased, and wont disapear
so now I'm left with the fear.
___
yeah it sucks, thats why I would like some truthfull advise
Please Help
My Poem...
How far did I take this, how long will it go
It started with me being so shalow.
If I would have stopped, and didnt go so far
Are deception with each other woundt be as black as tar.
But i didnt stop, I went to far,
And now i'm left with this one scar.
That cant be erased, and wont disapear
so now I'm left with the fear.
___
yeah it sucks, thats why I would like some truthfull advise
Please Help