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Well, thats it.. I just started to get into poetry, so heres some of my new/newbie stuff


I killed a man

Today was the day
that i killed a man.
The wrong place at the wrong
time.
He knew it was coming
I didn't.
I didn't.
Maybe there is something wrong with me
Maybe i'm perfectlly fine.
But today was the day
I killed a man



so yeah, i'm new to Poetry so, be gentle.

funky... is my new word of the week... aplies here....

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
funky... is my new word of the week... aplies here.... Funky meaning good

of funky meaning stinky?

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
Well, thats it.. I just started to get into poetry, so heres some of my new/newbie stuff


I killed a man

Today was the day
that i killed a man.
The wrong place at the wrong
time.
He knew it was coming
I didn't.
I didn't.
Maybe there is something wrong with me
Maybe i'm perfectlly fine.
But today was the day
I killed a man



so yeah, i'm new to Poetry so, be gentle.
Twas a pretty good my young poet

new poem

Friends

Friends are what make you
Friends.
Friends are what may break you
Friends.
Friends change you like clay.
Friends.
Friends make you be what they want you to be
Friends.
Friends are more important than individuality.
Friends.

Good stuff.

funky as in good.... but you i dont like.... your poems are fine though....

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
funky as in good.... but you i dont like.... your poems are fine though.... woah...that came out of left field shockOriginally posted by Ladyluck
Good stuff. eyes

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
woah...that came out of left field shock eyes
How come I didn't get a batting eyelashes smilie?? cry

Originally posted by Coldfire
How come I didn't get a batting eyelashes smilie?? cry




w00t

why would you do that? you hate me....

Originally posted by Coldfire
Twas a pretty good my young poet eyesOriginally posted by Lovely Murder
why would you do that? you hate me.... why dont you like me?

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
eyes why dont you like me?
yay hehe Got some more??

Originally posted by Coldfire
yay hehe Got some more?? droolio eyes naughty

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
droolio eyes naughty
well I meant poetry but those are good too shifty

i dont dislike you, you hate me

Originally posted by Coldfire
well I meant poetry but those are good too shifty I know, i figured that after i posted it...but, meh.Originally posted by Lovely Murder
i dont dislike you, you hate me since when?

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
I know, i figured that after i posted it...but, meh. since when?
So give us some more poetry

Originally posted by Coldfire
So give us some more poetry I've gotta think

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
I've gotta think

Think faster. shock

Originally posted by Ladyluck
Think faster. shock You cant rush art, baby

okay, new poem


The Works

Johnny was a kid
A rather bright one, at that
Untill he was put through the works;
which involved a hammer and his identification
He was no longer himself
They took away his personality
they took away his eyes
and left him with a blank hole
a moldable hole
so they can mold him again,
and make him be what they want him to be
And thats, the works.

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
You cant rush art, baby
True that, very true
Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
okay, new poem


The Works

Johnny was a kid
A rather bright one, at that
Untill he was put through the works;
which involved a hammer and his identification
He was no longer himself
They took away his personality
they took away his eyes
and left him with a blank hole
a moldable hole
so they can mold him again,
and make him be what they want him to be
And thats, the works.
Nice job

Originally posted by Coldfire
True that, very true

Nice job w00tOriginally posted by Lovely Murder

Originally posted by Lovely Murder

You really like that smilie, don't you

NEW POEM!!!


Untitled

The one i love
and I
Conneceted tonight
Purest form of existance.
The thunder rumbled
the lightning crashed
as a symbol of love between us
will always last.
Our love for eachother
will always last.

That should be called Love Connection or something lol... or maybe not cuz I'm tired and I don't really know what I'm talking about haha

Originally posted by Coldfire
That should be called Love Connection or something lol... or maybe not cuz I'm tired and I don't really know what I'm talking about haha Or love line with dr phil

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
NEW POEM!!!


Untitled

The one i love
and I
Conneceted tonight
Purest form of existance.
The thunder rumbled
the lightning crashed
as a symbol of love between us
will always last.
Our love for eachother
will always last.




clapping

Originally posted by Ladyluck
clapping w00t

heres a quickie


Nothing is the same
everyone is different.
You might be brothers
or sisters
but different in all ways
but one
we are humans
treat one another like we are one
We are the lining of something greater
Be a human
Be

Originally posted by Ladyluck
Awesome. clapping Originally posted by Coldfire
Too true

good stuff w00t

This poem is dedicated to my emo brother

Death

I feel the cold touch on my shoulder
I feel the way its coming
coming to an end.
An end of me
forever.
Then when i feel it is all over
I shall feel no more.

That one's really good.



Shut up. disgust

Originally posted by Ladyluck
That one's really good.



Shut up. disgust evillaugh

Niiiiiiice avvy

Originally posted by Coldfire
Niiiiiiice avvy indeed

Sunrise Earth

Sunrise
Beginnings of a new
The sun begins its journey
through the vast and open sky
some may see it
some may not.
If you fly high enough, it'll be there.
Always.
But where the sun rises,
on the opposite, it sets.

Sunset Earth

Sunset
Comes onces a day
when day is night
and the light escapes
but the sun leaves
and brings new life.
The moon
Rises


that was a 2 for one deal

The Window

Outside my window i see.
Like a kid in front of a TV screen.
I see the outside
while i am still inside.
Daylight is fading,
as my life is wasting along,
as the sun sets and rises
The air is crisp
The ground his hard
with everystep i keep the ground down.
The Window is it
beyond that is the world
Explore it.