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Quite mysterious and intriuging. Nice writing!

thanks

I'm reading through chapter one, so i don't have any lose ends.

how come i always have the least amount of comments, or so it seems?

every single story i don't get a lot of comments.

why is that?

i guess i don't have what it takes to be a writer if i don't have a lot of comments.

Sorry I havent posted sooner but I just read that last part today. Its not at all that you are not good enough of a writer its just that there are not really many people that read these stories and care to respond. Look at the one i posted- you and only 1 other person responded to that so it seems to be a common problem here...

-Your story is great so far. You have any more of it written yet?

i like it!

Don't quit writing, you're really good at it

~Terry

Nice story. I'm a bit uncertain of the plot.

Are they in a game or something?

No, they are not in a game. This is a fantasy world called Quar. The same world that I use in Crossing of the Two Lords, and Blade the Dragon Warrior.

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