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ok, so i absolutely love mystery stories. when I was about 12, I made up a mystery story. I sort of forgot exactly how it went, but who think i should try to post it anyways?

yes it may sound crazy to write a mystery story and not finish it, but there's a possible chance i WILL finish if i get people to tell me what sounds good and what sounds bad!

It was a dark night. A lone man stalked the black streets...