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Harry Potter and the Final Battle with Voldemort

Chapter 1

Returning from Hogwarts

It was the night right after the Hogwarts Express train has stopped at the platform 9 and three-quarters. It was cold out Harry thought to himself, staring around the platform looking for his friends so he could say goodbye to them. Then he heard a cough behind him, he immediately turned around and pulled his wand out. He put his wand away quickly, seeing that it was only Ron and Hermione deeply in conversation about what they are doing over the summer break. Harry really didn’t care, right now all he cared about was to get ready for his last adventure: killing Voldemort. The prophecy Dumbledore told him before repeated over and over again in his head: neither one can live, while the other one is alive.

He was still thinking back to the funeral about what he said to Ginny, about how they couldn’t be together because of Voldemort. Everything that happened in Harry’s life that was bad or devastating was cause or had something to do with Voldemort. Harry hated how much Ginny didn’t understand that Harry loved her with all his heart, and he didn’t want anything to happen to Ginny, so that was why he broke up with her.

Right that second as if Harry was having his mind read by Ginny, she appeared out of the train, brushing her hair with a comb that Harry had given her. She immediately looked around for Harry and saw him staring, as if possessed to look out to the station thinking about his destiny. She began to cry again because she knew that Harry would not take her back, but she had to give it a try she thought desperately. Harry came to his senses when he heard a familiar sob, he turned around and saw Ginny crying her head off. “ Amazing, she still looks beautiful while crying” Harry thought to himself. “ No” Harry thought again “ don’t give in” Harry fought with himself trying to make up his mind, and in the end he decided to see why Ginny was crying.

“ What’s wrong Ginny?” Harry said fearfully, hoping that he wasn’t going to hear what he thought he was going to hear.

“You know what’s wrong, Harry” Ginny said in between sobs.

“ Yeah, I do know what’s wrong Ginny, look I’m sorry, but, I can’t be with you, I love you to much to let you be in danger” Harry said hiding his emotions but was having a hard time hiding them.

“ But, I’m willing to be in danger, if I was with you, Harry, I love you with all my heart, I always have, ever since I first met you” Ginny said trying not to cry even more then she is now.

“ Ginny” Harry said that all he could really say, he wanted to be with her, but he didn’t want anything to happen to her.

“ Harry please-” Ginny began to say but was interrupted by Ron.

“ Ginny, look I know you like Harry, but he can’t risk you getting hurt” Ron said looking Ginny in the eyes.

“ I know but what’s the difference, if Voldemort wants to hurt me then he will hurt me. But if I’m with Harry I could be protected because we all know that Harry is the best of all of us in Defense Against the Dark Arts” Ginny said hoping that would bring Harry to his senses.

“ You know mate, she has a good point, she right, you are the best” Ron said agreeing with his sister.

“ Look Ron and Ginny, I’ll go out with you again but I’m not letting you go with me to search for the remaining Horcrux’s” Harry said finally ending the conversation.

“ Fine, that’s all I wanted, you to go out with me again” Ginny said cheerfully.
OK thats hopefully what my viewers were expecting R&R

thats alot better! still kinda jumpy and fast but meh i do it too. One thing i don't think ginny knew about the horcruxes but eh..

How you suggest that I make it better TigerEyes???

By the way read the papagraph above the last paragraph Harry says I will not let you go with me to search for the Horcruxes

Thanks for the comment

(oh i know you said harry said i will not lret you search with me..but in the actual book i don't think she knew...the only thng is you don't have to keep it in rowling style of writing but you sorta have to follow previous books and events so you don't change of ruin the original story.
Also I sugest you add details and lengthen your idea to slow it down...yet as i sid there are tons of people who say to other sthey're story is going to fast but theirs is even worse so i'm going to say leave it
And theses are just suggestions so your welcome to ignore what i say)

Alright just to let you know I'm sending a copy to someone and I'll have it here after it's been reviewed. Thanks.

P.S. If you read it please comment I don't care what you put just comment please so I know if I'm writing a good or sucky story thanks

I suggest u put space in between lines so its easier 2 read!and this story is much better then ur last!!!keep it up!

ok here is the new post * thanks TigerEyes for helping*

“ Well now that we have settled that, I’m leaving, goodbye Ron, Hermione, and Ginny” Harry said as he kissed Ginny goodbye.

“ I love you” Harry said to Ginny looking at her in the eyes deeply in thought.

“ I know you do Harry, I love you too” Ginny said affectionately kissing Harry on the lips.

“ Harry, I was wondering if I can have a word” Mr. Weasley said to Harry urgently.

“ Sure, Mr. Weasley” Harry said curiously, wondering what Mr. Weasley wanted with him.

“ Alright Harry, I know what’s going on with you and my daughter. I want you to know that I’m fine with that, but don’t bring her with you on your journey” Mr. Weasley said worried that Harry would bring her anyway.

“ Don’t worry Mr. Weasley, she is not coming with me on my journey, you don’t have to worry about that, No matter how much she wants to come, I don’t want to see her get hurt” Harry said happily since he was worried how Mr. Weasley would react knowing that Harry and Ginny were going out.

“ Alright then Harry, I guess we will see you in a month or two to come and to get you, on your birthday” Mr. Weasley said to Harry going towards the wall to appear on the other side of the platform.

Harry then walked back to the others and told them goodbye again.

“ Goodbye Harry” Hermione said to Harry excited because she was going straight to the Burrow instead of going to her house.

“ Yeah mate, I’ll see you later” Ron said a little to cheery Harry thought to himself.

“ I love you, Harry” Ginny called to Harry.

“ I do to, Ginny, I’ll see if I can leave earlier from the Dursleys” Harry said excited that he would be seeing Ginny again, sooner then he planned.

“ Alright, boy come on, we haven’t got all day for you to chat with your little friends” Vernon said to Harry pissed off because he had to see Harry again.


Chapter 2

Dursleys surprise

It was around night after the Dursleys arrived in Little Whinging, Uncle Vernon was driving a little fast because he had left Dudley to himself at the house and he couldn’t bare to think what the house was like when they had got home. Vernon’s car was down the street of Privet Drive and he saw that a house was on fire down the street.

“ Uncle Vernon, isn’t that our house that’s on fire” Harry said fearfully thinking that he would be blamed on about this.

“ Oh my gosh it is” Petunia said worried about her son, not really worried about the house.

“ What’s going on” Harry thought, he had been worried that something would happen like this.

Harry immediately let Hedwig out and wrote on a spare piece of parchment Mr. Weasley, I need you to come to my house immediately! MY HOUSE IS ON FIRE! I think Voldemort did this, so hurry up,
Harry

“ Hedwig, I need you to get this to Mr. Weasley quickly understand” Harry said. Hedwig gave a quick hoot meaning she understood, then Harry opened the window and watched her fly in the distance until he couldn’t see her anymore.

“ Damn it” Vernon said pulling up to the driveway looking at his house in ablaze.

“ Dudley, where are you? Dudley are you in there” Petunia said fearfully worried about her son.

“ Mom?” Dudley called weakly.

“DUDLEY, oh Dudley, are you alright? What happened to the house, son” Petunia said to her son thanking god that he was alright.

“ Dudley, hold on, wait for Mr. Weasley” Harry said disgusted that Dudley was more important then a house.

“ Boy, who do you think you are. Telling my son what to do. How dare you” Vernon said angrily pointing a threatening finger at Harry.

“ Shut up, Vernon, I’m sick of you already. I haven’t even been here five minutes and you have already made me sick” Harry said coldly, waiting for Mr. Weasley to come.

Then after five minutes of waiting Mr. Weasley, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny were coming up the street running quickly to the house on fire.

“ Oh my, what happened Harry?” Hermione said urgently to Harry worried that Harry was going to leave.

“ I don’t know, Hermione, we just got here like twenty minutes ago, and we saw the house on fire” Harry said softly to Hermione.

“ Hi Harry, well at least your safe” Ginny said worried about Harry now.

“ Yeah, mate” Ron said sleepily.

“ What did I awake you, Ron” Harry said with a note of I’m sorry in his voice.

“ No, I was just going to bed about a minute after dad got the letter, and I said I was coming” Ron said yawning softly.

“ Well, Dudley what happened to the house” Vernon said finally.

“ Hold on real quick” Mr. Weasley said after saying the water charm and then “ Repairo” at the house, it looked brand new again, and the Dursleys and everyone else walked in then house and sat down in the living room.

“ Ok, Dudley?” Mr. Weasley said.

“ I don’t really know, all I know is that when I woke up in the living room I saw a person on our porch and I thought it was you all, but it wasn’t” Dudley said fearfully.

“ Go on Dudley, we need answers” Harry said impatiently.

“ Shut up Harry, anyways the guy had a black cloak on and he said, Blood of the enemy, fear this warning, surrender or you will die like this person in here. Immediately I ran out the house and hid behind a bush and waited for you all to get home” Dudley said exhausted then he went to his room and went to bed.

“ Alright, come on Harry let’s go, now” Mr. Weasley said exhaustedly.

“ Bye, I hope you will have a good life, now that I’m gone” Harry said happily.

Then Harry and the others walked out the door and apparated to the Burrow. It was huge, just as Harry had remembered. He looked around and saw Mrs. Weasley walking to them across the yard.

“ Harry! Good to see you, are you alright?” Molly had said joyfully to Harry.

“ I’m fine Mrs. Weasley” Harry said walking in the house and going to the room he always slept in.

He woke up around ten a.m. and was surprised, what was next to him. It was Ginny, she was curled up on Harry next to him in his bed.

“ Wow, you sure look beautiful when you wake up in the morning” Harry said, butterflies in his stomach, he always felt this way when Ginny was around him.

“ Good morning to you too” Ginny said kissing Harry and then raising up to a sitting position.

“ Well, well” Ron said excited because of what was happening to him.

“ Leave, Ginny, I need to talk to Harry quickly” Ron said unable to hold back the excitement he was holding in.

Once again thanks TigerEyes for helping!!!

it's getting there slowly, but it's getting there. better than last time i gotta admit

Dark that's what he's been doing the whole time...spacing between paragraphs

Thanks everyone for commenting I'll try and well you know post more later thanks for reading!

Its very good but i thought it was moving little fast but still exellent!

wen r u gonna update???

it's called patience

Originally posted by Esaul
it's called patience

I was just askin is that a sin???

let's not go there with the religion sorta thing. I prefer to look at it as pestering....or being annoying...take your pick.

Originally posted by Esaul
let's not go there with the religion sorta thing. I prefer to look at it as pestering....or being annoying...take your pick.

its called curiosity!!!!

it's called being a pain in the arse. he will post more when he posts more. And if you haven't notice he isn't online

Originally posted by Esaul
it's called being a pain in the arse. he will post more when he posts more. And if you haven't notice he isn't online

well he was wen I posted the 1st 1!!!and its up 2 him if im being a pain in the "arse" so if i am 2 u im sry!I was just wondering because ur story is exellent!

ummmmm no he wasn't, for i was on at the time as well, and he wasn't online. and since when does he get to be the almighty one to choose who's a pain in the arse or not? and their isn't any need to flip out like that either.

ok no one is being a pain in the arse, and a wierd way if someone asks me to hurry i'll try but if im not in a good mood or im stuck then I can't

By the way how do I have spoilers on my thread so you highlight them and it says a spoilers thanks for commenting!!

BTW I wasn't able to be on earlier becaus we had a freaking huge thunderstorm.! And i was writing when it happened and I lost me data so i'll try and post tomorrow thanks or when I find out how to make a spoiler thanks again

BTW the last sentence is going to be changed because I wrote something different you will know when I post

It's a decent story, but there are a number of things that could be done better.

First of all, slow it down. You're moving way too quickly. Take your time, and add more details. Describe what the environment looks like, or how actions are being done, or even what people may be looking like or wearing.

Secondly, read over your work. There are too many mistakes, both in spelling and grammar. Are you typing this in Word, or on another word processor? If you aren't, you certainly should. It's much better than typing "on the fly," and you can catch your mistakes more easily.

Third, you need to think about what you are planning to write--what you want to mean--beforehand. A few things I found in the story were illogical and probably wouldn't happen in a Harry Potter book. While you don't need to follow exactly Rowling's style, or what you think she'll write, it helps to have your events and actions organized and logical.

Continue the story, as it is, in my opinion, better than many of the others on here.

i would type more than what i did, but I got my own stories to work on that need a lot of attention ^_^

I was wondering if u could read my story and tell me wut u think I no its not that good ive only had a few people read it and id like mur 2 though...its called Harry Potter and the Prophecy Fulfilled ...and plzzz continue urs its much better then mine!

ok thanks H. S. 6 I was wondering what I was missing in detail I couldn't figure it out thanks.

Im writing on Microsoft word processor,

And I still need to figure out how to do a spoiler on here so Pm how to do thanks

“Leave, Ginny. I need to talk to Harry,” Ron said, unable to hold back the fear in his voice. He was really scared apparently, because even Ginny laughed at Ron as went outside.


Chapter three

Harry’s Possessed!



“What is it, Ron?” Harry asked, simultaneously watching Ginny leave the room and thinking of how beautiful she was.

“Harry… HARRY!” Ron screamed, trying to get Harry’s attention. Ron thought to himself and repeated himself.

“Yeah—what?” Harry said, annoyed because Ron was getting on his nerves. He always interrupts Harry’s train of thought.

“We need to go,” Ron said urgently, staring at Harry’s blank expression.

“Why?” Harry questioned, keen to hear reasoning behind why they had to leave.

“He-who-must-named has been sighted around here, so Mom said for us to leave,” Ron explained. He was worried for Harry; for some reason, he had seemed strangely distracted lately.

That Ron thought got Harry’s attention as Harry got up really quick. Harry suddenly stood up on his feet and found himself shouting at his best friend.

“WHAT? VOLDEMORT, HERE?! YOU GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!” Harry yelled as Ron flinched as Harry said Voldemort and as Harry‘s face changed to a puzzled look to an angry look.


“Get over me saying Voldemort!” Harry said, annoyed. Tired of hearing his friend always flinching when someone said Voldemort.


Five minutes later, Harry was ready to leave the Burrow, the one place he never wanted to leave early. He hated he had to leave the Burrow, it was like a home away from home when he wasn’t at Hogwarts.


Why does he have to ruin EVERYTHING?” Harry said, his anger at a boiling point (something that reached its peak a long time ago). He hit the ground in fury, and for a split second Ron thought he saw Harry’s eyes change color.

“Don’t ask me, mate, but come on. Let’s go,” offered Ron, looking at the door again. He was worried that Harry would do something stupid especially when he saw Harry’s eye change color.

“No, I will not leave. If he wants me then let him come—I’ve got a surprise for him” Harry chuckled madly while looking at Ron’s puzzled expression.

Harry thought to himself for a few minutes about what to do as he watched Ginny‘s small figure running to the Burrow. Why did she go outside Harry thought to himself. He watched as Ginny ran up the porch wearing those cute clothes that Harry had got her a year ago.

Ron left the room and walked down the stairs. At the table sat Mr. and Mrs. Weasley, Ron’s parents waiting patiently for the others . After a moment Ron said that Harry wasn’t leaving; he was staying. Mrs. Weasley apparently wasn’t going to stand for this and then looked at her husband then said to Ron and the others.

“No, he is not!” Mrs. Weasley said, “He isn’t ready to face him yet!”

She felt sorry for Harry because he had to get Voldemort in the end. But he wasn’t ready Mrs. Weasley had his best interests at heart.

“ Molly, get Ginny and Hermione. I will talk to Harry,” Mr. Weasley said forcefully as Ginny walked in the house looking scared and ran to Ron‘s room. She was going to warn Harry that she just saw Voldemort but he already knew.

“Fine, but hurry up. He’ll be here at any moment!” Mrs. Weasley explained fearfully looking towards her husband

“Ron, help your mother,” ordered Mr. Weasley looking at room as Ron turned around to go back upstairs..

Mr. Weasley walked up the stairs and he thought to himself as he was walking up the stairs. He hated to leave this house but if I can leave so can he! Then he reached Ron’s room and opened the door. He immediately noticed Ginny curled up on Harry; she was looking up at his face fearfully.

“Please, Harry… don’t wait for Voldemort! Please leave with us!” she said, crying, because he wouldn’t listen to her no matter what she said, she then noticed her father walk in and dried her tears up.

He walked around and around the room glancing at everything but Ginny then he finally spoke. He knew he must say this if something ever happened, he had to do this so he said it.

“Ginny, look—I love you. I’ve got to stay and fight no matter what happens, and if I die, I want you to know that I died like a man, instead of hiding from him, and don‘t worry I‘m not going to have it all here I need him to know that I’m going to get him, for everything he’s done to me.” Harry explained this to Ginny hoping she would understand.

He noticed for the first time how much Ginny really loved him, he looked at her face and saw those cute freckles that reminded Harry of Ron. He really was in love with here but he had to do this in the end no matter how much pain he was in, he had to do it.

“ No, Harry, you will not stay here” Mr. Weasley said interrupting Harry’s and Ginny's conversation and trying to help him in the long run.

Harry was in shock he didn’t realize that Mr. Weasley was in the room he was only aware that Ginny was. He even felt that Mr. Weasley felt his pain that’s why he wasn’t screaming. He had to do this no matter what even if no one was behind him in his decision.

“ No, Mr. Weasley. I can’t run. He’ll continue to track me down until he kills me, or I kill him.” Harry said to Mr. Weasley, staring directly into his eyes looking at Mr. Weasley tired expression.

Mr. Weasley then sighed and looked at Harry‘s determined expression and looked at his daughters fearful expression and then he looked at the window then looked downstairs. He walked towards the door and finally said.

“Fine, Harry. I understand. We will leave you here,” Mr. Weasley said quietly, unable to convince Harry to come with them.

So Mr. Weasley hugged Harry goodbye, turned at the door, and croaked “It’s been nice to know you, Harry. May you be safe for now.” Looking at Harry’s sad expression. Then he walked down the stairs and sat on the final step. Thinking about how much Harry was really like James, he always stood up to an challenge.

“ I...I.... Love...you,” Ginny said, unable to hold the emotion in her voice. She knew that Harry wouldn’t mind her crying, so she immediately ran up to him and kissed him. Sitting next to him on the comfy bed.

“ I...love you too,” He answered silently, holding Ginny in his arms, unable to think of anything to say to her to make her feel better.

wow, wicked story but harry has gotta die in the finnal fight, i think that is the only way to go
ps the books are way better than the films and the acting is terrible

Ok first of all no one comment " It's to early in the story for this" OK there is a surprise in this so wait till my next post and you'll understand it
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All of the sudden, Harry fell on his knees, screaming in pain. He was rolling around on the ground, clutching his scar which was burning red. Mr. Weasley came up the stairs, alarmed by the screams, followed by Ron, Hermione, Mrs. Weasley and the Order. Every one of them bore a look of frightened bewilderment on their faces.

“What happened, Ginny?!” shouted Mrs. Weasley over Harry’s screams. She was watching Harry rolling around on the ground in pain.

“ I don’t know!” she replied, terrified. “All I know is that we were talking, and then he fell on the ground, holding his scar!” cried Ginny.

“Well, something had to happen!” Mr. Weasley said, not noticing Ginny was crying. Hermione went up to her and gave her a hand. They were about to walk out of the room when they stopped in shock.

Harry was going silent. After a second, he stood up, and everyone gasped at what they saw. Harry no longer looked like himself. He had cold, white, empty eyes and a darker voice. He looked around the room and laughed wildly.

“Haha… Hello, weaklings,” said a cold, heartless voice.

“ Who... are....... you?” Ginny said in between sobs. She was hoping that Harry was playing around but she found out that he wasn’t.

“ Hello, Ginny,” Harry said, looking at her in mock amazement. “I’m surprised that Harry would pick you as a girlfriend,” he finished, smirking.

“Voldemort?” Ginny said frightened to death as she watched Harry’s figure pacing around the room.

“Don’t speak in my presence, filthy blood traitor.” Harry was forced to say, finally stopping in front of Ginny. He reached out his hands and was about to grab her, but a white shield appeared in front of Ginny. What happened next even frightened Voldemort.


“No you don’t!” shouted Harry, as a silvery form of his body appeared in front of Ginny.

“ Harry?” Ginny said confused.

“ Bloody hell” Ron said confused about what he was seeing. How could there be two Harry’s.

Harry walked into his real body and was in control of himself again as the figure of Voldemort appeared between Harry and Ginny.

“How did you do that?!” ordered Voldemort, shocked at Harry “ apparently you do have dark powers inside you, join me or die Harry.”

He looked at Harry for a moment and then Harry shook his head and walked in front Ginny and looked at her like he always looked at someone when they are in danger. Then he moved again on the other side of the room and then chuckled.

“I can.” Harry said, reaching for his wand, staring at everyone to get out of the way.

“I fear I underestimated you, Harry,” Voldemort said. “But you want to duel me? HA,” he spat. “Don’t make me laugh.” he finished, going after Ginny.

“OH NO YOU DON’T!” Harry screamed. Thinking quickly, he apparated in between Ginny and Voldemort “SECTUMSEMPRA!”

Voldemort was surprised because, although he had muttered a counter-curse, it couldn’t block the entire spell, and he was forced to apparate and re-apparate to avoid being hit. Then he looked at Harry madly.

Voldemort cried out in frustration. “Potter, I’ll kill you!” He hissed madly. “AVADA KEDAVRA!” And with that, he disappeared with a crack.

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great story keep it up (i liked the highlights lol)

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Chapter 4

The Dream

Before the Unforgivable curse hit Harry, he woke up drenched in sweat to find it was all a dream. He must’ve fallen asleep at the Burrow because Ron was snoring very loud. He looked over startled at Ron because he heard whimpering from Ron.

“No not them... anything but hem please” wept Ron, Harry chuckled softly to himself of course he was dreaming of... Spiders his worst enemy.

So unable to go back to sleep thanks to Ron’s loud snores and noises, Harry crept downstairs to the kitchen to get him a midnight snack. Suddenly he heard a creek at the bottom stair and he was going to the living room but the light switch came on and there stood a sleepy Ginny.

“Harry what are you doing up at this hour? Shouldn’t you be in bed?” Ginny said after yawning looking at her boyfriends face sensing something was wrong.

“ Yeah, but with Ron snoring like he snores yeah right” Harry laughed to Ginny. Harry just looked at her for a moment staring at her face then he turned quickly and walked outside.

Ginny followed him sensing this could be their only private moment. Harry walked to the front yard and sat down on the swing in front of the Burrow. Ginny then sat down right next to him and they talked and talked about everything except what Harry didn’t want her to know. Harry really did enjoy being with Ginny, hell he loved it he was always full of energy when he was with her but when they were apart he would stare in space for hours. Harry quickly learned everything Ginny liked to what she hated, to his surprise he learned that she hated when he had to leave her for more then he really needed to. Harry sensing that this would be a good relationship finally opened up to her about everything from his fears to his desires, you could tell that Harry really did love her after all even when he didn’t want to love her, he still did.

“ Damn, Ginny we need to go it’s already five in the morning.” Harry said astonished at how quickly time flew by when he was with her.

The whole time that it took to get to the house Harry stared at Ginny’s pretty face which made Ginny wonder if something was wrong with her face. But every time she asked he would say nothings wrong then look at her face again. When they were at the door Harry stopped and kissed her while grabbing her around the waist, pulling her close to him he loved the way Ginny looked at him, the way she looked at him made him forget all his problems. When they walked in the house they tipped toed to the couch in the house and they sat down and went instantly asleep.

When Harry woke up that morning he was alone no one was home, he began to wonder where they were as he walked around the house trying to find someone. He then decided that they were at Diagon alley, which they were at because a note said so on Ginny‘s door. He walked down to the table to find there was a big plate of food on the table and he sat down and ate his mashed potatoes, chicken, and ham. Wow now that is a lunch Harry said to himself stuffed. Harry was walking outside today to get an appetite when Mrs. Weasley got home because she was cooking early today for Harry’s birthday which was today.

So he walked around the Burrow noticed everything around it he look at the little gnomes scurrying around the garden. He decided that he would practice his magic since no one was around. So he muttered Petrificus Trotalus and grabbed the tiny gnomes hand and threw them over the fence. He then stared at the sun which was a shade of orange today meaning it was very hot. Then Harry was going for the Burrow to go back asleep when he heard and felt it.
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It felt cold and horrible, like Harry was losing everything he felt all of his happiness leave him. Of course dementors Harry thought to himself. But when he saw the hooded figure it wasn’t a dementor, it was like one but it was creepier then a regular dementors. It glided across the ground hovering, looking at Harry for a moment. Then it slowly raised it’s hand and when it did it made Harry go insane. He began screaming, he couldn’t stop it, he didn’t know what to do, this wasn’t a regular dementor it was more powerful. But what happened next scared the hell out of Harry, the new foe began to speak.

“Harry.... it’s time you die” the dementor screeched as he pulled his other hand up and put them together.

“What the hell are you” Harry said frightening of what this enemy could do.

“Oh... I’m a Demon” the Demon screeched again looking at Harry from under it’s hood.

Then Harry thought for a second and raised his wand and spoke “Expecto Patronum” thinking of Ginny and a stag erupted out of his wand and charged at the Demon. Slowly the Demon raised it’s hand and the stag stopped in midair galloping towards the Demon but it couldn’t move. Harry looked at the Demon, he couldn’t think straight he didn’t know what to do and if he didn't’ do something he was going to die. After a moment the Stag disappeared and then Harry was lost, he found himself thinking against himself.

“Idiot” Harry thought
“Like you got room to talk” Harry said.
“Oh yeah the great Harry Potter was going to die cause he couldn’t beat a silly Demon” Harry thought.
“Whatever” Harry said again.

Then something clicked he didn’t know what it was but when Harry thought of himself losing and dieing the Demon retreated. Thinking of all that pain made Harry passed out. It must be their weakness Harry thought to himself before he passed out.

He awoke later to find himself in his bed in Ron’s room he looked around and saw Ginny in the corner of the room crying. He thought to himself for a second hoping.... praying she wasn’t crying because of him, he had already caused enough pain to the Weasley’s especially.... Ginny. So he slowly tried to get up but he fell back down in pain he must’ve broke his arm he thought to himself.

“Hey Gin what’s wrong?” Harry said barely able to talk, he winced in pain as a small red head threw her body to Harry.

“Harry, you all right” said Ginny wiping away the tears that had fallen from her eyes because of her pain.

“Yeah, I’m fine but are you? Why are you crying” Harry said in pain trying to sit up but he kept falling back.

“Because we thought you were dead after that creature left he muttered something and then you screamed and stopped breathing. We all were worried Mom, Dad, Ron, and Hermione were sad the whole day. If it wasn’t for me you would have been dead, I saw the creature and told Dad and Mom and they ran over as the creature left.” Ginny said shakily then all of the sudden she kissed him on those cold lips of Harry’s.

“Wow, Gin thanks for saving me. I love you” Harry said as his felling had got the best of him at that moment.

Harry then fell back in pain again he didn’t know what was going on why was his arm hurting so much. He looked at his arm for the first time and saw a deep gash on it. He felt cold again, he didn’t know why but he felt cold. He looked at Ginny’s face she was crying again she wanted to help him but she didn’t know how. Harry scooted over on his bed to make room for Ginny, when he was against the wall he patted his hands on the smooth, cold bed as a signal for Ginny to come over, she did so as he watched her take off her shoes off and then sat on the bed and laid down next to Harry pulling the covers up because he was cold. So Harry scooted again next to Ginny and put his hand around her and fell asleep. Ginny was still thinking, but she decided that she would for get about it so she did and she fell asleep next to her boyfriend....

He awoke that morning to find that Ginny was still asleep next to Harry, he wished it could stay that way forever but it couldn’t and he knew it. He kissed on the lips softly and got up and walked out the room but Ginny woke up soon as he got off the bed. He stumbled but before he hit the floor Ginny got up and caught him and held him for a moment before letting go.

“Thanks Ginny I appreciated it. I must not be strong enough to move on my own.” Harry said embarrassed for saying that to Ginny but he realized after that moment that he could tell Ginny embarrassing things and she wouldn’t care.

As Harry walked downstairs with Ginny right next to him, he felt Ginny was hiding something but he ignored it for now anyways.

“Ok Gin I think I can make the rest of the way. Ok” Harry said.

Ginny nodded and let go but she was still close to him, in case he fell. He noticed that and smiled at Ginny the way Ginny loved and she smiled back before turning and going to Harry’s bed. Harry slowly walked to the kitchen and was surprised because everyone was there and they all saw Harry. He swayed at the spot and almost fell down but he caught himself and leaned on the wall.

“So what happened Harry?” said Mr. Weasley pouring him a cup of tea that gives energy to the drinker.

Harry slowly took the cup and sat down in between Mr. and Mrs. Weasley and looked around at everyone before he spoke in a whisper.

After everyone had heard what had happened he left and when back upstairs falling every few steps he took. With every step he took he felt his energy slipping away from him when he finally reached the door to Ron’s room he walked in and saw Ginny on his bed waiting for him. He looked at her for a moment and began to get lightheaded again. He looked at Ginny with fear on his face behind Ginny a Demon was outside!

“Ginny run now. Go tell the others that the Demon is here” He said fearfully, he was worried because he couldn’t do anything to help he was losing his will quickly and then he passed out.

Ginny looked in horror there it was a tall, black long figure floating outside she ran downstairs and warned the others that a Demon was here and then she ran back upstairs with her Dad. Mr. Weasley put Harry on his bed and Ginny went on the bed with him as Mr. Weasley put a charm over his bed so Harry would be safe.

Mr. Weasley and the others walked outside and saw the Demon he was going for Harry!

“What but how I put a charm over him so he wouldn’t be able to leave his bed” Mr. Weasley said astonished looking at Harry standing there closest to the Demon.

“Mr. Weasley and others in a minute I will use a spell I invented, it’s very dark magic and I won’t be surprised if you won’t trust me after this” Harry said looking at the Demon still which was began to hover towards Harry.

Then Harry looked at the Demon with a determined expression and then said “Leght knoad” and then a wave of light came out of Harry’s wand, dark light. It covered Harry and the Demon was paralyzed Harry then raised his wand and said “Knoad Leght” and the light swallowed the Demon and killed it. When the light disappeared away from Harry he looked at the others with a triumphed expression. However he wasn’t greeted back with one then he passed out again.

BTW I made the Leght Knoad and Knoad Leght up so its not going to be a spell in JKR's book!

very good keep it up!!!

it's getting good..still kind of jumpy in my mind...hard to follow at some points but you'll learn..good job!

Well it's a good start....It's kind of sporadic, and the beginning of it has way too much dialogue....


Dialogue is good sometimes, but you cant outweigh the bulk of the story with it.

That's the problem with most aspiring/ fanfiction authors...They try to tell the story through communication, because it's much easier....But there are other horizons of writing that doesn't need such dialogue....Even forms of communication with out dialogue.

Ie: Harry looked up and saw what Ginny wanted to say. Her eyes told the whole story. Shaking his head, Harry turned away from the red-headed teen, hoping his actions answered Ginny's unasked question.

alright u mite not be a legend but ur better than quite good ur excellent keep posting!!

To all my readers(if I have any) I won't post today or maybe not even tomorrow. And I'm thinking on an idea for the story.

And Pm me if you have a idea you would like to see in this story.

and I might put it in the story

ok I know it's short but it is better then nothing especialally(sorry if I spelled wrong) since Im typing with a finger that is messed up oh well here it goes and don't forgot to comment!
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When he awoke up later on he found out he wasn’t going to be greeted with smiles but instead looks of suspension. He looked at the red headed teen Ginny, in hopes that he could at least get a smile from here but oh wrong he was. She looked at him like he was crazy, her eyes were as big as Galleons. She looked again at Harry fearfully hoping that what just happened was a figment of her imagination. She turned her freckled face to her friend Hermione and saw that she too was thinking the same thought as she was: Is this the real Harry, and if so what side is he on?”
There was a long silence after the black hooded Demon had been killed, Harry began to worry that they would figure that he is dangerous when he really wasn’t. After the thought of that creeping in mind and not going away, he slowly sat down on the ground and looked at everyone else for moments before switching. The sun began to play hide and seek behind the clouds as Harry was lost in thought again waiting for Mr. Weasley to say something but it was clear that they all thought he was on the dark side. The red headed teen Ginny began to slowly walk to Harry to comfort him but was stopped by her Dad because he stuck out his arm to stop her and signaling for her not to move. Finally Mr. Weasley spoke confused apparently, as he didn’t know to trust Harry because he just used a severely complicated dark spell so he talked with a hint of sorrow in his voice.

“No Ginny, you are not allowed to go near him until I give him a truth potion. We don’t want anything to happen to you as we don’t know if that’s the real Harry. Until then Harry, if you are the real Harry I don’t have much of a choice but to say Stupefy ” as he looked at his daughter and then the paralyzed body of Harry.

it's exciting, still missing details which could make it more presentable for a reader but getting there.

keep posting ur story is great and dont worry about tigereyes hes just bein picky lol

it's ok
All Tiger Eyes is doing is helping me with problems my stroy has and I will try to fix them with the best of my ability

And BTW TigerEyes is a girl

And I might not be posting for a week because my mom's in the hospital

So G2G

Originally posted by Scotty Brockman
it's ok
All Tiger Eyes is doing is helping me with problems my stroy has and I will try to fix them with the best of my ability

And BTW TigerEyes is a girl

And I might not be posting for a week because my mom's in the hospital

So G2G


ooooooooooo im sorry!!!I hope shes okay!!! and brilliant chapter!!!and thnx 4 helpin me with the spoilers lol im not 2 good at that stuff!!!

ok i read my story over and I understand some off the problems I've been doing in my story cause when I read it I was like " WTF" cause I couldn't unbderstand it but I m writing some tonight and tomorrow and then im reading over it a few times then Ill post...


CAUSTION THIS IS A MAJOR SPOILER FOR THE STORY HILIGHT AT OWN RISK

Im bring ing Dumbledore in the story he never died in the first place and you might not see Dumbledore in the story until next month or two ok

Sorry people it took so long for new post, comment if you like
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Chapter five


Ginny and Harry’s night together



After a moment Ginny felt sick and confused, if this isn’t the real Harry then I’m going to murder whoever it is. Ginny thought with an worried expression on her face. Gosh this whole day might as well as have been called fiasco day Ginny thought again. It took a while for someone to brew up some truth potion and when they all did Ginny wasn’t allowed in the same room when they questioned him, to see if it was the real Harry Potter.

Hermione of course was a savior in Ginny’s opinion because she stayed with Ginny to comfort her, while her boyfriend was going thru a trail and everyone watched, wands at the ready in case.

“Ok are we all ready to begin this? In that case we can began.” Mr. Weasley said after seeing everyone nodding in a approval for this test to begin. Mr. Weasley then shook his head slightly meaning he understood.

He then muttered the counter-curse and watched as Harry’s body began to slowly move; probably because he was hit in the chest with a stunning spell and which it caused a little pain for Harry. Everyone watched as Author handed Harry a drink of a substance the Harry instantly knew what it was. But seeing over six wands pointing at him he drunk it in one long gulp and waited for a moment then the dreamless state reached him and he heard a voice.

“Harry, I want you to answer every question I ask you in a yes or no question. Do you understand me?” whispered Mrs. Weasley glancing at everyone else.

“Yes, Mrs. Weasley. I understand” Harry was forced to say trying as hard as he could to not answer but he couldn’t stop his mouth from moving.

“Good Harry. Now are you the real Harry potter?” Mr. Weasley said expecting the worst but was surprised to hear a simple yes in return in the question.

Apparently everyone else was satisfied and began to retreat out of the kitchen. After the question Harry became himself and got up and walked out the door heading towards the big garden they had in the backyard.

“Ginny? Ginny, you can come down now, it was the real Harry. He just walked out of the house to the garden” Ron yelled upstairs to Ginny and was surprised to hear a very loud shriek indicating she understood.

Immediately Ginny ran downstairs and was out the door before Ron could even see her face and Ron was about to follow Ginny outside before Hermione grabbed his shirt and pulled him back and muttering something about privacy. Then Ron and Hermione left to go to Ron’s room for some privacy off their own.

Harry was halfway thru the garden when he heard familiar footsteps and turned around and found himself being attacked, no not attacked, but being kissed to death but Ginny. Harry also saw something in her eyes that made him calm down a little “true love”. He then heard some sniffling and looked down and Ginny was holding on to him with her face buried in his shirt crying.

“Oh Harry, I was so worried. I thought that they would have killed you, if you were a fake and we wouldn’t be able to find the real Harry.” said Ginny bawling.

“It’s alright Ginny, I’m here, I’m here” the grinning Harry said to Ginny embracing her in his arms warming her up.

Five minutes later Harry was still holding the bawling Ginny though she had calmed a great deal down thanks to her boyfriend Harry. Finally she lifted her red puffy eyes up and looked in those emerald eyes of Harry and they both understood each other in that one quick glance. Then Ginny cried again, apparently still upset about earlier today. Harry didn’t try to calm her down because he knew she enjoyed doing this to Harry and he secretly enjoyed it too. After another few moments Harry raised Ginny up and picked up the sleeping Ginny and walked in the Burrow. As soon as he walked in everyone was about to speak but Harry said shush really quietly and jerked his head at the sleeping Ginny in his arms and everyone became quiet as Harry walked pass them to Ginny’s room and opened the door softly and laid her down under her covers and tucked her in to bed.

As soon as he was about to walk out of the room Ginny said to Harry to stay with her and not go and she was on the verge of tears, when Harry turned around and took his shoes of and jumped behind Ginny and got under the covers of Ginny’s bed and wrapped his arms around her and they were both asleep within minutes. A few hours later Harry awoke and was trying to get out of bed and go to his room when Ginny woke up.

“Why are you leaving me Harry? Why” Ginny said on the verge of tears again looking up at her boyfriend.

“Because I didn’t think your family would appreciated me in bed with you.” Harry explained to Ginny slowly thinking of what they would say if they caught them like this right now.

“Fine Harry, go don’t come back tonight, I’m going to talk to you tomorrow Harry James Potter” Ginny said furiously looking at Harry.

Harry immediately was frightened of Ginny and he got back in the bed with her to save his life, wrapping his hands around her with some difficultly and said he was sorry. When he touched Ginny she felt all her anger she just had for Harry disappear, and be replaced by love and they went to sleep both facing each other, as if they were going to kiss, but fell asleep before their lips touched.

Harry woke up that morning with Ginny shaking him awake, trying to get his attention and she sounded worried, extremely worried.

“Harry, please get up it’s an emergency. Your scar it’s... bleeding” screeched Ginny trying to wipe the blood of with her shirt.

“What do you mean my scar is bleeding? Are you serious Ginny?” Harry spoke up a little to loud.

He rose up out of Ginny’s bed and walked over to the mirror and saw in the reflection that his scar was bleeding real bad. As he looked at his face he felt the same horrible feeling in his gut, the feeling of unconsciousness, fast as that feeling came he fell back as soon as the blood was falling from his forehead. Seeing this, Ginny ran behind Harry and caught him before he was damaged with another head injury. She immediately began to think mom and dad would know what to do, as she yelled at the top of her lungs.

“Mom, Dad, Ron, and Hermione come to my room quick! Hurry something’s wrong with Harry.” Ginny yelled loudly as her tears began to leak out of her eyes again in the passed two days.

Molly, as if mother mode had came on, ran up the stairs and almost slipped in Harry’s blood as she entered the room, looking at Harry she immediately told Ginny to leave. But Ginny refused to leave until she knew her boyfriend was alright.

Very good!!!I wonder what will happen 2 Harry...hmmm Update soon!

ur great man how do u come up wid this stuff

I should say the same to you Denniz234 ur story is ecellent don't forget to update CAUTION IF YOU HAVENT READ HARRY POTTER HALF BLOOD PRINCE THEN DONT CONTINUE READING THIS UNTIL YOU READ IT!!!! Anyways.................

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Thump, thump was all Ginny could hear as she laid her head on his chest. Crying was no more help to her anymore she had shed more tears then she has ever had in her life these past two days. She just sat down sniffling, trying to hid her tears, she hated this is wasn’t fair, didn’t Ginny deserve to be with Harry, not worrying when something would happen and didn’t Harry, deserve a girlfriend at all? She watched as her mother healed Harry’s scar but, every time she would heal it, it would burst open with smoke being released. then Mrs. Weasley thought of something as she ran downstairs, and returned not five seconds later with Hermione at her heels.

“I see what you mean Mrs. Weasley. I don’t really know what to do but to cast a lover’s healing charm. It’s extremely dangerous thought that’s why I really don’t look forward to perform it. Come to think of it I can’t really perform the charm only Ginny can, and Ginny can’t perform it cause it requires a lot of experience.” Hermione reveled to the others looking at the ceiling thinking of something else she might have missed.

“I wish Dumbledore was alive. He would know what to do.” Mrs. Weasley muttered to herself but unfortunately the room was real quiet enabling the other two girls to hear it.

Then what happened next almost gave Ginny an heart attack, Harry was rolling around the floor in a violent tantrum destroying things in his path as he screamed loudly. Then an door opened and what happened this time was requiring Ginny to slap herself to see if she was awake, there standing in the doorway was Dumbledore! But how Ginny thought to herself, wasn’t he dead. Dumbledore stood in the doorway with his eyes twinkling in the light as he always did, but one other thing that was good for them was Dumbledore’s presence he immediately had everyone calmed down and looking at him.

“Look, I know you all are surprised to see me alive, because you all know that I’m supposed to be dead but, I will explain everything later. but we have more important things going on here don’t we.” the worried Dumbledore said indicating to Harry’s now almost lifeless body.

So with one swift move he walked over to Harry and muttered something that sounded like “demantrum” flicking his wand upwards over and over again and Harry stopped thrashing around and stood still for awhile. He was quiet shaken, and was clearly exhausted and Dumbledore waved his wand up and Harry’s body lifted at landed on Ginny’s body and she mad a move to walk towards him.

“No, Ginny, not yet. Wait until I talk and question him before you get close. I still don’t know if Voldemort has lost grip of him yet so I need to know first, being as I would be safe.” Dumbledore said stiffly looking at Ginny’s face with a smile, which she didn’t return.

“But, how are you back you said yourself no spell can awaken the dead?” Mrs. Weasley said frantically looking at Dumbledore hoping that he was no illusion.

“Look, Molly as I said to your daughter, I want to talk to Harry first before I explain, I don’t expect you to agree with me. But you as I know, that me and Harry have developed a sort of... umm... father-son bond.” spoke Dumbledore softly, but with pride in his voice as he indicated Harry and him as a bond thing.

“Well, Albus I guess we can wait but Arthur will be like me as you understand.” Molly said to Dumbledore fondly examining those twinkling eyes of his.

Then everyone left but Ginny staring at Harry, with tears in her eyes as she watched helplessly at her boyfriend as Dumbledore spoke.

“Ginny, I know what your thinking and yes there will be more difficult times ahead, more worse then this I’m afraid. But you must know that Harry will fight to the end no matter what the odds are, that if I’m not mistaken that is one of the most prized things, about Harry that you love his determination.” Dumbledore spoke again looking at Harry not moving his eyes off him at all.

“Yes, headmaster, your right I love him for that but mostly it’s his love that I cherish. As you would already know by now. Well I’m going tell Harry I’ll be waiting.” yawned Ginny as she walked out the door but stopped, waiting for Dumbledore to nod then he did, and she was gone the next second.

Dumbledore merely glanced at nothing but Harry of the next few hours waiting for him to wake up, so he could get the explanation underway. He stood up looking at an clock he just reached out of his rode pocket, it was the same one he had the first time Harry was left at the Dursley’s front doorstep. He glanced at it taking his eyes off Harry for the first time and quickly but it back in his pocket. Seeing as how this would be awhile he sat down right beside Harry and glanced in his head of when Voldemort possessed him a few hours ago.

Harry was alone in a long room full of nothing but blackness as a voice called to him.

“Harry you know who it is, tell me of the prophecy or I’ll force it out of you.” Voldemort spat out loud.

“Never, I’ll never tell you of the prophecy” Harry’s determined voice called out into the darkness.

For minutes this went on Voldemort showing memories of people dieing, but with no success. Dumbledore at that time was really proud of Harry, as he watched as Harry had spoken back into the darkness.

“YOU WILL NEVER GET IT OUT OF ME, UNDERSTAND TOM?” bellowed Harry at the top of his lungs.

“You, filth I’ll kill you and you precious girlfriend that filthy blood traitor Ginny Weasley. I’ll torture Ginny first before I kill you.” spat Voldemort.

Then he showed Harry a vision of that day as he Harry was bonded to a chair with wands pointing at him and at the floor about five feet away from him was Ginny being tortured by the Cruciatus curse of thrown at her over and over at her again as she rolled around the ground in pain---

“Wha--” Dumbledore said surprised as everything was being cut off from him and he was surrounded by blackness then he was seeing Harry on the bed glaring at him.

Harry looked at the door and cast a silencing charm on it then looked at Dumbledore, anger boiled in his blood, the burning feeling came then he couldn’t hold it back anymore.

“YOU, WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE, I THOUGHT YOU WERE DEAD. YOU LITTLE, AARGH WHY COULDN’T YOU TELL ME YOU WERE ALIVE, DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE WENT THROUGH THAT NIGHT IN MY DREAMS.” yelled Harry, he couldn’t think of anything to say to Dumbledore he was mad. Because Dumbledore made him... him think he was dead just to try to think Voldemort would have the upper hand was downright unthinkable for Dumbledore to do, but here he was looking at Harry with sorry wrote all of his face. When he spoke Harry was surprised to see him talk as if Harry had not yelled.

“Harry, truly I’m sorry I know that me and you have got attached last year. But I’m going to make it up to you, by telling you the story of what happened while we were back at Hogsmeade when we got brooms for Madam Rosmerta.” Dumbledore raised his wand and they were flooded with light as Dumbledore sighed then he began to speak.

Very good update soon!

update as soon as possible i cant go too long without reading this

Slowly Harry calmed down, and was willing to look at anything, instead of looking at those eyes that belonged to Dumbledore, finally he had no where to look but to look at his headmasters face. He looked at Dumbledore and he felt mad again, it wasn’t fair the bond he shared was apparently not big enough for Dumbledore not to tell Harry the plan last year. So Dumbledore told Harry everything about how Dumbledore’s brother drank Polyjuice potion before Harry and him arrived in Hogsmeade last year after visiting the cave; about how Dumbledore moved away when his brother switched places with him and Harry flown to Hogwarts with his bother. And how his brother was killed and Dumbledore hid for a while then came back. There was a long silence after Dumbledore finished talking, Harry was determined not to break it then Dumbledore spoke again.

“Harry, I know how mad you are at me. I understand how frustrating it must be. You don’t want to believe that it’s me so you won’t be disappointed if I was a imposter. You know I can prove I’m the real Dumbledore, and you know I’m the real Dumbledore, I can see it in your eyes.” sniffled Dumbledore looking at Harry, as Harry flung himself out of the door and ran, he couldn’t believe it. If this was the real Dumbledore that he so longed, hoping that it was how come he couldn’t send a owl a few days ago?

When the door opened, Harry merely ran down the stairs and was out the backdoor and climbed up the big, old maple tree in the back yard. Everyone went quiet as Dumbledore came out the room, looking as sad as ever.

“Ginny, Harry needs you more then ever now. I must urge you to comfort him, but don’t ask him about our talk upstairs.” pleaded Dumbledore staring at her eyes as she walked out the backdoor.

“What happened, Dumbledore?” Mrs. Weasley spoke finally looking at Dumbledore.

“Nothing Molly, Harry is having a hard time believing I’m alive, since the night everyone thought I was dead was a set-up basically.” Dumbledore said soothingly looking at the Weasley’s and Hermione.

Outside Ginny was looking for Harry, but she couldn’t find him at all. She looked at the backyard, then the front yard, then the Barn, and finally the Broom shed out in front of the house but, her search was unsuccessful. So she retreated back to the Burrow and went inside and told Dumbledore she couldn’t find him. But Dumbledore merely smiled and whispered “ old maple tree” and smiled again and glanced at Ginny and she nodded and swept out of the Burrow again. Ron suddenly stood up and was heading towards the door but was stopped as Dumbledore spoke to Ron out loud.

“Mr. Weasley, I believe that you should leave your sister with the task to comfort Harry, as she would be more successful then you would. Since she is his girlfriend, however don’t think Harry isn’t loyal to you ort Hermione, cause he is but I think he would enjoy Ginny more then you or Hermione.” Dumbledore said his eyes twinkling as he sat down at the table.

“Now, I will tell all of you the story” Dumbledore spoke above more then a whisper.

Meanwhile outside Harry was thinking as usual when he heard a noise and was surprised that Ginny was climbing the tree with ease as he saw her almost fall of the tree, suddenly he reached his hand out and grabbed Ginny’s arm before she fell and pulled her up. Gasping Ginny muttered thanks and looked at him with worried eyes, nothing could prepare him for that look as she watched him like he was going to run and not look back. Harry smiled again feeling his anger at Dumbledore subside and his warmly feeling replaced it as he looked a Ginny.

“Harry, are you alright? Do feel well?” shrugged Ginny as she spoke in her way that gave Harry chills down his spine because she could control his emotions with only speaking.

“Yeah, Ginny I’m fine. I love you, you know that don’t you?” asked Harry looking at Ginny smiling to him like she never had before, her eyes were filled with love, not regular love, pure love.

“Yeah Harry, I know and you all ready know I love you more then life itself. I think God, for bringing you to me.” Ginny said in the sweet flattery voice of hers.

Harry then jumped down the tree and caught the trunk before he hit the ground looking up he saw Ginny climb down behind him.

“Your crazy-” Ginny said before she could finish though she was interrupted by Harry.

“Ginny? Do you want to... to go with me, flying with me on my broom?” he looked at her, grinning as usual, he couldn’t help the feeling he got when he was around her. She shook her head meaning no, that destroyed him right there, he was planning a romantic ride in the moonlight with the one he loved but she didn’t want to. But she smiled indicating she would with a devilish grin in the end.

“I was messing around with you Harry, you should know that I would go anywhere, with you” the proud Ginny said puffing out her chest.

Harry grabbed her hand and felt the sparks fly to her to him with that one touch, he pulled his wand out said “accio firebolt” and they climbed the broom and with a quick kickoff Harry was gone in the air with Ginny on his broom.

Meanwhile in the Burrow Dumbledore had just finished telling them the story and telling them how he thinks Voldemort will try to possess Harry and everyone was quiet listening to the soft gentle clinks when someone put their mug down, the air was full of silence. Suddenly Molly stood up and looked at Dumbledore before she walked outside almost touching the door when Dumbledore spoke again.

“There is two more things that require all of your attention, they are both about Harry, Molly” Dumbledore said looking at Molly now all his attention and he spoke again “I know what your thinking Molly, Harry will not hurt her I know, they are in love and that will make Ginny safe from Voldemort possessing Harry.” he finished as she walked back to her seat and looking at Dumbledore.

“Now there is one more thing that’s important, it’s so important that I didn’t even tell Harry. I know it seems wrong since it concerns him but I have to stop it from taking over him. When it happens and If he knows, what it is before I help he will certainly, die.” Dumbledore said pausing letting this, sink in everyone’s head then he spoke again with determination like they never heard in his voice before even Lupin who just walked in was silent.

He flicked his wand and a spell came out of his wand and surrounded the house making it impossible for someone to eavesdrop.

“Now, that I have you attention, I will tell you of something I only found out days ago that happens to Potter’s. Harry, at seventeen will inherit magical powers that will even surpass even my magical powers.” Dumbledore said glancing at everyone, waiting for his memory and thought to return him then he spoke again. “ Now I’m sure you all are, well surprised to hear this but it is true. I’m not lying to you and her is the concern when a Potter reached the adult age 17, the power bonds with them, and if the Potter that has the power developing, has gone thru a lot of pain, misery, and ultimately loneliness they will be tempted into the dark side.” Dumbledore finished.

“But Harry has gone through it all, but loneliness. Other then that we should be worried.” Hermione said desperately looking at Dumbledore again not worried about anyone else.

“For the first time Hermione I hate to say your wrong, Harry goes through loneliness all the time, even though he hides it. All he really wants is a family of his own, but he knows he has a family here, but he wants to be more.” Dumbledore said sadly, looking at the crying Hermione.

“But...But.. doesn’t he believe that his family is here, and don’t you all consider Harry family.” Molly said looking at everyone, asking if they though he was family each of them all nodded in Molly’s statement.

“Well anyway Harry is on his way back so I need to finish quick, Ginny and him should touch ground in exactly two minutes.” Dumbledore said looking at a watch and then stuffing it back in his pocket. “Now, when his powers show I want all of you to stay away from him and send me a message, I want to know as soon as possible, because Voldemort will know as soon as his powers come out.” Dumbledore exclaimed to everyone then with a crack he was gone leaving them all to ponder on their own thoughts.

Then a blood splitting scream came out of nowhere, as everyone ran outside and Lupin immediately left to go get Dumbledore. Everyone was surprised at what they saw when they reached outside. Everything was on fire as Ginny ran towards them clutching the firebolt, crying as she wept on her mom’s shoulders, then they all saw what made Ginny scream, standing about fifty feet away was..... twenty death eaters, they were slowly moving towards the glowing figure that was Harry. Slowly they pulled out their wands and was about to go to Harry when Dumbledore appeared in front of them and muttered “ aliso mamineds alsio kilsaud wiroefsefe” and there was a wall of clear transparent light in front of him and that blocked the way to Harry.

“Are you crazy Dumbledore! Why aren’t you going to help--” shouted Molly looking at Dumbledore like he was an imposter then glaring at everyone for not helping her.

“No, Molly I’m saving all of you, if we go near him he could explode and kill is all!” shouted Dumbledore over the hollering.

Then they saw it happen, Harry’s powers awaken with a loud bang.......

you are so unbelievely awesome !!

*Waves hands in air* thank you, thank you Denniz234 you have to be my number uno fan.. Well I think I'm wasting time doing this and I need to post updates so R&R

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“Bellatrix, I’ll kill you” Harry said roaring at Bellatrix who was laughing pointing at him.

Then she pointed her wand at him and muttered “ Avada Kedavra” and the green light came out of the wand and was soaring towards him “ you have no wand boy, you will die tonight and I’ll make sure of that” Bellatrix laughed again. Then the green light came and it was seconds to him and Dumbledore was shocked he was going to die, Harry can’t stop the Unforgivable curse from hitting him. Then a fire erupted in Harry like never before he hated Bellatrix so badly he couldn’t stand it. Then the light was just about to hit him and when the sound of death came rushing to Harry he rose his hands and screamed “ No, I’m not dieing today Bellatrix.” Then the green curse slowly stopped in front of his hands an he screamed again and the curse was deflected.

“How, did you do that boy.” spat Bellatrix who was standing there in shock, she couldn’t believe what she just saw, Potter blocked the curse which couldn’t be blocked!

“Dumbledore, how can he do that.” Molly screeched at Dumbledore he eyes wide in shock just like everyone else’s.

“I don’t know, I didn’t think that his power would be that strong!” Dumbledore said amazed looking at Harry.

“Yes we are going to win this war.” Ron said thrilled grabbing Hermione’s hand as they did a dance.

“No yet, Ron like I said earlier Harry might be powerful, but he could lose control of himself and go to the dark side.” the fearful Dumbledore said then he sighed and added “and if he does he will be killed.”

Then everyone’s attention was back on Harry again. Bellatrix was calming down as she laughed at raised up Harry’s wand and snapped it cleanly in two.
But Harry just walked to Bellatrix without stopping and then he laughed surprising everyone, “Idiot, you think a wand will stop ME” Harry laughed at the startled Bellatrix fear in her eyes.

Then he rose his hand once more and made a violent slashing move without speaking, and Bellatrix was slashed with a imaginary sword as the blood came out of her. She quickly muttered something at the cut was gone and she was furious, Harry then raised his hand again and Bellatrix fell to the ground writhing in pain. Then Voldemort appeared and for the first time everyone saw fear in his eyes, as he grabbed Bellatrix who was still screaming in pain, “how does it feel, huh does it hurt?” Harry chuckled. Then Voldemort rose his wand and send the killing curse out and this time Harry didn’t even move as the green beam of light stopped in front of Harry, and Harry sent it away by looking at it. Voldemort was in shock as he grabbed Bellatrix who was screaming still, and they apparated with a loud crack.

As the barrier Dumbledore set up disappeared, Harry’s powers soon evaporated and he ran at them all looking extremely happy. Mrs. Weasley ran up to him and hugged him in a grip so strong, Harry felt a pain go through his body and saw that his rib had cracked. Molly was looking at Harry, with sorrow in his eyes and she was trying to wave her wand but Harry rose his arm and slid it down on the injury and it was healed before she could even speak. Everyone was gasping at him like he was a immortal being, with powers. For the first time Dumbledore walked up to him and hugged him in a fatherly way which made Harry smile at Dumbledore even more.

“Harry, Harry are you alright” Ginny ran frantically towards him and flung herself to him and kissed him. She let out a small oh, and everyone was surprised but not Harry.

She quickly spoke before anyone asked. “ I felt a surge of energy go through me” she explained as everyone looked at her speechless, Dumbledore nodded then pulled out a piece of parchment and read it and smiled.

“Molly, I’m afraid that you will have to let Ginny and Harry sleep in the same bed, I know you don’t like it but it says here that while developing his powers he needs to be surrounded with his love and in this case, Ginny.” he spoke slowly and clearly and Molly nodded and went back in the house.

“Well on a happier note, you two won’t have to sneak into each others bed at night.” Dumbledore whispered and smiled at the two of them and they laughed.

“Right you are Dumbledore” Ginny whispered back to Dumbledore smirking.

“Now I hope I don’t regret saying that.” Dumbledore said, the smile was gone and it was replaced by a look of wonder.

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“You won’t headmaster.” Harry said looking at Dumbledore, with his gaze with a smirk as he laughed.

“Enjoy each other’s company. Harry, and Ginny, well I’ll see you both later, oh and by the way. Harry, I think I found something that you might like... when I was traveling earlier before you saw me today, I found an animal, that you will know what it is when you see it.” Dumbledore said cheerful looking at the excitement on Harry’s face, then smiling at Harry.

“What is it, sir? What could it be? Come on give me a hint!” Harry said thinking after a moment, looking at Ginny to see she was as puzzled as he was.

“Here is an hint, I have this animal in my room, and you saw it in the chamber of secrets.” Dumbledore said to Harry smiling as he understood what it was.

“Can I really have a, Phoenix? Dumbledore?” Harry said excited to Dumbledore, then looking at Ginny he saw the fear in her eyes when she heard Chamber of Secrets.”

“Yes I believe so.” Dumbledore said then a Phoenix came out of no where and landed on Harry’s shoulder, and it cried the Phoenix song, as Harry rose his hand to stroke it. “See I knew I was right in thinking of you, it seems she likes you a lot, but I hope you at lease let her visit Fawkes.” Dumbledore said, approaching the Phoenix and stroking it as well.

“But don’t you have Hedwig?” Ginny asked looking at the beautiful Phoenix, and smiling at it when it raised it’s head in Ginny’s hand.

“Yeah, I do.” Harry said feeling ashamed in not thinking about her. “But, I guess I’ll use Lightening when I have to go somewhere or when I have to send a letter a long distance.” Harry said smiling at the orange bird and looking at the single stripe of yellow going down it’s belly.

“Ahh, It seems that Lightening likes that name, and Hedwig likes her.” Dumbledore said relieved because he forgot about Hedwig. Also Lightening was cuddling up to Harry’s cheek, then it flew up in vanished into thin air.

“Well, I must go.” Dumbledore said, smiling at Harry, again. “ I need to get to Hogwarts and get ready for next year, I hope you’ll come to school next year, Harry.” he added in, before a loud crack came and he vanished into thin air.

After that, Harry and Ginny made there way to the Burrow and then sat down at the table. And they began to eat, everything that Mrs. Weasley had cooked for the evening, Harry felt his jeans were a little to big and with a look at his pants they grew a little bigger. Mrs. Weasley noticed and laughed, and Harry laughed as well because he understood what she meant.

That night as everyone was about to go to bed, something was wrong, something was wrong with Harry. Ginny looked at him and felt scared everyone did his appearance wasn't comforting, his hair was standing up with sparks coming out of it and his finger had electricity coming out of them. Ginny immediately wrote a note to Dumbledore on a piece of parchment and thought for a moment then her face lit up.

“Lightening, come here.” called Ginny desperately then as she stopped a bird appeared and screeched and then Ginny said, “ give this to Dumbledore.” and the bird grabbed the note and disappeared. A minute later Dumbledore came and was white in the face.

“Sorry, had to hurry. Where is he?” Dumbledore said worried. Looking at everyone’s finger pointing beside him. Causing Dumbledore to jump, and he pulled out his wand and tried to stun him but Harry, knocked it out of the way.

“Harry, fight it, fight it.” exasperated Dumbledore as he looked at Harry with fear in his eyes. “ I’m sorry, but I’m going to have to use a spell I’m hoping I wouldn’t have to use but if I don’t hurry, I may be to late!”

Just then Dumbledore raised his wand and concentrated for a second and a spell came out of the wand and when through Harry before he could even blink. Everyone watched as Harry, fell to the ground and yelled, over and over again. But when Ginny saw in Dumbledore’s eyes made her cry. Dumbledore had tears, tears in his eyes because this spell cause pain to the target and Dumbledore hoped he would never have to use this on Harry. After five minutes of Ginny pleading and Dumbledore saying he had to do it, Dumbledore raised his wand. Then Harry, came to and there was tears in his eyes, he couldn’t believe he had almost attacked someone.

“Now, Harry. Control the pain, fight it don’t let it take over you.” Dumbledore said calming down finally, and seeing that Harry was himself again.

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It aIN'T the longest but oh well I was busy this weekend R&R

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Ok sorry for the long wait for a post hopefully this will make up for it
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Chapter Six


Harry VS. Malfoy


Miles and miles away Voldemort was yelling in pain as he felt Harry’s anger, unlike Harry, Voldemort’s anger was used as a weapon for fear towards him. But that pain was like nothing he had every felt, Harry’s anger was pure hatred and he felt like Voldemort was a little soft. Heck Voldemort shivered when he thought about that anger he just felt. As he thought about it someone came in and began to speak.

“Master? What happened? I heard your scream in the hall.” Bellatrix responded kissing the hems of Voldemort’s cloak.

“I don’t know, Potter has developed some anger so powerful that I felt it.” spat Voldemort looking at Bellatrix in extreme hatred, causing her to whimper.

“But surely y-you ca-ca-can’t feel his emotions? Master.” Bellatrix said frightened as what Voldemort would do know that he is currently pissed.

“Get, Draco.” Voldemort spat looking at the door with mild interest.

“Yes master” Bellatrix said after disappearing behind a door. After a few minutes Draco entered and spoke in a whisper.

“Yes master.” Draco said fearfully, he has never felt safe ever since he failed in killing Dumbledore when in the dark lord’s presence.

“Draco, ahh about time I have a mission for you, pass and you will be redeemed in my eyes.” Voldemort spat looking at the tall, blond boy. And slowly he told Malfoy of the plan to get Potter and trap him and when he finished he laughed and so did Malfoy.

“Finally, I can get Saint Potter. Vengeance will be mine. Don’t worry master, I will not fail you.” Malfoy said smirking about his assignment.

“Good Draco, I’m expecting you to come through with this mission, seeing of how much you hate Potter. Heed this warning, if you fail you die, got it! However if Potter gets help I’ll understand. I’ll have someone to see you duel. To tell you the truth I expect you to fail, he has more power then that wretched fool Albus Dumbledore, and you couldn’t even kill him so I doubt it.” Voldemort spat evilly to Draco, glaring at everyone.

“My lord, what do you mean, he has more power?” Draco muttered. Looking patiently at the Dark lord while thinking of a plan to get Potter alone.

“Never you mind” Voldemort spat, and everyone shuddered at the treacherous glare Voldemort was giving. “Now that I got your attention, I think I’m changing plans, I want you all to get Potter at-”

Then Voldemort stopped and then screamed “Potter” then a wave of his wand and Harry’s mind was gone. Miles and miles away, Harry awoke with a start, sweating and panting like he ran a hundred mile relay. He was holding his scar which was on fire making his eyes water. Ginny woke up next to him paranoid because Harry was having a hard time breathing. She tried to get him up, and when she did she carried him to the shower and turned it on, and left the room closing the door behind her. The hot water felt good to Harry when he got in but he noticed he couldn’t feel it on his forehead, it wasn’t anything big in his opinion.

Then he finished ten minutes later and he got out and used a drying charm on his body and clothes, he then walked out the bathroom and looked in his room to find Ginny. She was sitting on their bed crying, slowly. Suddenly she stopped and saw Harry and ran up to him, seeking comfort from him. He opened his arms and then closed them around her waist, putting his head on top of her head while she had her head on his shoulder. He began rocking her back and forth, slowly just how she liked it and when he did she grabbed on to him even tighter. He then raised her head up and he saw the happiness in her eyes and he slowly kissed her, then he got away and walked out to the kitchen. But before he left he spoke to Ginny.

“So...” Harry began to say but stopped when he saw a green flash of light and he put his hand up, thinking it wasn’t a good idea to go outside and then he yelled for lighting and told her to get Dumbledore.

“Ginny, go I need to deflect this, it’s the Avada Kedavra curse.” Harry spoke in a whisper. Ginny then moved behind him and then Harry deflected the curse back at whoever the caster is.

Whoever it was moved as the curse got close and when he moved Harry saw a head full of blond hair and recognized him as Malfoy. Harry began to run after him and then several thing happened at once. First everyone came out of the Burrow to see what the disturbance was, Dumbledore appeared behind a tree hiding, he was holding Lighting tail. Then he let go and she went to Harry’s shoulder and tried to set but Harry pointed at Ginny and the bird went on Ginny’s shoulder, while Ginny petted it. Then several Death eaters appeared out of the bushed among them was Snape. And to make matters worse they were all aiming at Harry.

“What do you want Malfoy?” Harry spat when he said Malfoy. Like the name was poisonous, while he glared at everyone in turn.

“Potty, Potty, watch you manners or I’ll kill you.” Malfoy taunted at Harry, then laughing at the Weasley’s house.

“No, Malfoy.” Harry smirked at Malfoy then he added “I’m sending a message to Voldemort.” he stopped then while everyone told him to watch his mouth. Then he continued again “Tell him, his time is coming when he will be bowing down for death.”

“Ignorant fool.” Snape spat like he never had before to Potter.

Then Harry lost control after that and a cure came out of nowhere in Harry’s hand, and it was green and heading for Snape but before Snape could move it hit him, it was the killing curse. Then Harry looked at Malfoy, both hating each other. Malfoy then said things to make Harry made no noticing that Harry’s magic was starting to show because Harry’s hair was sticking up with electricity, his hands were emitting sparks from all ten fingers. Also Harry was shaking. Then Malfoy said “I can’t wait to kill you, I’m going after your little girlfriend Ginny and I’m going to-” What ever he was going to do was interrupted because suddenly Harry tackled Malfoy forgetting about magic and then punching every part of Malfoy he could reach. It was scary, Harry was in pure rage it was so bad that the girls were crying and the death eaters were trying to stun Harry but it couldn’t reach him. When it got near it would bounce back in the force field of magic surrounding Harry.

Then Harry got another crack at Malfoy and landed his fist on Malfoy’s face with a sickening crunch. And Harry went after another punch again but he took to long and Malfoy raised his wand and it thru him backwards. Then he raised his wand and a snake came out and went after Ginny. But instead of speaking to it Harry transformed into a Lion.

“How can he do that?” Hermione said. Shocked at how much the person she knew was changing.

“I believe I can answer that when they leave.” Dumbledore whispered at Hermione.

Slowly the Lion came to Ginny and grabbed her with his mouth and slung her on his back and he moved away and then he stuck the snake and killed it. He then moved back to the spot everyone was at and dropped her where Molly and everyone else was. Then Harry, untransformed and was Harry again and went after Malfoy before he apparated, but before he got close Malfoy raised his wand and pointed at Ginny and muttered “SECTUMSEMPRA” and the curse was going after Ginny but Harry was quick thankfully he reached her before she got hit, but Harry didn’t have time to move it, so he put his hands up and took the blast and their was a loud shredding sound of flesh being removed. Slowly the blood went to his eyes and Harry fell down to his knees.

“NO! NOOOOOO!” Molly yelled and everyone was going to Harry. “Hermione take Ginny, she doesn’t need to see this.”

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Everyone I'm sorry about taking so long but I promise that I will post tonight. I swear I will. I have had a major writing block for past three weeks but I'm past that so I will update tonight I promise.

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“Mrs.. Mrs... Weasley.... it’s... fine... I... can.... heal..... myself... if... you.... will... remove..... my..... shirt.” Harry said slowly as she removed his shirt. The site wasn’t pretty and it was worse when Ginny saw it, she began to cry and rushed over to him putting his head on her lap. She was crying more now because she saw his once emerald eyes nothing but blood was seen. Plus his chest was covered in blood and cuts but there was a cut so deep you could see inside his body.

“Gin... Ginny... let.... go...... I.... ne... need... to-to... hurry... before.. I... die.” Harry spoke and he was having trouble talking because blood was inside his mouth now.

She slowly moved away and so did everyone else. Then Harry spoke slowly with the last part of strength he possessed.

“Demantio elmindio, ginaxi” he said then his body rose off the ground and slowly light surrounded him and his cuts were disappearing and then the blood in his eyes was gone. Then the light dropped him slowly on the ground making him stand and it was gone. The Harry fell backwards darkness surrounding him, until he knew no more.

Then Ginny ran to him and was trying to wake him up but he wouldn’t budge, and he wasn’t even breathing correct he was breathing short breaths.

“Harry, Harry please wake up, please. I can’t lose you, I need you.” Ginny spoke softly while the tears were coming out of her eyes.

Slowly Harry’s breathing was getting better and with every word he said he was causing pain beyond any you could ever imagine.

“Ginny, I’m fine, I won’t leave you I promise. I love you to much to leave you. I need you just like you need me.” Harry spoke clearly, trying to raise up but he was in to much pain to even sit.

“Get, Dumbledore he’s in the tree right there.” winced Harry, pointing to the tree where Dumbledore just appeared out of.

Dumbledore slowly walked over to Harry and raise him up and called for Madam Pomfrey to get him a blood potion to restore his blood. Five minutes later madam Pomfrey arrived with a potion and gave it to Harry. He swallowed it while he got up and walked into the Burrow with Ginny holding on to him to make sure he don’t fall. She had her arms around his waist while Harry had his arms around her waist as well. As soon as he got in he walked towards the couch and threw himself on the couch wincing every time he shifted his weight. It also didn’t help that Ginny was snuggling on him, she had her head on his chest while he had his head on the top of the couch, and slowly his chest raised up and down.

That night when Harry woke up, he felt strange he was surrounded in darkness and no one was there to help or guide him back. It took him a minute to realize he was in the living room in thee Burrow. He slowly moved his feet on the cold floor and got up with difficulty, and he realized he was having trouble breathing but he couldn’t figure out why he was having trouble. By an feeling in his gut he looked down at his chest and he saw why he was having trouble his whole chest was covered in scars little ones though. “Great more scars for me.” he thought sarcastically. Then he notices one large scar by his belly button and he felt light headed it was pure red and it covered his belly from right to left.

After looking at his chest which was nasty he decided to move slowly to the window not aware of the presence of Ginny across the room. But he couldn’t move that good so he decided that he would go to sleep again and hope he would be better tomorrow. With a loud clung Harry laid across the couch and waved his hand and the window opened and a gentle breeze came in the warm house. Slowly Harry felt his head hurt then he fell back into the darkness.

He was in a room, a dark room and there was figures in the room and they were covered in sheets, red sheets, all except one. The one that wasn’t covered was Voldemort. He was sitting on a seat and was thinking apparently, and wasn’t paying attention to anything. Then he heard a squeak, and the Dark Lord chuckled.

“Potter, so nice to see you again, even if it is in your mind. I brought you here to show you the future Potter. Pay attention to the main show.” Voldemort laughed and with a flick of his wand the red sheets disappeared and standing there was non other then the Weasley’s and Hermione. Each had bloody faces and clothes that were ripped on the sleeves and they were all hanging by their wrist. They looked at Harry with tears in their eyes: and a thought that made way to Harry it was Ginny’s message.

“How can you let this happen to us? I thought you loved me Harry. Clearly I was wrong, you don’t love me you used me. I hate you.” Ginny spoke in a frighteningly low and calm voice.

Then other messages came and they all said the same thing. “We hate you Harry.” Harry couldn’t take it so he had to use his Occlumency lessons to block them.

“Ahh, Harry it seems you finally mastered Occlumency lessons, congrats. But you still are to blame for their pain, if you would’ve died or joined me they could’ve lived in peace even Granger.” Voldemort spoke softly.

“I swear on my parent's grave, my godfather's grave, and other people’s grave that you killed, I’ll kill you once and for all.” Harry spoke as the red aura surrounded him.

“Touching Harry, touching.” Voldemort laughed pretending to wipe a fake tear. “But it doesn’t matter you’ll die not me.”

Then Voldemort spoke an incantation and a beam or light hit Harry and he fell back screaming before he passed out.

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Thanks to the searing pain in his scar the boy named Harry Potter woke up gasping, trying to sooth the pain in his forehead while he thought about the dream. It seemed so real, and it was frightening to think about. But he couldn’t help but wonder what if it happened?

“No I won’t... let... it happen.” Harry spoke forcefully to himself, unaware of the busy brown headed woman at the entrance looking towards Harry, struggling to decide what to do for him.

Then apparently she figured oh well and walked into the room and slowly went to Harry. As she got closer she felt an feeling like she was being watch but she shook it off. Just then Harry began to cough and blood was coming out in front of him but she didn’t know that because his back was towards her so she couldn’t see anything but his bare back and his navy shorts.

“Harry, are you alright.” Hermione questioned speaking softly, trying not to startle him while walking towards him.

All she got was a nod and more coughing and then another gasp in return to her question. When she stopped right behind him, she slowly went to his side and walked around him and stopped in front of him but she couldn’t see his face because he was looking down while he coughed. Then she got down and sat right in front of Harry as she watched him wave his hand and a towel appeared right next to his leg and he grabbed it and covered his face gently applying pressure to his face. Finally he folded the towel to use the other side when a hand went under his chin and moved his head up and he realized it was Hermione’s and when his face was in view for her she gasped. Harry was bleeding from his mouth where he bit his tongue and his scar was bleeding.

“Harry let me heal it please. Or you going to bleed to death.” Hermione spoke softly in a knowing voice.

“Hermione don’t worry about it. I’m fine I’ll heal it in a minute I’m trying to relax before I can.” Harry replied looking her in her eyes.

“But you’ll die if you don’t let me heal you now. Aren’t you afraid of death?” Hermione breathed in a hiss back towards him.

“At first yes I was afraid.” Harry answered back but the seeing the confused look she gave him he continued. “ I’m not afraid of death, when it comes I’ll welcome it with open arms, besides my parents and Sirius is there so I’ll not be alone.” Harry finished true fully.

Looking at Hermione’s face he felt bad he had said anything because the look on her face was shock, sad, and on the verge of tears. When he looked in her eyes he saw the saw the same thing but there was another emotion that he wasn’t sure he saw correctly.....love.

“Go on ’Mione, I can ‘t focus. So go ahead and heal it.” Harry spoke softly while he looked at Hermione’s face as it changed to happiness.

She slowly pulled out her wand and flicked it while muttering something under her breath and slowly a light came out of her wand and hit Harry in his mouth and the cut was instantly healed. Then another look appeared on her face as she watched him open his mouth and felt with his finger to see if the cut was healed. Satisfied he pulled his finger out and looked at it and smiled at Hermione.

“Thanks, ’Mione it’s healed. I owe you.” whispered Harry looking at her face and smirking. “You know I won’t mind, just do it don’t be afraid. Me and Ginny broke up before I awoke the second time tonight. Heck, I’m lying about that she woke me up two hours earlier and told me she wants to break up and I agreed. So you can kiss me and I won’t get mad and either will---.” Harry explained in a whisper as Hermione’s face had another look of happiness and before he could finish Hermione kissed him on the lips.

The kiss was the best to Harry, it was unlike any kiss he ever had with Ginny. When he kissed her it was a little spark that went to his fingertips but with Hermione the spark went everywhere in his body and the kiss was full of passion, unlike any Harry had ever felt in his life it was as if fate had picked Hermione and Ginny was a leg up for Hermione. All Harry knew was this was a wonderful first kiss with Hermione. And Hermione felt the same way. After a few seconds in the kiss Harry’s arms went around Hermione’s waist and her hands got knotted in his hair. Then to Harry’s surprise, Hermione’s tongue went across his bottom lip to ask for entrance to his mouth but to Hermione’s disappointment, Harry pulled away.

“I’m sorry Harry, didn’t mean to-” Hermione spoke very fast while standing up and avoiding from looking at his face, because she was afraid to see the anger.

“ ‘Mione look at me.” Harry spoke in a commanding voice. Then she looked at him and was relieved to see an ‘ok’ expression. “You don’t have to be sorry, I should be because I’m leaving with Dumbledore tomorrow for two months and I won’t see you for one of those months, that is if you aren’t going to go hunting with me are you?” Harry spoke again slowly so she can understand what’s going to happen. She then looked up and nodded to show she was coming and Harry broke out in a grin followed by herself.

She then went to kiss him again and Harry raised his hand to stop her and said once again, “Hermione what about Ron isn’t he your boyfriend?”

“No Harry, he isn’t my boyfriend he’s going out with someone else. Luna Lovegood is who he is going out with now. And hopefully with that kiss I got a minute ago I’m your... girlfriend now?” Hermione added in a hopeful voice.

“Of course, friends don’t kiss like that, you nearly took my breath away ‘Mione.” Harry chuckled softly while Hermione smiled and kissed him all out, with her tongue dancing with his inside his mouth.

“Well, what do you want to talk about?” Hermione asked Harry with a thoughtful frown on her face. As she studied Harry’s facial expression.

“Honestly ‘Mione, I’m worried. This power I have is growing stronger and stronger everyday and my body is having problems coping with the stress it is putting on my body. That’s not it either, remember when I fought Bellatrix, well that power is nothing compared to when I use it of my power. Dumbledore told me until I can get my body in shape and Magical core up I can’t use it all that’s why I have this on my neck.” Harry spoke barely above a whisper as he pulled on a chain that was around his neck. It was gold with a Griffindor insignia on it, and it went down to his heart and it glowed a dim golden color when he touched it.

“What does this chain do to your powers? And what would happen if you use to much of your power then your body can handle? And is this ‘the power the dark lord knows not’?” Hermione finally finished with her questions as she waited with baited breath for her answers.

“The chain on my neck reduces the power to be in check, which means it won’t let anymore of my power out then my body can handle. If I use to much power I can end up with a beaten body that will have to recover the muggle way or worse I will be destroyed. And no this is not the power he knows not, the power Voldemort knows not is love. I thank whatever power is watching me that I am Godric Griffindor’s heir or I wouldn’t be able to wear this necklace.” Harry finally finished as he got up and walked over to his spot on the couch and snapped his fingers and two cups of hot steaming chocolate mugs appeared on the table.

Harry then reached for his cup and began to drink it slowly as Hermione did the same as she sat next to Harry and snuggled to his chest while he had an arm around her. They remained in silence for awhile, nothing but the occasional tick tock on the grandfather clock in the room. Then all of the sudden a silent pop echoed in the house. Harry stood up and put a finger to his lips to Hermione to tell her to remain quiet and with a snap of his fingers both her and Hermione disillusioned into thin air. Slowly a figure appeared in the doorway and spoke softly to Harry and Hermione.

“Harry, Hermione quick we need to get out of here. We need to wake up everyone! Tom is on his way here in about twenty minutes.” spoke the soft voice of Dumbledore as he walked over to the disillusioned teenagers. With another snap of Harry’s fingers Hermione and Harry came into view.

“Harry! What are you thinking how do you know this is Dumbledore!” Hermione spoke to Harry in a quick whisper although she remained facing Dumbledore.

What came from Harry’s mouth next surprised Hermione and Dumbledore both.

That was so good. I can't wait to see wait to see what Harry is going to say to them both. Post more soon.

yea please post more soon

come on post i want to know what harry said to hermione and dumbledore

what she said^^

“I think I know my own Great Grandfather and plus I can read his mind I know he is Albus.” smirked Harry as he looked at both of the shocked faces of Hermione and Albus.

“How did you know?” was all Dumbledore said as his eyes started to twinkle brightly as he looked at Harry his Great grandson.

“You mean it’s true!” Hermione said in complete shock as she stared at both of them.

“Yes it is true ‘Mione. I looked up my family tree after I thought you died and I found out Minerva is my Great grandmother, Godric is my great, great, great, great grandpa, and finally last but most certainly not lease. Merlin is my great, great, great, great, great, great grandpa. Most certainly a powerful family.” Harry said. Then he laughed at Hermione’s face she looked like she had a seizure and she blinked a lot.

“Merlin, Godric, Dumbledore, and McGonagal.” Hermione whisper over and over again as she saw Dumbledore’s face break out in a smile and then she knew he was telling the truth. Not that she was doubting him of course but he had a rare and power family line.

“Yes, Hermione. Harry has a great family tree, but that is also why Voldemort chose Harry as his equal because of his family. Eventually Harry will be the next Godric or Merlin in the world. But for now we need to get ready unless of course you want to stay and scare Tommy.” smirked Dumbledore as he turned his head to Harry and asked to question and in return Harry nodded his head. Then Albus pulled out a wand and threw it towards Harry who caught it with ease. “You now you should be lucky Fawkes likes you or you wouldn’t had received another wand.” Albus stated then he nodded towards both teens and apparated upstairs to wake everyone up.

Ten minutes went by as Harry practiced with his wand, occasionally doing swishes and flicks and other stuff. Then several pops came behind Harry. He slowly turned around and saw all the Weasley’s and, Luna?!?! But before Harry could ask anything Dumbledore spoke.

“Alright everyone we had an attack is coming here in five minutes and I’m giving permission for you to use any curse you want besides the killing curse. Only me and Harry here can use that, there will be 50 Death Eaters here and Voldemort as well.” Dumbledore spoke then paused as everyone beside Harry, Hermione, and him shuddered. “ But don’t worry you have Harry and me here so don’t worry about Tom, leave him to Harry.” Dumbledore stated as everyone looked at Harry when he said this then all of the sudden Harry’s body tensed and in a blur Harry was suited up with his wand out.

“They’re here Albus. Let’s go.” Harry whispered Harry then another second later Harry apparated out of the living room. Then apparated outside where the Death Eaters and Tom were outside walking to the Burrow. Then a second later everyone else was outside including the Order of the Phoenix. “Everyone leave Bellatrix and Tommy to me!” Harry shouted as he threw a massive curse towards the middle of Voldemort’s group which killed five Death Eaters immediately.

“Harry Potter! So nice to see you outside in the real world instead of the dream world. Did you like that dream I sent you? Do you want to see it come true?” Voldemort taunted as he dodged another curse thrown at him by Harry.

That was all it took for Harry to lose control of his emotions, all of the sudden the necklace Harry was wearing glowed a bright golden color and destroyed around his neck. Then another beam of light came out of no where in front of Harry and then it disappeared and right in front of Harry was Godric Griffindor’s sword.

“No Tom, it won’t come true. I’ll rip you piece by piece till I decide to show you mercy and kill you.” Harry spoke in a deep voice that sounded no where near his own as his body started to glow golden then stopped. But then his eyes changed and his body became more bigger in muscles. Right now his eyes were no longer green they were now glowing gold and he was looking right at Voldemort. And what happen next surprised everyone besides Harry, Voldemort took a step away from Harry as his eyes were showing fear.

“That’s right Tom, show fear of me. You have been wrong to fear Dumbledore all a long, the person you should have feared was ME!” Harry shouted the last word as the sky began to start lighting.

“HARRY, CALM DOWN YOU WILL KILL US ALL!” Dumbledore shouted as he apparated in front of Harry, who was standing there as he began to unleash his power while holding his ancestor’s sword.

“YOU? YOU CAN’T BE ALIVE YOU WERE DEAD!!!!!” Voldemort shouted as he began ranting towards his followers then by surprise he shot a killing curse but before it hit Dumbledore who was about to move Harry’s arm shot up and stopped the curse and deflected it back to another Death Eater who died before he could move.

“AARGH POTTER! I’LL KILL YOU!” Voldemort spat as he apparated and re-apparated in front of Harry and before Harry could say anything he shot a killing curse at him and it hit Harry in the middle of the chest.

Right that instant as Harry’s body was thrown across the field everyone stopped as everyone watched the Boy who Lived died. Then Voldemort started to laugh followed by his Death Eaters who were cheering as the Light was crying as the hero, the one who was going to get rid of the evil in the world perished. Dumbledore stood there transfixed now he had to continue the mission without his Grandson. Hermione was taking it the worst she broke down and ran to Harry’s body and was shaking him hard trying to wake him up. When she failed she started to go to hysterical sobs because here best friend and boyfriend died before she could even got the chance to tell him she loved him. After a few more seconds Voldemort stopped and looked at his dead adversary, his one true enemy, ‘well not anymore’ he thought to himself as he began to grin.

“Pity, he would have made a nice right hand man, so much potential oh well. Move Mudblood I want to see the darkness in his eyes then I’m taking him.” Voldemort spat towards Hermione as he walked towards Harry.

“No leave his body alone, you killed him so leave him alone.” Hermione said while crying as she looked at Harry’s murderer who stopped in front of her and Harry.

“Yes I did kill him, but I want to see the absence of light in his eyes. Then I want to kill everyone else starting with you!” Voldemort chuckled again as Hermione attempted to use her body as a shield from Voldemort.

“Just leave him alone, there is no life in him to fight he is dead.” Hermione sniffled as she began to cry again.

“Yes I know, pity really all of his love ones dead and now he girlfriend is going to die and he can’t even see it with he own eyes. Now say goodbye Mudblood AVADA-” Voldemort spoke as he raised his wand and pointed it towards Hermione, but was interrupted before he could finish by someone else.

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Once again I'm sorry for taking so long truely.

If I have any readers left Thank you for staying I'll try to update once or twice per week!

Scotty

why do you always cut off when it gets really good

yay u updated! great story!