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It's sort of like an inspiration off of DBZ, it currently doesn't have a name as I am changing it, the last name was Dragonstones but I'm changing the name, taking out the stones & I'm taking out a dragon who can grant wishes. Anyway, it's basically about fighters becoming stronger & fighting aliens who want to either destory the universe or conquer it. It won't be all fighting though, some episodes will show them laid back & they'll be doing other stuff. They will have transformations (even the humans) & the humans will have just as much time as the alien fighters who're on the good side. I'm still practicing drawing so there are no concept images at the moment but I'm hoping to start drawing the manga as soon as possible. At my current rate this will take quite a while to complete, I'd say 5-7 years. Hopefully it'll be finished sooner.


Any questions?

Why not just name it Dragonball Z? Because that's what it sounds like in my opinion.

It's in EARLY production. Besides, I'm on another forum where a guy is creating a manga/anime which will be appearing on TV in 2007 & he is helping me. Besides, you should learn more about it before you say it's going to be a ripoff or a failure. One of the basic things that separates my manga/anime from DBZ is the fact that it's not just all energy attacks. The characters rely more on physical attacks whereas in DBZ energy attacks are used every second.

Originally posted by Superman_045
It's in EARLY production. Besides, I'm on another forum where a guy is creating a manga/anime which will be appearing on TV in 2007 & he is helping me. Besides, you should learn more about it before you say it's going to be a ripoff or a failure. One of the basic things that separates my manga/anime from DBZ is the fact that it's not just all energy attacks. The characters rely more on physical attacks whereas in DBZ energy attacks are used every second.

lol I called it a ripoff yes....never said failure though.

Tell me though, why the need for dragonstones? If it's not a rip off then why not have no Dragon that grants wishes? I mean atleast mask it....Say like having a wolf grant wishes whom emerges from a bottle of soda or something....But having a blatent idea like that? Come on.

And having help from published people doesn't really change anything....Your basic idea is a complete rip off of DBZ, I'm sorry but most other people will think it aswell.

How's it a ripoff when I've gotten rid of a lot basically of the DBZ like qualities? There's no dragon, no legendary form & no villains that have to absorb androids for perfection. It's not a ripoff.

You got to have some over all plot....A freak of the week type situation won't work...It'll get repetitive and stale after the first arc.


What's the overall, underlining theme?

Well, I was thinking of having them fighting on different planets, training & sometimes they may lose their powers & fight ordinary criminals using their martial arts.

I don't know man (woman?)......You got to add some depth....Some story to it.


Sure fighting is good eye candy, but over all it makes for a very bad story.

Lol, I'm a dude, I'll fix that real quick.

What type of things should I add to it besides just training & fighting?

Originally posted by Superman_045
Lol, I'm a dude, I'll fix that real quick.

What type of things should I add to it besides just training & fighting?

I don't know....You have to have a main villian....and a reason for the fighters to be protecting the universe.


Not just the cop out "Oh, we're good people, we won't let you kill anyone" Have someone betray them in the opening sequence, and now they're out for revenge....saving people on the way.

Gotcha. That could work. So, instead of this being all manga like, it could be like a comic book like Justice League where they aren't just fighting & they have to figure out stuff.

Originally posted by Superman_045
Gotcha. That could work. So, instead of this being all manga like, it could be like a comic book like Justice League where they aren't just fighting & they have to figure out stuff.

Give or take....Yes.....It makes for a lot more entertaining story....But you can make it like a manga, just have a good story, rather then just constant fighting.

I know I can have a manga, I just want it to be long & not another DBZ series. That's my main reason for taking out the dragon, I knew that if I were to keep him in the story then that'd be my downfall & I wouldn't gt many if any fans. And how long should it take for the aliens to reach their ''special'' forms? In the second saga? Third?

Well how many aliens are transforming? You have to be careful, cuz things like that are a complete and utter plot device. Just like SSJ was at the end of DBZ.

Only two. One of the aliens son can't transform due to being only a halfbreed but he does earn a transformation which is more like a powerup. I hated how they had all those Super Saiyans at the end of DBZ, it was nuts. Vegeta could've been the one to defeat Cell & he could've become a SSJ2 after Cell killed Trunks. Or they could've just left it at the Cell saga without going into the Buu saga. And there will only be two forms, that's good enough.

I think everything would have been fine if Vegeta truly did destroy Buu when he self destructed.


But as for your manga, what do you mean by "powerup"?

Something similar to KaioKen but it's just going to be a powerup for the halfbreed aliens.

So it's generic, not by breed?

Yeah, sort of. It's kind of like their way of being a step behind the actual transformation.

Anybody else have any questions about the manga?

Superman_045, can I ask how old you are? From my experience I know that a lot of these projects don't actually end up going anywhere. From the posts I've read you seem to lack a total structure to what you are doing. You must have a beginning middle and end.

If you own a few manga's take a more closer look at them. Mark down who are the main characters and their traits. Look to see how the creator introduced characters into the plot and when he did it. For instance take Fullmetal Alchemist. It is wonderfully crafted as there is a reoccurring of characters but it happens so naturally. Plus the plot is never fully revealed, the reader is always kept in suspense.

I hope you view this as constructive criticism not an insult on you.

I know it's not an insult but I can only have a beginning, I just started. Also, I know what I'm doing, I've been reading manga's & finding out what's what, I know what I'm doing. I don't know everything yet but I know a lot.

Also, does anyone know how many pages I need to have?

Originally posted by Superman_045
Also, does anyone know how many pages I need to have?

Need to have for what?

The number of pages needed for an issue of manga.

Well, does anyone know?

Nevermind. Anyway, anyone have anymore questions/suggestions?

umm... it's 30 to 40 pages i think...10 pages a chapter sometimes more or less...

How many chapters make up a whole volume? Is it 12 or can it be more?

5 to 6 chapters per volume!

Thanks for your help. And I was thinking about giving them energy/strength ratings. They wouldn't be called Power Levels but I'm still wondering should I use them or not.

Only one new idea as of far, I'm still brainstorming though.

So, anybody else have any questions?

Come on, somebody reply!

why goku get stronger and stronger and the other guys doall the work.

That has nothing to do with my thread you stupid idiot.

thats why no one really likes u.

Actually, you don't like me. There are other people who do. Personally, I don't care if you like me because I don't like you 'cause you're stupid.

Now, to get back to the original topic, I haven't been working on it a lot lately so I don't have any new ideas.

I am stupid so kiddish,but ideas for what?and its not that I dont like u its just some times i dont agree with u and some times I just dont like u,idk why.

Ideas for my manga.

well how dose some of it go

Read through the first page of the thread, I explain a lot there.

Originally posted by Superman_045
Read through the first page of the thread, I explain a lot there.

O so have u came up with a name yet?sound cool i got a scaner i scaned one of my made up drawing.this one was from a year ago

No, no name yet, still working on it. Do you like the overall idea I have?

Yes yes I do.How long have you been working on it now,and do u have any drawings that u made. sometimes i sign my good ones

I've been working on it for about four months & I've made some concept images but they're not what I want so no one has an official look. Besides, I still need to practice drawing.

thats cool BUU is easy to draw try a person like him!see
well i have been drawing for about 4 years now.

If we get rid of the arguing, maybe we could work something out. We both draw it out & work out the story.

that could work

Just for the record, our characters will be stronger than Goku & crew.

lol gotcha

I have an issue of Shonen Jump which I'll probably look at tomorrow or later tonight & practice drawing a little. And do you have any ideas on how Sadiki's son could be like? I mean, his personality.

sadiki's?

It's one of the main character's names & he has a son. Plus, they're aliens so his son his half human.

o cool. what are the alians like.

You really need to read through the first page of the thread but to answer your question they are advanced & peaceful but with superpowers. I'm not going to go into full detail because I don't want my idea getting ripped.

lol ok i will read the whole page

It'll save time & will answer most of your questions.

ok i am hitting the sack ok talk to u tomorrow if ur on

I'll be on tomorow. See ya.

hey some people dont belive i draw this good!lol

I'll need you to draw some concept images of characters later on & try to read more on how to make a manga & read all different types of manga so that you'll be on my level & be able to know what I know so we'll be on the same pace.

I think that I'm going to start working on character designs sometime in the summer. I just need to practice a little more to get better at drawing original things.

ok thats cool

I'm trying to make it where when the characters fight they do more physical attacks than energy attacks.

that is is good because when they get stronger their energy attacks get stronger any way so why not work of the fight good idea!

The main character is going to be almost based on both Superman & Goku.

so like the power and invulnerability of super and the Ki attacks and fighting skills of Super/Goku?


O ya speed to?

Uh, sort of. All I know is that he's DEFINITELY going to be stronger than Goku so that the two won't be compared too much or put in versus matches too much. He'll be more of a match for Superman.

lol

I like the new direction of my manga, it's better than what I originally imagined.

it is nice nice.I think i should make one

Do you have any character names yet or some drawings? ^_^

Read through the thread.

I did. I guess you haven't learned how to draw better.....yet.

thats not nice/true or is it do you know how good he can draw i don't

Originally posted by Clone
I did. I guess you haven't learned how to draw better.....yet.


I can draw very good you sleasy ****.

lol thats why I said do you know if he can draw good but that dude is just a sleazy ****.

Originally posted by Superman_045
I can draw very good you sleasy ****.


First of all, to simplify what it appears to be your 3rd based education, I was merely stating that it is possible that you MIGHT have been working on your drawing skills to become more proficient at it. I wasn't insulting your drawing ability, I was just making a shot in the dark possibility. You fuken fagg*t go toss somebodies salad you f*cken incest.

If you're such a good drawer ALREADY then why not post any pictures?
With a user name like that no wonder your doctor slaped your parents instead of you, fuken cock sucking maniac. If you can't comprehend what I am trying to say just go lie on some railed road tracks and wait for the inevitable, you waste of semen.

What the fu*ck i hope ur not talking to me cuz i have a feeling that ur just talking tuff on the computer cuz no one hear lives by you or don't know where you live.

Originally posted by Clone
First of all, to simplify what it appears to be your 3rd based education, I was merely stating that it is possible that you MIGHT have been working on your drawing skills to become more proficient at it. I wasn't insulting your drawing ability, I was just making a shot in the dark possibility. You fuken fagg*t go toss somebodies salad you f*cken incest.

If you're such a good drawer ALREADY then why not post any pictures?
With a user name like that no wonder your doctor slaped your parents instead of you, fuken cock sucking maniac. If you can't comprehend what I am trying to say just go lie on some railed road tracks and wait for the inevitable, you waste of semen.


I have a third based education? Rrrriiiight. I am very smart, VERY smart (seeing how I get 3.0's & 4.0's & have a knack for spelling things right all the time). Also, it's funny how I'm a male with a GIRLfriend but you're a female so that would mean you probably suck cock because girl's aren't supposed to have cocks but I doubt that you're even worth enough to suck cock, you probably do it for nothing if someone allows you to do so. Also, this ''waste'' of semen has a BRIGHT future yet you're probably some 20-30 year old who flips burgers at McDonald's.






















GO FINISH SUCKING DAT COCK!

















P.S, I haven't posted any pictures because I'm not working on the art right now, I'm working on the story.

Now, to get away from talking to that trash, I'll just simply finish talking about what the thread was originally about....


I may have a character who is half demon/half human or half demon/half alien, it depends. I don't know if I'm going to use that idea or not.

Well all I can say is:I wish you good luck.

me too

Originally posted by buutenks
Well all I can say is:I wish you good luck.



Thanks. I'm hoping that the idea works out well & is accepted by many people.

Originally posted by Superman_045
I have a third based education? Rrrriiiight. I am very smart, VERY smart (seeing how I get 3.0's & 4.0's & have a knack for spelling things right all the time). Also, it's funny how I'm a male with a GIRLfriend but you're a female so that would mean you probably suck cock because girl's aren't supposed to have cocks but I doubt that you're even worth enough to suck cock, you probably do it for nothing if someone allows you to do so. Also, this ''waste'' of semen has a BRIGHT future yet you're probably some 20-30 year old who flips burgers at McDonald's. GO FINISH SUCKING DAT COCK!

P.S, I haven't posted any pictures because I'm not working on the art right now, I'm working on the story.



Okay, it still seems that you're not getting it.* First, having a 3.0, 4.0 grade point average doesn't prove that you're smart. Mentally challenge students can have 3.0's and 4.0's and they would still be consider....umm, below average, like your self. Your insults are very weak, I guess you were just full of shit when you were having that sorry argument with Maynard. and don't give me that same bullshit you gave him, "I just don't want to get banned, I have all sorts of big guns" Blah, blah, blach. Like Maynard said, "You're just a child who got owned and now have a sock account." You should have passed the 3rd grade before you learned how to double click the big blue E.


Originally posted by Superman_045
P.S, I haven't posted any pictures because I'm not working on the art right now, I'm working on the story.

^ Okay........*This late post proves that you're slow. If only you posted this a while back this stupid argument wouldn't have occured. Learn how to understand what you read, you ****en child!

I'm trying to stay positive but I'm going to go out on a limb and say, if you're so smart, why would you bring back an argument that's almost two weeks old. That's stupidty on your behalf & furthermore, I'm done speaking to you, your ''insults'' are lame & so are you. Goodbye now.

Anyway, I have a new manga idea which is based on Bojack. It's called ''the Space Pirates'', I've used two names that were used in the DBZ movie ''Bojack Unbound'' which are Bojack & Bujin. It's basically based on Bojack & his crew & they're trying to conquer universe. More details will be given as time passes on.

well,Half Demon/Half Human sound's like inyuasha.

He's not half human, half demon. He's from a demon like race as well as his henchmen which means they are ALIENS. Maybe you should actually read what's written.

I have another new idea for a manga which is about villains trying to conquer the universe. This idea was inspired by the DBZ villains Hildegarn, Majin Buu & Cell. I think it has potential to work as well as the other idea with Bojack. I just hope that I can get the rights to the name.

Originally posted by Superman_045
I'm trying to stay positive but I'm going to go out on a limb and say, if you're so smart, why would you bring back an argument that's almost two weeks old. That's stupidty on your behalf & furthermore,

I rarely log in. It's not very hard to find out the last log in date of a KMC member.

Originally posted by Superman_045
I'm done speaking to you, your ''insults'' are lame & so are you. Goodbye now.

That made me laugh. Good luck on your Anime.

I've came up with another manga idea in which it's about an evil being who eventually becomes good. I want to use the name Majin Buu & use Super Buu 1's look. Hopefully I'll be able to get the rights to use the look & name & if I succeed, I'm sure that this idea will work.

I now have four working mangas at the moment. One of them are about villains who're in a struggle to conquer the universe, one is about a being who was created for hate & destruction but becomes good, another is about a group of fighters who fight to protect the galaxy and the last one is about an Earthly scientist who acquires superhuman powers. For two of them I'll have to get rights from someone in order for the ideals to actually be put into action.

O that is cool

Its an anime movie I'm creating called Land of the Samurai, its about a 12 year old boy named Hikaru Huriyama who was cursed at birth, the effects of the curse were things such as his skills would become extremely sharpened while angry, but the curse also had negative effects like pain in the head, and severe pain in his stomach. His destiny was once to become a Ji-Samurai, this plan was spoiled as a greedy, conceited emperor who would massacre his village and force Hikaru to change his name to Ryobe and work as an assassin under his supervision. After serving a Daimyo named Shimazu for nearly two years, he would be betrayed by his own master and abandoned on a boat in the middle of the ocean. Later coming across an uncharted island, he would later find out it was the birth place of his ancestors. Later returning to Japan and seeking revenge against his master, he would then kill him by throwing a dagger threw his mouth, pinning his head to the wall. Ryobes goal was fulfilled but he still had no destiny and was now a Ronin Warrior. (This is just a brief description of the movie, many important details were left out) The series following the movie will be called Ryobe Ronin.

I also have two other animes in the making, well ones not really an anime I dont have a title for it yet but its takes place in greece, its about greek mythology and all that great stuff. the main character is a Roman warrior who was killed in war but was given the mission to destroy all evil that roamed across greece including the depths of hades, this would have to be accomplished before he could enter the kingdom of heaven.
He would encounter evils like minotaurs, cyclops, and all those other mythology creatures, kinda like God of War.

My second anime is gonna be called Logan, its about an hitman who is transported to the future accidentaly by scientist who in the future were expiermenting with time travel, but the scientist nore the government were aware of Logans arrival. He later made a life style in the future working as a hitman for a retired mercenary. What he didn't know was that the people he was paid to kill were goverment officials, congress things like that, etc. So threwout the show hes being chased and hunted down by the government.

hmmm, idk, the first one sounds like it may need work, but the mythology strangly lately im taking aliking to do with mythology(outside of anime)and sounds cool lol, well, the third one sounds good to me id give more detail, but really id have to see it, but im not much help, i am only ?!(disclosed)lol but u do have a start to the first story, but sounds like u may need some help

now to the original creator of this forum, ur anime sounds too focused on saving the planet, galaxy, universe, its all blah, blah blah, u need something interesting, u havnt said much, but alot of ppll thing dbz isnt the best, so y even check urs out when its not as good as the original, which many disliked already, u really have to change the story line, so skip ur first work of art, waste of an idea used a hundred too many times, i am srry to say

d b z was changed in the translation from the japaneese. i liked it but the fight sceenes worked like a soap opera and took months to get over.

i love fushigi ayashi no ceres inuyasha sailor moon card captor sakura saint tail oh my goddess, anything by hayo myizacki (sorry for any msp)- spirited away, princess monoke, ruroni kenshin, chobbits, loki mystery detective ragnarok, princess tutu, bandit king, shaman king, rave master, gravitation- awsome-, sorcerer stabber orphen, pretear, magic knight rayearth, slayers, tenchi myuo, trigun, fooly cooly, teen titians and so many more

full metal panic, something successor nedescio, kaleido star, ffmou, dn a ngel, petit princess yucie,slayers, getbackersDai guard too

gundam wing, escaflowne

SAILOR MOON PLZ MAKE IT STOP

what ever do you mean
go to the page before this one i have so many others that i love

no SAILOR MOON,i hate it ill sy this, which i said in another forum(almost everyones last replie was mine) that i almost rid my mind of such anime, and all day it has been thrown back in my face as i hear of ppl who watch, and love it i kno ppl have many of their own styles, but i think sailor moon goes to far and should be gotten rid of lol, and i think a guy is gonna come here and say ppl, have there own genres they like, but this this is one i utmostly despise lol

why??


it was voted the most romantic there is a few years ago.

so, romance isnt what i like the whole plot to be about, most anime i c has romance in it BUT ALL SAILOR MOON IS is romance, cheap parlor trick battles, some of the dumbest battle seens ive seen, and much more, thats just from when i was 8

they ruined the series in america
it was different in japan sure its old but it tackled rape gays, lesbians, transexuals, sex before marriage there was swearing among other stuff. oh lets not forget the stuff they cut out including in the fight scenes

lol, can u tell me what cable provider we had, and i dont see much of the original stuff that gets cut, dont got the money to go buy all tahtt

the provider u had*

time warner cable but private charters well at least some of them should have the boxes you may already have the channel and not even know it theyre both free.

im lost but so what lol, i have charter digital, thats all i kno, so i douby i can get adultswim ondemand or anime networck, but ill do my best

Thanx for the reply, I think thats also what I lack to is details, I mean I can come up with some pretty raw ideas but I just can't describe things like a narrator, or a director could. If I could put all my ideas for my shows on T.V. and let you watch them, you'd love luv it.

But if theres anything you'd add on to it if it was your series please tell me, I need all the help I could get.

for me i once tried to start writing a book ^^ and i had so many ideas come to me i never got past the first page lol, there r so many possibilities for what comes next, or how it happens, or why, or well, u get the point details can be hard but they r crucial, keep up the good work when ever u finish id like to see, or read it,

oh, i shall think of ways to help u im sort of busy today, but maybe tomorrow ill brainstormon it for u if i remember

srry to post a third time, but the way to go about a story /movie, is to make a basic outline of what is going to happen , then details later, but it seems u have the basic, outline finished, so u have a decent statrt to a few of ur ideas, but some of them r only ideas, lol, im not making any sense, srry, this probably wont help,

Well i'll tell you the storyline for Logan cause I don't think I did, not thoroughly atleast. Its about a hitman who gets transported into the future by a time portal, this happened because scientist in the future (yr 3005) were experimenting with time travel and they accidentaly sucked him through the portal. Now when he arrived in the future no one knew of his arrival so he was able to wander around unoticed. Since he was in the future he didn't now to make a living for himself, but later he was discovered by a old man who was also a hitman in his younger days, and this man offered Logan money to kill his foes. Later logan would find out that he's been killing government officials, congress men, etc. And it would be described to him that one of the congress men that he killed was his very own relative. So now the police force and government was looking for logan, and knew that he came from the past. Seeking revenge Logan decides to gather his own crew to match up against the old mans, so he goes from country to country tricking the badest hitmen into meeting him in a quit area, telling them that he wants them to kill someone, but he's really trapping them and forcing them into helping him. At the time U.S.A is corrupt due to a nuclear war with iraq, and since iraq is mainly dessert they didn't really lose anything. But yeah, through out the show, hes basically trying to hunt this old man down while being hunted down by the goverment at the same time.

sounds, really, good, havnt had time to brainstorm yet, but did u think about also, having the fbi, and police after, him, for the kilings of the government officials, well, alright, u c id sort of have to know a few things about the char. in general b4 i go on, if u dont mind, can u give me a char. description of logan, and if it comes out what i think it may ill post a few ideas, bcuz of alot of my ideas r thoroughly based upon who he is, how good of a hit man, etc. , ty

Alright, hes kinda a stick to himself kinda guy, he wears a brown trench coat and has black hair. In the future they call him the son of saitan, and he has no fear of anything. He likes to drink alchohol, and from time to time he likes to torture his kills. He's really good with disguises, and hes always calm while committing a murder, and covering it up. To break it all down hes sorta like spike from cowboy bebop and the guy from mission impossible. This is what I have about him so far.

so, does he need a motive to kill, like the person is bad or something, or does he kill without hesitation for money

Well when he's not a mercy type of guy, but when hes after someone whos not really a big hit he doesn't torture them. Like Imma have this scene where he's forced to kill the president of britian and his son, and he kinda hesitates to do it cause hes a kid, and he grows fond of the kid but at the end he kills the kid. Plus from time to time he gets really sick from drinkin alchohol, so he has to take this drug called M.H.S(momentary health syndrome). And later his enemies find out about his weakness, and you can pretty much know whats next.

lol, hmmmmmm, this is something, kinda dumb, hmmmm, i have better i deas but ill throw this one at u, well, u said hes gonna try and get revenge, for gettting a hit, that ends up was related to him, what if when he goes to get revenge, he gets his a!? beat, and gets taken in or something, sorta like a fugitive, and gets nersed back to health, he gets like robotic parts, idk, sees the error of his ways, and the only thing he wants now is complete revenge, nvm, that sorta thing may be used to much, hmmmmmmm, well, idk, ill have to get back to u again lol

it also depends on what sorta ppl u want to watch this, some ppl, want a mega bad a!? guy, but some ppl, like alittle drama, or hmmm, sincerity in char. idk, what kinda viewers u targting

Im setting my series for viewers at the age of 16yrs old, cause if I can make 16 yr old kids like it, than I could pretty much get any anime lover to like the show. But imma start asking people if they all like a certain anime and if they do, than imma study that anime series and find the things that makes it so great. But that ass kickin part is what im planning to happen in my other series with the greek warrior. Cause he gets tortured oneday by rebels and they do things like stab swords through his knee caps, and they pin him onto this huge stone, and once he dies over night, he gets sent to the dark domain, and before he gets cast into hell, an angel offers him a deal so he could be welcomed into the kingdom of heaven. He must destroy all lurking evil upon greece, and he's given the power of the guardian angel along with the armor of judis. And thats only the beggining, outta all three of my series they'll each entertain you in a different style, like the greek series is gonna be gory and its defined symbol is gonna be beauty and brutality. Same with Ryobe Ronin beauty and brutality, but Logans defined symbol will be all kinds, I want it to bring emotions outta the viewers but at the same time have sick ass action scenes. And every episode must be perfect and entertaining, you should be able to tell now that imma perfectionist,lol.

what truly destinugiushes anime r the fight scenes i must say and is the greek warrior one going to have alot of the greek gods, zeus, hera,hades, idk, the titans, or lesser gods, or even some of the mythical creatures like a cyclops,or medusa, cuz id love to see him woop all of them, if achillies hadnt been killed in the way he had, i woulda loved to see the greek warrior somehow defeat/fight him, like as in was there some kind of test for him to become holy, or was it a devine gift, only for his torture, cruelity brought upon him ??

or even instead of an holy warrior, what if hades, saw the revenge, he so deserved, and the vengence and destruction he would lay down upon the world, and deside, this will help me and him, so he allows the man to come back

sorry to post three times in a row, but hwat if he was brought back by nemisis, the god of rietuous anger/revenge jw, but idk, u can just stick with ur story line

i know some well more than some fruits basket spoilers anyone care and want to know the dirty details? like which one toru ends up with yuki or kyo?

Man, you can give some pretty good ideas, where was this before? Nah just playin, but i'll keep that ressurection from nemisis in mind, thanx.
Anyway, his whole life was a test, he was the most feared greek warrior in his time, so when evil was starting to drastically spread across greece, the gods chose him as there terminator, so they blessed him with immortality to beast and man, but he is still immune to gods and demons.

lol, u shuld see all the ideas ive written down for things, i always wanted to be a writer but i suck lol, and sounds, good u must explain how u would end it off, bcuz hes given immortaility, the ability to never die, have u ever seen teh movie gladiator, not anime, after a general of an army is taken to be a gladiator in the ring, since the old king has been murdered, by the new king his son had always despised this gladiator, and towards the end, the gladiator fights this new king, after challenging him, the king i guesscheats and wounds him b4 the match but in the end teh gladiator slays him, and slowly begins to die from his newly gaind wounds, and his ones from past wars, sorry throwing this all of the top of my head lol, but hmmmmm, i think u may have to resolve the issue of immortality maybe taht could become a conflict, did he have a loved one, who he gets to see now that he is back to life, maybe a conflict that he is immortal, and she is destined to die ?? idk,

No he had no loved one, hed make love to women from time to time but hes more of a fighter and not a lover,lol. But it takes a drastic turn when greece gets invaded by all these mythical creatures and saitans deminions. But its one hell of an adventure, immortality allows him to fight those creatures without the fear of dying, he can still bleed and feel pain its just that he'll never die not in the hands of a mortal atleast. But when he enter the gates of hell, he loses his immortality which makes it more exciting and nerve recking.

u know tht some ppl, or some theorys and books, ect. on immortality say that ur immortal to any would except complete obliteration of the body, and losing of the head

wound* :P

Good idea, but how would that work?

well, what i thought was, u cant end the show with him, wandering off well unless u wanted a sequal, but sorta want to end it off idk, how do u want to end it, i thought u may end it someway like that

Man its been a while since i've been here, sorry about the long delay,lol. Anyways I found a name for the character, I think i'll name him Titus, what do you think. Now about the ending, near the end he takes one last trip into the abyss, to try and defeat haydes. With his time spent in the pit he gets his ass kicked, the torturing heat and the pure horror of hell tears him apart, and he dies in hell. But since his soul was sold to the gods it can't be thrown into the lake of fire, or can it? He later finds out that his soul was sold to haydes, confused, allow me to explain. The brother of Zeus (haydes) agreed to peace upon mount olympus and the abyss, only under one condition, he was given the soul and body of Titus. But since he already had his body(since titus died in hell) he needed his soul, wonder why, he needed his soul so he could burn it in the pit, and he could use his body and take the form of a human. He wanted this so he could later plan on attacking mount olympus, you see in my show haydes is gonna be more powerful than any other god, except the supreme god(zeus). But that changes when Titus escapes from the pit through a crack in the ocean floor. His soul was severley burned, and haydes had now taken the form of his body. Later Titus hides his burns under bandages and armor, he also wears a mask to cover his face, and he later gives himself the nickname the abyss. While Haydes and his minions are attacking Mount Olympus, Titus, still unidentified by the gods appears and slaughters haydes minions, but his cruel ways lead him to kill anything that gets in his way( hermes, ares, apollo, stuff like that), he kills hermes by ripping his wings straight off his feet and stabbing him with them, pretty cool huh,lol. Let me get to the end, in the end, eventhough he saved Mount Olympus, he had committed the worse sins a man can committ, he killed a god, so instead of being punished, he was rewarded as the new Ruler of the Underworld.

Tell me what you think

sounds good, but....how did he get the power to kill the gods, he had jus gotten ripped apart in hell and basically slaughtrd, how does he find more power??that could be interesting, and.....this story is alot like god of war lol for the ps2

Well after he recovers from his ass kickin, he goes after haydes and later the gods of olympus. You see in this show, the trick to killing a god is to use there own element against them, such as, Poseidons the God of the Sea, so he must be drowned, and Apollo is the God of the Sun, so he obviously must be burned to death. In apart of the show, Titus kills Hermes, you know the messenger God by ripping off his wings since its the source of his ability to fly, and stabs him with his own wings. He also kills the great Apollo, while there fighting in the sky on Apollo's chariot, Titus uses the heat from his hands to kill Apollo, since he was burned in the lake of fire, his skin and flesh still remained extremely hot, so when he grabbed Apollo's arm in an attempt to block an attack, it caught on fire and Apollo went crashing into the Earth. And I know it sounds alot like God of War, but its gonna be alot different, trust me,lol.

sounds good, but along with my thought about how he gets power, he may have heat abilities, but he has the strength of a mortal, so to wrestle a god how does he get that strength, maybe the fact taht he survieved that river of flame or w/e, he got extra strong, or abilities, so what shuld have kild him only strengthenshim, like u said his heat abilities, what about getting godly strength maybe enven speed w/e, like he was, mutated u could say dotn want to stray too far that way but u get my point

Good question. But when he died, his soul left his body so haydes threw his soul into the flames, cause in the bible and stuff it said that he threw there souls in the flames not there bodies. Also the abilities that I told you were given to him from the gods, he still has, so after escaping from the flames, he covered his burned soul with armor and things like that. Plus what I forgot to mention he was given the ability to overcome all obsticles of nature, such as drowning, burning to death, etc. So when battling the gods he managed to survive them while killing them with there own powers. Also he wasn't really given powers that he could shoot out of his hands and stuff, you know what I mean, he was given all the abilities that could possibly be used by the human body, with no limit. Lost? let me explain, humans can't shoot flames outta there hands, and they can't do supernatural things that the gods could do, so he was given powers that a human could use such as, super speed, or power, and since he couldn't die unless it was in the hands of a god, he couldn't drown nore burned to death get it.

ic, i forgot about taht thing where godz gave him power, it had been a while lol

Yeah, but I need to get off this Titus stuff for now, I was planning to come out with Ryobe Ronin first, then Logan(not exact title), then finally Titus. I was hoping you could help me spicen the show up alittle, huh, ALOT!

hmm i dont remember ryobe uh what was it about again? or did u already tell me

DOUBLE POST i c u did tell me, well.....considerign his curse gives him power......what if while working as an assasing under whover the guy was...he had nvr really tappd into his true abilities caused by the curse....he had nvr felt anger that well bcuz if i remember correctly most samurai rnt supposed to show expressions.....or emotion, so what if his emotions had been conceald most of his life, containing his true power.....and now he has discoverd what they really did to him, his emotions come flooding out, with his new found anger comes new found power......he slowly learns to master his skills on his quest for revenge, hmmm and what if the more he uses the power the lesss pain he recieves, or else the more he uses it the worse side affects to come later...i supoose in almost two paragraphs if i used sentences i stretched out one lil idea lolz my bad

how do you attach images to posts

jus host the image, click img, paste the hosted adrees of th eimage, thats the eziest wayi know of

Great idea, I think i'll work with that one, im having alittle problems with characters.

Does anybody visit this thread anymore!?

*Sigh* no not even mines

Wow....discussing other ideas for mangas in my thread....interesting...