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Hey yall. I'm back on another story. ive been readin a couple of James/Lily stories and it inspired me. I have a nother story thats called Harry/Ginny Hermione/Ron. I know you'll want to check that out. And don't worry i haven't given up on it just haven't had time to create a big post I will I promise. I'll have the first Chapter up tomorrow. I have it written I just don't want to type it right now I'm too lazy lol.

James/Lily Story

Surprises

"Prongs wait up!" a tall boy with dark, long hair that hung in his face yelled.
He was running towards another teenage boy named James Potter. James too had dark hair but it was much shorter than the boy's running to him, Sirius Black. James wore his slender glasses, blue jeans, and a t-shirt under his school robes. Every few minutes James would ruffle his hair with his hand to make look even messier than before. He said it was to attract the ladies, especially Lily Evans who James had had a crush on since their first year, but Sirius knew it was to make him look like he had just gotten off his broom from playing Quidditch. He was the Seeker for the Gryffindor house Qudditch team and he had no problem showing it off.
"Hey Sirius," he said "let's go find a compartment."
Both boys walked down the Hogwarts Express isle and found an empty compartment.
"So how was your summer?" Sirius asked put his trunk up in the luggage loft. "Dream about Evans at all?" he asked with a smile.
"Sod off." James replied. "Besides I have a plan this year anyway."
"It's a miracle James Potter has a plan for Lily Evans!" Remus Lupin said walking into the compartment.
"Hey Moony. Hey Wormtail." James said.
Remus was a sick looking boy with sandy blonde hair. Peter, Wormtail, was fat boy with slightly darker hair than Remus.
The boys called themselves the Marauders for the name they were given by their Head of House, Professor McGonagall. They were the trouble makers of their year and they were proud of it.
"So, let's hear this so-called plan." Remus said.
"Well it's not a plan necessarily, it's just to be nice to her."
"I don't get it" Peter said.
"I'm just going lay off asking her out every five seconds. Instead I'm going to ask her out every ten." Everyone laughed. "No I'm kidding. I'm just going to be nice to her and see what happens. I mean I'm Head Boy. I'm supposed to be responsible right? And we're going to be working together anyway so we should at least try to get along."
"Ok. Do whatever you want mate." Sirius said.
"Well I have to go find her and tell her I'm Head Boy because we got teach the new prefects what to do."




I'll post the rest tomorrow. My parents want me to get off

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Mean While in Lily's compartment (James is on his way there)
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"So are you going to put up with Potter this year?" Alice said.
"Well I have to don’t I. He loves me." She said with a frown.
"I don't get how you hate him so much. He's so handsome and funny." Lily's other friend, Jen, said.
"Well, let's see. The stupid way he messes up his hair more than it already is, just to make it look like he just got of his stupid broom. The way he walks around the castle thinking he owns the place. He hexes everyone in his way. He thinks he's the best thing that every happened in a woman's life." Lily complained.
"Ooo lala. Lily has a crush." Alice said.
"HA! You're joking right. I've just finished complained about the guy and you say I have a crush. How think could you get?"
"Well I just never heard you talk about Potter that much. I mean it sounds you have such a passion for him." Alice said.
"I never said that. C'mon you know I would tell you anything." Lily said with a smile.
Just then James walked right into the doorway of their compartment.
"Hi Evans. Nice to see you too!" James said as Lily gave him a frown.
"What are you doing here Potter?" she asked.
"We have the prefects to teach remember?"
"You're not Head Boy. Get out of my way I'm getting Remus." She said.
"Why would you do that? I'm Head Boy not him. Yeah, I know I was shocked too. We all thought Moony was going get it."
He could tell she was shocked.
"Fine then where's your badge?" she asked.
James pulled it out and Lily was appalled.
"Well let's just try to get along this year okay? For working together's sake." James said.
Lily was hesitant but started walking with him to the Prefect carriage. Lily explained what the new prefects had to do and then they left for their own compartments again.
They finally got to Hogwarts and they unloaded the train and into the horseless carriages then into the castle for the Start of Term feast. Dumbledore made his usual speech-"The forest is off limits and the house should unite as one. Make no enemies."
After everyone was finished eating Lily and James lead the First Years to the Portrait of the Fat Lady.
"Tarantula!" James said to the portrait. It swung open and Lily helped every up as James lead everyone into common room.
"This is the common room. Girls dormitories are on the left, boy's on the right. You will get your schedules in the morning in the Great Hall at breakfast." He said.
The next few days were all the same. Students would go to class then come back. Lily and James, as much as Lily hated this, took rounds every night to check the hallways.
"Alright Potter ready to go?" she asked on Friday night.
"Yeah, one sec." he replied adding the finishing touches to his Potions essay.
"Potter actually doing his homework! Gasp." Lily said.
"Sod off. I mean I want to get it out of the way. I'll have more time to look at you.” He replied putting is hand in his hair for the umpteenth time. "Oh sorry. Old habits are hard to break." He said smiling.
"Since when do you care what I think, Potter?"
"I have a strategy Evans. I'm going to get you this year I know it."
Lily blushed.
'Wait. Lily Evans never blushes to James Potter. No. I can't be growing on him. I mean he's Potter!' Lily thought to herself.

Interesting....very interesting

Tragedies


It had been weeks since the students started school and it was the same schedule week. One night after James and Lily took their rounds they came back to Common Room. Lily said she still had homework to do and for James to go on up to bed. She took her book out and started to take notes. The next morning the Marauder's woke up early and James found Lily asleep on the Common Room chair.
"You guys go ahead. I forgot something upstairs." James told his friends.
James pretended to walk up the stairs, but once his friends left, he immediately walked over to Lily.
"Evans." He whispered. "Evans, it's time to wake up."
Lily moved slightly and James backed up.
"Evans am I going to have to kiss you?" he said in his normal voice.
"I'm up!" Lily said quickly and she shot up out of her seat. Her homework went everywhere.
"Sorry I had to do it." James said smiling, "Here let me help you."
"No, I don’t need your help." Lily said angrily.
James left and headed down to the Great Hall. Ten minutes into James and Sirius's conversation Lily showed up. James looked at her while Lily gave him a horrid look and she hurried over to Jen and Alice who were waiting to hear Lily's story. Jen giggled all the way up to Common Room. When the girls were back in Common Room they all sat down by the blazing fire when a blonde, third year boy came up to them.
"Are you Lily Evans?" the boy said.
"Yeah." Lily said puzzled.
"Dumbledore told me to give this to you." He handed a letter to Lily. She opened it and read it aloud as the boy walked away.
"Dear Ms. Evans,
Please come to my office as soon as you can I have some issues we have to discuss.
Sincerely,
Albus Dumbledore"
"I don't get it. I don't have any issues." Lily said more confused.
Lily stood up and headed towards Dumbledore's office. When she got to the entrance she knocked on the door and a man's voice said, "Enter."
She opened the door to find Dumbledore in a chair.
"You said you wanted to see me sir." Lily said.
"Yes. I think it would be better for you to sit down, Ms. Evans."
Lily sat down; her hands were shaking a bit because she didn’t know what he was going to say.
"Ms. Evans this may come to a shock. Your parents, last night, were killed by Death Eaters. They had been on a muggle killing spree and your parents were just in the wrong place. If you ever need someone to talk to, Ms. Evans, please, I am always here."
Lily had no words. Her eyes filled up with tears and her mouth opened. It looked like she was trying to breathe but couldn't. She stood up and ran out of the room. She ran all the way down the hallway, but before she reached the stairs, she fell and she felt excruciating pain in her left wrist. She liked it. She wanted all the pain. It showed what she felt inside. She got back up and ran some more, up stairs and down another long hallway. She was just at the end and slammed into someone. She didn't care who it was but she hugged him.
"Evans? What's wrong?" James said and Lily looked up.
"Oh James." She said burying her face in his chest cry even more than ever.
"Hey, hey it's okay." He wrapped his arms around her. She fell on the ground again but on her knees. James knelt down beside her, touching her arm.
"Hey, c'mon let's go back to Common Room." James said.
Lily looked up again and nodded. She put her hands down and pushed on them to get up but she jerked back her left hand. She held it up against herself breathing shakily.
"Oh. Let's get you to the Hospital Wing." James said in a soft voice.
But Lily didn't want to go instead she took her wrist and twisted it even more. It hurt badly because she screamed loudly. She didn't care she wanted all the pain.
"Lily, stop it!" James shouted.
"NO!" Lily shouted back crying even more.
"Evans, I know how you feel and you need to go to the Hospital Wing!" James said.
"NO! YOU DON'T KNOW HOW I FEEL!" Lily screamed. James just stared at her. The truth was he did know how she felt. His parents were both killed by Death Eaters.
"I'm sorry. I just……" Lily said.
"It's okay. I felt the same way but hurting yourself is not the answer. I thought the same." He took a deep breath. "I thought the more I hurt myself on the outside the less I would hurt on the inside. Like all those time I fell off…"
"Your broom and you would blame it on the wind?" Lily interrupted and James nodded.
"Hurting yourself isn't going to make things better. It'll make it worse. It's stupid. You have to go to Madame Pomfrey."
"I'm not a kid Potter. I can take care of myself." Lily said at this she took her hand and twisted it even more. She flinched.
"Stop it!" James yelled again.
He rushed over to her and held her left arm. Lily looked at him again and saw his face. She felt love. She felt safe. So she collapsed into his arms and had her uninjured hand on his chest. He took the hint and let go of her arm and placed his own arms around her. Lily felt wonderful. She knew someone cared. James knew how she felt. At the time his parents died he wanted someone to hold. After about five minutes of silence James said,
"You have to go the Hospital Wing."
"I know." She replied.

Helping Heros

"Hey! How you feeling?" James asking, walking down to the Great Hall.
"All better." Lily said moving her wrist around in circle.
"Well, I know you hate me but…." James tried to say before he was interrupted by a hug. Lily let go and backed up.
"I just wanted to say… thanks. I was being selfish." Lily said looking at her feet.
James lifted her chin up with two fingers and said in a low voice,
"Don’t worry it's not your fault."
Lily's eyes started to water again. She laughed and wiped them off.
"I'd better go. I said I would meet Jen and Alice." She said still wiping the tears out of her eyes.
She was just at the end of the hallway when James shouted, "Hey Evans!"
She turned around and saw James running towards her.
"I know Dumbledore probably told you this already but if…. You ever need someone to talk to, I'm always here."
"Thanks Potter." Lily said smiling and walked off and James stood there staring at her.
The upcoming Sunday was the students first trip to Hogsmead and Lily was excited because it marked one week until her seventeenth birthday.
"Lily what's going one with you and Potter?" Jen asked on their way down to the Entrance Hall.
"Nothing, he's just helping get through a hard time. You know 'cause the same thing happened to him." She replied.
Alice gasped, "You do like him!"
"I do not!" Lily argued.
"Yes you so do because whenever Jen asked you a question like that normally you'd get all offended on first thing. This time you were all cool about it." Alice explained.
"That doesn't mean I like him. We're just sorting out some issues."
"Whatever." Alice said rolling her eyes.
When the girls finally got to Hogsmead they went to the Three Broomsticks and ordered three butterbeers.
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Mean While when boys get to Hogsmead
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The Marauders were on their way to Honeydukes.
"You know Evan's birthday is next weekend. I think we should do something for her." James said.
"Well I don’t think we should throw her a party 'cause she's kind of depressed, you know." Remus said.
"Yea, maybe we should get her a present." Sirius said.
So they went into Honeydukes and bought Lily her gift.
They day went by pretty fast since the students were having so much fun. When they came back to the castle, everyone had bags of candy, butterbeer, presents, and they were all tired out. Lily for sure was because when she, Jen, and Alice got back into Common Room they went to sleep right away. The next few days went so slow for Lily. Days packed with homework and well more homework. It was finally one day before Lily's birthday and she and her friends decided to go out to the lake and sit under their favorite beech tree. They were already beaten to it by the Marauders.
"Can you please move." Lily said to James.
He stood up and said, "If you give me a kiss right here." Pointing to his cheek.
"Uhhh, I would rather eat slugs." She said miming to gag herself.
"Aw look its Potter and Evans quarreling like a married couple." A strange voice said from behind. They both turned around sharply and looked to see who it was, Severus Snape. Remus and Sirius stood up behind James and Lily.
"Go away Snivellus." James said angrily.
"Oooo, touchy Potter." Snape said.
Lily put a hand in front of him and said, "I'll handle it."
She walked over to Snape and said politely,
"Will you please leave us alone?"
"Get out of my face you filthy Mudblood." He said disgusted.
She took her wand out.
"Not so fast Evans." Snape said smiling. "Expelliarmus!" he yelled. Lily was hit harder than a normal spell like that would have done. She flew back unconscious and James caught her but stammered back at bit. James gave Lily to Sirius and Remus to hold. He took out his wand and pointed it strait at Severus with a look of fury. Instead of hexing Snape, James switched his wand to his left hand and turned around. Severus smiled but only until James swiftly turned around again and punched him hard on the left side of his face. Snape filled his cupped hands with his face as James bent down, he said, "Don't you ever say that to a girl, especially Lily, you bloody coward!"
James carried the unconscious Lily up to the Hospital Wing and laid her on a bed. Madame Pomfrey said that Lily needed to stay the night so James and the rest of the marauders sat with her for a while.
Sry it so short! I just didn’t have anything ready.

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Jen and Alice came a little later they had to finish their Charms essay.
James had insisted that he should stay the night to watch over Lily. His friends, Jen, and Alice said their good-byes and headed back to their dorms. The next morning Lily awoke to find something heavy on her right side. She looked over and found James arms crisscrossed in front of him and his head buried inside. She moved slightly, James shot up, and shouted,
"Earthquake!" Lily laughed. He turned to face her and said,
"You could have woke me up a little nicer."
"Well it's not my fault you're jumpy."
"I am not jumpy."
"Yes you are." She said smiling.
"I'm not bloody jumpy."
"Okay, okay don't get offended I was joking with you." She said trying to get him to calm down. "Why did you stay?"
"I felt like I had to."
"Why though?"
"Well it's not your fault that Snape hates me. The only reason he did that was because I was there. You were trying to help and he just got irritated because you were trying to help me, of all people." He explained.
"What did you do to him afterwards?"
"What make you think I did anything?" He said with his voice rising a bit.
"Because you're Potter. You never let that kind of stuff slide."
"I didn’t do anything…..except punch his ugly face." James muttered.
There was a short pause then James blurted,
"Happy birthday!"
Lily looked up shocked that he said it so suddenly.
"Oh, thanks.'
"Feel great doesn't it, being able to do magic legally. I thought it felt wonderful." James said smiling now.
"Well I haven't really thought about it. I was kind of disappointed to not find presents. I know that's selfish but Jen and Alice usually…"
"Don't worry, there's….I mean I'm sure they've got something for you in Common Room." James interrupted.
"You didn’t get me anything, did you?"
"What? No, I mean why would I get something for someone who hates me?"
"I do not hate you!" Lily said quickly, "why does everyone assume that." She muttered. "It's just sometimes you can be an arrogant jerk."
"You don't!" It had looked like James lit up. He realized that Lily didn't hate him when all those years he thought she had.

Sry it so short again I have a lot more to write. Next chapter is huge and then I have 4 more prepared. Look forward to it!

Voice snatcher

Lily couldn't believe it, it was already Christmas holidays. She'd been caught up in homework and friends that she didn't realize how fast the year had been going. Dumbledore had asked both her and James to stay over the holidays to help monitor the students who would be staying, including Sirius and few fourth years. Otherwise that’s all the Gryffindors who were staying for the holidays. Lily woke up the next morning to find the halls and rooms decorated for Christmas. Mistletoe and red and green streamers were hung up on the doors. She, being the only 7th year girl left for the holidays, went down to the Great Hall for breakfast. When she got there she found Sirius and James talking closely. Lily went up to go sit with them. They started giggling when she got closer.
'They are obviously planning something. I know it.' She thought to herself.
"Good morning. Can I sit here?" Lily said politely.
"Sure!" Sirius said with a stupid grin.
They sat there eating breakfast with James and Sirius acting too suspicious for Lily's concern. When they were finished Lily went off to the library while James and Sirius headed back to Common Room.
"Hey James!" Lily said walking back to Common Room. She meet him under the archway to the Great Hall. James looked up and so did Lily.
"Oh no. No way. Nope" Lily said. There was mistletoe and James knew it.
"Lily you have to do it. It's bad luck you know."
"No James. You know I don't like you like that!"
"It's bad luck!"
Lily backed up and tried to say, "I don't care." But nothing came out.
She tried again but still nothing. She tried to scream.
"What did you do!" she mouthed.
James just shrugged and Lily ran up to the Hospital Wing while James followed her. Madame Pomfrey was treating another patient when Lily ran in with James in behind. James explained to her what happened and said there was no countercurse.
"Did you do this to her, boy?" Madame Pomfrey asked.
"Yes." He muttered.
"This is the third time this year. You have very bad luck!" she said to Lily.
Lily gave him a dirty look. Madame Pomfrey started her treatments but nothing seemed to work. Was James right in that there was no countercurse? Then it became nighttime and she refused to let James or Lily to go until she had a treatment. The next morning they both woke up and James got out of bed. The next thing Lily knew she was laughing really hard. James was doing demonstrations from the 'Quidditch of the Ages' book he borrowed from the library.
"Okay, pretend this is the broom." He said pretending to mount it.
Lily was laughing harder than ever now and was about to wet herself. When Madame Pomfrey finally let real patients in he had to stop. James slept the rest of the day and Lily started to think.
'What if James is right? What if there is no countercurse? What if I have to kiss him? Okay then just a real quick one on the cheek. She got up and did it. Nothing happened, her voice didn't come back. She took a deep breath. She hoped it didn't have to come down to this. Lily went over to the other side of his bed and bent down. She was inches away from his face when 'CRASH', the nurse dropped a whole bunch of bottles and muttered something about how clumsy she was. That didn't matter now, all that Lily knew was that James was awake and was kissing her right now. Lily pulled back and slapped James hard on the face.
"You…You…Jerk!" Lily stammered and stormed off not noticing that her voice had come back. James got up and ran after calling, "Lily!" at the top of his lungs.
"Lily! Wait!"
Lily stopped and James caught up. She pointed her finger at him and started her lecture.
"No. No James Potter. I'm not going to wait. I thought you had changed. I thought you had changed from the selfish James I used to know. I guess I was wrong. I was starting to like you. This crosses the line. No don't even try to apologize. You are Head Boy, James. What happened to responsibility? James this is what the irresponsible arrogant jerky things I was talking about. Again, this crossed the line!" With that she slapped him again and stormed off back to Common Room leaving James standing there wide-eyed.

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Mirror

When Lily finally got back to Common Room she started to pace with her hand on her forehead. James came in and tried to talk to her but she ran up the stairs to the girls dorm.
"LILY!" he yelled up the stairs. "LILY PLEASE, LITSEN TO ME! LOOK I'M SORRY! IT'S JUST SIRIUS WAS TALKING TO ME ABOUT HOW WE HAVEN'T BEEN PULLING PRANKS LATLEY! MY INNER MARAUDER GOT THE BEST OF ME!"
Lily came to the top of the stairs.
"Is that the best excuse you could think of?" she asked calmly.
"It's not an excuse!" James rejected. She gave him a questionable look.
"It's not I swear!" he said.
She gave an I-can't-believe-I'm-forgiving-you sigh. James smiled and said,
"C'mon I have something to show you!"
Walking down the hallway Lily asked,
"Where are we going?"
"You'll see."
They turned and now in a dark corridor.
"James, tell me where you're talking me!" Lily demanded
"You'll see, be patient."
She sighed again. They reached a large wooden door. James tried it and it was locked. Alohamora did the trick, though.
"I don't see why the even bother to lock the doors…" James said before he knew he had lost her.
"James? What is this?" she said walking over to an overly sized mirror. Small writing was etched into the border but Lily couldn't read it.
"James this is so weird."
She looked into the mirror and saw herself and James.
"This is the mirror of Esride. The writing at the top says 'Your face it is not but your heart's desire'." James explained.
"But I don't see anything, James. All I see is you and…." She looked to her right expecting to find James there but no one was. She looked the other way and there James was but there was no way his reflection could be in the mirror. This wasn't happening! No there was no way James was Lily's heart's desire!
"…me!" she finished wide-eyed.
"I've always seen you. Sirius's changed a few times but mine always showed you." James said.
Lily gulped.
"Here's let' go get dinner. I said I'd meet Sirius. I just thought you'd want to see that."
Lily nodded and her head was filled with questions. How could James possibly be her heart's desire? All the things he's done to her. All those things he'd helped her with especially with her parents. What was she thinking? Was she actually thinking about liking Potter? Or maybe falling in love?
'No, no that's not possible!' she thought to herself.
They reached the Great Hall and when they were finished Lily was tired out with all that had happened including James's and Sirius's rambles about Quidditch. The next week went by very slow. Lily decided to catch up on homework and things. She was so happy when Alice and Jen returned. She didn't tell them about her confront with James just to save herself the giggling from Jen. The next day they started classes again. It was the night before and the girls were talking about their vacations and how boring they were.
"So did you guys finish your Transfiguration essays?" Alice asked. Jen nodded but Lily was about to explode.
"WHAT?! THERE WAS AN ESSAY!?" she screamed.
Both her friends nodded in fear.
"Oh my god!" Lily said panicking. She got out a piece of parchment and started to write. Her hand looked like it was blurred. Before Lily knew it she woke up but not in her bed. There were Quidditch posters everywhere and it smelled like men's deodorant. She looked up and she figured out where she was, in the boy's dorm. She looked at her watch.
"Oh no!" she said to herself. It was 9:30 and lessons had already started. She looked down at the bottom of the bed and found her books but no essay. At this she started to panic. She got ready to go to class and explain to Professor McGonagall why she had no essay. She ran all the way to the classroom and up to her teacher's desk.
"Ah, Ms. Evans how are you feeling?" the Professor asked.
"Um…fine. Listen I'm sorry I don't have my essay." Lily said confused.
"Why don't you know? Mr. Potter, here, told me you were sick and turned in your essay for you."
"Oh um yeah. Now I remember." Lily replied even more confused.
She turned around and sat in her seat. She met up with James at the end of class.
"Why did you turn in my essay?" she asked.
"A simple thank you would be nice." He replied.
"Thank you. Now will you tell me?"
"Well you fell asleep in Common Room and I knew you didn't finish your essay. I couldn't exactly get into the girl dorm so I let you have my bed while I finished the essay."
"Oh, you didn't have to do that but thanks." She smiled. James left and caught up with Sirius.
"You are never washing your sheets are you?" Sirius asked.
"Nope!" James said smiling.

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Secret

'I can't believe he's been doing all these nice things for me. Well, he has been doing all these mean things too. That’s three times I've been to the hospital wing because of him.' Lily thought to herself, again while walking down to the Great Hall for dinner. She was planning on meeting Jen and Alice there. She took the last step of the stairs and saw the Marauders by the front entrance. They were talking in secret and Lily knew it because they were close together and whispering. Lily walked behind James and said,
"Hey guys!"
James jumped.
"Watch ya doing?" Lily said smiling.
"Nothing that concerns you Evans. Go away!" James said irritated.
"That's nice. Still your jumpy self?" Lily said.
"I'M NOT BLOODY JUMPY!" he yelled, "Go away Evans! God you're such a nag!"
"I'm a nag! I was trying to be nice and all I get is being called a nag!" she said offended and stormed off to eat her dinner.
The Marauder just stood there staring at James until Remus finally said,
"Why did you have to go and do that for?"
"She was being nag! She shouldn't be nosey!" James said.
"No, she wasn't being nosey, she was being nice and you had to go and blow her off." Sirius explained.
James frowned. He had been caught and was guilty. He hadn't intended for what he said to Lily to turn out to be so mean.
"Sod off, Potter!" Lily said one day after class when James tried to talk to her.
"Lily, c'mon. Look we were just talking about a secret and…." James said.
"Oh, about Remus?" Lily interrupted but put her hand to her mouth right away. She had to say it. She had to tell him that she knew.
"I know about Remus!" she whispered.
"You mean his mother?" James tried to cover up.
"No, I mean about his problem, being a wizard." She said.
"But… How long have you known?"
"Since third year when we had the essay on werewolves in Defense Against the Dark Arts." She explained.
"Oh." That's all James could say.
"But, I promise I won't tell anyone. I mean I haven't for all this time."
James put a calmer, satisfied look on his face.

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The next day, all the seventh years were excited. Why? Because they were learning how to duel in Defense Against the Dart Arts. Unfortunately, the Gryffindors were stuck with Slytherin. They students met at one of the house tables that were centered in the middle of the table.
"Settle Down! Settle Down students!" Professor Merrythought bellowed climbing up on the table, "Two students to demonstrate! Let's see Evans and……ah Severus!" she yelled.
'NOOOO! ANYTHING BUT HIM' Lily thought. Both of them climbed on the table and met Professor Merrythought in the center.
"Okay, now all you have to do is bow. Yes, that's right. Now turn around and walk to the edge of the table and turn back around." The students followed, "On the count of three, you may fire at your opponent but only to disarm them. One…… Two….."
Severus was too fast for Lily he had already fired. Every time Lily tried to say something he beat her to it but he was saying spells she had never heard before.
The fifth time Lily had been hit she was tired of it. She got up with a frustrated look on her face. Severus held his wand ready. He was the best in the class at using nonverbal spells and he was obviously using one now. It hit Lily she fell backwards and everyone screamed. She tried lifting her head but was weaken by a lot. She was bleeding; it looked like she had been slashed with a sword. James climbed up onto the table with a blazing, horrid look and practically was jogging towards Snape. He lunged at him and started punching Snape. With all of the strength Lily had she started screaming at James to stop.
"JAMES!" she cried. She said it over and over but James wouldn't listen. Lily didn't know or care what she was doing but she got up clutching her ribs. She walked slowly and painfully over to James, pulled him off of Snape, and punched him as hard as she could.
"EVANS! DETENTION! POTTER! DETENTION!" the professor yelled. Professor Merrythought must have not noticed Lily was bleeding but how could she not it was everywhere. That didn't matter Lily had to get to the hospital wing but she had no strength considering she was on the floor now almost lying down.
"Hospital…Wing." She whispered with all her might. James ran over to her and got her to feet. He supported her weight on him and they walked to the Hospital Wing. They got her to a bed quick and Madame Pomfrey began a charm that looked like she was sewing Lily's giant cut up. She repeating it over and over until Lily was back to normal. She was asleep by now and Madame Pomfrey insisted that she stay for the night because the wound was pretty bad but she promised she would be fine by tomorrow. She gave James an ice pack for his eye because she said it was a pretty bad bruise. The next morning Lily woke to find her bed and side tables covered in cards and candy. There were Jen and Alice waiting for her to wake up. They sighed in relief.
"Thank goodness." Jen said.
Lily laughed but it was hard she was sore.
"And guess what Snape didn't even get punished for it. You get detention for punching Potter, by the way which was totally wicked, and he doesn't get anything."
"Oh well."
Lily checked out of the Hospital Wing and went back to Common Room hands full of bags of candy. She said the password and opened the door and the whole room erupted with cheers. Every Gryffindor was cheering for her and all Lily could do was smile. She made it up to her dorm and dropped off her stuff. She went to down to celebrate the survival of Snape's horrible spell. That night she made it down to her detention that she really didn't deserve. James was already there and getting out chalk to start his lines. In Lily's mind, James was disgrace and she couldn't bear to look at him. He handed her a peace of chalk but she just ignored him and got the box off the chalk ledge and got her own. About thirty minutes later they both were almost finished. James was finishing his last word when Lily started packing up. He put the chalk down and almost caught up to her in the hall.
"Lily? C'mon you know how I am about Snape!" he said running to catch her now.
"So you had to punch him. Yeah, that's what I thought" said Lily.
"Lily?!" James said grabbing her arm and she turned around into him. The unexpected thing was that they kissed. Lily blushed. She felt love. They pulled apart and Lily cleared her throat, "I have to catch up on homework." She whispered and ran off to Common Room and up to her dorm. James was left standing there with a smile. Lily lied on her bed and couldn't help but smile. She was in love with James Potter and that kiss proved it.

have fun rwading it this is my ABSOLUTE favorite chapter!

i love it! when r u going to post more?

dont know yet but i will soon

Explanations

'No, No, why am I smiling! No I can't!" Lily had been thinking not just today but a couple of days before what happened with James. She just couldn’t possibly think about her and James being together. All those years she thought she hated him. It just wasn't logical that she could like him.
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"I swear!" James blurted.
"Now why would Evans snog you?" Sirius asked.
"It wasn't a snog! It was an accident really. She stormed off after detention and I grabbed her arm and she turned in too close." James explained.
"Ah! So it wasn't real. It didn't mean anything." Sirius said calmly.
"No, I think she liked it. I'm serious! You could feel it." James said as Sirius gave him a questionable look.
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Both James and Lily went down stairs, ironically at the same time. She took the last step and spotted James and immediately turned around but James was too quick. Lily wasn't ready to talk just yet but she had no choice now.
"Potter, you know it didn't mean anything."
"I know." He said. Was he wrong about Lily? Did it not mean anything? Surely she had to be lying. He frowned maybe it didn't mean anything and it was just having the pleasure of believe in what was not there.
"Potter, you know I don't like you like that. It was an accident. I'm really sorry if I got your hopes up." She was really sorry. Why didn't she just tell him it did mean something? She felt bad now and gave him a sympathetic smile and went down for dinner.
"But I thought….I really thought." James said to Sirius walking down the Great Hall for breakfast the next morning.
"Prongs you can't go beating yourself up about it. She's turned you down a million times this ones no different."
James didn't eat at all that day he was too depressed.
"Mate you've got to eat!" Moony said at dinner.
"I'm not hungry." James mumbled.
He didn't even want to go patrolling. The next morning however changed James whole life.
"So the mudblood is on her own today, I see." Snape teased Lily. They were right out side the Great Hall entrance. James had just opened the Common Room door and was on his way out with the rest of the Marauders.
"Leave me alone Severus." Lily snapped.
The Marauders were now two stair cases away.
"You know what! I've had enough! Slytherins are self-fish, judging, horrible people. I have no doubt that you'll join that Voldemort person right away after we graduate! No one ever liked you and I can see why!" Lily and insulted him a little too much. James was now at the bottom of the last staircase.
"I've been waiting to try this new one out on someone. This is the perfect chance." Snape replied with quite an amount of anger. James saw the Snape was at least ten feet away from Lily. He ran over just as Snape was saying one of his unheard incantations. Before he knew it everything was in slow motion, not because of the spell but that’s just how it seemed in James's mind. A purple flame came shooting out of Snape's wand. James dove in front of Lily and the flame hit him square in the chest. He smashed into the ground front up and slid at least fifteen feet down the hallway.
"What did you do?" Lily screamed at Snape. All he did was smile.
'Potter deserves it, all those things he's done to me.' Snape thought. Before actually had a change to respond Lily hexed she didn't have to do anything worse to him. She ran to James's side.
"Oh, James!" she whispered, "James, why did you do that?"
"We all have to……make…sacrifices…for the ones…….we love." James said so weakly that Lily almost burst out crying. Thank goodness for her only a tear rolled down her cheek. She took her right hand and cupped it around his face.
"Besides………who knows…..what….that….spell could have done." James whispered again.
'My social reputation or the person I love? Definitely……' Lily thought to her self and gave James another sympathetic smile since almost everyone in the school was crowed around him and Lily now. Of course Snape was in the back round snickering with an evil smile.
She bent down and kissed him and all the noise from the crowd disappeared. She didn't care who was watching she was kissing the boy she loved! She left her spinning world and let go. Remus and Sirius obviously knew what to do and came over to help Lily lift James to take him to the Hospital Wing. They didn't know where Peter was but why did it matter. James had to get treated neither of them knew what the spell did to him. James was now unconscious and his friends laid him on a bed. Lily rushed to find Madame Pomfrey and explain to her what happened. She started to work right away with potions and antidotes. By afternoon she finally had a cure but James had to take at least twelve potions every hour. When he woke up the Marauders, excluding Peter since he was still not there, and Lily sighed with relief.

this is my favorite lily/james stor... your a really good writer.. keep it up!

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this is one of the best James/Lily storys iv ever read. its so so so so so very good, plz post again asap

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im working on it guys. Sry for the wait. I'm just trying to put right

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Jumping

James, his friends, and now girlfriend talked until Madame Pomfrey shooed them out. Now he was alone.
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"James? James, dear?" He heard a woman's voice.
"Prongs!" Sirius yelled.
"Youngman, that was unnecessary!" Madame Pomfrey scolded.
James eyes opened slowly.
"What?" he said sleepily.
"Hey mate!" Sirius said excitedly. James jumped, well you would too if your best friend was smiling at you and was inches away from you face.
"Bloody hell, Sirius!" James said.
"Mr. Black, one more time, one more time and you'll be escorted from the Hospital Wing." Madame Pomfrey said.
"Sorry." He said smiling. Now, she was leaving to go make a potion or two.
"Where's Evans, my new girlfriend." James said with a proud smile.
"Back in Common Room, and she's not your girlfriend mate. I think Snape hit you a little too hard." Remus said.
"She said she was too upset at the fact that the one person in the whole school to stop Snape had to be you." Peter piped up.
"Wormtail, you’re here!" James said surprised.
"He's always been here, mate" Sirius said confused.
"He wasn't here the last time I woke up." James said more confused.
"Mate, the last time you woke was three days ago in our dorm. You must've been dreaming." Remus said.
"But didn't you see me snog Evans after Snape did whatever he did to me?" James asked.
"Prongs, Snape did that spell, your noble instincts got the best you, it hit you, you flew fifteen feet, and you were out cold. There was no snogging." Sirius explained.
"You had to be dreaming. I mean you were thrashing around a lot it seemed like you having a fit or something. Madame Pomfrey had to do some kind of spell to stop you from moving." Remus said feeling kind of sorry for his friend.
James laid back down on his pillow and sighed.
"Although, Evans did come and visit you." Sirius lied but seeing James believed him he kept going on it. James lightened up. Madame Pomfrey came in with five different potions.
"I have to take all of those!" James said widening his eyes.
"Yes dear, with the hit you took you'll need them. Just look what he did to you!" she said pointing to his chest. James looked down and jumped again. His chest was all bandaged.
"You don't even want to see the bruise. It'll make you scream it's so horrible.You were lucky not to break any ribs. Never in my whole life have seen a spell like that!" she said.
James drank all the potions and made a different face for each one. He had to stay in the Hospital Wing for at least three more days, which in James's mind didn't make anything better. He needed to talk to his dream girlfriend and find out why she's made at him for saving her life. Again, in James's mind made no sense at all. Most girls would be happy that he did that. They would be at his feet begging to do something in return but no, not Lily. She was different, very different in fact.


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Sry its so short!

it's ok ti's still good lol post more cause I'M LOVIN IT

It's wonderful I love your story keep posting

awesome! cant wait for more!

i cant wait for more either, its gr8

YAY! WAHOO! i found it! Oh, great story too. it should be published.....now!

Cheats
"Lily, how could possibly be mad at him? He practically saved your life!" Alice said. The girls were getting ready for bed and they just had to ask Lily why she was mad at James.
"I know but it seems like every time I get in a fight he comes to fight my battles for me! You know how I am! I like to do things on my own. He just makes me so mad!" Lily said calmly.
"You like him now though right?" Alice asked.
"I've always liked him you know…." Lily said.
"No as in like like him?" Jen cut in.
Lily blushed and nodded.
"Oh my gosh I knew it!" Jen screamed.
"You guys aren't mad at me are you?" Lily asked embarrassed.
"No way! I mean he's hot, smart, hilarious, plus he's saved your life…..5 times and saved your life like twice. How could you not like him?!" Alice said.
Jen was now skipping around the room she was so excited. Lily took out some cady she was given to anonymously for her birthday. Jen finally got tired of skipping and they all dozed off. The next day, rumors spread that James was being released that night. The Gryffindors decided to throw a party for him. Lily started getting nervous. He would be coming back any minute now.
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James was walking back from the Hospital Wing when he bumped into someone, Betsy McGregger.
"Oh, hi James!" she said.
"Hi, Betsy." He said dreamily. Betsy was one of the prettiest most popluar girls in school.
"Are you feeling better?" she asked.
"Yeah much!" he replied.
"Well you know that party they're holding for in Common Room? I was wondering if you wanted to go with me. Like as a date?"
"Yeah definitely!" he said. He just couldn't refuse an offer by the prettiest girl in school.
The next thing he knew they were holding hands. The opened the portrait door and everyone cheered.
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Lily looked at the stairs. She heard cheering. James must be back. She ran down and dodged the people to make it to the center. She was the happiest girl on earth until she saw them. James and Betsy McGregger were standing there hold hands! James looked over and saw Lily. She had the saddest most confused look on her face. He would so rather be yelled at than given that look. But why did he care its not like Lily like him. He was with Betsy now well since they were officially going out.
After party, talking, and drinking, Betsy and James were found on the couch snogging. Was James actually in love with Betsy? It was like all his feelings for Lily had disappeared. She was perfect for him.
Lily on the other had run up to her room with Jen and Alice there to comfort her all she could do was cry. He said he loved her! Not some Betsy! The next morning, well really afternoon Lily woke up she had missed breakfast. She had woken up earlier but she didn't want to risk seeing Potter.
'How did I even like him!' she thought, 'God he's so confusing! I'm so over him!'
She didn't care now, she was hungry and she was so not missing lunch. She made to the Great Hall with no sign of Potter. Just then they were locked in a kiss. She tried telling herself that she was over him. Then she felt a tap on her shoulder. She swung around and found herself facing a tall boy with long brown hair and brown eyes.
"Um….Hi." he said.
"Do I know you?" Lily said politely.
"I'm Dustin Durrey. I was wondering if you wanted to have lunch with me." He said smiling.
"I'd love to!" she said.
Lily learned that Dustin was a Chaser for the Ravenclaw Quidditch team.
"Is Lily sitting with the Dustin Durrey?" Jen asked.
"No!" Alice said surprised.
"Look!" Jen pointed at the couple.
They half walked half jogged over to them. Lily introduced them to Dustin. They stayed for a few minutes then headed back to Common Room. Then Lily and Dustin got up and walked to where the hallways split.
"Lily?" he asked
"Hm?"
"Do you want to come to the next Hogsmead weekend with me?" he asked sweetly.
Lily smiled, "It's a date!" she said kissing him on the cheek and walked away.
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"Hey Prongs, you know Evans is going out with Durrey?" Sirius said coming down the Quidditch pitch to meet Prongs after practice. He always came to watch James practiced just because he had nothing better to do.
"He's a cheat!" he said. He didn’t love her anymore but he felt he had to fulfill a brotherly position for her.
"I thought you were going out with Betsy?" Sirius asked. Why was James caring so much about Evans?
"I am! I love Betsy but Lily is still my friend." he explained. They walked up to the castle then to Common Room. James walked over to Lily.
"Lily we need to talk." He said seriously.
"After you change your clothes!" she said considering James was still in his Quidditch robes.
"Well I will after we talk come on." He said.
Lily got up and they walked out into the corridor.
"Lily, Dustin is a bad person."
"Who are you to go and tell me who I should go out with?"
"No you don't understand. He's a cheat. He goes out with someone then cheats. That's his reputation. He's a bad person, Lily. You don't want to go out with him" he said trying to be convincing.
"What happened to dear Betsy?" she said harshly.
"I still love Betsy! I'm trying to save you from getting hurt!" he said his voice rising.
"I can live without you trying to save me from everything Potter! I can take care of myself!" she yelled at him.
"Fine! If you don't want me to help don't come running to me when you find out he's cheating on you!" he yelled at her and walked back into Common Room.
Lily went to her dorm and explained to her friends about James and Dustin. Same with James, he went up to his dorm and explained everything to his friends. The week had gone by fast, James and Betsy had their daily snog fest in the Great Hall. Lily and James had forgotten everything about Sunday night. It was now Friday night Lily was all prepared for Hogsmead the next day. James and Lily had to patrol the hallways tonight. They walked out of Common Room. They didn't talk at all for a while.
"Look I'm sorry." James said suddenly.
"No, I appreciate you trying to act all big brotherly and all but I can take care of myself. I just like doing things on my own." She said.
"I know. I just feel like as a friend I have to look over you, you know?" he explained.
"I know. And I never did thank you for saving me from Severus's spell." She said.
" No problem. I figured one of these days Snape would crack." James said. Then he heard a noise. He turned his head sharply.
"Did you hear that?" he asked quickly.
Lily nodded. Wands out, they walked over to the broom closet and opened the door. Wide eyed to what they found. Dustin and Betsy practically eating each others faces.
"Dustin?" Lily said hurt.
"Lily wait I can explain." He said running after her.
James had no words. He gave the exact face Lily had given James the night Betsy and he got together and just walked away. She got up and walked after him.
"James let me explain." She said softly.
"Don’t even bother! We're through!" he yelled and stormed off back to Common Room.
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"And there she was snogging Durrey like there was no tomorrow!"
"It'll be alright mate. I mean Betsy is one of those people who can't get enough. You were too good for her mate." Sirius said.
This obviously cheered him up.
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"And there he was snogging McGregger like she was the best thing in the world!" Lily said a few tears falling down her cheeks, "I mean I don't even know why I'm so upset. I only knew him a few days!"
"It's because you liked him. It'll be alright! Dustin is one of those low life jerks who only care about themselves. You so deserve better."
This seemed to cheer Lily up.

Yay! Great job! I love the plot!

thanx

its so awsome. cant wait for more

I love it keep posting

i like much, but only one part of the story i was getting scared of but it got all better ^_^ it was when Lily was twisting her wrists after parents died. I was getting worried she might go suicidal. But i like how u made the characters. Gj keep on goin!

lol thanx. Yeah that part was kinda depressing lol this next part im writing is like that too so brace yourself. lol

JAMES IS A SEEKER! Right?

Originally posted by iluvhpsomuch1_7
JAMES IS A SEEKER! Right?
He is a Gryffindor Chaser, Quidditch Cup winner (PA14). NOTE: In the first film, James was said to be a Seeker, but JKR stated that he was a Chaser in the second Scholastic interview. Yes, the editors are aware that on a summer's day when he was 15 he was fooling around with a Golden Snitch - much more effective to impress girls than a Quaffle, of course, and something that proves nothing about which position he actually played. JKR said in Sch2 that James was a Chaser, so until she explicitly says otherwise, her word goes.

just figured that out on Lexon in fact...thats exactly what it said. Oh well i would have made him Seeker oh well

If it werent for what JK rowling said i wouldent beleive it. Everything points to him bieng a seeker ><. And the next part is like that? OH NO! *runs away then comes back cause he just HAS to read more*

last i heard he was seeker

well in my Lily/James story im going to make him seeker

lol me too just because! and yea sort of i guess so. You'll see.

well the next few chapters well be like depressing

Cheats continued. Lol sry but it doesn't go with the next chapter.


Later that night Lily walked down to Common Room. It was really late but she just couldn't sleep. The room was deserted expect for one person on the couch, James.
'He can't sleep either. I don't blame him.' Lily thought to herself as she walked over to him.
"James, are you alright?" She touched his arm and sat down next to him.
He looked away, "I'll manage. You?"
"Well besides that fact that I'm angry and sad that Dustin cheated on me, I feel guilty that I didn't listen to you, and I feel horrible that it had to be your girlfriend Dustin cheated on. Otherwise I'm just dandy!" She said sarcastically.
James chuckled a little bit.
"Hey it'll be okay. We're in the same boat." She said sympathetically.
There was a long silence.
"You know, I think I actually loved her." James said squinting his eyes.
She laughed, "Well, I liked Dustin a lot, I don’t know about love but, that's why I was so upset about it."
They sat there for a while staring at the fire silently. To Lily it was relaxing, just sitting there with James watching the flames flicker on and off. They both went to bed after awhile.





Tutoring (don’t know if you'll like this but just a taste of something different)

The next morning Jen woke up early. She needed to talk to Remus and she knew he woke up early every morning. She got dressed and went down stairs. Thankful, she found Remus in a chair in front of the coffee table. She walked over to him.
"Hi Remus!" She said.
He looked up, "Oh! Hey Jen. What brings you here so early?"
Jen walked over and sat down across from him.
"Well I wanted to ask you something." She said.
"Hmm."
"I was wondering if you could tutor me in Potions." She asked politely.
"Is Thursday fine with you?" He said smiling.
Jen smiled bigger.
"Oh thank you, thank you, thank you!" she said hugging just as Lily and Alice came down. She thanked him again and caught up with Lily and Alice ot get breakfast.
"What was with you and Remus?" Alice said.
"Nothing, I was waiting for you guys and we were just talking."
"Hmm…Hugging him doesn't really seem like just talking." Lily said.
"Fine! I was asking if he could tutor me in Potions!" She said embarrassed.
"OH!" They both said.
"I figured that since he was the best in our class and is in our house. It's kind of convenient." Jen explained.
"Ooooo! Jen's got a crush!" Alice said laughing.
"I don’t like him!" Jen retorted.
"Sure!" Lily said sarcastically.
Jen gave them a glare.
The next day Lily and Alice found Jen talking to Remus again. When they got to the Great Hall Lily said, "Jen! Just admit that you like him!"
"Who?" She asked.
"Remus!" Alice said.
"I do not like him!" Jen argued, "I'll show you too."
She stormed off missing breakfast.
'I do not like Remus!' she thought, 'And when I get back to Common Room I'm going to have a boyfriend!'
Sure enough she walked in Gryffindor Common Room that night feeling very happy with herself. She pranced into her dorm room.
"I have a boyfriend!" she said calmly.
Alice opened her mouth but Jen already knew what she was going to ask.
"And no, it's not Remus. It's Joshua Panibark in Hufflepuff."
"But I thought you liked Remus?" Lily asked.
"You should have listened to me when I told you I didn't!" she said.
They went to sleep and again they woke up and headed down to the Great Hall. Jen walked over to where Remus was sitting.
"Hey where do you want to meet?" she asked
"Um, how 'bout Common Room 7 o'clock?" he said.
"Sounds great!" she said and walked away.
Remus turned back to his friends who were starring at him suspiciously.
"What? I'm tutoring her in Potions!" He responded.
They turned back to their eating with a look of relief. After everyone left for classes it seemed a few minutes past and they were already back although, they did come back with handfuls of homework to prepare for their N.E.W.T.S. Lily and Alice, who were smart, came back to Common Room and made a start on it. Jen on the other hand had to stop and talk to Josh. She came a few minutes later for her tutoring lesson with Remus. She sat down and they began.
"Jen, what happened to her wrist?" Remus indicated her badly bruised wrist at the end of their lesson.
"Oh, um I tripped and fell. It got twisted a little when I landed on it." She explained.
Remus nodded still suspicious.
"Well I guess I'll see you next Thursday?"
"Yea, definitely!" She packed up her stuff and went up to bed.
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It was now Saturday and the girls planned a whole day inside their dorm. This was an annual thing. They did every year since their first day. The rules were that no one could leave the room for 24 hours straight, well except for the bathroom.
"Alright guys ready for a whole day of just us?"
"Yeah!" The girls cheered.
The gossip immediately started.
"Did you know Justin Flawery and Monique Jones are going out now!" Alice said.
"Oh my gosh really!" Lily said and started laughing.
"Jen, why are you so quiet?" Alice asked.
"Well, it's just that Josh didn't really want me to do this whole day thing." She explained.
"Why not?" Lily asked suddenly.
"He thinks I'm not with you guys. He thinks I'm with Remus. He thinks I'm cheating on because I'm spending too much time with him. The only time I'm spending with him is at breakfast when we sit next to them and when he's tutoring me!"
"That's not fair. He should trust you!" Alice said. "I think you should dump him if he's going to be like that."
"I told him that I was only spending one night with him because of potions and that he should trust me but he got mad. It's ok though, he's just being protective. He has a temper."
"Hmm, a little too protective." Lily muttered.
"Would you guys lay off. Josh and I are fine!" she said and stormed off to the bathroom.
"You don't think Josh is like doing stuff to her, like hurting her do you?" Lily asked with worried look.
"No, she said she and Josh were fine. Why would she lie about something like that?" Alice said.
Lily shrugged.
Jen came back and apologized. She didn't mean to be mean but her and Josh were fine. They accepted her apology and they spent the rest of there day eating candy, gossiping, and just having fun.

Awesome awesome awesome...But hey speaking a seeker i was curious? will there be any quidditch matches? i mean he is like a really good quidditch player and ya know, just curious, Even without quidditch tho it rocks.

working on it.

Hey hp, u seen my story lately? lol i updated it. just wondering. Anyways.....*looks out window* THE BAT SIGNAL *Jumps out a window and you hear "OW MY $#@*ing SPINE!!!" *

lol ill do it right now

Cool in about 30 mins ill start putting up the next ch post

it was alright but i think it would be so much better if u were to write it from Jame's persective once in a while too as well as Lily.

u dont really have to listen to wat im saying at all. i do think ur stories really good. i just thought it would b good if u wrote about James aswell

It is good and I agree with Sirus Rulez there isn't a lot of James in this story it is mainly about Lily I am not complaining. It is a really really good story.

i think i clearly do half and half of James and Lily's perspective. Yes Lily is in there alot but she always with James and I tell what she's thinking and what James is thinking. I don't like to write first person and I think it's annoying when people switch to first person in the middle of story like
Lily's POV or James POV. So i'll keep it the way it is. This next part isn't really going to be about Lily but more James well James and the Marauders.

That would be weird lol like...

Ch.348290 (example)
Lilys pov.
Lily thinks 'I like james but-- oh here hes coming!'
James pov
'what do i say?
Lily's pov
'Uhhh we just staring at each other'
James pov
'What do i say!?'

You see? nuff said.

i know htats what i meant. I dont like i twhen people go on in second person for like 3 paragraphs then switch to Lily's POV for 3 paragraphs then James POV for 3 paragraphs. It's annoying to me.

AMEN! your style is fine just keep em coming!
...wait a sec... is that? *looks out the window* The bat signal! *jumps out window* "OMG NOT AGAIN!!!!!"

Not really what I meant. What I meant was that you don't see a lot of James doing his things and you see a lot of Lily's. I Love Your writing I didn't mean to offend you.

True but thats because I usually tell what he's thinking rather than what hes doing

true true

im not meaning to offend u either cause when I look at James/Lily fics its just all about Lily's Pov and never of James. i really do hope that im not offending u in any way cause believe me id never try to offend anyone

have you read anything I said to Brit?

I think she might have read it, but wanted you to know not to feel offended by it and post more soon.

she was saying that My story is only about Lily POV which its not. And to not get offended but im totally ok with it.

as you said before

And thats why I asked if she had read what I said to you

i did

are you going to post soon

um yea sure

wow i just read your story! it is really good! i havent read any james and lily storys ( even though i know there is like a million) but i really like! i really hope you post soon.

Tutoring Continued………

"Remus?" Jen said that morning in Common Room. Again, she had woken up early to talk to Remus.
"Morning." Remus looked up.
"Remus, I don't think you should tutor me anymore." She said looking utterly upset.
"Whoa, one lesson and you already know the subject?" he said playfully.
"No, I'm still clueless but Josh doesn't want me to have tutor." She took a breath, "He thinks I'm cheating on him with you."
"He thinks you're cheating on him, with me? Didn't you tell him about me and tutoring?" Remus sounded surprised.
She nodded, "But he didn't believe me"
"Well I could talk to him for you." He said.
"No! That'll make things worse!" Jen said quickly.
"Is everything okay?" he asked suspiciously.
"Yeah, Josh just has a… temper."
"He should trust you though."
"I know he's just being careful." She sighed.
He squinted his eyes with the same look of suspicion. He looked down at her wrist.
"He's hurting you, isn't he?" he mumbled with shock.
"Pardon?" Jen said worried.
"Josh is hurting you, that's how you hurt your wrist, not by tripping!"
"No….No that’s not true!" she said disbelievingly.
"Yes it is, Jen. Why didn't you tell me or anyone?"
"I…..I…." she stuttered.
"Jen you can't be treated that way! It's just wrong! You're better than that! You're better than him!"
"I don't know what to do! He got mad because I said you were better at Potions than he was!" she said shakily,
"You're going to break up with him today, that's what you're going to do." He said.
She nodded and he walked away to catch up with his friends for breakfast.
Like the usual, the girls took their seats next to the Marauders in the Great Hall.
"Oi Remus, I have this friend who wants to ask someone out but they don't know how to do it. What do I tell 'em?" James asked
"This is what I'm good for." Remus whispered to Jen. She laughed.
"Okay James, first tell me who this friend is then I'll help you." Remus said simply.
"Oh you don't know him." James replied.
"James, I know it's you. Who do you want to ask out?" Remus said.
"Never mind I'll just do it myself." He said frustrated and turned to Sirius who was across from him.
"Sirius, I know we've been friends for a very long time but I'm ready to go past that. Will you marry me?" James said batting his eye lashes.
"Sod off!" Sirius said and crossed his arms. Everyone was laughing now.
"Some 4th year came up to him this morning and proposed out of nowhere." James explained.
"I'll be right back." Jen said suddenly spotting Josh at the Great Hall entrance.
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"Listen," Remus said beckoning the Marauders and Jen's friends to come closer, "Josh is abusing her."
Lily gasped.
"But she told us they were fine!" Alice said aloud.
"Shhh!" Remus put his finger to his mouth, "She just told me this morning. I told her to break up with him and I think that's what she's doing right now. She's not to confident so I brought the Invisibility Cloak just in case."
"Hey I was looking for that this morning!" James said.
"You have an Invisibility Cloak?" Lily asked.
"James will explain while I'm gone." Remus said as James gave him a glare. As he walked over he notice they had moved to a corner so no one unexpected would find them. When Remus was sure Jen, Josh or anyone in fact could see him he quickly covered himself with the cloak. He walked over and stayed close enough to them so he could hear them closely.
"So did you break up with Lupin?" Josh asked harshly.
"Yes, I told him he shouldn't tutor me anymore." Jen replied.
"Then why were you laughing at him earlier?" he asked
"Because he said something funny." She said in a that's-obvious tone.
"Don't give me cheek!" he said pushing her into the wall with almost enough force to knock the wind out of her.
"Josh, I've had enough! I don't want to be your girlfriend anymore!" she said her voice rising.
"Oh, I think you do." He said approaching as she cowered in fear.
Remus threw off the Invisibility Cloak, "Don't touch her!" he yelled.
Josh turned around and then looked at Jen again.
"Oh, so you got Lupin to be your hero?"
"No, she didn't tell me to do anything, but I believe she told you to leave her alone." He said calmly.
"What make you think you can tell me what to do, Lupin?" Josh spat.
"I think Jen is perfectly fine running her own life, Josh! And if you don't stand at least ten feet away from her I guarantee the next day you'll have boils the size of galleons where the sun don't shine!" he yelled and walked off with Jen beside him.

that was really good!!

Not really, It's kind of cheesy. My whole story is cheesypaperbag1

I really like it!!!

i really like it, it isn't that cheesy, and cheesy is sometimes good expecially in this story

no i dont think it is cheesy. i think your story is really good! i like how you are now talking about lupin! i havent heard anything about him before. i really hope you post again soon.

I HAVE A PICTURE OF JEN, ALICE, AND LILY THAT I DREW! WHOO!

lol, they look good. you shoud aso make Remus, Sirius, James, and mean Peter.

wow those drawings are really good! i think you should also draw the guys but you have to make peter really ugly and look really horrible!

brillient, i luv ur story and i also like how u talked about Lupin, its really good. ur pictures were really good as well and i also agree wit Brit531 about drawing the pictures of the guys. plz keep posting

I'm trying but the guys are turning out harder than the girls

YOUR STORY IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok i have the boys just so you know. Peter isn't THAT ugly cuz that's not how i picture him when he was younger only when hes older lol

Here it is

oooooooooo, I love both of your pictures!!!

thats really good!!!!!!!!!!!

They are both really good, but I can't wait to see what happens next in your story.

the pictures of the guys was really good and i also cant wait to c wat happens next

Are you going to post soon?

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plz post soon cause its just so good

yeah the picture of the guys is really good! good job! you should definitely keep up with drawing! and your story!!!! i really want to see what happens next soooooo post!!!!!!

post more.its awesome.

Wow I made an account just so that I can post this:
Your really good at writing. You might want to conisder being an author. I've read every single post and I think your really good. I check every night to see if you post something...so hurry up and post!

AW!!! Thank you!!! I'm trying to post but i think what I might end up doing is starting over. Same sort of thing but my other story on General Fic- Summer Changed- has better writing and went I started this I was kind of an ammeture. So i want to start over- it will be a little different. Things might be taken out or just moved to later in the story. I'll try to not make it move so fast like make important things happen but not have it like be the end of the year at Chapter 6 lol. Thanx again for all the comments! And make sure to read when I start over!

Much Love --iluvhpsomuch1_7--

Just hurry up already