LZ's Poetry Thread
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Lord. Zidane
Well i suck at poetry..and have no idea how to structure poems but Supernovadragon does them so meh..
every so often i shall post a poem, please feel free to tell me if they are crap or not lol
Lord. Zidane
Heres one i wrote to my girlfriend heaven. (she liked it so i was happy lol)
I feel loves sweet embrace, forever am I ensnared in the warm feeling that you make me experience every time I hear your voice. The way your beautiful green eyes look up at me can make me weak with excitement. Slowly your black hair drapes down your back instilled like a waterfall. Similar to a siren of myth you enchant me with you irresistible charm. Your lips are so soft and smooth with the countenance of a goddess. Slowly you walk catching my eye i stop and stare lost forever in your radiance.
Lord. Zidane
I wrote this for this girl i used to like lol
I care for you deeply, forever I will
Just to be beside, to hold you forever
There will always be a place for you deep in my heart
I have always loved you right from the start
This love is forbidden, my heart aches for you
A moment without you is like living in darkness, a long cold winter
Without my bright sun, I must be strong hold on to the memories
In my lifetime I want to hold you at least once, feel your sweet embrace
And your loving touch.
Coldfire
Love them both hun
hug
Lord. Zidane
Thanks Amber
hug
Coldfire
Originally posted by Lord. Zidane
Thanks Amber
hug
You're quite welcome
I want to see some more!!
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