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I don't know how to start my essay.

I have given in my first draft, it was marked and the teacher said that I can't say I am going to analyse/criticise etc. So now I don't know how I will start it. I

I'm completely befuddled!

This is what I said: I am going to analyse the front pages of two national papers... BTW it isn't my very first sentence. My intro sentence highlighted the power of newspapers in todays world.

So any suggestions?

u should talk about the making of the earth and if how the solar system was invented and of cheese first being eaten

if tht wont get u top marks i dont know what will

talk about the underpants gnomes they steal my underwear everynight and no one believes me cry

this is a secret i chose not to disclose but the voices made me so here it goes: i cant sleep at night, the clowns will eat me wounded1

O.O i had a dream like that after i watched IT for the first time XD

Any real suggestions?

SAVE THE WHALES AND STOp THE FOX HUNTS! fox


(note; real suggestions.

we are nearly in the same boat there cuz i have to do a presentation on thrusday on Post impressionism i havent a clue what to start with im screwed

What's it about?

Originally posted by Bloigen
What's it about?
I am going to analyse the front pages of two national papers - I have to compare Broadsheet and Tabloid newspapers.


I just don't know what to replace ''I am going to analyse'' with.

Idk, how's this?

1) After analysing the front pages of two national papers I have noticed that....

2) When comparing the front pages of " " you will notice that...

3) The front pages of " " have been compared, and I can conclude that...

Originally posted by s|m
Idk, how's this?

1) After analysing the front pages of two national papers I have noticed that....

2) When comparing the front pages of " " you will notice that...

3) The front pages of " " have been compared, and I can conclude that...

Legend! dance

Originally posted by Time Of Evil
Legend! dance
Eh?

I tried giving ideas, but nooo

Originally posted by Time Of Evil
I don't know how to start my essay.

I have given in my first draft, it was marked and the teacher said that I can't say I am going to analyse/criticise etc. So now I don't know how I will start it. I

I'm completely befuddled!

This is what I said: I am going to analyse the front pages of two national papers... BTW it isn't my very first sentence. My intro sentence highlighted the power of newspapers in todays world.

So any suggestions?
You don't refer to yourself and what you are doing!

Strict rule. Try starting out like putting the topic forth at hand.

Teachers hate when students go: "I am here today to talk about..." "This is what my essay will be on...."


That's grade four bullshit.

Originally posted by DarkC
You don't refer to yourself and what you are doing!

Strict rule. Try starting out like putting the topic forth at hand.

Teachers hate when students go: "I am here today to talk about..." "This is what my essay will be on...."


That's grade four bullshit.

I haven't done that. I have introduced the topic in a subtle way and then said I will analyse them.

Originally posted by Time Of Evil
I haven't done that. I have introduced the topic in a subtle way and then said I will analyse them.

No. You said "I am going to analyse...", which is what Dark is referring to.

I would go with something along the lines of (like s|m said) "After comparing the newspapers ______ and _____, it can be noted..."

Something similar to that.

Just say you're being bullied and give the teacher some porn pics.

They'll understand.

Originally posted by H. S. 6
No. You said "I am going to analyse...", which is what Dark is referring to.

I would go with something along the lines of (like s|m said) "After comparing the newspapers ______ and _____, it can be noted..."

Something similar to that.

I didn't START it like that. I started it by introducing the topic. Newspapers saying that newspapers have a strong grip on the public and are the superlative form of the media.

Then I said I am going to analyse.

Originally posted by Time Of Evil
I didn't START it like that. I started it by introducing the topic. Newspapers saying that newspapers have a strong grip on the public and are the superlative form of the media.

Then I said I am going to analyse.

Frankly, I don't care where it was, and neither does your teacher, apparently. It's what you wrote, not where/when you wrote it.

And I didn't say you started it with that anyway...