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Ok, this is my first time writing and I would like some type of feed back.

Chapter 1:
One night a boy named Harry Potter suddenly awoke. Harry didn't the reason why he woke up, but he had a pretty good idea about it. He looked over at the clock that read 12:00. He remembered that at that moment he turned 17 years old. Maybe that was why he was feeling like he was. Turning 17 years old may not be anything special for an ordinary teenager, but Harry Potter is no ordinary teenager. Infact he is a wizard. Harry new that in the wizarding world he has turn of age and is now able to do magic outside of school without any consequences.
Harry suddenly relized that his owl, Hedwig, was at the window holding three letters for him. One of the letters were form Ron. Another was from Hermione. The last one was from Ginny. Harry decided that he would open Ron's letter first. Ron letter said....
Dear Harry,
Happy Birthday mate.Feels good to be 17 doesn't it. Well dad, Hermione, and I are coming to get you at 8:00 so make sure your packed and ready. That should give you enough time to say goodbye and pack.
See You Soon,
Ron
Harry then opened Hermione's next.
Dear Harry,
Happy Birthday!!!! How does it feel to be able to do magic now. Great right!!Now that you are of age you have to start to study for your apparation test coming up soon. The test is important these days.Well I guess I will be seeing you tonight. We will discuss this matter more later.
See You At 8:00,
Hermione
Harry knew that Hermione would say something like that, but as Harry started to look at the last letter he couldn't. He was afraid of what might be inside. He thought about what would be in it, but he still couldn't look in it. So Harry put it aside and got out a quill and parchment to write to Ron and Hermione.
Dear Ron and Hermione,
I will be ready at 8:00. Can't wait to see you.
Harry
Harry then gave the letter to Hedwig and told her to go as fast as possible, but before Hedwig had left Harry gave her a treat and then see was off.
Harry went back to his bed and laid down. He thought about a few things, but then fell back to sleep with the thought of going back to the burrow.

Well it is good no doubt but try to explain things a little more. Like why Harry didn't want to open Ginny's letter, what he thought was inside it and give spaces between the paragraphs. It will look better

mint so far

Thanks and I noticed the same thing

looks great so far post more soon ok

really good! Just remember to explain things more and look it over a couple times before you post. Some spelling stuff and missing words but otherwise i luved it. Can't wait for more!

Harry awoke the next morning at noon. He was suprised that no one had woken him up. When he got out of bed he noticed no smell of breakfast or lunch cooking on the stove. He walked downstairs into the kitchen and saw a note on the table.

Harry ,
We will be at Marge's house all day. Don't mess up the house or you will have to clean it.
Uncle Vernon

Harry was so happy after he read the note .He was going to have the best day he had ever had in this house. All day long Harry did whatever he wanted. Time went quickly by and when Harry looked at the clock it said 7:45, but he didn't care. So he went up stairs and with a flick of his wand he made everything go into his trunck.

When he went back downstairs with his stuff and wrote the Dursleys' a note to tell them where he was going and who he was staying with. He thought they wouldn't care anyway, but he still wrote it.

Outside in the backyard he heard two loud cracks at exactly eight o'clock. When he went to open the door he saw three people looking through the window at him so he opened the door and saw three people. One was his best friend Ron, the second was his best friends dad Mr. Weasley, and the third was his second best friend Hermione.

"All ready Harry?" asked Mr. Weasley with a smile on his face.
" Yeah..... I think so." Harry said not sure of himself.
"Well then we should get going." Mr. Weasley said.
They slowly walk out onto the warm summer air.
"Mr. Weasley, how are we going to get there?" Harry asked. Hoping it wasn't what he was thinking.
"Well Harry, we are going to apparate there." answered Mr Weasley.
"Uh... Mr. Wealey, I can't apparate. I do not have my liscence yet.
"Harry do not worry. Harmoine will be with you and Ron will go with me. Isn't that right Ron."
" Yes dad."
As Hermione reached for Harry's hand there was a cold chill in the air.

so is that better please tell me

it was very good. You should still try to explain things a little more like how he was happy about leaving and such. Try not to repeat things like when Harry's friends came. You said he saw three people twice. Just try to make that you only have to say it once. Otherwise it relli very very good.

thanks and i didn't notice that until i posted it and i was never good at explaining but i will try

its ok!

Wonderful starting.

thanks

great story

I like the story so far! Like the others said, explain certain things more, like how Harry felt when there was a cold chill in the air. Like you could say, "A feeling of dread rose within him,'' or something like that!

I send mines to my Beta before posting it. Write more soon!

good story, post again soon

cool story so far. cant wait for more!

I'll post more soon i have to think first

i liked it you should keep writing but in this cause keep typing lol

Sorry it took so long.

A chill that made them all feel like they will never be happy again. Dementors were comming for them. By the feel of things there was only a few of them.

"Hurry they are coming!" Mr. Weasley shouted, but Harry had no intention of leavingat a time like this.
"Harry we must go now!" Mr. Weasley shouted again. Harry didn't want to go, but he had no choice. Hermoine then grabed his hand and they were gone.

Within seconds the feeling of being pushed through a tube and not being able to breath swept over him. He fely his feet touch the ground and when he opened his eyes he saw one of his favorite places in the world, the burrow. Moments later he was greeted by a plump lady with red hair like the rest of the family.

"How are you doing Harry dear?" Mrs. Weasley asked Harry with a grin on her face.
"I'm fine thank- you." Harry replies.
"Are you hungry dear? Can I get you anything?" Mr. Weasley asked.
"No thank- you. I'm fine." Harry ince again replied.

Harry walked into the kitchen and saw people he knew and people he didn't know. He looked at Ron for an answer.

"Harry don't tell me you forgot about Fleur and Bill's wedding?" Ron asked Harry with a smile on his face. Harry couldn't believe that he forgot about the wedding.

"Hiya Harry!" To familiar voices said. Harry turned around to see the Weasley twins, Fred and George.
"Hey Fred and George." Harry said.
"Now Harry dear go take your stuff upstairs to Ron's room and hurry because I want you to meet a few people." Mrs. Weasley said with a grin on her face.

Forgetting for a minute that he was allowed to do magic out of school he started to take his truck up by hand.

"What are you doing?" Ron asked in a sort of laugh. Harry then pulled out his wand, gave it a quick flick and the truck then started to hover in midair. After he was done taking his truck upstairs, he then waked back down to find Mrs. Weasley.

"Harry come over here please," Mrs. Weasley said " Harry this is Fleur's mother, Mrs. Delacour and her father Mr. Delacour."
"Very nice to meet you."

After meeting several people on Fleur's side Mrs. Weasley then proceeded to the Weasley side of the family. He met uncles, aunts, grandparents, cousins, and the rest of the Weasley's relatives. Finally after meeting everyone he was allowed to talk to people he actully knew.

"Hello Bill and Charlie." Harry said kind of tired.
"Hello Harry." They said in unison.
"I see you met ALL of the family." Bill said in a kind of snort.
" Don't worry I had to go through it too." Hermoine's voice came out of nowhere. "There is just so many people hear!"
"Where is everyone going to sleep?" Harry asked.
"Well we are not sure about that yet." Ron answered from behind Harry.
" Everyone has been driving me mental since they got here and it hasn't even been twenty- four hours!" Geaorge started to complain.
" Thank god the wedding is on Saturday or I might just have to go to a mental instition for peace and quiet." Ginny said coming out of nowhere.

Harry turned to see a beautiful red haired girl coming near the group of people, but Harry couldn't think of her as a girl anymore. She was a young woman. Harry wanted to go over to her and give her a kiss, but then he remembered what he had said to her at Dumbledore's funeral. He remembered he said that they couldn's be together because Voldmort might use her to get to him and he didn't want her to get hurt.

A few hours later when everyone stated to go to bed Harry found himself outside on the porch with Ginny near by. He didn't know how this came tobe, but it did.
"Listen Harry." Ginny began, but Harry interupted.
"Ginny, I know it is hard for you to deal with. It is hard for me too. I never wanted this to happen. I really do want to be with you.
"I want to be with you too, but you won't let it happen because you think Voldmort will use me to get to you. Ginny said with tears filling her eyes. He looked into her eyes and he couldn't hold the urge back anymore. Harry kissed her like he never her before.

When they broke apart Ginny asked, " Why are you doing this to me?"
"I don't know. I kind of lost control of myself. It is so hard to let you go." Harry said beginning to get frustrated.
"Then why can't we just be together if you don't want to let me go?" Ginny said beginning to shout.
"Because of what I said before about Voldmort" Harry said.
"What if I don't care. What if I just want to be with you?" Ginny said and she kissed Harry this time. Harry then knew he can't stop themselves from being apart. He gave in.

"But if we are going to be together you have to listen to me whenever there is trouble because I don't want you to get hurt." Harry said happily but also worried.
"Fine, but you have to come back to school as well." Ginny said happily as well.
"Fine, I will." Harry said with a sort of laugh. They then both went inside to bed.

Tell me what you think and tell me if I explained more.

The next day when everyone was awake they started to set up for the wedding tomorrow. Everyone was such in a rush it was a disaster. Fleur was with Mrs. Weasley saying what and where everything should go. There was an annoying look on Mrs. Weasley's face and Harry could tell why.

"What do they need so many flowers?" Ron asked. When Ron had said this he looked around and saw flowers everywhere.

"No Idea." Harry answered honestly to Ron.

Just then Lupin walked in. He looked different from the last time everyone saw him. He wasn't tired. He had a very clean new look that everyone had never seen. Which was different considering that he always looked a mess. Harry realized why when Tonks walked in looking good as well. She didn't have he pink hair on funny nose, but her soft long brown hair and her real nose. They both walked over to them.

"Hello Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny. How are you doing?" Lupin asked them with a great big smile.

"Fine," they said in unison.

"How have you been?" Hermione asked before anyone could say anything.

"Well," Lupin began as he looked at Tonks, " it has been good. Very good actually."

"Well, we will see you later." Tonks said walking off with Ginny and Hermione.

"So whats going on with you and Lupin?" Hermione asked when they left the room.

"Well, in the beginning of the summer after the funeral we talked about everything. He thought of reasons we should and shouldn't be together. Then I did the same thing after he was done. In the end we both realized that we belong to be together, but he is still worried about everything and ever since it has been going great!" Tonk said with a grin on her face.

that's good but like i said to.......OhIluvHp i think. When your people talk it sounds like the olden days. Like not modern Harry Potter people would talk. Make them sound like regular people. Not like DUDE HEY ! but do you know what I mean?

i like ur story keep posting

yea i know what you mean iluvhpsomuch1 7

i will hopefully be posting tomorrow if everything goes ok

great story!!!! *grins*

thanks

no prob!!! you were the first to comment on my story after all!!!

i think ur stories really good. keep posting plz

ill be posting sometime tonight

or in a minute

Well sorry it took awhile to post…. Tell me what you think

At the end of the day everyone was tired and wanted to go to their bed, but by then Mrs. Weasley was mad at the fact that not everything for the wedding was not done.

“Why aren’t you all done cleaning up this mess!” Mrs. Weasley asked with a angry look on her face at the sight of her youngest sons room.

“We just started mum.” Ron said frightened by his mother.

“Oh, sorry dear. I guess I am more tired than I thought. Well, when you are finished you all go to bed.” she said with a confused look on.

“Mum, why don’t you go to bed you have been up most of the day. I think you may need your rest for tomorrow.” Ginny said.

“Well, I don’t think…” but Mrs. Weasley was cut off by Ginny.

“Yes, we all think so.” Ginny said while Harry, Ron, and Hermione were shaking their heads yes.

“Ok, but it better be spotless tomorrow, because I don‘t want you cleaning tomorrow.” Mrs. Weasley said being pushed to her room by Ron and Harry. When they got her into the room everyone still had to clean until it was spotless or they would here it tomorrow morning.

Once Ron and Harry were done on Ron’s room they went to help the girls downstairs clean. Though they didn’t like cleaning, but they thought it as a good time to use magic to help.

By the time they were done it was nearly two am. So they all went to bed with pleased looks on their faces.

During the rest of the night Harry started to have a extremely bad dream. One that scared him half to death.
“Harry help. Harry help us please.”
“Ginny, Ron, Hermione what are you doing here. What is wrong with…”
“Harry, Voldmort is right behind you. Look out” Hermione yelled. Voldmort tried to reach for Harry, but he moved before he could.
“Well well well, I knew you would come. Though I thought you knew that my death eaters kidnapped your precious friends and as I have found out your girlfriend as well.” Voldmort said laughing.
“No, I didn’t. Let them go it is me you want.”
“Why should I let them go torturing is so much better. Who should I start with. I know how about your beloved Ginny.”
Ginny started to yell in the pain as she fell to the ground. “Ginny, let her alone.” Harry started yelling.

Then all of a sudden he felt someone shaking him to wake up.

“Harry are you alright.” Ginny said completely frightened by what he was saying. Harry then kissed Ginny like he never has ever kissed her.
“Hey, stop snogging her while I’m here.” Ron said half asleep while Hermione comes in behind him.
“What going on?” Hermione asked. Then Harry retold everything in his dream. They were all really scared and realized why Harry had been yelling. Luckily when Hermione woke up she made sure that no one could here Harry yelling and came upstairs right after doing so.

“Harry, we are coming.” Ron said looking at Harry with a concerned look on his face.
“What?” Harry asked before anyone else could ask.
“We’re coming with you to find the horacuxes.” Hermione and Ron said with a stubborn look on their faces.
“What are horacuxes?” Ginny asked completely shocked at what she heard.
“What….. ummm…Ginny I don’t think you want to know.” Ron said.
“Yes I do so tell me.”
“No”
“Harry, what are they?”
“Well,” Harry looked at his friends. Ron was telling him to say no and Hermione was saying to tell her. “Well… they are parts of….. Voldmort’s soul. That I have to destroy before I do anything really heroic as every says.”

It's ok you've written better. Like You repeat yourself, its hard to notice but I can tell you don't have to be that specific lol, oh and its Horcruxes.

that was a lot better

thanks, and thanks for telling me how to spell horcruxes i was wondering about that.

well I am not sure what to do next so if anyone has any Ideas pm me or write it here

yes it was good.

thanks

you going to more soon???

do u mean am i going to post soon than that is yes and do u think i really need the wedding i hat writing weddings

do wateva you want!!! by the way i did mean are you going to post soon...

can you give me some ideas i really dont know what to post

i don't know!!! maybe you could go on to tell about wat ginny did after harry told her or something like that??

thanks d-fly girl any more suggestions

nope!!! sorry!!!

thanks

I know that I said the wedding would be the next day, but I needed another day to go….

Ginny was shocked by what she just heard. ‘What did he mean by first finding these, how many are there, will Harry die doing this, and will Harry leave her again?’ Ginny thought until someone started talking to here.

“Gin, are you alright?” Ron asked with a look of shock and worry on his face.
“I’m fine,” answered Ginny, “Harry what do you mean first finding them then killing Voldmort?”
“Well, if you don’t find them first then Voldmort can come back. It is like he was immortal.”
“How many are there?”
“There was 6, but now there is 4 and I bet your next question is what are they.”
“Not exactly, but since you said that now you can tell me what they are.”
“The believed horcruxes are Hufflepuff’s goblet, something from Gryffindor or Ravenclaw, his snake Nagini, and a locket. The ones we found already and destroyed are the diary you found in your first year, and the ring that Dumbledore found.”
“Oh, Hermione, Ron can I talk to Harry?”
“Sure, go ahead.”
“Alone,”
“k, we will be downstairs when your done.” Hermione said, “Harry, don’t make her cry.” said in a whisper.

“What did you want to talk to me about?” Harry said scared of what she might say.
“Don’t leave me again.”
“What do you mean.”
“Don’t leave me in the middle of the school year or the rest of the summer.”
“Ginny,” Harry taking her into his arms feeling her wet tears through his shirt, “I will never leave you again and I don’t plan on it. Remember what I promised you. I will finish this year, but I am going to ask Mcgonagal if I can leave during the year. I will come back and I am guessing your wondering if I might die?”
“Yes, that was something else I wanted to know.” Ginny said while tears were running down her face.
“I’m am not sure, but if I do I don’t want you crying over me because I am died. I want you crying over me because…… I don’t know.” Harry said leading Ginny over to the bed so they can sit and talk because he knew that this could take a few hours.

A couple hours later.
“Ginny, Harry dinner is ready.”
“Are you hungry? Or do you want to talk more?”
“I am not going to make you miss another meal because of talking. I will make you miss another meal because I want to spend time with only you, but I know you are hungry and so am I so lets eat.” Ginny said with a laugh.

When they got down to the kitchen they were surprised to see the whole order ,or what is left of it, in the living room sitting and talking to each other. Harry thought that they were talking about how to defeat Voldmort, but instead they were talking about the wedding that will be held tomorrow.

it was good, i like it. plz keep posting

well I have the next part almost done so I will be posting real soon

thats good. cant wait

well, i would have posted today if my computer didnt go and delete everything I had, but I will write from memory and should be up in two days time. So, get ready for the post. LOL

i'm ready, i'm ready i'm ready, i'm ready
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POST!!!!!!!!!!

i hate it when computers just delete everything its just such a drag, its happened to me loads of times lol. its just so annoying. anyway i cant wait for da next post.

“Harry wake up, wake up.” Ron said trying to wake Harry with as much force as possible.

“What do you want?” Harry asked looking at his bedside clock, “It is 3 a.m. what so you want?”

“Actually Ginny, Hermione, and I set this up. You are going to trade places with Hermione so we can talk so you and Ginny can talk. She really needs to talk to you about something”

“Do you know what she wants to talk about? She has been distant ever since Bill and Fleur’s wedding.”

“No I don’t mate, but go”

“K, I’m going.” Harry said leaving the room as quiet as possible. While walking down to Ginny’s room he saw Hermione and said hi to her and she looked real happy. When he got to Ginny’s room she looked kind of worried and happy at the same time. Harry had never seen her like this and it made him worried as well.

“Hey, what is wrong or is there nothing wrong because you look, well, kind of worried? Harry said sitting next to his girlfriend, Ginny.

“Oh, I’m fine, but I need to tell you something?”

“What is it?”

“Well, the night before the wedding I had a dream about…… you and……. Voldmort and he…… he was trying to.” Ginny couldn’t say anything else and she could feel tears running down her face, but Harry knew what happened at the end of the dream because on the same night he had the same type of dream, but it was reversed. Instead of him dieing he saw the one he truly loved die right in front of his eyes.

“Gin, Ginny don’t worry that isn’t going to happen, but do you want to know something? I had the same exact dream, but instead of me dieing it was you.” Now Harry could feel tears run down his face, but his tears were hot and at that moment his scare began to burn.
“Harry, what is wrong?” Ginny asked, “I’m going to get Ron and Hermione I will be right back!!” Ginny ran as fast as she could to Ron’s room where Hermione and Ginny were, but when she got in there they were asleep so she got them to wake up.

“Hermione, Ron something is wrong with Harry.”

“What!!!” Hermione and Ron said together while leaving the room, but by the time they got there Harry was gone. So, they looked around everywhere, but saw no sign of Harry.

“Where could he have gone?” Ginny asked Hermione and Ron looking real worried, but when they looked again they finally said they would wake up Mr. and Mrs. Weasley to tell them what had happened.

“Mom, Dad wake up Harry is gone.” Ginny and Ron said pulling there parents out of their beds.

“What!! Harry is gone.” Mrs. Weasley said.

“Well, I was talking to him about a dream I had, but then he fell to the floor holding his scare and then I said I would go get Hermione and Ron and when we got there he was gone.”

“Where were Ron and Hermione?” Mr. Weasley asked.

“We were in the kitchen getting something to eat.” Hermione said before anyone could say anything.

“We have to find him!!!!!” Ginny said beginning to get scared her dream might actually come true.

Yeah it worked it worked

it was really good and i really liked the part when u made Harry dissappeare

thanks, i might add a new character to it I always wanted to. Should I?

It's your story... and I think it would be a good idea!

i think adding a new character would be gr8. go for it

thanks and I will

Ok, whatever you do, post soon!

you are a very impacient person you know that

No pressure or anything... it's just that I can't wait to read more of your story cause it is soooooooooooooo good! Yes, and I know I can be impatient sometimes.

LOL, i know you didn't mean anything by it, but I need a little more time to make sure the next part of the story is right.

That's fine!

Good

Yep!

Here is the next post I hope you like it!!

I have to get out of here, Harry kept thinking to himself while walking down the rode. I don’t want anyone to get hurt. Harry just kept thinking and thinking and forgot that his scare hurt so bad, but he also didn’t notice that blood was dripping down his face until he fell to the ground in exhaustion.

Then he saw someone jogging up to him. Someone with long brown hair and blue eyes.

“Are you alright?” She asked, but she knew he wasn’t ok.

“Yea, I’m fine.” Harry said. His eyes started to darken to the point the could barely see anything. When Harry fainted the girl picked him up and jogged back to where she was staying.

Meanwhile, at the Weasley house everyone is searching high and low for Harry. Everyone was thinking where could Harry be, is Harry alright, and most important who was he with?

“Did anyone find him?” Ginny asked scared out of her wits to what might happen to Harry if they didn’t find him soon.

“No, but I think we should look up the road. He might be there and you said he was in a lot of pain when you went to get us, so he couldn’t have gotten to far.” Hermione said keeping her cool down so Ginny didn’t know how scared she really was.

“Yea, I’ll go with you.” Ginny said as they started to walk out the door.

“Just one minute I’m coming with.” Ron said fearing what they might find. It was really dark outside so Ron and Hermione light there wands. Ginny was looking down when she noticed blood on the floor. If she wasn’t scared before now she was really scared.

“Hermione, Ron I found something.” Ginny said while both of them came running over. They both were as shocked at what they found as well. It wasn’t a little bit of blood, but a lot of blood.

“Do you think it is Harry’s” Ron said even though he knew the answer.

“It’s Harry alright. We need to get back to the house to tell them. So they all ran to the house and when they got there everyone was waiting for them to see what they found.

“What did you find.” Mrs. Weasley asked even though she didn’t want the answer, but it was obvious it wasn’t Harry.

“We found blood and a lot of it. It seems he was bleeding pretty bad.” Hermione said before either of them could say anything.

“We need to warn the Order tell them to keep an eye out for him. Though Tonks and Lupin won’t really be able to help, but they will try.” Mr. Weasley stated after what he had heard.

“Why won’t they be able to help much Dad?” Ginny asked.

“Well…. They have a lot on…. Their hands right now. That’s all.” He said trying really hard to avoid the question and its answer. “Lets get started ont those letters Molly, while the children get some sleep.”

“Ok, off to bed with you. Go now. We will find him don’t worry about that.” Mrs. Weasley said to Hermione, Ron, and especially Ginny. She was the most worried after all.

Meanwhile, back at the girl’s house she was healing Harry, in a way most people didn’t heal. There was a bight glowing light that was coming from her hands that felt like warmth and love to the unconscious Harry. It was something that he only ever felt when Ginny was with him.

When the girl finished healing Harry an owl came through the window as the now conscious Harry woke up. The girl got the owl and took the letter and was off again to deliver another letter to a different person. Harry thought, she must be the one that healed me and what is her name. He kept asking himself until he had the courage to ask her.

“Your up. I didn’t think it worked, but will you hold on a minute I have to give this to someone.” She said and ran up the stairs to give the letter to someone. When she got back down she was followed by two people he knew. Harry pretended to be asleep when they made it down the stairs.

“Is this him?” The girl that saved his life asked.

“Yes, it is. I will send for them immediately, but I first need to know what happened. Do you think we should wake him up.” The man asked.

“I think we should. Can you do it we will be waiting in the kitchen.” The other girl asked. Harry thought the man and the girl had a familiar voice, but he wasn’t certain at the moment. Then the girl he just met came up and said to wake up. Harry immediately woke up.

“Come with me. Some people want to talk to you.” The girl said.

“What is your name first?” Harry asked without thinking, but she answered.

“My name is Brittany. Now come on.” She said and walked off to the kitchen. When he got there he was so shocked to who he found.

I’m going to leave a cliff hanger because I want you to guess who it is. I know who it is and when you guess a few people then I will go and post the next part.

No one posted. That makes me very sad. crybaby

OOO!!! I hate cliff hangers!!! Post more soon!!

you didn't answer the question. Who do you think Harry will see? I know you hate cliff hangers, but I had to. So quess if you want the next part.

is it a relative of Harry's or something like that?

No, not relatives I would say friends

Um... Tonks

Closer you need one more person and I will give you the post in two days

Tonks and Lupin.

You are correct now I will post in two days hopefully

yea post post post soon

you really want me to post soon don't you

YES!! I was right!! Oh, and yes, we really want you to post.

ye, that would b good

This is the next part. So enjoy.

“Harry, are you alright?” Brittany asked puzzled by the way he was looking at the two people sitting at the table.

“Tonks? Lupin?” Harry asked wondering why they would baby-sit anyone. “You’re the ones she is staying with.”

“First of all, they are not my babysitter. I am 17 you know and second of all I am staying with them because someone asked them if I could stay here this summer. Is that so wrong?” Brittany said beginning to get agitated.

“Did I say the babysitter thing out load?” Harry asked confused.

“No, you didn’t Harry and I need to ask you a few questions before I mail this letter. Or Brittany I know you have stuff to do tomorrow and you won’t get your morning jog in so will you jog it over there for me. Instead of sending by owl.” Lupin asked with a yawn. He looked very tired and was graying a little like he was that old.

“Sure, as long as I get away from him. Oh, and Harry you better watch what you think around me. I can read minds,” Brittany said with a little bit of a laugh in her voice, “And Lupin is everything they need to know in this letter because I am not in the mood to talk about stuff.” Lupin just nodded and she was off to the Weasley’s house.

At the Weasley house Mr. and Mrs. Weasley were almost asleep when someone knocked on the door. Then Mr. and Mrs. Weasley heard many footsteps running down the steps like a pack of wolves running for there supper.

“Is it Harry.” They all asked wondering the same thing. Then there was another knock. Mrs. Weasley walked over to the door and asked, “Who is it?”

“It’s Brittany. I have a letter for you.” she said wondering why the house looked so to the side than standing in an upright position. Mrs. Weasley opened the door and to her relief it was her.

“Come in, come in and get something to drink it looks like you jogged here.” Mrs. Weasley said guessing she actually did.

“Yea, I did jog here and thanks.” Brittany said.

“Who are you?” Ginny and Ron asked, but Hermione already knew who she was and hopping Brittany wouldn’t recognize her.

“Ginny, Ron that is not a….” But Mrs. Weasley was cut off by Brittany,” It’s ok, my name is Brittany and that is all you have to know right now and can I speak to you… what is your name?”

“It is Hermione and sure” as they both walked off into another room. This room was dark and extremely silent. Until Hermione turned on the lights. “Thank you for pretending you didn’t know me.”

“Well you kept saying please pretend I don’t know you so that is what I did. I have a question, who is Voldmort?”

“Why do you ask that?”

“Because in Harry’s mind he kept going ‘I hope Voldmort doesn’t find them or me for that matter. I want them to be safe/ and so on and so forth. Is his real name Tom Riddle?”

“I think so and he is someone who wants to kill Harry because when Harry was a baby he tried to kill him, but it backfired and that is how Harry got his scare. Is that what you wanted to know?”

“Yes it is and I have another question. Why is Harry so annoying and always thinking for himself?”

“I’m not answering that question, but I will tell you, you need to get to know him first.” When they walked out of the room people just started to ask a lot of questions like is he ok, what happened, are you really the one who found him, do you like him and Brittany knew that one came from his girlfriend. “Can everyone stop asking me questions? All I came here to do is hand the letter over, but of course I always have to answer questions and what is with the trunks?” Brittany asked looking at a couple of trunks that were laying on the floor.

“Well, Remus suggested that the kids go to his house for a few days and me and my husband come along, but we don’t know how we are getting there yet.”

“I jogged here, but I can always transport you my way.” Brittany said dreading to have passengers along. “Is everyone ready to go?”

“Yea” They all said.

“Well, you all….. Have to hold my arm.” She said as they began to move towards her. “Ok, on the count of three. One. Two. Three and they were all off.

“Lupin, I can’t believe you did not tell me they were coming back with me.”

“Sorry about that, Brit, but I thought it would be better if they stayed here a couple of days and Harry’s head is bleeding again” Lupin said.

“Where is he? Never mind don’t answer that.” and with that she was off to were Harry was. When she got there she noticed that there was a lot of people around her. The they saw what Harry saw. A bright light coming out of her hand. It was nothing they ever saw before. Then all of a sudden she got up and went to her room.

“What just happened?” Harry asked getting up and not remembering how he got there.

that was great
write more and post it lol

I am sorry but I'm very confused. Scare? Oh you mean Scar!!! Scare changes the meaning of the whole sentence so its Scar. I'm still confused.

Much <3 --iluvhpsomuch1_7--

sorry for the confusion

the stories gr8! im just luvin it! plz post more soon

Its ok! Again just try to explain things more. I can tell it's a GREAT story. Just a little confusing in some spots. Otherwise its VERY good!

Much <3 --iluvhp1_7--

P.s. It's going to take me a while to get used to signing my new name lol

What spots are confusing? I want to know so I don't do it again. Thanks for the comments everyone though I thought this part was very bad. I was confusing myself when I was writing it. Come to think of it I'm and confusing in person when people are talking to me. I guess it is just my personality.

lol i'm the same way but when i get confused i say stupid things or i do something dorky

yeah, i do the same thing though i don't do stupid thingd instead i do something completely dorky or idiotic

Like who's doing sumthing. Explain who they are more throughly when you introduce a new character. Explain with more detail what is happening. Um here ill give an example from your story.

“Ginny, Ron that is not a….<< What is not a.... Just let her say a whole sentence. ” But Mrs. Weasley was cut off by Brittany,” It’s ok, my name is Brittany and that is all you have to know right now and can I speak to you… what is your name?”

“It is Hermione and sure” as they both walked off into another room. This room was dark and extremely silent. Until Hermione turned on the lights. “Thank you for pretending you didn’t know me.”<< Why did she pretend she didn't know Brittany. Explain that earlier where it says Hermione already knew her.

“Well you kept saying please pretend I don’t know you so that is what I did. I have a question, who is Voldmort?”

“Why do you ask that?”<< Why do you ask that? You should know who he is Brittany. Everyone does.

“<Explain why she doesn't know who he is.> In Harry’s mind he kept going ‘I hope Voldmort doesn’t find them or me for that matter. I want them to be safe. Is his real name Tom Riddle?”

“I think so<<She knows hes Tom Riddle. he is someone who wants to kill Harry because when Harry was a baby he tried to kill him, but it backfired and that is how Harry got his scar.”<<Watch your run-ons. Make it sound more depressing becuase it is a verry depressing thing.

“I have another question. Why is Harry so annoying! He only thinks of himself<<Not true since you just said he was thinking" I want them to be safe."

“I’m not answering that question, but I will tell you, you need to get to know him first.”<<Like that. When they walked out of the room people just started <<Thesarus--bombarded them with a lot of questions. "Is he ok", "What happened" "Are you really the one who found him" do you like him<<Ginny would be too worried about Harry's safety rather than if Brittany likes him or not. “Can everyone stop asking me questions?," She yelled." All I came here to do is hand the letter over and go home!. What's with the trunks?" Brittany asked indicating a couple of trunks on the floor.

“Well, Remus suggested that the kids go to his house for a few days and me and my husband come along, but we don’t know how we are getting there yet.”<<In the letter, did he apparte there? How do they know that?And who said it?

“I jogged here, but I can always transport you my way.” Brittany said dreading to have passengers along. “Is everyone ready to go?”

“Yea” They all said.

“Well, you all….. Have to hold my arm.” She said as they began to move towards her. “Ok, on the count of three. One. Two. Three and they were all off.<<Explain how she moved them. Did they apparte- you should know how to explain that. A different magical way you could make up what it felt like.

“Lupin, I can’t believe you didn't tell me they were coming back with me.” <<Again say who said it. Was she angry, frustrated, happy?

“Sorry about that, Brit, but I thought it would be better if they stayed here a couple of days and Harry’s head is bleeding again” Lupin said.

“Where is he? Never mind don’t answer that.” and with that she was off to were Harry was. When she got there she noticed that there was a lot of people around her. The they saw what Harry saw. A bright light coming out of her hand. It was nothing they ever saw before. Then all of a sudden she got up and went to her room.

“What just happened?” Harry asked getting up and not remembering how he got there.

I was going to explain all of this in the next chapter or should I say segment and thanks for the advice. I will work on it.

Yes, b ut you still have to give us some kind of idea whats happening. You can leave somethings a mystery. Thats the point i can tell thats where you're going. Some of it you really do need to explain. What you need is a BETA. I'm not one but search around and you'll find one.

ok, I'm doing that chapter over again anyways.

I am changing the story a bit if you like it Iwill continue on this one but if you don't I will finishe the other. Here it goes:

Harry Potter and the….

On a chilly summers evening a boy laid on his bed tired and bored. His name was Harry Potter and he was 16 years old and awaiting for his birthday to come, but his birthday wasn’t for about two weeks. He was also waiting for a something that his owl, Hedwig, would bring him. Then all of a sudden his there was a snowy white owl tapping on the window to get into the room. His owl Hedwig was also carrying three letters.

“About time they sent me something.” Harry said giving Hedwig an owl treat and rubbing her soft head. Harry then looked at the letters and noticed that one was from Ron, the other most likely from Hermione, and the last one from Ginny. He opened Ron’s letter first.

Dear Harry,
We will be picking you up tomorrow at 8:00. Don’t bother sending Hedwig back with your answer we already know what it is. So get ready and see you soon.

Sincerely,
Ron and Hermione

Harry thought if this is from Ron and Hermione who is this letter from, but he decided he would open Ginny’s first. Even though he really didn’t want to read it, but he had to because he was very curios to what it said.

Dear Harry,
I know that we are not together anymore and I know why, but I still have to tell you something before you come tomorrow. I love you. I always will and I will never stop. I know you may not feel the same, but like I said before I needed to tell you this. I also wanted to know if we could be friends seeing as we will be around each other for the rest of the summer.

Love,
Ginny

Harry knew while writing this letter she began to cry because it had tears over it. He still loved her a lot, but if they were together Voldmort could use her to get to him and he could not bear that kind of pain. So Harry went to write back to Ginny when someone barged into his room.

“Harry you have to go now!” Aunt Petunia said as someone downstairs was yelling.

“Why? What is going on downstairs!” Harry said as he heard footsteps coming up the stairs. He knew those were not his Uncle Vernon’s. He knew that people were after him and he had to leave. “Aunt Petunia what about my stuff!” As someone began to pound really hard on the door.

“They won’t hurt us. I’ll bring your stuff to the place your staying when you get there send us your owl in the morning now go or they will get you for sure!!” She said while Harry got his broom and invisibility cloak.

“Thanks,” he said and both Hedwig the three letters and him were off to the Burrow.

When he got there everyone was surprised he was there including Ginny.

“Why are you here?” Mr. Weasley asked, “We were going to pick you up tomorrow.” he said beginning to think that there was something wrong.

“Death Eaters were at the house. My aunt quickly snuck upstairs to worn me and get go as quickly as possible.” He said sort of tired by the journey he took.

“How do you know there were death eaters at the house?” Ron asked before his dad could.

“Screaming, only going after me, ummm….. Voldmort was outside the house. Does that tell you I know who it was!” Harry said beginning to get very frustrated.

“Oh, well that explains things.” Mr. Weasley said. “You don’t look well.”

“I haven’t gotten much sleep lately.” He said beginning to fall asleep on the couch he just sat on.

“Well, off to bed then.” Mrs. Weasley said, but he was already to sleep so Mr. Weasley took him upstairs and put him in the extra bed put into Ron’s room.

While sleeping Harry began to have a very bad dream.
“Harry help. Harry help us please.”
“Ginny, Ron, Hermione what are you doing here. What is wrong with…”
“Harry, Voldmort is right behind you. Look out” Hermione yelled. Voldmort tried to reach for Harry, but he moved before he could.
“Well well well, I knew you would come. Though I thought you knew that my death eaters kidnapped your precious friends.” Voldmort said laughing.
“Let them go it is me you want!!”
“Why should I let them go torturing is so much better. Who should I start with. I know how about Ginny.”
Ginny started to yell in the pain as she fell to the ground.
“Ginny, let her alone.” Harry started yelling.
Then all of a sudden he awoke not really knowing what he was dreaming about, but he knew it was something bad for him not to remember what it was about. Harry couldn’t sleep for the rest of the night so instead he went downstairs.

To his surprise when he got there the sun was coming up and he heard someone walking down the stairs as he started walking into the kitchen to get something to drink. The footsteps followed him in there. When he turned around he saw a girl with beautiful long red hair and freckles on her face.

“Ginny! What are you doing up so early in the morning?” He asked.

“I could ask you the same thing, but I’m up because I was wondering if you got the letter I sent you?” When she said that he pulled out the three letters he got and put the one he got from Ginny on the table.

“I did and I was going to right back before someone barged into my room and said I have to leave.”

“Then right back unless you want to tell me to my face.” She said with a smile on her face. Harry hesitated. He couldn’t tell her how he felt without wanting to kiss her which he has been wanting to do since he broke up with her.

“I’ll send a letter to you. It is much easier and I can do it now.” So Harry went upstairs to Ron’s room. He pulled out a piece of parchment, quill, and his ink and sat at the desk.

He wrote and wrote and wrote. It took him almost an hour to write what he had to write to her. By the time he was done the whole piece of parchment was full of his writing. He then gave it to Hedwig to give to Ginny so he didn’t have to face her when she read it.

*******

Meanwhile Ginny was downstairs eating breakfast when Hermione came down. She got a bowl and a spoon and ate what Ginny was eating.

“Hey, whats up?” Hermione said.

“Nothin much, so how was your night? Good? Great? Upsetting?” Ginny said with a smile on her face. Something no one has really seen in awhile.

“I guess it was good.” Hermione said as Hedwig came in the window with a letter for Ginny. “Gin, why is Harry sending you an owl if he is upstairs?”

“I don’t know. I thought he hand me the letter himself, but I guess he gave it to Hedwig to give to me.” Ginny said as she left to go into the garden to read. The letter read:

Dear Ginny,
I know how you feel and I feel the same way about you everyday, but I am scared for you and everyone else who is always there for me and who I love.

There is something I should have told you when I told Ron and Hermione something. It has something to do with Voldmort. The only reason I am telling you this is because I want to be honest with you. So I am going to tell you like this.

Voldmort has these things that help him come back to life when he dies. For example when I was a baby his spelled backfired and hit him instead. He killed himself, but his sole was still left and he survived. That is how he came back in my forth year. He split his sole into pieces. I know your now wondering how many pieces and the answer is seven.

Though we already got rid of three he still has for out there unless this guy destroyed the forth one. The n we would have three to deal with, but I highly doubt it. These things that I have been talking about are called horucruxes. This is a type if dark magic. It works by killing people and Voldmort killed seven before he was believed to be killed.

The believed items that are his horucruxes are:
1. Nagini
2. Slytherin’s Locket
3. Hufflepuff’s Goblet
5. Something from Gryfindor or Ravenclaw
6. Slytherin’s Ring

The seventh is already inside of him. Before I do anything I have to destroy all of his horucruxes.

I know you want to come, but I don’t think you should. I am already trying to get Hermione and Ron not to come. Though they are to stubborn and they keep saying we are going. Even though I am asking them not to.

I Love you Ginerva Molly Weasley and I will never stop loving you.

Love,
Harry

When she finished the letter Harry was coming downstairs. He thought she would be in her room reading, but he was wrong. He didn’t know what to say and Hermione was wondering what he put in that letter when she came in. Then Harry remembered he had another letter he had to read. So he read it now:

Dear Harry,
I need to speak to you about something that might be of help on your quest to find all of the horucruxes. You have to trust me I am not a death eater. I know you may think I am, but I am not. I will meet you on your birthday and you won’t know when.

Sincerely a friend,
B.A.M

“Great another person who puts there initials.” Harry said, “I wonder who it is this time.”

“I’ve heard those initials before, but where did I here them.” Hermione was thinking and thinking and thinking, “I’ve got it! Dumbledore told me her name. He said it was his granddaughter. Her name is Brittany Ann Marshall.” As she wrote it down on a piece of paper and it made sense.

“What are you talking about Brittany for?” Mr. Weasley asked coming into the kitchen.

“She sent Harry a letter, Dad, do you know who she is?” Ginny asked.

“You can not talk about her or they will find her. She put her initials in that letter right.” They all nodded as Mr. Weasley went on, “Your probably wondering how I know about her aren’t you?” They all nodded again, “Well, Albus asked who would be willing to look after her if he ever died and I had to say no because of you guys and Lupin agreed he would watch her. I met her as well the other day. Very fine person.”

“Who is after her and why?” Harry asked.

“You know who is after her and he has been after her since she was a baby. He wants her fir the power she has. Though she said on countless occasions ’no’ he just keeps coming back and finding her. She is actually coming over today and in a couple of minutes she should be here.” Just as Mr. Weasley said that there was a knock on the door. So, Mr. Weasley went to open the door and there in the doorway stood a girl, Lupin, and Tonks.

“Come in, come in and welcome to my home Brittany.” Mr. and Mrs. Weasley said as Mrs. Weasley was coming in the room followed by Ron.

“Hi,” Brittany said and asked, “Umm…. I’ve been wondering why is your house called the Burrow? Do people around here call there houses different names instead of calling them houses.” Everyone started laughing and Brittany was wondering what was so funny.


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hi everyone i am a huge harry potter fan and my friends have no interest in the books (too lazy to read them) but i thought i would talk to people with this same interest as me. shall we talk about horcruxes?

i have been pondering on the thought of who rab is. i thought at firrst it could have been sirius's brother, but regulus a black is dead so that no longer seems possible.

Um... go to the Harry Potter forum for that. I really like this new one better Brit!!!

yea, go to harry potter forum and thanks d-fly

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“I’m serious you know!” Brittany said and everyone stopped laughing.

“Oh, umm… well… it is because we wanted to call this place the Burrow.” Mrs. Weasley said, “Are you hungry dear you look like you haven’t eaten in awhile. Do you want something.”

“No thanks, I’m not hungry.” Brittany said looking out the window.

“But your so thin. How can you not be hungry?” Mr. Weasley asked this time concerned for her well being.

“She doesn’t eat much. We have tried to get her to eat more, but she won’t. Also, when she is hungry which is around dinner time she will eat. ” Tonks said as Brittany was walking outside into the garden because she thought she saw her bird.

“Oh, is anyone else hungry?” Mrs. Wasley asked, but only Ron said he was. “Did you guys eat already?” And everyone but Ron nodded.

“Harry.. Umm.. Can I talk to you a moment?” Ginny asked indicating that they should talk outside so no one heard.

“Yea.. Sure.” Harry said wondering if they were going to talk about the letter he wrote.

“Oh, Harry and Ginny can you tell Brittany to go get them. If she ask who tell her ’S’ and ‘D’.” Lupin said not sure if they new about it. Just then Brittany barged into the door with a type of bird on her shoulder. As Harry looked at the bird he noticed it was a phoenix.

“Brit…. Brit.. are you going to get them?” Lupin asked.

“Who?”

“S and D.” Lupin said hoping the kids that were around him wouldn’t find out.

“Oh, yea I guess. I came in so quickly because of this.” She handed him the letter and it read

Dear Brittany,
If you join me I won’t have to kill anyone and your loved ones will be safe. Lets just put it this way I think his name is John. If you don’t want him hurt to badly meet me in ten minutes at Hethro Hellow I will kill him. Don’t tell anyone the name of the in which you only understand unless Potter is there to help.

Voldmort

“Brittany, what does that say? Brit you have to tell us or we can’t help.” Mr. Weasley said as everyone was looking at Brittany wondering what is going on. “Also, how did he intercept Fox. That is what I don’t understand.”

“I have to go alone.” Brittany said scared for her used to be brother. “I will get them while I’m getting John.” and she was off in a swarm of white and blue lights like she was an angel going to heaven.

When she got there she saw John literally in the air. Someone was holding him there by a spell she thought. So, she took hold of him with her own type of magic. She lifted up her hand and could feel the weight she was holding. The someone grabbed her from behind. She knew who it was and that he would pretend to try and capture her.

“Master, I have her.”

“Bring Brittany to me. I want to see if it is really her or some decoy.” Voldmort said. So, the guy trudged her over there. “This is not her. Find her. Now!” Now everyone was on the lookout. The they saw her. She had the prisoner and the guy that was holding him was in the ground.

“John stay here.” Brittany just said and he nodded. At that exact moment she had spells flying at her left and right. “You can’t catch me.”

“Get her before she gets us.”

“Oh, come on Tom. Why can’t you get me yourself if you are such a big shot.” Brittany said as she laughed. So he tried he missed every time. “You suck and I thought you were all powerful. Right now I bet all your death eaters were judging your power. Am I right?” She didn’t get anything. “Scared he might hurt you if you answer that.”

Just then someone came up behind her a grabbed her. “Scared now aren’t you?” A woman said. “By the way if you want to know my name it is Belatrix Lestrange, but I bet you already knew that.” She said with so much anger that it hurt Brittany.

“OOO, I’m so scared. Should I get down on my knees and beg that you don’t kill me.” Brittany said so sarcastically that Belatrix pused on the ground and said ‘Crucio’, but nothing happened. Everyone was shocked because instead of Brittany writhing on pain and crying on the floor she was. Brittany couldn’t stand it so she let Belatrix go from the agony she was in. “Well, I am leaving now unless you want to try another spell. How about you? Try to kill me with the killing curse.” So the guy she pointed at did and it once again it didn’t work, but this time no one died. When it bounced off of her she made it go towards the trees. “Well, I must be going. Don’t ever hurt anyone I care about again or when you trying to use that spell on me I will let it go right back to the sender.” and with that she grabbed John and left.
******
Meanwhile back at the Weasley house everyone was panicking and it took them a few minutes to get Harry to read what it said.

“Harry, what does this say?” Harry read the letter and had no clue what language it was until he read it out loud. “It is parsaltongue. It says Godrics Hollow. She is going to Godrics Hollow. She can speak parsaltongue?” Harry asked wondering how she can speak it.

“I don’t know I guess.” Just as Lupin said that again a swarm of blue and white lights fill the room. “Hey, Brittany are you ok?”

“Yea, didn’t I say I would?” Brittany said with a smile.

“No and where is John?” Tonks asked looking for him.

“Right here .” She said, very worried whether he is alright or not. “Hey, come with me I need to explain something to you.” Brittany said to John and walked out of the room. “Oh, and I have to go and get them then. They were there and they sort of told me they be here and I don’t have to go and get them.

The rest of the night was pretty quiet and Harry just remembered that Ginny wanted to talk to him about something so he went to find her. When he found her he was talking to the guy Brittany saved from death. I wonder what relationship Brittany has with him, Harry thought. Harry walked over to them. They were talking about Brittany.

“So, she really did all that to help you?

“Yea, she was a great big sister until my mom told us what happened when she was a baby and my biological sister died of a kidney problem. Which runs in the family.”

“Ohh, that really sounds bad. So you are not a wizard then?

“No, I’m not.” John said with a laugh and noticed someone listening on there conversation and told Ginny to look behind her. “So, your Harry. Well, nice to meet you and I should be going. My plane leaves in an hour or so and I have to pack. Bye and nice to meet you again.” John said giving Ginny a kiss on the cheek and left to the kitchen to find a meeting going on. “Brit can you get me to the hotel?”

“Yea, umm.. sure. Can someone go with us? I don‘t want to use magic again” Brittany said.

“I will!” Ginny said with a smile on her face.

“You can’t use magic out of school yet and I don’t think you can transport us to the hotel yet.”

“I will go with him.” Someone from the corner said that Harry couldn’t make out.

“Thanks Draco.” Brittany said. As they were walking out the door Ginny started to ask something.

“John, can we write to each other. I know it sounds silly, but I can really talk to you about stuff I can’t with other peopler
“Sure, I’ll write though I don‘t think you get mail how I usually do. Brit, can you get me an owl or something so I can write to her and you.” John asked and Brittany nodded, “Well, bye and nice to meet all of you.” and with that John, Malfoy, and Brittany were off.

Why was Draco here? Harry kept thinking and then he noticed that Snape was there to. What are they doing here. Harry just kept thinking until someone talked to him. He was also thinking what can Ginny talk to him about that she can’t talk to me.

“Earth to Harry.” Someone said and he noticed that it was Ron. Harry then noticed that it has been a couple hours since he saw Snape and Malfoy here. Then he saw them again. This time only Malfoy and he was talking to Brittany about something. It looked private and personal.

“What is Snape and Malfoy doing here?” Harry finally asked not realizing Snape was right behind him.

“Potter we are here because we our in the Order and do not call me Snape.” Snape said with a weird look on his face.

“You killed Dumbledore! How can anyone trust you?” Harry said getting really loud.

“There are some things you don’t understand about that night.” Snape said also getting louder and louder each time he talked. By this time both Draco and Brittany were looking at them.

“BUT YOU KILLED HIM. EVEN IF I DON’T UNDERSTAND THAT WHOLE NIGHT I DO UNDERSTAND SOMETHING AND THAT IS YOU KILLED HIM.” Harry said really loud as everyone began to walk into the room.

“I KNOW I DID POTTER AND FOR A REASON THAT I DON’T HAVE TO EXPLAIN TO YOU.” Snape said as Brittany walked over then she saw that both Snape and Harry had there wands out and ready to hit each other with a spell. When they were about to hit each other she jumped on the middle and there spells backfired onto them.

“First of all if you want to duel each other DO NOT do it in front of me. Second of all Harry…… you are not the only one who cared about Albus Dumbledore. You are not the only one.” Brittany said beginning to cry. Now everyone was looking at her. No one, but the adults knew what Dumbledore meant to her.

“Brittany, why do you care about him so much? If you did care about him then you wouldn’t have forgiven Snape of killing him.” Harry said with so much anger.

“You want to know…. Why I care…. About Dumbledore so much.” She was now really crying, “He was… my grand… father.” Brittany said. Draco went over to confort her and to his amaze she let him. She looked up for a moment and said, “I will never forgive him… for what he did.” And with that she went outside still crying.

“Why did you have to do that Harry? Why? We really want to know?” Ginny said mad at what Harry had done.

“What did I do? I didn’t know? Besides she needed a good cry about it.” Harry said before he could stop himself.

“That was low.” Ginny, Hermione, and Ron said walking outside to check on Brittany, but they noticed she was sort of alright and went back inside because Draco was stopping her from crying and leaving.

“Is she ok? Lupin and Tonks asked almost at the same time as everyone else.

“Yea, she will be fine. I think.” Ginny said, “I’m going to bed. Night.” and she went to bed followed by Harry, Hermione, and Ron.

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since you're starting over make a new thread. It'll be neater.

i like it. its good.

i also think that u should make a new thread cause it will be much neater

yea me to

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