this is more of a song then a poem.. but plz rate!

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twiggyramirexmm
Transparency Plague

Crying figure in the streets
Holding out her hand
To someone who'll care
Someone who'll be there
To help her cope
But no one can hear her
Her cries for help
She's a nobody to them
No one even see's her

If god made me
why do they hate me?
Am I infected by the disease?
Down, I am, on begging knees
Praying for him to lift
The plague of transparency

How can they leave her lying in the streets?
Seeing through her as it seems
She holds the blade above her wrists
But no seems to notice
Would she be missed
Or just another lost soul
Dead among the living
Writing, in blood, on the wall
"Find a cure, for transparecy"

If god made me
why do they hate me?
Am I infected by the disease?
Down, I am, on begging knees
Praying for him to lift
The plague of transparency

Plague of transparency
Down on begging knees
Sit back, she's dying
Can you even see her
She crying out for you
Help her out of this madness
Be her cure for this, this
PLAGUE!!!!

If god made me
why do they hate me?

twiggyramirexmm
plz rate and tell me what u think!

twiggyramirexmm
anyone gonna rate it?

Coldfire
Hmmm... I'd give this one prolly a... 7.4/10 happy

twiggyramirexmm
cool thx for rating

Opaleye92
it was sooo good , yet soo sad, yet sooo true, loves it! smile honestly, it gave me chills big grin

2quiet
That is simply brilliant. I loved the idea of transperancy and it being a disease, and the rhythm worked really well for me. Love it.

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