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I like it. It may have a few spelling error, but I like it.

Cool.

it's good

yay ^_^

its kool

do you plan on posting more soon

oh wow i really liked it! i am really wanting to see where this goes! and i think its really great how you decided to make it in the future-original

immm bbbaaaccckkkkk and i guess enough people like it ^_^ so give me a few minutes to an hour to get final version of first chapter up... Cause i gotta eat if ur curious which your probably not....anyways brb!

That was a lot better than the first one you wrote. Post more soon even if it is short.