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That was so good, but you spelled Hagrid wrong. It only has one g.

thanx, ye i just realized that it had 1 g just a couple of minutes after i posted it

funny thing

ye, it sure is lol

that was so good, I like how you made a story about Sirius's life.

thanx, i guess ur probably the only who does. and thanx for commenting

ur welcome

as you can all see ive decided to change the plot and im not making it hp related. im changing the plot entierly to make it that Sirius never ended up inside Azkaban. plz tell me what you think.

I like your story, it's really interesting!
Keep up the good work!

I like the change, when you write your own thing it comes so much more alive, the previous parts were a little uninspired when you wrote about what was documented in the books anyway. I like the new bit, AU Sirius' life. And nice if it still ends the same way - shows that our choices don't affect our destiny!

It is really good and interesting, so keep it up

thanx everyone. should i make Sirius die in the end or keep him alive? id like to know what everyone thinks

that was really good and i think if you changed the story that much change Sirius's ending and not make him die

love the story its great keep it going

ye, im going to make Sirius live, however, Sirius is my favourite charcter in all the hp series. he's so gr8. *sighs*

for da story should i go forward a couple of yrs and make Harry a bit older, lets say around 4 or more or anything like dat? or should i just continue on from when he's just just a baby.

yea, you should go a little further in the life and while you do thst show what happens over the years or something like that

any suggestions?

Nope..just kidding. How about when Harry first shows sign of magic, like he makes something blow up or something, and how Sirius reacts to it? I don't know, it's just a suggestion, you don't have to do it.

hmmmmm. that sound good. like if Harry were to fall or something?

Should i also have Sirius go out with a woman and have a son of his own when Harry turns 11 and starts his 1st yr at Hogwarts cause Sirius feels rather lonely now that Harry has gone?
and what about when Harry takes his first steps or does that sound rather stupid.

no, it dont and it is your story to do the thing with the girl and have another kid and if you do that show how harry feels and how sirius feel throughout everything

Yeah, yall have good ideas. I'm not creative I wouldn't even be able to think of any ideas like that.

yea you could if you try and if you hsve sn imagination

I don't have any imagination. Anyway, I'd rather read a story instead of writing one.

i kind of would as well but its good tom write it if other ppl enjoy and read it

That was so good. Post more soon.

That was really good!clapping

do you still have writers block, post soon

That was great, post more soon

Both Me and Jess love Your Story. It's Very Intreasting. I like your angle.

Laura & JESS

its good...but how old is harry? because if hes only four...hes a bit young to be using words like "beforehand"

ye he is 4 and next chapter im going to make him become 11

I think you should make him die i mean i love sirius just as much as the next grl but i thnk u shuld stay true to the series that way the rest of his life seems more believeable.

dont listen to that because my friend was using my name and put her own opinion and I think you should stay original how I told you earlier post soon

ye, im not going to kill off Sirius cause he is my favorite character in the Harry Potter series and i also want him to live

That is what I am saying, but my friend is stupid(lol jk) and thinks you should when you have gone so far from the story already you should just stay with not following

iv decided to do a remake of this story and also do it a bit differently and its going to be called Sirius Doesn't Get Into Azkaban. so u can just look for it