The Sivience of the Ancient Monarchs

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Barker
Alright, lets try this again. roll eyes (sarcastic) Before I say anything, I want to say to anyone looking in that this is a Good, Well written story. no expression It's a regular, Book Seven Fanfic. Just because the title doesn't say "Harry Potter and" doesn't mean this is a weird, Alternate Universe story. This is just my way of making this Thread stand out.

Now, I was feeling like I didn't want to do this anymore, but Eh, I've changed in the past hour. I wanted to do a Lily/James Thing, but Eh, I've changed in the past hour. I've tried to make it sound as Much like J.K. Rowling as possible. Hopefully, it'll be as Accepted as DarkC's and Sauce's storys are. So, sit back and Enjoy.



Read these:


I don't have the first batch ready yet, I wanted to save the time and date again. (no expression). It was exactly one year ago that I posted The Sorcerers Return, and I needed to commemorate. Don't worry though, It won't be that long until that first post.



Don't post in this thread until I post again, Please.

Barker
Have a quick bump to explain why there's nothing here yet. barker

To put it simply, There have been rewrites and Plot holes. smile

For example, there was a problem in Chapter 16, that required Chapters 2, 8, and 9. Don't get me wrong; I don't have those written yet; they just required a lot of thinking. Also, I'm having second thoughts about one Character. This character is central to Chapter 1, so I can't exactly skip and go to Chapter 2. Hopefully, I can get something up in the next week; School starts again the 14th. I'm a huge procrastinator (As anyone in the Sig forums would tell you), so this is normal for me. no expression


Again,
Please, Don't post in this thread until I post again.

Barker
Tee-Hee. (no expression)

I've been working on the "Plot", and I think I've got a good Idea of what's going down. (no expression) I also have about 6,000 words (Or Characters srug) just about ready, so this should be going in a few days. However, I'm not Jesus with Beginnings, so It won't be as good as the stuff near the middle.

Originally posted by Barker
Please, Don't post in this thread until I post again.

Barker
I feel like such an ass. laughing out loud

I should have had something by last December, then June, and it's now September. That's procrastination. And, unluckily, It's going to last a while longer.

I have several projects going on right now. When last I posted, I said I would have something within the week. That was the week school started, and I have to say that I wasn't ready for the workload. Now that I'm in the fourth week, I feel I have momentum and whatever. However, as said previously, I have a few things going on. Firstly, I've been trying to improve my Profile all summer. Secondly, I need to update the KMC Paper, the KMC Today. Thirdly, I'm rewriting Graphical Tutorials for Signatures on Photoshop. Have a list:

Profile
KMC Today
Tutorial 1
Tutorial 2
Tutorial 3
Sivience

Hopefully, I can get some of this done this week. The tutorials shouldn't take too long, but the Paper can take hours. My profile involves pictures and stuff, and is time consuming too. Don't get me wrong, I've been thinking about and revising SotAM a bit, but It's not quite ready for your eyes.

Sorry if you thought I was finally going to post. I promise, my next post will contain actual story.

Please, Don't post in this thread until I post again.

Mišt
Originally posted by Barker
Please, Don't post in this thread until I post again.

Ok ermmhappy

This should, for the most part, be updated at least Once a Week during the Summer, and could shoot towards 2 or 3 updates every Seven days,
haermm

Mišt
Bump13

Barker
Mist, you fool. 31

I had most of the first chapter done by the start of the month, but stuff came up and..

Hey, what happened to not posting? ermmad

31

Thorinn

Mišt
Originally posted by Barker
Mist, you fool. 31

I had most of the first chapter done by the start of the month, but stuff came up and..

Hey, what happened to not posting? ermmad

31

o i 4got haermm



Originally posted by Thorinn
Oh yeh. 31

Thrice31

Thorinn
I had no idea this was Harry Potter related. ermm

Mišt
Half a year and no posts, it should be closedermm

Barker
Now I'm going to have to ask Rex to edit a link to the first bit into the first post.

Losers.

Mišt
What first bit, I dunt see any.haermm

Barker
Mist, you're ruining everything. haermm

31

Mišt
cn u sned me link 2 1st bit 2 k?31

Mišt
SO I WENT TO THE SHOP FOR THE SPECIAL MIDNIGHT OPENING OF THE NEW HARRY POTTER BOOK, IT WAS A COLD DARK NIGHT AND IT LOOKED LIKE IT WAS ABOUT TO RAIN SO I BROUGHT AN UMBRELLA JUST IN CASE SO I WOULDNT GET MY NEW BOOK WET, ANYWAY LIKE I WAS WAITING FOR THE SHOP TO OPEN SO I COULD BUY THE NEW HARRY POTTER BOOK CALLED HARRY POTTER AND THE SIVIENCE OF THE ANCIENT MONARCHS BUT THEY TOLD ME THE BOOK WASNT WRITTEN YET AND I SAID **** AND WENT HOME. haermm

Thorinn
Originally posted by Barker
Mist, you're ruining everything. haermm

31

Barker

Barker

Thorinn
shock

I smell New York Best Seller. 13

Barker
13

Thorinn
So is another year going to go by without an update?

Barker
lol no expression

Nah. To tell the truth, I had most of the first chapter pretty much done by late November. I just couldn't be assed putting it the way I wanted it in the end. So.. I just have to touch up this next part. It could be up as early as .... I post it. no expression

31

Thorinn
Mistybuckle is going to be angry. 31

Barker
He can't cumplain. 31

Mišt
*cumplains* Ooh diss! 13

Mišt
So why does Narcissa have a tail? 31

Thorinn
I see that now...haermm

Barker

H. S. 6
Excellent. smile

Mišt
Bellatrix's BJ?13

Barker

Mišt
I think the next one should be called 'Hagrid's Herpes'13








Or not.31













Or yes. 13

Syren
eek!

Annuva 1??

droolio

fallingoutgrl
Great! I'm excited for more!

Barker

Mišt
Originally posted by Barker
I actually had it down as Crabbe's Crabs, but that works too. 13




Or not.31




Or yes. 13


What about Ginny's Giney? 13









Or not. 31













Or not. 13

Barker
Oh, that was just inappropriate. 31

I would have had the next post up tonight, but I was busy etc. I don't think there's need for details. I'll see if I can do it up by Friday. 13

Thorinn
Hurry. 13

Barker

Thorinn
If you kill Harry, I'll send you hate mail. 31

Barker
Better than that Dwarf/Goat stuff you forward from Mist. 13

Mišt
Harry should grow a beard to reflect the emotional trauma he is going through 13

Thorinn

Mišt
Originally posted by Thorinn
Thats just not the Harry Potter way, Mist. nahuh

Silly Musty. petpet

Oh silly me, I meant he should get a tattoo and a few piercings 31

DarkC

Thorinn

Barker
I really don't know what to say to these posts, so I'll just leave. herbeyes

Thorinn
I do, and it's this.....
Originally posted by Barker
Mist, you're ruining everything. haermm

31

Mišt
Originally posted by DarkC
See, this is why we don't let you write. herb

Im going to write an Emo Harry adventure where he gets too emotional about finding the horcruxes and cuts himself and writes sad poems herb

Originally posted by Thorinn
Yeah, and possibly impregnate Hermione. 13

Tahts jus sik herbeyes

Originally posted by Barker
I really don't know what to say to these posts, so I'll just leave. herbeyes

wut, no updayt? herbjedi

Barker
~herb31~ no expression 31

Well, I've had a rough few days. My dad's been in the hospital, and I seriously thought he was in trouble.

That's why no update.

Syren
Sorry to hear that hun, is he ok? hug

Barker
Yeah, he is now. I think they basically messed up on the first surgery and had to go back in. So in between, I was kind of worried. But yeah, he's fine now. smile


...

And that means update. ermm

Syren
I'm glad to hear that... about your dad, I mean.

Plus, update = excellent droolio

Barker
droolio

About... both? leftright

Well, I've got a 3-day weekend, because of MLK Day, so there could possibly be two updates. I think I have most of the rest of the first chapter done. I just need to type up the next part. (What Voldie and Cissy do in the Pensieve).

Barker
droolio

About... both? leftright

Well, I've got a 3-day weekend, because of MLK Day, so there could possibly be two updates. I think I have most of the rest of the first chapter done. I just need to type up the next part. (What Voldie and Cissy do in the Pensieve).

Syren
Two posts do not count as two updates. They don't even count as one update mhm

Barker
weep

Well, I'm sitting here alone in the house, a Mountain Dew in one hand and a spoon in the other - soup -, with Firefox (KMC, ESPN), iTunes, and Microsoft word open. The night is young, I am young, and life is good.

Oh, and I have SotAM open in Microsoft word. no expression 31

Thorinn
Are you sure that is a "spoon" in your other hand? tongue_ss

Mišt
Originally posted by Barker
(What Voldie and Cissy do in the Pensieve).

leftright

Barker
Trust the Dwarf and the Devil to say something suggestive. leftright

Mišt
Trust the Barker to not update leftright

Syren
Barker mad

Barker
Quote exactly where I said I would update yesterday/today before noon. leftright

Thorinn
It's 3:58. tongue_ss

Barker
Originally posted by Thorinn
It's 3:35. tongue_ss
Oh. steeks

Thorinn
It's well after noon. ermm

Syren
cry

I have lost my faith.

Barker
Dunt wet urselves. hmh

I've got Word open, another Mountain Dew in hand, Playoffs on TV, and Killswitch blaring.

The day is getting somewhat old, I am young, and life is good. 31

Mišt
And still no update 31

Thorinn
Damn Muggle. 13

Barker
I don't see you two (three? 31) updating daily on your Harry Potter Book Seven Fanfics. mhm 13

Mišt
haermm



ermmhappy

Syren
Originally posted by Barker
I don't see you two (three? 31) updating daily on your Harry Potter Book Seven Fanfics. mhm 13

That's because we didn't start something we couldn't finish and make promises we couldn't keep ermm

H. S. 6
Now you know how it feels, Bark. devil

Syren
As for you! whyioutgha

Barker
Originally posted by Syren
That's because we didn't start something we couldn't finish and make promises we couldn't keep ermm
Theres a difference between, "vodlrimor nd nicrsssa wnt 4 abeeeer looloo.", and "Voldemort and Narcissa went to the Hog's Head for a Butterbeer."

What that had to do with anything, I do not know. ermm
Originally posted by H. S. 6
Now you know how it feels, Bark. devil
As for you! shakefist

Running Mascara

Syren
Originally posted by Barker
Theres a difference between, "vodlrimor nd nicrsssa wnt 4 abeeeer looloo.", and "Voldemort and Narcissa went to the Hog's Head for a Butterbeer."

What that had to do with anything, I do not know. ermm

As for you! shakefist

laughing

You're forgiven. Know why? i thnk ur kewl n i lold eyes

Barker
herbtouched

I'm... kind of.. finding the next... part hard to put... into words; I hope you... all understand. I'm doing my best.

Had to find the correct pattern. 31

Maybe I can brainstorm a little at school tomorrow. But do it, y'know, sneakily. So it's not like, "HAY EVERY1!!! LOOKIT IM RITING HAIRI POT [email protected][email protected]@@2"

no expression 31

Running Mascara
Originally posted by Barker
herbtouched

I'm... kind of.. finding the next... part hard to put... into words; I hope you... all understand. I'm doing my best.

Had to find the correct pattern. 31

Maybe I can brainstorm a little at school tomorrow. But do it, y'know, sneakily. So it's not like, "HAY EVERY1!!! LOOKIT IM RITING HAIRI POT [email protected][email protected]@@2"

no expression 31

nahuh you're ashamed to be an HP fan...me tooweep

Barker
Originally posted by Barker
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8750/ohyouhagridoq7.jpg
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Mišt
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1923/hagridcopyav2.jpg

Syren
I just subscribed to this thread ermm

Thorinn

H. S. 6
Originally posted by Barker
So it's not like, "HAY EVERY1!!! LOOKIT IM RITING HAIRI POT [email protected][email protected]@@2"

no expression 31

There would be a slight possibility of you getting beat up in the near future.

stick out tongue

Barker

Mišt
Originally posted by Barker
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/691/dirtymv5.jpg


http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6756/wriststz3.jpg

Oh and:





















http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/5029/forestcopyzb5.jpg


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Thorinn
LOL'z

Barker

Syren
Originally posted by Barker

Is that good? ermmnone


Clearly not... anti-climax every time disgust

Mišt
No update? http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/8517/mistermmkw5.gif

Barker

Syren
Originally posted by Barker
Silver_tears likes to make that joke sometimes too. ermm


It wasn't a joke, darling eyes

Remind me why you're in my sig miffed

Thorinn
Hola, no hai uno update-O? 13

Barker
Originally posted by Syren
It wasn't a joke, darling eyes

Remind me why you're in my sig miffed
miffed

'Kay. eyes
Originally posted by Thorinn
Hola, no hai uno update-O? 13
Hola, el Espanol de tu es el sucko.

31

? confused

31

Thorinn
And I'm Mexican too. laughing out loud

Barker
Owned, unless Bardock42 says otherwise. laughing out loud

Thorinn
I can speak it, but not type it. laughing out loud

Barker
I've taken Spanish the past three years. I can speak some, but not type some. laughing out loud

Probably because my teacher the first two years was a total douchebag who seemed to think it better to teach us to make more money and have us take notes on Disney movies with Spanish subtitles than actually teach us. laughing out loud

Why am I telling you all this? laughing out loud

laughing out loud

Thorinn
OMG. laughing out loud


I had to take Spanish in high school too. laughing out loud

I don't know? laughing out loud

Barker
INO. laughing out loud

I didn't have to. laughing out loud

Me neither. laughing out loud

H. S. 6
laughing out loud

We once watched Scooby Doo. In Spanish. In Spanish class. laughing out loud

You'd think it'd be funny. laughing out loud

It's not. laughing out loud

Mišt
laughing out loud

I broke my neck from bungee jumping laughing out loud

Im a quadraplegic now laughing out loud

Sucks to be me laughing out loud













laughing out loud

Barker
Originally posted by H. S. 6
laughing out loud

We once watched Scooby Doo. In Spanish. In Spanish class. laughing out loud

You'd think it'd be funny. laughing out loud

It's not. laughing out loud
laughing out loud

We watch shit like the Rescuers. laughing out loud

In Spanish. laughing out loud

You'd think it'd be crappy. laughing out loud

It is. laughing out loud

Barker

Mišt
laughing out loud

I did too. laughing out loud

What a n00b. laughing out loud

laughing out loud

laughing out loud












Update? laughing out loud

Running Mascara
maybeh next year ermmhappy

Barker
Well, you just don't pass up an opportunity to see Pursuit of Happyness at 10 Pm. smile

Thorinn
http://images.killermovies.com/forums/custom_avatars/avatar68913_135.gif Update?

Barker
wel hai i hab sums tiped up butt not alot so shud i psot it r no lool

Thorinn
i tink mabeh u shld wayt til u has all of da strory srsly looool

Barker
kk dat cud teak a wile OMGLOLWTFROFLLAMOSECSKBLAHTHORINNISNOOBTAFTCALIFOR
NIAKMCPEDOPHILELIKESDOGSOMGWTFLOL

Thorinn
Oh Yeh.

Barker
I can tell you the names of all the chapters I have named so far to tie you over. no expression

Thorinn
Post them. shock

Barker

Mišt
Chapter 14 sounds interesting haermm

Barker
You flatter me. haermm

Syren
tantrum

laughing out loud

Barker
Oh wow. I had the biggest epiphany in church today. droolio

I took out my binder and wrote like 4 pages of stuff. droolio

Nevermind that it was all stuff from in the middle. droolio

H. S. 6
Originally posted by Barker
Oh wow. I had the biggest epiphany in church today. droolio

I took out my binder and wrote like 4 pages of stuff. droolio

Nevermind that it was all stuff from in the middle. droolio

I heart when that happens. haermm

Barker
Originally posted by H. S. 6
I heart when that happens. haermm
haermm Everyone was all like, "HAI WUT RU DOIN LOOOOL", so I had to:
Originally posted by Barker
Do it, y'know, sneakily. So it's not like, "HAY EVERY1!!! LOOKIT IM RITING HAIRI POT [email protected][email protected]@@2"

no expression 31

Thorinn
Writing in church, when you're supposed to pay attention. nahuh

Barker
Originally posted by Thorinn
Writing in church, when you're supposed to pay attention. nahuh
I know it all ale. srug

Thorinn
Well, in that case. Go on. 13

Barker
13

Alright, so I'm sitting here in front of the computer, not at school. I'm sick. But, I just had another epiphany. 31

So I'm sitting here, listening to Yellowcard, trying to type up the next part, and I go rambling on in... oh lets say chapter 7.

Not that this means anything. haermm

Thorinn
Originally posted by Mist
Barker you're ruining everything haermm

howdugetsougly
Can we move this along?

I don't know, maybe finish chapter 1?

That is the thing when planning before typing. You can only do it successfully when you have loads of time on your hands like Jo. You should think about the overall plot and a few details, but you should type off of your head. Not that it is all just meaningless. You should type off of your head in the direction you want to go. Because if you think everything out and you have an epiphany, there is almost no way to work it in if you are so far into the book.

Understand?

















jk i love this story. actually i love the comments Barker and Mist make at each other, i have just spent all this time reading the posts and it cracks me up!






Seriously... a post?

Syren
UP****INGDATE ALREADY mad

howdugetsougly
yeah

Syren
embarrasment

silver_tears
I stumbled upon this by accident, and I'm impressed.

Syren
You're late, fashionably though... so I'll forgive.

Isn't it good?? eek!

silver_tears
Your sig brought me here. 13


And yea, it is, fabulous even. 313

Barker
Originally posted by howdugetsougly
Can we move this along?

I don't know, maybe finish chapter 1?

That is the thing when planning before typing. You can only do it successfully when you have loads of time on your hands like Jo. You should think about the overall plot and a few details, but you should type off of your head. Not that it is all just meaningless. You should type off of your head in the direction you want to go. Because if you think everything out and you have an epiphany, there is almost no way to work it in if you are so far into the book.

Understand?

jk i love this story. actually i love the comments Barker and Mist make at each other, i have just spent all this time reading the posts and it cracks me up!

Seriously... a post?
Mist is a doll. srug


And, believe it or not, I have 6 pages of summaries typed up, from Chapter 1 to Chapter 18, with a few more Chapters near the end planned out, ready for insertion into the final story once I get it. So, basically, I have until Halloween, 18 chapters, planned and typed out, with part of Christmas done. I have the end of the book planned, but not typed, along with whatever happens between Halloween and Christmas, and Christmas and the end. srug

Edit: See my next post.
Originally posted by Syren
UP****INGDATE ALREADY mad
I'm working on it. weep
Originally posted by silver_tears
Your sig brought me here. 13


And yea, it is, fabulous even. 313
Thank goodness for people with the surname of Barker.

13

Syren
w00t

Barker
Oh Syren. 13

Um.. Okay, so this is how I do my SotAMs. no expression

First I think about whatever's going to happen, and put it on lined paper; Fortunately, I'm too lazy to put up a picture of this. Then I type it up in word, and nice and ****.

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/3592/archhz9.th.jpg

Nice eh? Then I actually print that. (Lame, eh?) Then I write on that for ideas and ways to improve what I first did:

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/7000/ohlamemistuy6.th.jpg

... no expression

Hope I blurred everything enough. I even showed you guys an example of my lame-ass writing.

Mišt
Harry has a sex change?oh

Oh you vin

Thorinn
You write like a kineegardner. vin

Barker
I just took like a 3 hour nap too. vin

Coincidence?

Thorinn
No. vin

Mišt
Originally posted by Barker
I just took like a 3 hour nap too. vin

Coincidence?

So did I.vin

Coincidence?

Barker

Mišt
Update?vin

Barker
In time. vin

Syren
I'm gonna remove you from my sig, mister miffed

Thorinn
Do it, it might motivate him....maybe? ermm

Barker
13roll

.. Burnt 13. no expression

Anyway, I'm hard at work on this, at least until 7 at which point I will close SotAM unceremoniously and depart for my evening meetings. I will not, at any point, bother myself to further think anything of this SotAM rubbish until 3:29 PM MST Wednesday afternoon. 31

But here's a snippet of the next chapter. droolio


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Thorinn
There should have been a spoiler...vin

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