X-4 or X-MEN:ZERO TOLERANCE

Yeah I know I'm new and only 5 minuites on and I'm already starting, well I have some ideas for what X4 should be like and I'd just like to see what you all think of it so far,

Narration by Ororo Munroe - The Dream: hope, faith, optimism, anticipation… It is that thing burning in each of us, deep down in every soul; that thing we hold dear to our hearts giving us a reason to live on. It has sanctioned us to endure and thrive with every breath in our body. But if this dream is not held and sought after… we will not evolve. Thus we must seek, believe, and achieve… the dream.
The screen takes us in the system of a computer going in and out of files as the theme song played entering files containing those needed to be credited.
X4-X-Men: Zero Tolerance
Senator Kelly has mysteriously returned along with the mutant registration acts; acts that requires every mutant to register their names, codenames, address and abilities. Professor is watching the Senator give a speech to a large crowd of advocators on the failed cure “… the cure doesn’t work, so what are we gonna do? I’ll tell you what. They’re called Sentinels…”; the TV can be heard in the background as it now focuses on Moira as she is scanning the Professor’s body with some type of machine. She starts “try to move your’ arms” he attempts but fails. She sighs, fed up “why’ is it not working?” she asks herself and rescans his arm. “Professor, try it again” he looks down and his fingers begin to move Moira sighs in relief. Then on the TV the side of Senator Kelly’s stage explodes and causes pandemonium. “Moira,” he starts as she’s fixed on the screen “I think it is time I return home, but first I must ask you of another favor.”

At the mansion Logan and Leech are walking through the halls. He walks down a corridor explaining his schedule to him. “You have art first, with Mr. Nick-lo-… Mr. N” Leech laughs. “What’re you laughin at?”. They come up to his class room and Leech asks if he can sit the first day out. Logan replies that that’s not an option. Logan begins to grunt as if something is wrong inside Leech closes his eyes and focuses and then Logan stops. “Sorry” Leech says. “It’s okay kid” Logan says and brings him in and nods at Colossus; who’s painting on a canvas. The class stops and Logan gives Colossus some papers; “there you go kid” as he exits he pats him on the shoulder. He closes the door turns around and Ororo is coming from her classroom with a box of stuff. “You all right?” “Dandy” he replies. “Just concerned Logan” “look, thanks, never been in one place like this for this long” Ororo smiles and stares. “What?” he asks “nothing” still smiling. They start down the hall. “I didn’t know you were so good with kids” she starts again “It’s a gift” Logan says and she laughs; the screen cuts and she starts up the stairs, and she asks Logan if he got the notice n his office. He looks confused “Logan, the interview with Ms. Frost” she exclaims. “What do we need new teachers for half the students are leaving,” he lights his cigar and walks away, “I’m not doing that interview” he says as he walks away. “Logan!” She calls, but he keeps walking.

Sounds good. Query, will Rogue be in it?

http://www.killermovies.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&postid=6967964#post696796

please use this thread

In reponse to the first post yeah, Rogue'll be in it-she has a sub plot.

In response to the 2nd post what'll happen to this thread if I switch now? (waiting fo a reponse)

Elsewhere Moira pulls up to a building, and asks the Professor if it’s here. Inside they knock on the basement door. “What!” a blonde answers half opening the door. “Who is it?” a man yells from inside. “Hold on!” she yells back annoyed “What’s yo-uh names?” she asks. “Tell him Charles Xavier and Moira Mactaggert…” he says. “The guy on wheels says it’s Charlie Xabier and Moiwa McBagger” she yells back and sneezes. There’s stumbling and she yells “what’re you getting ub for, si-down!” The door closes and opens seconds later and a large bald and heavily scarred faced man appears from behind the door, confused, but Charles telepathically tells him it’s him. He stares then greets Charles formally. The apartment is not the largest or the most clean. Inside are others all sniffling and staring as they enter. As Charles and Masque talk Moira looks around every other second dusting off her coat. In mid-conversation the blonde walks in and clears her throat wipes her nose and glares at Moira, then Masque. “Oh yes this is my uh, room-mate slash helper if I may, Sally Blevins these are old friends of mine Charles Xavier and Moira Mactaggert.” “Nice to meet you” Moira chuckles nervously. The Professor greets her and she smiles. “Well Sally’s come down with a cold, oh but don’t worry it’s not terrible or anything.” Masque says. The Professor resumes conversation telling Masque he can help him, he has a school with, but Masque cuts him off angrily saying that he doesn’t need help. He changes subjects and asks the Professor if he wasn’t here for something; “your face?” he asks reaching into an old chester drawer.

An aerial shot is shown of Alkalai Lake-then it switches to inside--“Is it ready Trask!” Kelly says walking down a hall with Dr. Bolivar Trask who says “Yes, I’ve upgraded them to work better than the last” “uh sir I-uh…” a small Asian man cuts in, but is immediately cut off. Kelly tells him “save it for the presentation, uh…” “I’m Steven Lang, Mr. uh or Dr. Trasks’, assistant, I’m uh not pre-uh-senting” He chuckles and Kelly stares at him “Nice to meet you” and walks away. Trask glares at Lang and goes to the podium. In the audience are many important people; including many leaders from all parts of the world. “Ladies and gentle man” Trask begins. “The sentinel 2.0 is an updated and highly advanced robot that, with your approval of course someday will become the main source of human protection. The sentinel 2.0 is like no other creation man has conceived of. Its’ purpose, to eradicate our fear of mutants out there plotting against man-kind; 2.0 unlike its’ ancestor will be a success. Why you ask?” (The first Sentinels were in X-Men: The Official Movie Game, which is a bridge between X2 and X3: just in case you hadn’t played the game) He turns and exits off stage. The curtain pulls back to reveal a large screen. Inside the lights turn on and Trask enters to a control room. A TV screen above them turns on and Trask is shown in the booth. “This is Bastion, and no its’ initial don’t stand for anything, just nices letter” the crowd laughs and Lang rolls his eyes backstage. “No Bastion is a synonym for defender, which I hope it will become, like Master Mold, Bastion is my very own creation, although I worked with the late William Stryker on the first, the designs were initially my idea” Trask continues and Steven Lang snaps his pencil upon hearing this, “but it’s complexity is far superior and would literally take days to explain. So in summary it is a new breed of technology able to think and learn for itself, very unique, expensive!, that’s why each Sentinel won’t have it’s own, and they won’t need to.” The center of the large room opens to reveal a circle, and a Sentinel slowly rises from inside. This version is more streamlined and stands only about 10-11 ft apposed to its’ 22 ft predecessor, it’s as if it was human yet robotic. The crowd is fixated, entranced even. Trask stares basking in the awed emotions and can’t help but smile in self confidence. “Bastion is capable of controlling over mass amounts of Sentinels linked to him at any given time and place via satellite. It is so complex that he could give more than 100 different commands to 100 different sentinels spread across the U.S. coast to coast at once; unfortunately there aren’t nearly that many.” Lang drives out in a freight cart with a steel box. “Luckily a few volunteers have decided to help us with our little demonstration.” The crate is set down and the cart disappears. It opens and six people emerge. “Note that three of the six are mutants.” Traks adds. The smoke from in it clears and they begin to stir. First a man and a woman both casually dressed exit the crate. An asian teary-eyed girl with a yellow trench coat emerges slowly, followed by a blonde haired teen and a muscular man with jet black, sleek hair and a tall blonde woman. “Don’t worry it won’t kill them. It is only designed to detain mutants. Now don’t let me bore you any further ladies and gentlemen” Trask closes. The Sentinels eyes glow and move rather abruptly in the direction of the group. Two back up slowly. It strikes, the blonde teen rockets into the air and Jubilee screams. The Sentinel finds a force-field is around both her and the sleek haired guy. He forces the field up and it knocks the Sentinel back a little. Trask smiles and the Sentinel reveals a barrage of guns. The camera is in the eyes of the Sentinel which focuses on the 5 remaining people. <non-threat—non-threat—detain> it says after scanning three of them. <file-Jubilation Lee-16-able to….> in seconds her name age and abilities are downloaded.

it will most probably be closed or merged with the thread i started ages ago 😄

so how do you merge them? and if so will I have to do it, because I stated the thread?

Originally posted by jdea
so how do you merge them? and if so will I have to do it, because I stated the thread?

no a moderator will do it. from now on tho use the link provided i just updated it