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I need help of a certain Spider-Man script for a character I created in it and I was wondering if anyone is interested to help me

describe the characters, i can write pretty well

I will PM you the details b/c this is kind of a personal script

I don`t mind helping, I have written some of my own scripts. Here are a few scripts that I have written. Ask if you want me to PM you any of them.

Aliens Unleased
Batman Escalation
Batman War Games
Batman/Superman: Ultimate Alliance
Spider-Man 3 (Only a syonpois)

Thanks man.I'll PM you the details as well

Wow we should team up a bunch of script writers and budding artists together and make a comic and then show then for a contest.

why dont we just do it right here, it might be personal but if we alll put our minds together and work at the same time it will be much easier

Your right but I'm afriad about how others will react about who my character is

they wont get pissed trust me u told me. its what you made up. and from what you've told be it could end up very well

I wouldn't mind drawing for someone at all. I love fan-comics

Originally posted by spencerspider
why dont we just do it right here, it might be personal but if we alll put our minds together and work at the same time it will be much easier

I think it will be better that way cause we can give feedback and make it even better, as they say two heads are better then one.

http://img439.imageshack.us/img439/7515/ironspideycityms8.jpg
Here is a piece I've just done now. And Below is it's color variant.
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/7363/ironspidey4rm0.jpg
If you ever wanted to considor me helping out.

Ok.It's another symbiote I created.This time, a female one

Cool drawings DBZ

And thanks guys for your support

Originally posted by Dazzler619
Ok.It's another symbiote I created.This time, a female one

Cool drawings DBZ

And thanks guys for your support

No problem, if you wish to assure any of my scripts don`t be afraid to ask me to PM them to you.

Yes please send them to me.I'll be glad to read them

he dont want it to be an offspring though, so someone think of how to get this girl with the suit, but no offspring like carnage was

I'll have one possibile idea by the end of the day. Whose doing concept designs?

Originally posted by spencerspider
he dont want it to be an offspring though, so someone think of how to get this girl with the suit, but no offspring like carnage was I'm not sure what the script is but if you want that to happen....(and I'm assuming this is the 616 universe) Have another meteor crash down or another space trip or whatever.

Originally posted by DBZ MAN
I'll have one possibile idea by the end of the day. Whose doing concept designs?

Tell me please

Originally posted by Spideys Sister
I'm not sure what the script is but if you want that to happen....(and I'm assuming this is the 616 universe) Have another meteor crash down or another space trip or whatever.

No, it's not in the 616 universe.Just the regular one.Meteor crash thing has been used all ready for the Venom Returns episode.Another space trip sounds ok but who will go in to space this time? I apologize if I'm being picky.It's just that all of the easy ideas have been taken

Well, your girl could be the astronaught. I'm working on nothing here. My spidey stories are usually crap.... All my stories are usually crap.

She could be someone who WANTS the symbiote and she has researched the origins of the symbiote and goes out into space with a hired crew and finds one where she manages to contain it. You could then follow it from there where the symbiote breaks out of confinment and laches on to her before she manages to build an inhibitor. I also suck at story making ha.

She should be a rich person for that kinda story.

But why would they want it. You have to get into that too. Like does she have sort of grudge against Spidey or something. Or is she in ove with Eddie Brock...

Or she just wants the power of the Symbiote, Muhahahaha

yea thats actually not bad, just make her have a grudge on spidey or peter... and make her like brock maybe? if she is smart let her be a scientist, but if not... hmm maybe she is dating john jameson jr? and she convinces him to go into space again with her (but she actually just wants the power of the symbiote)

Or someone already went into space and their auctioning the symbiote off at another super villian auction bid and she gets it.

Thanks for the suggesstion guys but she has nothing against Peter/Spidey,Venom, or Carnage.She's just an ordinary woman who gets bonded with a symbiote and it tries to tempt her to get rid of any other ones due to territory ship

Maybe sum guys import more symbiotes to Earth and one finds her.

Oh yeah, make her real sexy likediva

LOL!

Actually, I do have a few drawings of her.If you want to see them, let me know

show um

If you insist lol

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Pose5.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Pose1.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Topless.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Dress.jpg

Ha I liked the 3rd one

i was about to say that... lol damn u can draw... now at least i know what she looks like

Good drawings Dazzler, here is my idea for the story. Basicully Venom/Eddy Brock dies in a mysterious death and this woman wants to find out more about how he died. And she thinks that this syombiote killed him so she gathers a crew to go to investigate, but along the way she finds out that people on previous missions have died of madness. So she gets possed by the Syombiote and goes back to earth.

Either that or the revenge storyline where she is the lover of Eddy Brock and he dies in a battle with Spider-Man so she arms herself with the Syombiote to avenge Eddy.

Originally posted by DBZ MAN
Ha I liked the 3rd one

LOL I figured that you liked it

Originally posted by spencerspider
i was about to say that... lol damn u can draw... now at least i know what she looks like

Thanks hun.I will post pics of her as the symbiote once I get them scanned.In case your wondering, she's hispanic.The other symbiotes are caucasian and I wanted to do something new for a change.I just hope that seems ok b/c some people can be critical about it

Originally posted by Scarecrow756
Good drawings Dazzler, here is my idea for the story. Basicully Venom/Eddy Brock dies in a mysterious death and this woman wants to find out more about how he died. And she thinks that this syombiote killed him so she gathers a crew to go to investigate, but along the way she finds out that people on previous missions have died of madness. So she gets possed by the Syombiote and goes back to earth.

Either that or the revenge storyline where she is the lover of Eddy Brock and he dies in a battle with Spider-Man so she arms herself with the Syombiote to avenge Eddy.

TY also my dear.That's a neat idea but sounds a bit too dramatic.Besides, Eddie had about 2 lovers all ready.His ex-wife (comics) and Dr.Kafka (cartoon).I will make her have a relationship with him later on but more as an acquaintance.I've thought of another idea as well.Do you want me to post it here or PM it to you?

Post the idea here if you want. And I agree Eddy Brock and this woman should be acquaintances not lovers.

Actually, a friend of mine thought of this idea.Not me.I'm sorry for the mistake

It's an idea he had from TAS version.He thought that maybe John Jameson returned to Earth not only with the black symbiote, but the another symbiote as well (which he found on the moon of course).Only problem is that it wasn't discovered and before it was found by anyone, it disappered and went looking for a host.

Thats a good idea even though it is your friend`s idea.

Originally posted by Dazzler619
Thanks hun.I will post pics of her as the symbiote once I get them scanned.In case your wondering, she's hispanic.The other symbiotes are caucasian and I wanted to do something new for a change.I just hope that seems ok b/c some people can be critical about it

did you just call me....hun..

anyway hmmm another symbiote that wasnt found? thats very interesting and could work

Originally posted by spencerspider
did you just call me....hun..

anyway hmmm another symbiote that wasnt found? thats very interesting and could work

LOL, she called me hun too.

Originally posted by Dazzler619
TY also my dear.That's a neat idea but sounds a bit too dramatic.Besides, Eddie had about 2 lovers all ready.His ex-wife (comics) and Dr.Kafka (cartoon).I will make her have a relationship with him later on but more as an acquaintance.I've thought of another idea as well.Do you want me to post it here or PM it to you?

she said my dear to u..is this a girl i forgot to look

Here is my idea for the story. Basicully Venom/Eddy Brock dies in a mysterious death and this woman wants to find out more about how he died. And she thinks that this syombiote killed him so she gathers a crew to go to investigate, but along the way she finds out that people on previous missions have died of madness. So she gets possed by the Syombiote and goes back to earth.



Either that or the revenge storyline where she is the lover of Eddy Brock and he dies in a battle with Spider-Man so she arms herself with the Syombiote to avenge Eddy.

What do you think of them Spencer?

I'm sorry if I embarressed you guys by calling you huns and dear.I was only trying to be nice

Scarecrow, didn't you just said that idea in an earlier post or are you talking to Spencer?

Don't feel bad. They're not used to it cause I don't do it to them.

Originally posted by Dazzler619
I'm sorry if I embarressed you guys by calling you huns and dear.I was only trying to be nice

Scarecrow, didn't you just said that idea in an earlier post or are you talking to Spencer? I do not feel embrassed. No one been that nice to me, so I found it a bit funny at first.

Whew good lol

yea, not embarrassed-surprised is the right word.. i havent been called hun in like a year.. lol and scarecrow i like the first one better... and spidey sister, i want you to call me hun from now on lol

Originally posted by spencerspider
yea, not embarrassed-surprised is the right word.. i havent been called hun in like a year.. lol and scarecrow i like the first one better... and spidey sister, i want you to call me hun from now on lol HAHAHAHA! You and Dazz better make real nice friends cause that aint happenin any time in the far future.Originally posted by Scarecrow756
I do not feel embrassed. No one been that nice to me, so I found it a bit funny at first. I'd be nicer if I saw you more.

You guys (and girls) are funny lol

Here are scans of her as the symbiote now.I had to draw them on loose leaf b/c I ran out of drawing paper

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Symbiote4.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Symbiote3.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Symbiote2.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Symbiote1.jpg

looks pretty cool, i see...but what color is it going to be? lol

Uh........... this color of course lol

Hotness sketches Dazz.

A white symbiote. Thats a new one for me. Nice touches with the Spikes.

Originally posted by Spideys Sister
HAHAHAHA! You and Dazz better make real nice friends cause that aint happenin any time in the far future. I'd be nicer if I saw you more.

Well most of the time I am in the Batman forum showing my Batman scripts like Batman Escalation, Batman War games and Batman/Superman: Ultimate Alliance to people. And by the way Dazzler nice drawings, I think a white syombiote could work, it is new and original.

Originally posted by Scarecrow756
Well most of the time I am in the Batman forum showing my Batman scripts like Batman Escalation, Batman War games and Batman/Superman: Ultimate Alliance to people. And by the way Dazzler nice drawings, I think a white syombiote could work, it is new and original. You said Batman too much. Now my head hurts. BTW I had made a white Sybiote before. This one's differnt than mines though. I still like it.

Thanks for the compliments people.I would appreciate it if there's any constructive criticism needed for my character.Also, if I feel that she shouldn't be a sym, do any of you think you may have suggesstions of what else she can be?

Mutant. Alien.... oh wait... No. Yeah, mutant.

What is this character's name? Background?

Who is she, as a person? What's her motivation? How does she get the symbiote? Why is it white?


These are all questions you'll need to ask yourself when making up this character. We really can't do it for you, if you want it to be "your" character.

Originally posted by H. S. 6
What is this character's name? Background?

Who is she, as a person? What's her motivation? How does she get the symbiote? Why is it white?


These are all questions you'll need to ask yourself when making up this character. We really can't do it for you, if you want it to be "your" character.

1.I posted scans of her earlier.Did you see them?
2.She doesn't have a motivation but her symbiote does.It forces her to get rid of any other symbiotes due to territory issues
3.I'm still working on it
4.It just is.Besides, they aren't any white symbiotes so I decided to use that color for her

Your right but I would like other people's suggesstions/opinions too for help.

Originally posted by Dazzler619
1.I posted scans of her earlier.Did you see them?
2.She doesn't have a motivation but her symbiote does.It forces her to get rid of any other symbiotes due to territory issues
3.I'm still working on it
4.It just is.Besides, they aren't any white symbiotes so I decided to use that color for her

Your right but I would like other people's suggesstions/opinions too for help.

I did see the scans. Very cool.

However, I didn't mean "background" as in racial background or anything. I mean, really, who is she? That's what you need to ask yourself. Where did she grow up? Was she rich? Poor? Did she have loving and caring parents? Were her parents killed, or maybe they died when she was young?

Questions like that. To be a successful writer, and to create a successful character, you really need to focus on fleshing them out, giving them life.

I like the motivation. So the symbiote has one main goal, above all others: survival. And to survive, it feels that the other symbiotes are threats to its well-being. It feels the others are "invading its territory," forcing its hand to go after them.

I think you could go somewhere with the white thing. Something symbolic. If you go the path I'm suggesting (the symbiote looking after its own life; it feels threatened by the other symbiotes invading its territory), in a way, the white could represent the symbiotes relative "innocence," since it's simply trying to stay alive. However, as everyone knows, looks are deceiving, and truly deep down, the symbiote is indeed a killer.


These are all ideas on my part. Best advice I can give you is to breath as much life as you can into the character. In short: Make her real.

Thanks

Sorry for the misunderstanding.That too I'm still working on.However, I may plan to make her either a waitress or hairstylist before she becomes a symbiote.You see, I'm very bad at writing so that's why I'm asking others for help.I know what you mean though and I will try to do my best.I just need ideas

Here you go Dazz and Spideys Sis. A little piece I did. Hope you like.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7363/girlfightcopyob1.jpg

Originally posted by Spideys Sister
Mutant. Alien.... oh wait... No. Yeah, mutant.

Nah they're too many mutants out there all ready but thanks for the idea


Very nice drawing DBZ.Thanks

wow...u can draw like..like... i dont know any good writers

lol Don't you mean artists?

And thanks peeps. Tis appreciated.

I should post my Spidey script one day.

Wait, how was that directed towards me?

huh? im lost and i was seeing if u would get that i said writers (i think..)

Hey what's going on here? lol

Srry. My last post was directed towards DBZman.

It's ok lol

so how's this story that you guys are making or made? i haven't read very many posts.

It's only my story.I think I may have an idea of what I'll do

Here are more pics of the host

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/ShirtThong.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Pose7.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Pose9.jpg

damn.. pull up that shirt in the second pic woman!

Gettin a little x rating teaser there, huh, Dazz?

Sorry it's for the guys lol

No joke...

Good drawings Dazzler and DBZ.

Thanks and good scripts you sent me there Crow

Did you read the Batman/Superman: Ultimate Alliance script I PM you.

Yes I did and it was very good

Do you think maybe you can work on my character's story script now please?

Originally posted by Dazzler619
Yes I did and it was very good

Do you think maybe you can work on my character's story script now please?

Sure thing Dazzler.

Thanks man

Originally posted by Dazzler619
Thanks man

One thing, do you want me to write my own version of your character?

If you want but I was thinking if you can do a script when she meets Kassidy if you would liek to do

Originally posted by Spideys Sister
Wait, how was that directed towards me?
Spider-Girl was in it.

... not MY spidergirl... I dare you to take a whack at drawing my version of Spidey Sis. For laughs.

KK I'll make some time for it.

Here are more scans of the host

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Pose8.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Lingerie.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/LyingDown.jpg

Great drawings Dazzler, you never cease to amaze with your drawings.

Thanks man that means a lot

I read your Aliens script and it was great.You are a very talented writer

I hope I'm not sounding selfish but have you worked on the script where Vivian meets Kassidy yet?

Don`t worry Dazzler, I am working on it.

Cool thanks again.I hope it isn't too much

Hey guys, I started writing my origin for Vivian of how she gets her powers.The only problem I have is how,when, and where the symbiote finds and bonds with her.Any ideas?

Well, what does you host do for a living? Like Eddie. He was a reporter snooping aroung trying to pin spidey and ended up getting the symbiote by accident.

She was a hair stylist

okay... I'm gonna let the other guys pull on this cause I can't think of a way to set this up...

Well how about this.Say like symbiote (the one that wasn't found) finds Vivian while she's outside doing something and attaches itself to her?

Think of anyway that The host could be connected to this insted of some random pedestrian...

Ex: Eddie dumps her she goes off mad symbiote attaches itself to her they go on a rampage, find Edd beat the crap out of him spidey defends edd she goes off on spidey.... blah blah blah...

LOL she wasn't a love interest of Eddie.This takes place after Spidey separates Eddie and the symbiote.

Oh well you're own your own with this one.

Originally posted by Dazzler619
I need help of a certain Spider-Man script for a character I created in it and I was wondering if anyone is interested to help me I can give it a go, i've written various JSA scripts for amateur films and have an English A-Level...

Originally posted by Doc Potato
Cletus

I edited that, thanks Doc. What did you like about the scene?

Originally posted by Doc Potato
I can give it a go, i've written various JSA scripts for amateur films and have an English A-Level...

Thanks man

Scarecrow, that was a good scipt you did.I can't wait to read the rest of it

BTW guys, I think I have an idea of how Vivian gets her symbiote

its great but yea cassady should be a little...different

Originally posted by Spideys Sister
Cass sounds to... sane. Other than that it's great.

True but maybe he's tricking her

A new drawing I did

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Exposed.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/Dazzler619/Pose11.jpg

Sauucy

Good drawings Dazzler, did you get my PM?

Yes I did and that was a very good radio show.Good work

Did you get my PM about seeing the Dragonheart movie?

Thanks for the comment btw

Originally posted by Dazzler619
Yes I did and that was a very good radio show.Good work

Did you get my PM about seeing the Dragonheart movie?

Thanks for the comment btw

Yes I did, I am about to PM you my foreword on the radio show.

K thanks

Originally posted by Dazzler619
K thanks

Did you like it?

Originally posted by Dazzler619
K thanks

Did you like it?

Yes I did

Originally posted by Dazzler619
Yes I did

What did you like about it?

The sound,music, and talking

Originally posted by Dazzler619
The sound,music, and talking I meant the speech.

Oh oops

Actually, I liked all of the talking lol

Originally posted by Dazzler619
Oh oops

Actually, I liked all of the talking lol

Thanks.

Originally posted by Dazzler619
The sound,music, and talking

I did the voice of the second cop and I also did the Joker`s laugh which in my humble opioun really needs some work.

Really? Cool


I can tell your from the UK b/c of your british accent

Hay Dazzler, I sent you scene 2 and 3 of the radio reenactment, have you listened to them yet?

Hey sorry that I haven't responded for a few days.I've been busy.Yes, I listened to them and I really enjoyed it

lol you gotta give the poor guy more feedback then that.

Sorry but I'm not very good at that

Originally posted by Dazzler619
Sorry but I'm not very good at that

No worries Dazzler, any feedback weather it is short or long I appreciate.

Well I did like the voices and music lol

Originally posted by Dazzler619
Well I did like the voices and music lol

Thanks, I have to thank Duo for picking that music, it so suited the scene with the tune and lyrics. Duo provided the voices of Bane, the newescaster and narrator. And I provided the voices of James Green and the Penguin/Oswald Coppolepot.

"Wake Up America, welcome to the show." Coolest line ever.

How come no one comes here anymore?????

No sense of direction from the creator of the topic.

Hey guys I'm here.Sorry, I was away again

Any questions you have for me?

People come and go on this forum.