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The first three chapters of the At Worlds End sequel we did are on fanfiction.net.

Look for my name, willofthewisp, or type in "At Worlds End, When Fans Direct."

dontgetit

i cant find it... ahhh! lol

me niether

hmm, go to fanfiction.net and go under movies and go to POTC and it should be there. I'm going to check too. Maybe it just takes a while for it to come up. I don't remember how long it took to get my Phantom of the Opera one up and running.

no not up yet

Maybe it takes a day, because I got the email saying it was successfully created. I'll tell everyone when it's up. Poo. I wanted reviews NOW!

i;m so excited.

as i remember, the first bits of our version were hilarious and completely unrealistic. we got a bit better as we went along.

i am really looking forward to re-reading it though.

yeah i know....hey in the meantime let's talk about my rp...*everyone runs away* i was just kidding

No, I won't run away. I don't have a lot of creative juices flowing right now to participate, but advertise it for me. Like give me a teaser.

*cracks knuckles and types* well do we all know that alex has a twin bro named Iziekial (ziek for short)?

We do. Keep talking.

k.....so anyways Ziek propsed to abi she said yes b/c well....she wants to be loved....she grows weary of waiting for alex to come round....this sparks something inside of alex, don't know quite what...he leaves for a day and comes back plastered (it's imporatnt to know he was supposed to quit drinking)....the next day theres a fight between ziek and alex during this fight abi's kidnapped by an island tribe that the stole abi's engaement ring from (the tribe plans on sacrificing abi to their volcano ((it's gonna errupt soon)) b/c they think the gods are angry at them for losing the ring of hera... blah blah) thus alex and ziek have to work together to get her back

where'd everyone go?

it works now....ya'll can read our verison of worlds on on fanfiction.net

I'm am so uterly confused!???!??!?!!!!??

Yeah, okay. There was a story we all wrote a short while ago about what we thought Movie 3 would be like. If you go on fanfiction.net and type in At Worlds End: When Fans Direct, or search my name, willofthewisp, it should take you to it.
yeah, I saw it's up. Can't wait to see the reviews.
Sailor, I think Abi should stick with Izi, unless Alex does something really heroic to win her back. I always root for the underdog, but I always root for the decent guy, too.

yeah...i think alex is sorta thinking that himself which is gonna result in some more spats with his brother

Back to the fanfic, ch. 4 is now up. I'm trying to draw it out to add suspense.

cool!

CH.5 is up. You guys have to go on there and read it. There have only been 2 reviews and neither one is very complimentary. I almost consider the second review a bashing. You have to go on there and cheer yourselves and each other. We did good work together!

hahaha oh gee fanfic writers tend to be super egotistical and they like to bash other people's work, especially when they cant visualize it. LOL.

i still think its brilliant and hilarious and tons of fun. i am LOVING reading it again. hehehe.

yeah, they dont usually support it cuz they want theirs to be all awesome and they bash urs cuz they are too high on their own story

that's ok...we'll really piss them off in the sequel!

Yeah, I can't wait to start posting 4. But you guys need to review! Let's piss them off and defend our story. I've been sending replies that say you know, this was written by a large group of people and it was our ideal version, so we were just having fun.

man that site is so irritating, ch 5 is STILL not showing up. Grrr... LOL...

i read some of the other fanfics, and gee, ours IS pretty good... comparitively... LOL. and surprisingly, its much cleaner than most of them.

I have a favorite one listed in my favorites. It's called Key to My Desire and it's really good.
But you're right, Kate, the majority of them suck and they all feel like ganging up on a bunch of fans. I have a feeling the fanfic site is 50/50 Jack/Liz, so we will get praise from them, but flames from the rest.
Ch. 5 is now shown to be up.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3141143/1/

There is the link to the story. I guess ch. 5 isn't up yet. So sorry. I'll try to upload 6 as soon as I can.

6 is uploaded, so I guess wait around for a bit and then have fun with 5 and 6.

lol i forgot how good it was!!!!!

how many more chapters are there??

why are the reviews so dumb? i guess there was one good one. lol. maybe i will go review it or something. LOL.

thank you SO much for organizing and posting it all! i cant wait to read the rest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You're welcome. I just break them up when I think there is a good cliffhanger.

and when are you going to continue? ...i'm a bit sad that there were only 5 reviews....our story is fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If I have time I will put another chapter up tomorrow. ROTC works security for the football games here at my college, so it will be a busy day, but don't worry. I haven't forgotten.

good

7 and 8 are now up and I have about 18 more pages to play with, so you can guess from that how many chapters it will be.

awesome, i haven't had time to read it all yet though...

If you have time, please read it and leave a review.

ok

ii mmmiiissss ssstteevvveeee!!!!! as u can probably see.....

i noticed

lol if scch were here, shed agree with me 100%!!!

about what

Steve!!! r u not listening?!

yesbawling

finally ur listening 2 sumthin!

u guys go offtopic A LOT! u should cut down a bit

sry

yes

its ok....just try not to do it TOO much...cuz i go off topic at times also so i cant be one to tel u to stop...

Psh, the webiste says it is full and will be on soon. I am done with 3 and will post the two last chapters soon and start working on 4.

fine. And I have written a fanfic about Elisabeth feelings/thoughts about then time, after jack sailed away and before the wedding to Will. It's not as good as it should be, but I want to hear some critics, opinions,...

Fanfic about Liz feelings after Jack sails away (Movie 1)

So it was the same day, after Jack escaped the gallows and sails away. She has chose Will, it’s later in the afternoon, Liz sits on her bed and stares out of the sea, lost in her thoughts.

So, why did Jack say that? Jack normally never says anything without having a plan on his mind. But what plan should he have? He can’t come to kidnap me. Well I should be thinking about my wedding, not Jack, oh and the wedding night, yes...but why did he say it wouldn’t have worked between us? But on the other hand he said we are peas in a pod, that doesn’t make sense at all. Elisabeth, stop thinking about him...he’s gone and he’ll never return.

(Knocking on the door, Governor Swann enters)

G: Elisabeth, so you have chosen Will. Well, I’m not very happy about that, but if he’ll make you happy then he should do it. Govenor Swann thinks that he shouldn’t have rescued Will for 12 years.
Do you know when your wedding should take place?

E: No, but I think we need time to prepare it, don’t you think? Maybe in 2 months or so.

G: Alright, I’ll go and speak with Mr. Turner about that.

(Govenor Swann leaves the room)

Later Elisabeth walks down to the dock where Jack rescued her from drowning. She stares at the sea and thinks about the wonderful moments she had with him. Suddenly a hand touches her shoulder and she turns hopefully around.

E: (disappointed) Oh, it’s you.

Nor: Yes, who else? You don’t expect that pirate to return, I mean I know your fascination about pirates, but Mr. Sparrow has a meeting with the gallows if he returns.

Elisabeth stare at Norrinton. How is it possible that he knows what I’m thinking about? Is that so obvious.

E: No, no...I just thought about...about...mhm...the day...you proposed me.

Nor: If you believe. Tomorrow we’re going after him, so if you’ll join us, we’ll be happy.

E: What do you think? I’m going to marry Will.

With that Norrington walks away and Elisabeth home. The next day she stays in bed, not feeling very well.

Maid: How do you feel Miss Swann?

E: Oh, I’ve had to less sleep.

Maid: Why that?
Elisabeth is lost in her thoughts: Oh, I really can’t tell you that. I have to think on Jack, but I don’t want to. I should think about Will, we’re now engaged and I’m about to become Mrs. Turner. But only because stupid James proposed me...otherwise I wouldn’t have thought about marrying.
Bur what does fascinate me on Jack? He is a pirate and I think he has had a lot of woman and he’ll never treat them like a gentleman would do. And he’s always drunk and what about his hygiene, bähhhh. But on the other hand he is a good man and nice too.

(Knocking on the door, Will enters)

W: Elisabeth, I’ve heard you’re ill? Just wanted to know how you feel or if I could do anything for you.

How I feel? I’m a bit confused. I think I love you but I have to think on Jack more then on you. Maybe it will disappear in a few weeks.

E: Yes. I feel better, thank you.

W: Maybe you stayed too long on the ship.

Too long? No, I think it was too short. What did Jack say? A ship is freedom...maybe that’s what fascinates me.

W: Elisabeth?

E: Yes...yes...Did Commodore Norrington sail away?

W: Yes, early in the morning.

E: Fine. So now we could prepare our wedding, don’t you think?

W: Yes, but it has time. But I have to go now, sorry, I’ll come again later. Goodbye.

So a few weeks were over, Elisabeth has a lot of things to do so that she slowly forgets about Jack.
It’s the night before her wedding, Elisabeth has a dream...

The dream:

She’s on the Pearl, standing on the deck at night. Everyone is asleep, besides Jack, he walks slowly over to her.

J: So, luv, this is where your heart truly lies?

E: (looks at Jack) Well...it’s the sea...she fascinates me.

J: Is that so? (he smirks and walks closer to her) I think it could be something else, luv!

Elisabeth walks back, but is stopped by the wall of the cabin, so that she had no change to escape.
Jack comes again closer and is nearly face to face with her.

J: You’re going to want it the same way you want me to want you!
With that he strokes her hair and finally through her face, the other hand goes down on her waist and finally kisses her. She feels a prickle in her stomach and she suddenly felt dizzy. And with that she wakes up, her heart beating fast.

Oh my god! It’s my wedding day and I dream about betraying Will. He doesn’t deserve it, but the dream was so intense as if it was real. I thought I had forgotten him. So, but today, I , Elisabeth Swann, am going to marry Will Turner. Oh, I hope it’s not bad luck to have a nightmare before my wedding.

Just to note: POTC3 is now finished. 10 chapters.

fine, but back to topic...what do you think about the story??

that was really good! especially the kiss! i always like the kising scenes the best, dont know why

Just a quick announcement: can someone else post POTC4 on fanfiction? It doesn't have to be on that website, just somewhere online. I helped write a fanfiction on a POTO fan board like this one and we found out with a month in advance that the board would be shutting off, so we scrambled to move our story to a website where it would never be lost.

I don't want POTC4 to be lost, but I seriously do not have time to do it. Someone can copy and paste it onto a document, change the fonts and spaces so people can read it and then post it somewhere, I for one would appreciate it. Thanks.

Originally posted by sailorleo
it works now....ya'll can read our verison of worlds on on fanfiction.net

WHERE??!! i looked but what page? there are 333 pages of POTC stuff and i don't know where it is! PLEASE HELP! i want to read it and see what you guys thought it would be like--i read the one you guys did for the 2nd one, with the giant banana and gandolf thing; i cracked up for weeks!!

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Please post more of the one up above!! it's so good! PLEASE!!

We should eventully put up the forth one as well!

To see "At Worlds End: When Fans Direct," the most direct route is to go to "search" at fanfiction.net and type in willofthewisp. It should give you my screen name along with the two stories I've "authored." One of them will be the POTC story.