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Hermione and Jesse kissed for at least four minutes. Harry was fumed with anger, and Victor Krum was upset. Then their kiss was broken apart by someone. Victor. "What do you want, Victor?" said Hermioe furiously. "Hey, yuo're kissing my girlfriend!" yelled Victor "Ex- girlfriend " siad Hermione "What are you gonna do? Drown me in your tears." laughed Jesse "I did not cry at that last Quddich match, I had something in my eye." he said nervously. "Well, you guys just need to separate, and forget it." said Hermione trying to separate them. "She's right. We'll settle this at our next Quddich match" said Jesse
"Okay." said Victor. He started to walk away "Or we could settle this right now." he said suddenly turning back, and he punched Jesse in the jaw........

This is how it all started.......

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Originally posted by Nickey
Hermione and Jesse kissed for at least four minutes. Harry was fumed with anger, and Victor Krum was upset. Then their kiss was broken apart by someone. Victor. "What do you want, Victor?" said Hermioe furiously. "Hey, you're kissing my girlfriend!" yelled Victor "Ex- girlfriend " siad Hermione "What are you gonna do? Drown me in your tears." laughed Jesse "I did not cry at that last Quddich match, I had something in my eye." he said nervously. "Well, you guys just need to separate, and forget it." said Hermione trying to separate them. "She's right. We'll settle this at our next Quddich match" said Jesse
"Okay." said Victor. He started to walk away "Or we could settle this right now." he said suddenly turning back, and he punched Jesse in the jaw........

This is how it all started.......

It was Septemeber 1rst. And Harry, Hermione, and Ron were in an empty compartment on the Hogwarts Express. Hermione was reading a book(as usual), Harry was thinking about what was he going to do with Voldemort. And Ron was snoring.
There was a knock at the door, and it slide open. A handsome boy of about the same age as Hermione(17). He had blonde hair, just as messy as Harry's, bright sky blue eyes, and was thin, but not too muscular. He was wearing a tee shirt that said Jesse Parker. And blue denium jeans. "Uh, all the other compartments are full, do you mind if I sit here?" he asked Hermione had just put her book down, and saw him. "Oh my gosh. He's so cute!" she thought "Uh, sure, you could sit down right here next to me, Ron is sleeping, and ask anyone, you don't wanna be around him when he's sleeping." said Hermione "Okay." said Jesse. Harry hadn't even noticed anybody entered the room. It was when Jesse spoke to him, he came back to earth. "Huh, what you did you say?" Harry asked "I said you're Harry Potter, aren't you?"said Jesse sounding a little annoyed. "Yeah, I am." said Harry. He had been through this so many times. "Nice to meet you." said Jesse holding out his hand. Harry shook it. "What's you're name?" Harry asked. Jesse pointed to his shirt. "Jesse Parker." he said. "Are you new? What house are you in? If you're new from second year to seventh, you usually get another letter saying what house you'll be in." said Hermione all in one breath. " I'm in Gryfindor(sorry if I spelled it wrong). What about you guys?" Jesse asked "We're all in Gryfindor!" said Hermione happily "I'm hoping to try out for the Qudditch team. I just got a Firebolt three days ago. My friends and family say I play well." he said "Well, Harry's the Captin of the Gryfindor Team!" said Hermione. "Really? You are?" asked Jesse "Yeah, tryouts start next Saturday." said Harry. "You guys better put you're robes on. I expect we'll be arriving soon." said Hermione, and she left the room so they could change. When she came back, Ron
was awake. "Come on, guys. We're here!"

It was great to be back in Hogwarts. "Wow, look at the ceiling." said Jesse, lokking up at the enchanted ceiling. "Yes, it's bewitched.." "To look like the sky outside." finised Jesse, smiling at her. "Yeah, how did you know?" she asked suprised "I read it in 'Hogwarts, A History'." he said. "She smiled to herself and lead him to sit at the table. Proffesor Dumbledor had a few annoucnements. And when he was done, the food magically appeared in front of them.
"I think I'm gonna like this place." said Jesse, putting a pile of Macaroni & Chesse. "Everybody here likes it, why shouldn't you?" said Ron with a mouth full of spaggetti. "Except one, my horrible cousin, Draco Malfoy. He says he would rather be in Dumbstrang. That place is horrible. I've been there. The food is horrible, the place stinks, and it's cold all the time." he said. Hermione, Ron, and Harry all choked on their food. "You're a Malfoy?" asked Ron
"No. I'm his cousin. We're only related because my Aunt married his Uncle. I'm still a Parker." "No offense, but we can't really stand you're cousin." said Hermione. "Who wouldn't that prat. He left, right? Last I heard, he became a Death Eater, and was sent to kill Professor Dumbledor."


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Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
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Harry gave them a 'I told you so' look. "Good thing Harry was there just before Snape performed the Avada Kadrava curse." said Hermione. "Well, Congrats, Harry." said Jesse. After dinner, Ginny and Dean, Prefects, lead the first year Gryfindors to their houses. Harry, Hermione, Ron, and Jesse walked slowly to the Common Room. When they got their, the Fat Lady was no longer fat. "Can you believe it? Somebody cast a spell on me! My clothes were sagging everywhere. Dumbledore had to get someone to paint new clothes for me." she sobbed. She was so sad she let the kids in without a password. "Wow, this place is bigger than my living room." said Jesse in awe. "Well, I'm going to bed. Goodnight boys." said Hermione. And she left the boys alone by themselves in the common room. "Shall we go now?" asked Jesse. "You go. We'll be right up." said Harry. When Jesse was gone, Ron broke the silence. "Have you seen Luna lately?" he asked. Ron had a huge crush on Luna Lovegood since fifth year. "Yeah. She was at the table. She left early. I heard she's not feeling well." replied Harry. "Oh, well. I guess you have some compition this year Harry." said Ron, smirking. "What do you mean?" "Didn't you see how Jesse and Hermione were staring at each other. And if you weren't so caught up with that Firebolt, you would have seen them flirting with each other." said Ron "Really? Didn't notice." said Harry. Ron left, and Harry sat there, just thinking. Was it true? Does Hermione really like Jesse? Whatever the answer was, he wasn't going to think about it now. And with that, he was off to bed.

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The next day was their offical first day of school. They had double potions that day. This year they had a different teacher. She was really pretty. She had shoulder length black hair, bright hazel eyes, and a caramel complextion. She was slim and slender. Instead od wearing a robe like most teachers, she wore a sleeveless green tee shirt that said 'Head of Slytherin' in green and sliver glitter. She also wore a black pants with green hearts on it. When everybody came in, they were glad to have a new teacher. "Good morning, everyone" she said "Good morning" said the class in a kind of boring way. "My name is Ms. Hamiton. I will be your Potions teacher this year. I, believe it or not, am Dumbledore's grand niece" the class gasped with suprise "And I just wanted, for the next five minutes, to discuss what are the rules in my class." She sat on her desk, facing the kids. "1. I will not tolerate any misbehavior in here. If anyone dares to, the will be sent to Professor Dumbledor, and a 3 days worth of detention. 2. I want you guys to losen up, if you know an answer, don't be shy to raise you're hand. And if you get it wrong, so what? That's why you're here. 3. I just wanted to tell you 7th years that this year will be better than any year you've ever had." she smiled "Okay, now everyone, open you're books to page 9, and read the 5 paragraphs. And when you're done reading, only when you're done, take out some parchment and give me a..... 10 paragraphed summary of what you read. I expect at least almost every detail in you're summary. You'll have the whole period for this. And when you're done, please deposit you're papers in my basket. If you are done before time. You may go on to page 10 and answer the questions. If you aren't done by the end of this period, you may hand both papers in tomorrow morning. You may begin." she slid of her desk and went to the back of the Potions room into the book cover. When she was returning to the front of the room, she had at least 6 textbooks in her hand. "Um, Harry right?" she asked Harry. "Yes, Ms. Hamilton." "Could you help me? These books are a bit heavier than myself." she said "Sure." Harry said. He got up and took 4 books from her and helped her put them on her desk. "Thank you, dear" she said "You can go, and finish you're work." she said patting him on the back. It was 10:30 when only Hermione, put both assignments in the basket. "Very good, Hermione! I'm really impressed." she smiled at Hermione. "Thank you Professor Hamilton." said Hermione blushing "Please, calll me Ms. Hamilton. I'm only 24. 'Professor' sounds so old." she said. This made Hermione giggle a bit. "And for the rest of you, tomorrow morning." Ms. Hamilton remined them. When they were in the hallway on their way back to the common room, they ran into Jesse. "ey guys, going back to the common room?" he asked Hermione "Yeah, you coming?" she asked hopefully. "Yeah, but I have to make a quick stop at Professor Mgonagall's office. Wanna come?" he asked her. "Sure. What about you guys? Wanna come?" she asked Harry and Ron. "Nah, we'll meet you up at the common room." said Harry. "Okay" and Jesse and Hermione walked very closely to Magonall's office. "Do you really think they like each other?" said Harry to Ron. "Ron?" Harry turned around, but Ron wasn't their. But he did see him down the hall hand in hand with Luna. Harry just smiled

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Originally posted by harrypotterluvr
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Thank you and I will post in a few hours

they are awesome!!!

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It was 11:30 when Hermione and Jesse returned to the common room. "What took you guys so long? We;ve been waiting for you." said Harry. "Sorry, Magonall was talking and talking. And then it was only two inutes ago, when we bumped into Crabbe. Then he started to tease Jesse. Then Jesse got upset, they got into a fight, it wasn't long. And now we're here." said Hermione all in one breath. "Okay, well, do you know where Ron is?" asked Harry. They were the only ones in the common room. "Last I saw him, he was with this blonde haired girl. I overheard them saying that they were going to take a walk outside."said Jesse. "Luna" said Harry and Hermione togther. "Hermione? Can I talk to you in private, please?" said Harry. "Yeah, sure. I'll be back, Jesse." said Hermione. And her and Harry went outside the common room, and into the hallway. "Uh, Hermione? Would you like to go to Hogsmade with me this weekend? Just the two of us?" He asked her hopefully. "Um, okay." she said, and she headed back to the common room, to hang out with Jesse.

Cuteness!!

LOL! I thought the ending was sorta funny! I like you're story keep up the good writing!

it was good. plz post again soon

^^ agree with the three of them

Harry's heart lept with joy.
He was finally going on a date with Hermione.
Well at least he thought it was a date.
Anyway, he headed back to the common room. When he got in he saw Hermione crying her eyes out. "Hemione, what's wrong?" he asked as he took a seat right next to her. "Um, don't worry about it, Harry. It's okay." she said wiping her tears. "Where's Jesse?" he asked. "He went back up to the dorm. Uh, Harry. When is our date, again?" she said. "Sunday, at 3:00. But first, I want you to come with me" he said smiling as he pulled her by her hand. They went outside to the Qudditch feild, and crawled behing the stands. "Where are we?" she asked still holding on to his hand. "Well, I found this place last year. And I didn't show it to anybody, not even Ron." He said. "The stars tonight are very beautiful" she said staring up at the stars. "Just like you. " he said in a shy voice. Hermione just looked into his eyes, and kissed him very passionately. "What was that for?" said Harry out of breath, shocked, but yet happy. "For being the best ever." she said smiling at him.
"Come on, let's get back to the castle. We'll get in trouble." said Hermione pulling Harry, out of their new secret place.
When they got back, they were hand in hand, when Jesse saw them. "Oh, hey Jesse." said Hermione in a depressing voice. "Don't talk to me." he said angerily, and stomping back into the dorm. "What was that about?" he asked Hermione. "Um, nothing. Just promise me, as soon as you get to bed, ignore whatever Jesse says to you." "Uh, why? I don't....." "Jst promise me please?" " Okay" "Goodnight" and she gave him a kiss on the lips and went to bed. But Harry stayed in the common room, confused about everything that just happened to him.
Why was Hermione crying? Why did she kiss me all of a sudden? Why was Jesse mad at her?

Part Two- Hermione's Affair................... Coming Soon

Wow! That was great!! Post more soon!! I can't wait to read the rest!!

Originally posted by x_hp_fan
Wow! That was great!! Post more soon!! I can't wait to read the rest!!

Thanks.

That was really great!!

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You are VERY welcome!!

Brilliant!But,I'm still wondering why Victor came into the story at the beginning?Anyways everything is excellent!Keep posting!

i don't understand....

Does this come after the Sixth Book or not? I'm confused about that.

Originally posted by AmberGinn
i don't understand....

Does this come after the Sixth Book or not? I'm confused about that.

It's the 7th book

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Who are you to tell her what to do?



Nice job Nickey

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
Who are you to tell her what to do?



Nice job Nickey

One of the people she asked if they could read her story so that she can see if she'll keep writing herbmhm

Who are you to question who I am? tongue12

wow mint story

It was finally Saturday, and Harry was so excited and confused at the same time.
He was excited that he got a date with Hermione, but why all of a sudden? And why is Jesse mad at her? He can't be mad that Harry asked Hermone out. He never asked Hermione out. So why should he be mad? Anyway, Harry pushed those negative thoughts aside and got dressed. When he went down to the common room, Hermione and Ginny were already there. "Hey Harry. Can I talk to you for a sec outside?" said Ginny "Uh..... sure" Harry flashed a dazling smile at Hermione before he left. "What's the problem? Are you okay?" he asked concerned "Uh yeah. But I just wanted to know why the hell are you taking Hermione on a date? You know well that she likes Jesse." she said whispering angryily. "I asked her first, and I didn't even know Jesse liked her." he said " Boys are such idiots. You're trying to tell me that you didn't know? You never even noticed Hermione until Jesse came." she said "That's not true. I've liked Hermione since fourth year. I gave up trying to get her to notice me in sixth year." he said very angry. "Oh.... I get it. You only dated me last year because you gave up on Hermione. I get it." she said tears coming down her eyes. "No that's not true." He hugged her. " I'd never ever use you, Ginny. You know that." "I guess you're right. Anyway, you can't go on that date tonight. The only place you guys can have a date is down in the village or around campus. Everyone will see that, Harry. You can't do that to Jesse or Hermione" she said. And she walked back inside the common room leaving Harry outside to think about what she said. He went down to breakfast and saw Ron. "Hey mate. What's up? Ready for your big date?" he said with a mouth full of scrambled eggs. "Uh.. yeah" said Harry and he ate some pancakes and eggs without saying another word. Just as he was getting up to go out to the Qudditch Feild for the tryouts, Hermione walked into the Grand Hall to get some breakfast. "Hey, Harry. Um... ready for our date? I can't wait." she said forcing a smile on her face. "Yeah. Um.. wanna come to the tryouts with me?" "Sure. But I have to eat first or I'll just drop down and faint. I'll meet you there." she gave him a quick hugg and left. Little did they know Jesse was watching them.

wow! hermione is using Harry! i wonder what happens?

Thanks.
Where have you been, missy?
Lol
Thanks again.
And you'll see what happens soon.

After the tryouts, Harry and Hermione went to their dorms and changed.
Hermione was wearing a beautiful black knee length dress, and a black jacket decorated with pink and purple flowers. Harry was wearing black jeans and a red dress shirt. "Wow, Harry! You look great." she said shocked. She had to admit, Harry did look very cute at that moment. "No, Hermione" she thought to herself. "You can't like Harry. You like Jesse, remeber" she thought "Thanks. You look really beautiful." he said smiling. "Come on. Let's go." Harry held out his hand and Hermione took it. They walked down to the village. There was a lot of people whispering. They even heard Cho say 'I can't believe he left me for that thing'. "Don't listen to her, Hermione. She's just mad that you're prettier than her." "It's okay." They got to the village and went into Hogsmade. It was really crowded. They found a table near a window in the front. "I'll get us some drinks." said Harry "Can you get me a butterbeer?" said Hermione. "Sure."
When Harry got back, he couldn't believe who was talking to Hermione. Victor Krum. "Ello, Harry. I'm just visiting for three months. You see, Dumbstrang has a Qudditch match with Hogwarts this year. So this is why I am here." he said shaking his hand. "Uh, okay. Nice to you again." He didn't mean it. Harry never liked Victor because he and Hermione went out for a while in fourth year. "I will see you later, Hermione. Bye Harry." said Victor. And he left. "Wanna go to our secret hiding place?" said Hermione "Sure. But let's finish our drinks." When they finished, they went to their secret place, and sat down on the grass. Hermione rested her head on Harry's chest. And Harry storked her hair. "I can't be falling in love with Harry. Am I?" thought Hermione.
She felt she had to tell him, but she was scared. But she took the risk anyway. "She got up, and faced Harry. "Harry. Um....I..uh...I like you. I mean I really like you. You know like more than a friend." Harry's heart leapt with joy. "I really like you too. Since fourth year. I can't believe you like me too." he said "Well.. believe it." and she kissed him.

Total Eclipse of the Heart- Part 3 Coming Soon...........

Nice job!

Thanks. I'm gonna write soon.

Originally posted by Running Mascara
One of the people she asked if they could read her story so that she can see if she'll keep writing herbmhm

Who are you to question who I am? tongue12


I am one toomhm



Who am I? Who am I? Why I am the King of Spain. Joking, I'm DP


Originally posted by Nickey
Thanks. I'm gonna write soon.


Please, stop, it's horrible........Ehh, I'm kidding ya, it's great

It was Monday and all the senevth years had no classes that day. So Harry, Ron, Luna, Ginny, Dean, and Hermione sat in the common room thinking of something to do. When all of a sudden, Harry broke the silence. "Why don't we go to the Room of Requirement? It's raining outside, so maybe we can ask it for a Qudditch feild." he said hopefully. "It won't work. Trust me. Me and Dean tried to get away through there, because..." she was stopped by Ron. "Escaping there to do what exactly?" said Ron curiously. "None of your business. Anyway, we tried and tried, but it didn't work. I heard Professor Dumbledor had cast a temporary spell on it, becasue of all the Death Eaters that snuck in through there." she said "I have seriuosly gotta find a way to destroy Voldemort. Because of him, we can't have any fun.' said Harry "No matter what Harry, me and Ron will be there with you." she held his hands in hers, and smiled at him. He smiled back.

Originally posted by Nickey
It was Monday and all the senevth years had no classes that day. So Harry, Ron, Luna, Ginny, Dean, and Hermione sat in the common room thinking of something to do. When all of a sudden, Harry broke the silence. "Why don't we go to the Room of Requirement? It's raining outside, so maybe we can ask it for a Qudditch feild." he said hopefully. "It won't work. Trust me. Me and Dean tried to get away through there, because..." she was stopped by Ron. "Escaping there to do what exactly?" said Ron curiously. "None of your business. Anyway, we tried and tried, but it didn't work. I heard Professor Dumbledor had cast a temporary spell on it, becasue of all the Death Eaters that snuck in through there." she said "I have seriuosly gotta find a way to destroy Voldemort. Because of him, we can't have any fun.' said Harry "No matter what Harry, me and Ron will be there with you." she held his hands in hers, and smiled at him. He smiled back.

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*~Brilliant~*

Good job!

Originally posted by Nickey
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You are welcome


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Here, I'll say thanks for herOriginally posted by Nickey
Thanks.

Originally posted by sammii
*~Brilliant~*
Originally posted by fallingoutgrl
Good job!

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
I am one toomhm



Who am I? Who am I? Why I am the King of Spain. Joking, I'm DP

You're doing a great job on the story Nickey!! Keep up the good work




Please, stop, it's horrible........Ehh, I'm kidding ya, it's great



hmm I think you were my first friend at KMC, if I'm not mistaken Other than that, I dk you.

Originally posted by Running Mascara


hmm I think you were my first friend at KMC, if I'm not mistaken Other than that, I dk you.



touchedI was?...........Neither do I

Originally posted by Nickey
Thanks.
Where have you been, missy?
Lol
Thanks again.
And you'll see what happends soon.

Well, I have been many places other than this fan fiction site and piled with a term paper.

Really good! I still think Hermione going to use Harry in some way!LOL

I'm really liking this story keep it up! i dont usually read or write these types of storys but this one I am really enjoying.

Originally posted by Nickey
Hermione and Jesse kissed for at least four minutes. Harry was fumed with anger, and Victor Krum was upset. Then their kiss was broken apart by someone. Victor. "What do you want, Victor?" said Hermioe furiously. "Hey, yuo're kissing my girlfriend!" yelled Victor "Ex- girlfriend " siad Hermione "What are you gonna do? Drown me in your tears." laughed Jesse "I did not cry at that last Quddich match, I had something in my eye." he said nervously. "Well, you guys just need to separate, and forget it." said Hermione trying to separate them. "She's right. We'll settle this at our next Quddich match" said Jesse
"Okay." said Victor. He started to walk away "Or we could settle this right now." he said suddenly turning back, and he punched Jesse in the jaw........

This is how it all started.......

um yeah, you definately took this from "She's the man."

It's good though.

Originally posted by SweetMagnolia17
um yeah, you definately took this from "She's the man."

It's good though.

Uh, did you really have to point that first part out?

Just kidding.
I had nothing to start with, and I had just watched the movie when I started this so that's why it's like that.
And thank you.

haha, yeah it's one of my favorite movies.
so i was just like... wow.
that sounds really familiar.

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
touchedI was?...........Neither do I
Yeah, you pmed me the first day I started posting and asked if I wanted to be friends. I may have registered before you, but I didn't start posting till about a month or 2 after I registered.

hey there, are you going to post anymore?

Originally posted by Running Mascara
Yeah, you pmed me the first day I started posting and asked if I wanted to be friends. I may have registered before you, but I didn't start posting till about a month or 2 after I registered.


We musta have started talking in August or something then.......touchedGood times, good times.

And you registered 12 days before me.

It was Tuesday and the had Magical Creatures to aid in Hagrid's class of course. "What do guys think he's gonna make us do? Maybe he'll give us another snake to feed." said Luna. "I don't know what Hagrid's goon make us do, but whatever it is, we'll just have to put with it." said Hermione tiredly. She and Harry talked for hours last night and didn't get to bed until midnight. "Hermione may I talk to you I to you in private, please?" said Jesse. Hermione was suprised and angry at the same time. But she put those aside and said "Sorry, class is about to start." and walked away with her friends. When she turned back see couldn't believe her eyes. Ginny walked up to Jesse and gave him a kiss on the lips, and walked back up to the castle together. She turned her head away, praying no one eles saw that. "How could she? What about Dean? Ismn't she dating Dean? Come on, Hermione. Why do you even care? You're in love with the guy of your dreams. Just leave it alone." She thought to herself. That day, Hagrid took them to the lake near the castle. He gave them each a pair of funny looking glasses. "Um, today class, we are gonna be lookin for what I'd like to call eaglefish. They are very rare creatures you know. They were used to make wishing potions, but because everyone back then was so greedy, they became endangered. So you fellas are lucky that Professor Dumbledor got a friend of his to bring these fish to you. Okay, let's get started. Oh, yeah. What you have in your hands are there are goggles. They help you see clearly under the water. But I must warn you, that water is freezing. So every 15 seconds you must come up for air." said Hagrid. "Have you noticed that Hagrid's English has gotten better?" whispered Harry into Hermione's ear. "Yeah, I've noticed." she whispered back. They all got on their knees and plunged their heads into the water. "He was right when he said the water was freezing." thought Ron They saw a school of brown and white fishes. Their heads were shaped like the head of and eagle, but their eyes were much larger, and they had a brown beaks. 15 seconds passed and they all lifted their heads up. Everyone was gasping for air. "So can anyone tell me what is the difference between the eaglefishes' eyes, and an eagles eye?" Hermione's hand shot up. "Yes, Hermione" "Their eyes are quite larger because they need to see around themselves to see if they're in any danger. An eagle's eye is smaller because it keeps dust away so they won't be blinded on journeys." "Excellent, Hermione. 55 points for Gryffidor. And for the rest of you, I have a treat. Claas dismissed, and no homework!" The students cheered and ran to go a spend their next hour finding something to do.

It' good. Keep it up.

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it's good.
but do you think you can watch for spelling mistakes. it is kind of hard to read. and also if you could separate the paragraphs a little it would be eaiser to read.

and maKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER

shut up the both of you
its not like you guys are perfect

Originally posted by Nickey
shut up the both of you
its not like you guys are perfect

I am

Sure you are.

While they were walking up to the castle, Hermione pulled Harry away from the rest of the students. "What's wrong, Hermione?" asked Harry "You won't believe who was snogging Jesse!" she said "Why do you even care?" he said annoyingly. "I don't care what Jesse does. I'm trying to tell you that I saw Ginny snogging him." she yelled "Why are you yelling at me? It's not my fault Ginny's snogging him." he yelled back. "Look, I'm sorry. I just couldn't believe that Ginny would do something like that to Dean." she cried. Harry pulled her close to him, and hugged her. He stroked her hair, while asking her to stop crying.

"Would it make you feel better if I talked to Ginny?" asked Harry hopefully. "Oh, Harry! You're the best boyfriend a girl could ever have." He gave her a kiss, and the walked back up to the castle. They decided to stay in the comoon room, in front of the fire. Luna and Ron weren't there. As a matter of fact, they had the whole common room to themselves. "Harry? Do you think I'm a horrible person?" she asked as laid her head on his chest. "Of course not. Why would you think that?" he said stroking her hair again. "I don't know, but I can tell you that I have the best boyfriend ever." she said smiling at him. He bent and kissed her. It got hotter by the minute, until they were interrupted by Dean yelling at Ginny. "You've never cared about me. I don't understand you, Ginny. All I know is that you've changed this year, and I don't wanna have anything to do with you.
"Please, Dean. It was an accident. I told you what happened. I was walking towards him because my friend was behind him, and I tripped." "You expect me to believe that you tripped right into his mouth, and then stay about 5 minutes snogging him. Wow, Ginny. You're a horrible liar." yelled Dean "I'm sincere Dean. I'm not lying." she cried "Then why didn't you tell me this as soon as it happened? I had to hear about it from a bunch of Ravenclaws after class. Do you know how humilating it is to have my girlfriend, the one I dated for three years and stayed faithful to, kissing another guy in front of half of the 7th years?" he yelled "I'm sorry, Dean." she said falling to the floor.

"First it was Harry. Last year, I watched you snogg him in front of all the Gryfindors, and this year you snogged Jesse Carter, who's related to Draco Malfoy. That guy has been hurting you ever since you came here, and you go ahead and snogg his cousin? Just stay away from me you two timer. It's over." he yelled and stomped his way to the boys dorm.
Ginny stayed on the floor crying her eyes out.


To be continued

you need to start new lines everytime someone talks just a little help

Originally posted by Nickey
While they were walking up to the castle, Hermione pulled Harry away from the rest of the students. "What's wrong, Hermione?" asked Harry "You won't believe who was snogging Jesse!" she said "Why do you even care?" he said annoyingly. "I don't care what Jesse does. I'm trying to tell you that I saw Ginny snogging him." she yelled "Why are you yelling at me? It's not my fault Ginny's snogging him." he yelled back. "Look, I'm sorry. I just couldn't believe that Ginny would do something like that to Dean." she cried. Harry pulled her close to him, and hugged her. He stroked her hair, while asking her to stop crying.

"Would it make you feel better if I talked to Ginny?" asked Harry hopefully. "Oh, Harry! You're the best boyfriend a girl could ever have." He gave her a kiss, and the walked back up to the castle. They decided to stay in the comoon room, in front of the fire. Luna and Ron weren't there. As a matter of fact, they had the whole common room to themselves. "Harry? Do you think I'm a horrible person?" she asked as laid her head on his chest. "Of course not. Why would you think that?" he said stroking her hair again. "I don't know, but I can tell you that I have the best boyfriend ever." she said smiling at him. He bent and kissed her. It got hotter by the minute, until they were interrupted by Dean yelling at Ginny. "You've never cared about me. I don't understand you, Ginny. All I know is that you've changed this year, and I don't wanna have anything to do with you.
"Please, Dean. It was an accident. I told you what happened. I was walking towards him because my friend was behind him, and I tripped." "You expect me to believe that you tripped right into his mouth, and then stay about 5 minutes snogging him. Wow, Ginny. You're a horrible liar." yelled Dean "I'm sincere Dean. I'm not lying." she cried "Then why didn't you tell me this as soon as it happened? I had to hear about it from a bunch of Ravenclaws after class. Do you know how humilating it is to have my girlfriend, the one I dated for three years and stayed faithful to, kissing another guy in front of half of the 7th years?" he yelled "I'm sorry, Dean." she said falling to the floor.

"First it was Harry. Last year, I watched you snogg him in front of all the Gryfindors, and this year you snogged Jesse Carter, who's related to Draco Malfoy. That guy has been hurting you ever since you came here, and you go ahead and snogg his cousin? Just stay away from me you two timer. It's over." he yelled and stomped his way to the boys dorm.
Ginny stayed on the floor crying her eyes out.


To be continued




clapping More plz! Thank you!

I agree with the both of them!

Originally posted by Nickey
shut up the both of you
its not like you guys are perfect
um.. excuse me?
when did i ever say up there that i was perfect?
all i said was that it would be easier to read with the paragrahs separated a little bit and to watch your spelling. nothing to get all pissed about.

I loved the last bit you entered.
very good.

how about THREE GUYS IN LOVE WITH DOBBY for your next project ???

Originally posted by SweetMagnolia17
um.. excuse me?
when did i ever say up there that i was perfect?
all i said was that it would be easier to read with the paragrahs separated a little bit and to watch your spelling. nothing to get all pissed about.


I'm sorry
I was in a bad mood that day.
I wa in a fight, so I was kinda upset.
I'm so sorry.
I'm usually not like that.

Originally posted by Running Mascara
Yeah, you pmed me the first day I started posting and asked if I wanted to be friends. I may have registered before you, but I didn't start posting till about a month or 2 after I registered.

And now I hate you with all my guts touched

You're doing a good job Nickey!! Keep it up!!

Originally posted by Nickey
I'm sorry
I was in a bad mood that day.
I wa in a fight, so I was kinda upset.
I'm so sorry.
I'm usually not like that.

no problem.
i was just taken aback.

anyway, anymore any time soon?

Yeah.
But I just have one itty bitty problem.
I have writers block.
I don't know if I should make Ginny go out with Jesse.
I don't know when Harry and Victor Krum are going to fight.
I don't know if Hermione should end up pregnant or not.
And I don't know when Draco comes back to help fight against Voldemort.
And I don't know when Harry is finally gonna defeat Voldemort.
So that's what happened.

Oh yeah.. This is kind of a preview. So enjoy!

Originally posted by Nickey
Yeah.
But I just have one itty bitty problem.
I have writers block.
I don't know if I should make Ginny go out with Jesse.
I don't know when Harry and Victor Krum are going to fight.
I don't know if Hermione should end up pregnant or not.
And I don't know when Draco comes back to help fight against Voldemort.
And I don't know when Harry is finally gonna defeat Voldemort.
So that's what happened.

Oh yeah.. This is kind of a preview. So enjoy!

okay so when you said I don't know if Hermione should end up pregnant or not. that just made me laugh.

i dont know if you've heard of epic movie,
but i saw it on saturday.
and they show hermione at like age 40 or so and she's pregnant and says "hope you're on the pill, harry likes to show off his sorcers stones." holy crap.
it made me laugh so hard.
i know irrelavant
but i had to say it.
your hermione pregnant thing kind of sparked it.

yea.... i really want to see that movie. my friend was telling me about that an it made me want to see that movie even more.

its really funny.
seriosly, go see it.

Originally posted by SweetMagnolia17
okay so when you said I don't know if Hermione should end up pregnant or not. that just made me laugh.

i dont know if you've heard of epic movie,
but i saw it on saturday.
and they show hermione at like age 40 or so and she's pregnant and says "hope you're on the pill, harry likes to show off his sorcers stones." holy crap.
it made me laugh so hard.
i know irrelavant
but i had to say it.
your hermione pregnant thing kind of sparked it.

Now I want to see it even more!! hysterical

Originally posted by Nickey
While they were walking up to the castle, Hermione pulled Harry away from the rest of the students. "What's wrong, Hermione?" asked Harry "You won't believe who was snogging Jesse!" she said "Why do you even care?" he said annoyingly. "I don't care what Jesse does. I'm trying to tell you that I saw Ginny snogging him." she yelled "Why are you yelling at me? It's not my fault Ginny's snogging him." he yelled back. "Look, I'm sorry. I just couldn't believe that Ginny would do something like that to Dean." she cried. Harry pulled her close to him, and hugged her. He stroked her hair, while asking her to stop crying.

"Would it make you feel better if I talked to Ginny?" asked Harry hopefully. "Oh, Harry! You're the best boyfriend a girl could ever have." He gave her a kiss, and the walked back up to the castle. They decided to stay in the comoon room, in front of the fire. Luna and Ron weren't there. As a matter of fact, they had the whole common room to themselves. "Harry? Do you think I'm a horrible person?" she asked as laid her head on his chest. "Of course not. Why would you think that?" he said stroking her hair again. "I don't know, but I can tell you that I have the best boyfriend ever." she said smiling at him. He bent and kissed her. It got hotter by the minute, until they were interrupted by Dean yelling at Ginny. "You've never cared about me. I don't understand you, Ginny. All I know is that you've changed this year, and I don't wanna have anything to do with you.
"Please, Dean. It was an accident. I told you what happened. I was walking towards him because my friend was behind him, and I tripped." "You expect me to believe that you tripped right into his mouth, and then stay about 5 minutes snogging him. Wow, Ginny. You're a horrible liar." yelled Dean "I'm sincere Dean. I'm not lying." she cried "Then why didn't you tell me this as soon as it happened? I had to hear about it from a bunch of Ravenclaws after class. Do you know how humilating it is to have my girlfriend, the one I dated for three years and stayed faithful to, kissing another guy in front of half of the 7th years?" he yelled "I'm sorry, Dean." she said falling to the floor.

"First it was Harry. Last year, I watched you snogg him in front of all the Gryfindors, and this year you snogged Jesse Carter, who's related to Draco Malfoy. That guy has been hurting you ever since you came here, and you go ahead and snogg his cousin? Just stay away from me you two timer. It's over." he yelled and stomped his way to the boys dorm.
Ginny stayed on the floor crying her eyes out.


To be continued




Hermione and Harry helped her onto the couch. "Ginny. Why'd you go and do something like that." said Hermione wiping Ginny's tears
"It was a dare. A stupid dare that I shouldn't have done." said Ginny
"Why'd you do it?" said Harry
"Because I shared a secret with them that I regret telling them?"
"What was the secret?" said Hermione
"I would ruin our friendship if I ever told you that. I thought they were my real friends. So I told them the secret, and they used it against me." she said crying on Hermione's lap. "So they dared me to kiss him and walk with him back to the castle. But I guess the Ravnclaws saw and they told Dean."
"Why didn't you just tell him that." said Hermione
"You saw how he reacted when he thought I did it by accident. Imagine how he would react if it was because of a dare." she said
She cried and cried until she fell asleep.

The next day, Ginny tried to talk to Dean, but he refused. One day after Potions, she finally caught a hold of him. "Dean. I-I-I need to talk to you. Please it won't take long. I promise." "Fine." he said angerily
They went into an empty classroom. "Dean. I want to tell you the truth. I didn't kiss Jesse because I tripped. I kissed him because I was dared to." "Why would you take the dare unless you wanted to?" said Dean

"Dean. You don't understand. I told them the secret." "Why did you do a stupid thing like that? You know those girls are blabber mouths." "I didn't know they were gonna use it against me Dean. Please Dean. I beg of you, please forgive me." "I'll have to think about it, Ginny. This is all so sudden. I can't make a choice right away. I'll think about it." he said and he walked out of the room and left Ginny there by herself.

"So much for keeping a secret, Weasley" said a voice from behind her. She spun around to find Draco Malfoy standing behind her. "I told you what would happen if you tried to disobey me." he said "Isn't enough? Isn't enough that you forced me to help you get those Death Eaters here? You threatened to kill me if I didn't help you remember? You even threatened to spread a rumor that I was pregnant by you. Do you remember? Isn't it enough Malfoy?" said Ginny screaming at the top of her lungs. "I believe it was that hard. I'm the reason you even got a chance with that mudblood lover Potter. If I hadn't forced you to distract Potter with your pathetic charm, you would've never even seen his face. So this is the thanks I get after setting you up with Potter." said Malfoy

"Look at me when I talk to you." said Malfoy turning Ginny's face towards him. "I hate you." she said and she got up and left. Malfoy shook his head and disappeared into darkness.

Meanwhile, Harry and Hermione where making out as usual. "Do you hear something?" said Harry "No." said Hermione trying to get back to kissing. "No seriously. Listen." he said signaling her o be quiet. "Who's there?" said Professor Snape. Harry and Hermione gave each other an 'uh oh' look, and dashed to the Griffindor common room. "Dinglehopper" said Harry to the door. "Incorrect password" said the Fat Lady "Good going Harry. They changed it last week "remember?" "You don't know it?" "No." "How come you don't know it?" "Why should I know it?" "Whould you two stop fighting already and get in?" said Luna "Oh. We didn't see you there." said Hermione "Yeah. I noticed." she replied

"Thanks Luna. Snape almost caught us.... you know." said Harry uncomfortably. "Where's Ron?" asked Hermione "He's asleep." said Luna
"We barely see him anymore. We barely see you anymore Luna. What's going on?" said Harry "What were you and Hermione just doing before Professor Snape almost caught you." she asked "Making out." replied Harry. "Now you know why you don't see me and Ron." "Why" asked Harry. "Men are clueless. We've been doing the same thing you guys have been doing.' said Luna. Harry still didn't get it. "Making out." said Luna "Oh. So don't you guys take a break?" asked Hermione. "Do you?" she asked. Hermione and Harry blushed.


Meanwhile Professor Snape was talking to Jesse and Malfoy in an empty classroom. "You mustn't let you're guard down Draco. You must gain Ginny's heart and marry her. Don't you realize how important this is? You are darkness and she is light. Together nothing can stop you." "I wouldn't marry that rat even if it meant losing everything I have." "You will lose everything you have if you don't. The Dark Lord is planning to kill you. It was you're cousin here who had to use a Polly Juice Potion to try and kill Dumbledor. The Dark Lord has spared your cousins' life because he came close to succeed. He wants to kill you because you ran away before you got the chance to." said Snape "It was your idea." Malfoy shot back. "I didn't think he would've found out so soon. So for your sake, your family's, and my sake, please just get her to marry you." "Fine. When am I suppose to get married?" "By December of next year." said Snape "Must I?" said Malfoy "Do you want to destroy him or what?" said Jesse to his cousin. "Just so you know, as soon as he's destroyed, I'm getting a divorce." said Malfoy as he opened a portal of darkness. "Do whatever you want after, just get her to fall in love with you." said Jesse "You're making this way too easy." Malfoy smirked. And with that he left through the portal of darkness.

Krum was walking with a bunch of Slytherins when he spotted Hermione coming down the hall one Saturday afternoon. "See you later guys. I have some business to attend to." said Krum. "Hey Victor. What have you been up to?" she asked smiling. "Nothing much. Hermione may I talk to you please?" "You are talking to me." she giggled "No. I mean can I tell you something? I mean you promise not to get mad if I tell you." he asked her "Sure." "Well. I don't how to say this really." "What is it?" "I'm not over you. I never wanted to break up with you. It wasn't my fault. My parents were trying to force me to marry this girl." "Yes. I know that. That's why we broke up." "I know." "I'm flattered, but I'm in love with Harry. I feel I can do anything with Harry, and I haven't felt that with any guy I've ever dated." Hermione said "Say what you want Hermione, but I'm not giving up on you." said Krum as he walked away. Hermione stayed their in shock. "How can three guys like me? I like them all, but I love Harry out of all of them." she said to herself. "Pull yourself together Hermione. You can do it." she said walking to her dorm. "I need some sleep. Yeah. I'll just sleep all this off." she said.
She went to the girls dormitories and laid down on her bed. "Who do I choose?" she mumbled as she drifted off to sleep.

Originally posted by Nickey
"Thanks Luna. Snape almost caught us.... you know." said Harry uncomfortably. "Where's Ron?" asked Hermione "He's asleep." said Luna
"We barely see him anymore. We barely see you anymore Luna. What's going on?" said Harry "What were you and Hermione just doing before Professor Snape almost caught you." she asked "Making out." replied Harry. "Now you know why you don't see me and Ron." "Why" asked Harry. "Men are clueless. We've been doing the same thing you guys have been doing.' said Luna. Harry still didn't get it. "Making out." said Luna "Oh. So don't you guys take a break?" asked Hermione. "Do you?" she asked. Hermione and Harry blushed.


Meanwhile Professor Snape was talking to Jesse and Malfoy in an empty classroom. "You mustn't let you're guard down Draco. You must gain Ginny's heart and marry her. Don't you realize how important this is? You are darkness and she is light. Together nothing can stop you." "I wouldn't marry that rat even if it meant losing everything I have." "You will lose everything you have if you don't. The Dark Lord is planning to kill you. It was you're cousin here who had to use a Polly Juice Potion to try and kill Dumbledor. The Dark Lord has spared your cousins' life because he came close to succeed. He wants to kill you because you ran away before you got the chance to." said Snape "It was your idea." Malfoy shot back. "I didn't think he would've found out so soon. So for your sake, your family's, and my sake, please just get her to marry you." "Fine. When am I suppose to get married?" "By December of next year." said Snape "Must I?" said Malfoy "Do you want to destroy him or what?" said Jesse to his cousin. "Just so you know, as soon as he's destroyed, I'm getting a divorce." said Malfoy as he opened a portal of darkness. "Do whatever you want after, just get her to fall in love with you." said Jesse "You're making this way too easy." Malfoy smirked. And with that he left through the portal of darkness.

so draco IS a coward...

Hey. I don't usually like Harry Potter (watched all recent movies from 1 to 5(?) though, haven't read the books) that much, more or less read fan fics bout them, but this caught my attention. (saw it on gen. fic. forums as the first one updated or something srug)

it's good, keep up the good work... and i like it...

Preview of Three Guys In Love With Hermione

Hermione will lose her virginity to one of the boys, but who will it be?
Will Ginny fall for Draco, or will she realize he's up to something?
Will Krum and Jesse fight over Hermione?
Will Harry and Hermione break up?
Hermione will become pregnant(way later), but who is the father?


Coming Soon..........

Originally posted by Nickey

Hermione will lose her virginity to one of the boys, but who will it be?
Hermione will become pregnant(way later), but who is the father?

- just take care that it won't head off and be r-18 or nc-17, but it sounds good.

Originally posted by JaehSkywalker
- just take care that it won't head off and be r-18 or nc-17, but it sounds good.

don't worry about it.
it won't have any details.

intersting very interesting

Originally posted by Nickey
don't worry about it.
it won't have any details.

okay.. then it's all good.

btw, your sig is sexy lol... Justin Timberlake...

thanks
sorry I haven't written anything yet
I'm having writers block again!
anyone have any ideas?

The next day, Hermione woke up as chipper as a bird. But when she went down to the common room, what she saw almost broke her heart in two. Harry and Ginny were kissing. Tears were falling down her eyes rapidly.

"So I guess this is how you love me Harry?" she said

Harry pushed Ginny out of the kiss and she landed on a nearby couch.

"Hermione, it's not what you think." Harry said facing Hermione.

"Oh yeah. So, I didn't just see the guy who said he loved me so much only a few weeks ago, kissing the bloodly daylight out of my supposedly best friend." she said as she threw a dirty glare at Ginny.

"It's over Harry. I never want to see you again."

And with that she ran out of the common room only to bump into Jesse.

"Oh. I'm sorry. Didn't see where I was going." she said

"No, it was-" He saw Hermione's puffy eyes and tear-stained cheeks.

"Hermione? What's wrong?" he said

"Oh, nothing. I just found my best friend and my supposed boyfriend snogging the bloody daylight out of each other. And you wanna know the worst part? They didn't even bother to explain, or run after me." she said as the tears came back to her eyes.

"Don't cry Hermi. It isn't worth it. He doesn't deserve you as a girlfriend, and that Ginny of yours doesn't deserve you as a friend." he said as he wiped her tears away.

"You're right. I should stop crying and move on, right?" she said looking at his sky blue eyes. Either it was her or their faces were moving closer and closer together.

"Yeah" and with that he captured her lips with his.

He and Hermione were enjoying the kisses but when he tried to enter her mouth, she snapped back into reality.

"I'm sorry. It's just to soon." she said regretfully

"No, don't be sorry. I'll wait, and when you're ready, you know where to find me." he smiled. He kissed her forehead lightly and went on his way.

"This working better than I thought." he whispered to no one in particular. He smirked at his accomplishment.

Hermione stood there, dumbfounded and kept rewinding the kiss in her head. How can I feel the same about two guys? But Harry, that jerk, was kissing Ginny. What do I do?


-------------------Back In The Common Room--------------------

"What the hell just happened?" Harry demanded Ginny

"I'm sorry, Harry. Ok? I'm sorry. I was never over you. I was heartbroken when we broke up, and to top it all of, you and Hermione started dating? Do you have any idea how that makes me feel?" she cried

"That doesn't mean you have the right to try and sabotage my relationship." he said softly not wanting to get her upset. Ginny was on the Qudditch team, and she really knew how to throw a bludger. Imagine what she could do to his face!

"And besides. You're dating Jesse, remember?"

"No I'm not. It was all a lie. The plan was for Hermione to get jealous, which she did. But the all of a sudden she was okay with us 'dating'. So that's why me and him were kissing after class that day. And you guys were still okay with it. So that is how I kissed you, Harry." she said not looking into his eyes.

"But you were still with Dean when you kissed Jesse."

"I tried to end things with Dean numerous times, but he wouldn't accept it. So that was a way of saying I meant business." she cried

Harry was shocked. A whole bunch of things kept flooding into his mind. But all he could say was....

"You're not Ginny. You're not that wonderful kind girl I once knew. I-I've gotta tell Hermione this." As he was heading out the door, Ginny said

"Harry, if you and I don't start dating, I have to marry Malfoy!"

This made him turn around instantly, and forget about him and Hermione.

"What did you just say?"














TBC

OMG!! THAT WAS GREAT!!! Please update soon!!!

then what, then what?

great job!

Wow..These are excellent,Nickey!

"What did you just say?" Harry asked

"You heard me. If you and I don't start dating, I'm gonna have to marry Malfoy o fulfill some stupid prophecy!" she yelled. She was trying very hard to remain fair and calm, but Harry wasn't making things easy for her.


"What prophecy? How do you even know if you have to marry Malfoy." said Harry

"Look. While Dumbledor was trying to prepare you for the final battle, he forgot to mention the second part to the prophecy."

"And what is that?"

"A pure soul will be marked with the sign of light, while an impure will be marked with the sign of darkness. Together they will conceive a child so powerful. Powerful enough to destroy the greatest evil known."
She lifted her arm to show the mark. It was a simple white rose with a black stem, which stood for darkness.

"And how do you know that Malfoy is the one?"

"He showed me the mark, Harry. Do you think I would be making this up?

"How did you even see that he had it? You've been having secret meetings with him, haven't you? You betrayed us for the scum of the Earth? How could you Ginny?"

"Harry it's not like that. I didn't do anything with him. It was during the night the Deatheaters came to kill Professor Dumbledor!" she gasped at what she said. Harry wasn't suppose to know about the last part.

"You knew that those Deatheaters were coming to Hogwarts? Do you realize that Hermione almost died, and so did Ron. Your own brother?"He couldn't believe what he just heard. The girl who he admired for her class and spunk, was just another one of Voldemort's followers.


"Harry. You've got it all wrong!"

"I've heard enough." and with that he slammed the common room door behind him in search for Hermione.

Wow..Please continue more soon!

That was great mah!! Update soon!! Please!!

I'm gonna say how ignorant was harry at that part, but i understand as much.

great job!

Thanks guys.
I'll try to write as soon as i can.
i'm grounded so i have to sneak on the computer when i can.
so i'll see what i can do.

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Sorry about that. I'm having writers block again. And on top of that I'm kinda grounded for sneaking on the computer while I was grounded. So please bare with me. Thanks!

I'll try and write soon.
(And yes I'm sneaking again)

How come you don't write your story on paper meanwhile and then type it when you're ungrounded ermm

Because I work for my dad. And he keeps me very busy. So I have to sometimes sneak on the computer while I'm working.

How old are you??? I wish I had a job ermm

15

hmm I didn't know that was legal ermmhappy

well it is

Not over here ermm

Eh, she's working for family anyway. I think that's okay.

i wish i had a job. ermm

"Ugggghhghgh! How could I be in love with two guys and have a crush on someone else too? This is so stupid! Why can't I just choose?"said Hermione.

She was in the girls' dorm trying to concentrate on her potions essay. But as you can tell that wasn't going as well as planned.

"Stupid Harry! If he didn't cheat on me with Ginny, this wouldn't be happening. I actually thought I loved him." she cried.

---------------------LunchTime-----------------------


"Ron, can you please ask Harry to pass me the salt?" said Hermione

"Harry can you pass Hermione the salt?" Ron asked. Ron wasn't the brightest kid around, but he wasn't stupid. Something was going on between his friends.

"Here Ron. You give her the salt. Since she doesn't wanna talk to me, why should I have to pass her the salt?" said Harry. He tried to talk to her all day, but she refused to. And when he tried to explain all he would get in return was 'whatever you say Harry' 'i don't care' or his favorite 'why are you talking to me? shouldn't you be snogging Ginny senseless right now?'. He understood that she was hurting, but damn!

"I would be talking to you if you hadn't done what you did." she snarled

"I told you, Hermione. I didn't do it. I would never hurt you like that, but you don't trust me!" he hissed

"It takes two to tango Harry, and you..."

"What does dancing have to do with this?" Ron asked

"Muggle thing." Hermione replied

"I didn't kiss her, she kissed me. I'm tried of telling you I would never do anything to hurt you. I love you Hermione. You're the first girl I've had these bloody feelings for, and you think I would jeopardize that!" he said. He shook his head and left.

Hermione put her head in her hands, and stayed like that until a hand touched her shoulder.

"Herms, everyone's gone. We've gotta get back." said Ron

"Oh Ron. I was so wrong. I messed everything up. Harry will never forgive me. Oh Ron, how could I be so stupid." she cried onto his shoulder.

"Shush. It's ok. Harry will forgive you. You'll see." he said as he hugged her.

What they didn't know was a pair of brown eyes staring at the two friends.


TBC

brown eyes? whose?

this is why no one should jump to conclusions.

g'job!

OMG!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!! I CAN'T WAIT!!!

omg so great,....u r a gud writer
cant wait wuts goin to happen
to harry n hermione, must kno!!

i think the brown eyes r ginny
idk jus a guess
wen u gonna post again

Originally posted by TheSims14
i think the brown eyes r ginny
idk jus a guess
wen u gonna post again

That's what I thought too!! But it could be anybody w/ brown eyes!!

ya ur right, or she cud put a twist and
make it like Jesse or Viktor
hey i have a story on here its called
Harry/Ginny my story post are mostly
everyday, so come and read my story
its not as gud as Nickey's story but its gud

What they didn't know was that those brown eyes belonged to none other that.....(Drum Roll please) Victor Krum.

Victor Krum decided to leave them alone. 'She couldn't possibly be dating that idiot. I mean, she has to have some sort of pride' Victor thought as he walked back to his dorm in the Slytherin Towers(Dumstrang, go figure). 'I've got to find a way to get her back, now that Potter is out of the way.'

---------------------------Room of Requirement-----------------------------
"Have you thought about what you are going to Draco? We are running out of time!" Jesse said

"Your cousin is right Draco. Unless you and your family want to be dead, you'd better come up with a plan to get that brat to fall in love with you!" Snape said

"Don't you think I know that?" Draco spat

"She's not as stupid as those other girls, and she knows the reason why. I'm running out of ideas." he said as he collapsed onto a chair.

"Now is not the time Draco! I don't care if you have to brew a love potion or put her under the Imperious curse. You need to..." Jesse was interrupted by something almost pushing him to the ground.

"You are an absolute genius my dear cousin!" he laughed as he hugged Jesse. Draco Malfoy never hugged anyone, but he was near death and desperate, and the man gave him a bloody brilliant idea!

"Alright. Now get off of me, dude. I don't do hugs. Especially with dudes." he teased

"Shut up."


--------------------------------Common Room---------------------------------
Harry was doing some homework when Hermione came into the room.

"Harry. I'm sorry. You were right, I should have believed that you would never do something to hurt me. I know you don't want to talk to me right now, but for the record Harry, you're the first guy I fell in love with, if that helps." she said

When he didn't reply, she got up to leave. A hand pulled her back.

"Where do you think you're going?" Harry said with a genuine smile.

"Harry. I meant what I said."

"And I meant what I said."

She squealed and hugged him.

She looked into his beautiful emerald eyes and said "I love you, Harry."

"I love you too, Mi." and crashed his lips onto hers and drew them into a world of endless happiness.

Great!!!

Now update!!!

Please!?!?!? blush2

i luv luv luv luv luv tht post
lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol
now u can post again, and
read my story i just posted
something else ya ya ya

Update!!!!

------------------------------Deserted Corridor------------------------------
Ginny was taking here usual short cut to the common room when someone pulled her wrist. She screamed but was stopped by a hand covering her mouth.

"Would you shut up?" drawled a voice that was all to familiar

Ginny nodded her head, and the stranger to his hand away form her mouth.

"I wouldn't have to scream if you didn't scare half to bloody death! Why do you keep on coming here Malfoy? Do you not realize that you are wanted?" said Ginny when she recognized the voice.

"Shut up. I have a proposition for you." said Malfoy

"And what makes you think I'd agree to anything you have to say?" Ginny said coolly.

"Because if you don't, you die." he said simply

Ginny's skin paled a bit

"What do you want?" she said

"Well.........."








Until next time guys. I need to figure out what I'm going to do with Harry and Hermione. And Krum and Jesse. So just bare with me please.

kay doped

That was great!! Can't wait till you update!! ermmhappy

gr8 update, jus keep harry and hermione together they make a
cute couple

AWEsome!


*sigh* Harry and Hermione 4ever lol!

post, come on girl, post

UPDATE!!! please??

----------------------------Back in the Common Room------------------------

It was a long day on Friday, so the famous couple(Harry and Hermione) decided to stay in the common room while everyone else went outside or stayed in the Great Hall.

"Harry?" said Hermione

"Yeah." said Harry

"Have you seen Ginny? I mean, I know I'm mad at her for what she did, but I'm worried. I haven't seen her since the day before yesterday." she said as she bit her lip.

"No. I haven't seen her either. Maybe.........oh no!" he groaned as he plopped down on a nearby couch.

"Harry? What's wrong?" said Hermione as she put her hands on his shoulders as she stood behind the couch he sat on.

"Well. When me and you had that fight, she told me something. And me being the stupid ignorant bastard that I am, I just ignored her." he said
His breath becoming rigid.(You know how Harry gets when he's upset)

"Harry. Baby, what did she tell you?" said Hermione

"Well. Remember last year when the Deatheaters got in here?"

"Yeah. What does that have to do with Ginny?"

"Well, she was a part of it."

"What! How could she do such a thing?"

"Well apparently, she wanted me so badly that she made a deal with Malfoy."(What you're are about to hear may shock you. And I didn't tell you guys this before. So just try and keep up.)

"What was the deal?"

"If she helped him get that door to work so the deatheaters could get in Hogwarts, he would make sure to make a very strong love potion. And it lasted a year. I can't believe I didn't know that! I mean all of a sudden, out of no where I was all in love with her, and at the end of the year I didn't feel anything! How could I be so stupid!" he said. He was so frustrated that he threw his Potions book and it hit a lamp.

"Harry. You need to relax! It wasn't you're fault. Nobody knew that Ginny was capable of such things." she said as she rubbed his shoulders, but he shrugged them off. And got up.

"Yes it is! I'm such an IDIOT!" he yelled

Hermione pulled him back down on the couch.
"I said you need to relax!" she said through clenched teeth.

"I want you to take a deep breath and breathe slowly." she said as she ran her hands through his hair.

He took a deep breath.

"Slower"

He breathed again.

Her hands went on the sides of his neck.

"See. Your pulse is slowing down already." she smiled down at him and kissed his cheek.

"I'm sorry. I-I just feel that maybe if I wasn't so stupid and payed more attention. Maybe none of this would have happened."

"Remember ok. This is not your fault."

"I love you."

"I love you too. Let's go and look for her."
She held out her hand and Harry took it. And they started their search for Ginny.





















Are you guys happy now? Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha!

Yes!!! BUT MOST MORE!!! mwahaha

yes yes yes
post more

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY, TO U!!!!!!
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Happy Birthday Nickey!!!!!! Keep up the good work!

YaY! Harry/Hermione! woohoo!

post more please..

Thanks. I will!

You guys keep on forgetting tat I have a job! And not to mention my laptop refuses to work. I hate technology! And just to think, I payed $1700.00 for the stinkin thing and it keeps on giving me problems!

ok, but if it does work, then will u post?

My comp only cost about $500 and it works fine ermmhappy

you'd get used to it eventually..

i know i did.. ermm

ya same here

You guys won't believe what happened!
My cable, and internet got cut off due to some mix up at the company and it won't be back for a while.
I'm at my dad's office right now, so that's the only way I could got online. My life sucks.
I'm sorry guys. You're gonna have to wait awhile.


Sorry!

so will there b no more post, ?

Update soon lol luv it pile

Originally posted by Nickey
You guys won't believe what happened!
My cable, and internet got cut off due to some mix up at the company and it won't be back for a while.
I'm at my dad's office right now, so that's the only way I could got online. My life sucks.
I'm sorry guys. You're gonna have to wait awhile.


Sorry!

aww bummer!

hope it gets fixed soon! update update update!

Plz do update soon

Auwww THat really sucks, stupid company
i hope that you can post soon again, cuz its really great

"Where could she possibly be? We've searched the entire castle!" said Hermione

"I don't know." said Harry

"Do you think that passage way they used is still opened?" said Hermione

"Maybe. Why?" said Harry

"Maybe Malfoy still has access to it. Harry, Ginny could have been kidnapped!"

"We've got to tell Professor Dumbledore!"

"Well let's go!"








TBC

Sorry! I don't have time to write a lot. I promise to try and get more done.


BUSY SUMMERS SUCK!

its great you updated sorry for being so picky lol

That was good Hope you update again soon!!

thnx for updating though and it was good,hope you cn post soon