My Other Newest Song Death Be My Name

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Scarecrow756

Scarecrow756
No comments guys!!!!!!!!! confused

el_barto
It's too ****ing long.

It's not very good either, you're trying way too hard.

nick1811
Originally posted by el_barto
It's too ****ing long.

It's not very good either, you're trying way too hard.


Ouch

BornToRule

Slay
The lyrics are very flat. It's like your talking about life to a friend on a Saturday night.

''As the months passed my condition worsened eventually my girlfriend left me because of my disabilities. I even went into a coma due to the damage done to the brain.''?

Come on. I mean. Come on.

BornToRule
here is a song with lyrics sounds like the kind of lyrics it seems you want to make. just so that you can compare. with blind guardian ofcourse.

The Bard's Song - In The Forest

Now you all know
The bards and their songs
When hours have gone by
I'll close my eyes
In a world far away
We may meet again
But now hear my song
About the dawn of the night
Let's sing the bards' song

Tomorrow will take us away
Far from home
No one will ever know our names
But the bards' songs will remain
Tomorrow will take it away
The fear of today
It will be gone
Due to our magic songs

There's only one song
Left in my mind
Tales of a brave man
Who lived far from here
Now the bard songs are over
And it's time to leave
No one should ask you for the name
Of the one
Who tells the story

Tomorrow will take us away
Far from home
No one will ever know our names
But the bards' songs will remain
Tomorrow all will be known
And you're not alone
So don't be afraid
In the dark and cold
'Cause the bards' songs will remain
They all will remain

In my thoughts and in my dreams
They're always in my mind
These songs of hobbits, dwarves and men
And elves
Come close your eyes
You can see them too

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