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interesting...

dude, go see the religion forum.

This has nothing to do with religion.
It's a part of a script and.......... Forget it. Dicks like KoK and Spartan005 will then just randomly walk in and say it sucks because I made it.

That was incredibly Retarded.

I didn't see a point in it to be honest. shrug

You're not supposed to right now.

still, *2nd one*


interesting.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan

Have you ever
SHUT THE FVCK UP!

Originally posted by bogen
SHUT THE FVCK UP!

Reported.

woot

You're babbling on about god yet say it has nothing to do with religion?

...

Right.

A) There is no god.

B) I didn't know you made it until you said you did. (Though I did suspect you made it.)

C) It was written well, but the concept doesn't pack any punch.

D) Reported for unprovoked attack.

I didn't actually FULLY made it. My friend ****** gave me a bit of an idea.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
I didn't actually FULLY made it. My friend ****** gave me a bit of an idea. Well, still. The first one was alright. The second one was pretty bad though. If you're writing fiction, or anything, really, unless you want to seem like a childrens book writer, then you should NEVER adress the reader.

Just a tip.

Another tip:

Try not to change your verb tense. You said "I asked God..." then shortly thereafter "It is as if..." You changed verb tense from past to present. Not a HUGE deal, but if you keep the verb in one tense, it makes things less akward and easier on the reader.

It's part of a script.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
It's part of a script. Well, the question should be followed up with a pause or answer, because it's just more realistic that way.

Realism has nothing to do with it. Well, not until later on.

http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m168/TiredHiker/whatshisname.jpg

Originally posted by =Tired Hiker=
http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m168/TiredHiker/whatshisname.jpg
haha nice

Originally posted by bogen
haha nice

If you are a fan of that one then you might also enjoy this . . .

http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m168/TiredHiker/starwarsguy.jpg

Originally posted by =Tired Hiker=
If you are a fan of that one then you might also enjoy this . . .

http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m168/TiredHiker/starwarsguy.jpg

What the **** are you talking about?

Originally posted by =Tired Hiker=
If you are a fan of that one then you might also enjoy this . . .

http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m168/TiredHiker/starwarsguy.jpg
haha you just entertained me and owned ultra, gud on you

Originally posted by bogen
haha you just entertained me and owned ultra, gud on you

That didn't own anybody.

he called you a nibbler in a funny manor, you got owned son

Originally posted by bogen
he called you a nibbler in a funny manor, you got owned son

That isn't ownage, you moron. Nibbler isn't even much of an insult. Funny? Yes. Ownage? You need to get your facts straight.