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I think here is a good place to say I really want to see Jack and Liz sword fight each other in a "mask of Zorro" sort of way. They're probably evenly matched by now and their could be all sorts of innuendo. I think Jack would find it really hot. He doesn't really get to see her fight that much.

Originally posted by willofthewisp
I think here is a good place to say I really want to see Jack and Liz sword fight each other in a "mask of Zorro" sort of way. They're probably evenly matched by now and their could be all sorts of innuendo. I think Jack would find it really hot. He doesn't really get to see her fight that much.

THAT WOULD BE REALLY HOTT!!!! I LIke the way u think Willo!! kudos to u!!!

hey would u write a scene....so i can engage myself in their LOVE!!

Oh, I'm really blanking right now. Please go to fanfiction.net, search my name and read POTC3 and 4, or find one of the threads where I have written some scenes. I'll try to be original soon.

lol....ok!!!

Yeah that would be cool to see Elizabeth and Jack swordfight. Or her and Will.

I really would like to see Jack and Liz sword fight, if we don't get our ending at least give us a sword fight. I'll be happy.

ha^^^ i like that idea maybe will finds out she chose jack and jacks life is on the line and will was going to hurt him and liz fights him to save jack

Originally posted by willofthewisp
I think here is a good place to say I really want to see Jack and Liz sword fight each other in a "mask of Zorro" sort of way. They're probably evenly matched by now and their could be all sorts of innuendo. I think Jack would find it really hot. He doesn't really get to see her fight that much. omg! that is soooo perfect...

i no yea? lol

How about if the scene is corregraphed like the first sword fight between Jack and Will.

Lizzie: You are a smart man Jack, but I don't entirely trust you to save
us this time and I will be taking over the ship. Besides you
insulted Will.

Both draw swords.

Jack: After that kiss Love, how can I ever trust you to make a right
decision and not be impulsive and rash like Will.

Both line up swords together and Jack strokes Lizzies sword as he says:

Jack: Only a little.

We TOTALLY should see Jack and Elizabeth swordfight. Maybe over who has to tell the whelp where Elizabeth's heart TRULY lies...

I really want to see Elizabeth tend Jack's wounds after he gets beat up by JOnes or whatever. lol. it would be so out of character for both of them.

and we've mentioned this before, but i would kill to see Jack and Elizabeth ballroom dance.

Or a totally goofy scene where Jack is teaching elizabeth the proper way to wear Pirate eyeliner. lol.

i love this thread.

I love this thread too.....Yes, I think it would be so hott to see Jack and Lizzie swordfight...and I too, would love to see Liz tend to Jack's wounds after he is wounded by Davy or Beckett..and we can feel the tension oozing between them.....

Liz: Lie still, Captain Sparrow...this will only hurt a little but I must tend to this gash in your side...
Jack: (gasping, barely able to talk): I'm not sure I can entirely trust you....Miss Swann....you sure you mean to heal me or finish me off...
Liz: Ja...Captain Sparrow, How can you say such a thing to me,...of course I mean to heal you
Jack:...of course....it's not like you haven't tried to kill me before (coughs)
Liz: I thought we were past all that....Please be still....I think you may have to remove your shirt so I can see to it better....
Jack's eyes clashes with Elizabeth's
Jack: you'll have to do it for me..I haven't the strenght to....Miss.....Swann...
Liz:...okay, but this will hurt, can you at least lift your shoulder up so I can remove your shirt....

Once the shirt is removed, lIz struggles not to caress Jack's chest...their eyes are intently staring into each other...
Liz breaks the stare and begins administering care to Jack's wound....
Jack asks for rum to help ease the pain.....and so on.....

Liz finishes up the doctoring and just before Jack collapses into a pain-ridden sleep we hear him whisper...as he grabs Elizabeth's hand..
Jack: thank you, Eliza...(defeated) Miss.... Swann ( and drops her hand)

We see a tear fall down Elizabeth's cheek as she is looking out the window of the cabin on the Pearl....

and Kate...yes, after the tender scene we would need a light-hearted scene....maybe Jack and Liz are drinking rum again together at some point after he has healed....Liz tells Jack she must learn to dance for her wedding....so he says that he can teach her...and we see them start to dance...."one, two, three"....we can see laughter and them having fun...but then when he dips her and pulls her back up close to him we see an tense moment where they are mouth to mouth....(the teaser kiss)...and then jack pushes her away and says "I'm sorry Miss Swann...forgive me, I got a little carried away. I forgot the last kiss you kissed a Pirate it was just a form of distraction..there's only one man you want to be kissing and it's not this said Pirate...." and he storms out of the cabin....Liz is left gaping at him and we see the big look of confusion and disappointment on her face...and she talks to herself "I really need to stop spending so much time with him and stay focused on Will and how much I love him and how I want to marry him....right?" or somthing to that effect.

OMGSH lovethemtigers you are OUT OF CONTROL AMAZING>>>>>>

Im literally crying a little. sheesh im SUCH A HORMONAL WOMAN.

I'm just going to save those little gems to my computer so i can read them whenever i need therapy. seriously.
i LOVED the line you gave Jack during the dancing bit!!!

OMG lovethemtigers *sigh* if only if only no! its going to happen im with kate *saves*

lovethemtigers! I LOVE IT!!!!

I found these quotes kinda cute a lil' sparrabethical

"curiosity killed the cat, satisfaction brought it back"

"you conquer with a sword yet are conquered with a kiss"

cute huh?

Those quotes are cute, I like them. Thanks for posting them

Originally posted by lovethemtigers
I love this thread too.....Yes, I think it would be so hott to see Jack and Lizzie swordfight...and I too, would love to see Liz tend to Jack's wounds after he is wounded by Davy or Beckett..and we can feel the tension oozing between them.....

Liz: Lie still, Captain Sparrow...this will only hurt a little but I must tend to this gash in your side...
Jack: (gasping, barely able to talk): I'm not sure I can entirely trust you....Miss Swann....you sure you mean to heal me or finish me off...
Liz: Ja...Captain Sparrow, How can you say such a thing to me,...of course I mean to heal you
Jack:...of course....it's not like you haven't tried to kill me before (coughs)
Liz: I thought we were past all that....Please be still....I think you may have to remove your shirt so I can see to it better....
Jack's eyes clashes with Elizabeth's
Jack: you'll have to do it for me..I haven't the strenght to....Miss.....Swann...
Liz:...okay, but this will hurt, can you at least lift your shoulder up so I can remove your shirt....

Once the shirt is removed, lIz struggles not to caress Jack's chest...their eyes are intently staring into each other...
Liz breaks the stare and begins administering care to Jack's wound....
Jack asks for rum to help ease the pain.....and so on.....

Liz finishes up the doctoring and just before Jack collapses into a pain-ridden sleep we hear him whisper...as he grabs Elizabeth's hand..
Jack: thank you, Eliza...(defeated) Miss.... Swann ( and drops her hand)

We see a tear fall down Elizabeth's cheek as she is looking out the window of the cabin on the Pearl....


AWEEEEEE Thats soo adorable. I wish that we have at lest a scene like this.

Oh, yes! Dancing! Dammit, I wish I could remember the thread where I wrote some scenes. They need to fight and dance. That would make the entire series for me.

A touch dirtier, I would like to see Jack or Liz in the tub and get eyed by the other. Completely accidental, but full of desire and wanton pirate-ness.

Everyone's just killed Sao Feng and Liz is relaxing in a tub. We get a sense she hasn't gotten any time to herself for a long time. She leans her head back and closes her eyes for only a second when the door opens.

Jack: Sorry, love. You should say "occupied" next time one knocks.

Liz: Jack! (covers herself with her arms) I didn't hear you knock!

Jack: Makes one wonder where your mind really was then. (looks her up and down)

Liz: I'm not getting out with you in here, if that's why you're lingering.

Jack: I don't actually expect to see anything, Lizzie, darling. I'm quite content just imagining.

(Liz reaches across while managing to stay covered and gets her sword and points it at him)

Liz: Out, Jack, or you'll have no reason to imagine anything like that again. (but she smiles as she says it, secretly pleased)

Mmm. Love the idea of them swordfighting. Elizabeth should be angry at Jack and Will is watching them. He's about to tell the Unuich that Elizabeth kissed him (cause he doesn't know that Will saw them already).

So Elizabeth fights him into his cabin, and they do a sort of fight and tango. You know, he twirls her infront of him and presses himself to her back, his sword at her throat. And he whispers something naughty about a bed, her and him. Then we see her eyes flash to Jack's cot.

Then maybe they get to the bough and he dips her half over the railing and we get a teaser kiss...or a real one...that would be awsome.

Yum.

ooh, I like, swann&sparrow. Very classy and sexy.

Lol, I would just love to have a scene like that. Jack and Lizzie have so much chemistry, I don't know how they can cover that all up.

T&T need to realize that J/E make most of the money, they're hot and passionate. People like to see that. They don't need the under thirteen age group. There are plenty of adults that will come see J/E on screen.

Plus pirates wasn't really PG in the first place, so I'd just really be angry if they try and make it a sappy Disney movie in the end.

I would just be so happy when Jack and Lizzie have their moments.

Hopefully more than just one.

That was agood one Willoft.

it's getting steamy in here....

willo i remember the dancing scene you wrote--- gee i wonder where it was, it was awesome.

man wilofthewisp you should start writing a fanfic bout this stuff! i like the ones you already have

i would but im not a talented writer....

I think she does I am not sure.

Originally posted by a-k-a-amber
I found these quotes kinda cute a lil' sparrabethical

"curiosity killed the cat, satisfaction brought it back"

"you conquer with a sword yet are conquered with a kiss"

cute huh? yes!!!

Originally posted by willofthewisp
Oh, yes! Dancing! Dammit, I wish I could remember the thread where I wrote some scenes. They need to fight and dance. That would make the entire series for me.

A touch dirtier, I would like to see Jack or Liz in the tub and get eyed by the other. Completely accidental, but full of desire and wanton pirate-ness.

Everyone's just killed Sao Feng and Liz is relaxing in a tub. We get a sense she hasn't gotten any time to herself for a long time. She leans her head back and closes her eyes for only a second when the door opens.

Jack: Sorry, love. You should say "occupied" next time one knocks.

Liz: Jack! (covers herself with her arms) I didn't hear you knock!

Jack: Makes one wonder where your mind really was then. (looks her up and down)

Liz: I'm not getting out with you in here, if that's why you're lingering.

Jack: I don't actually expect to see anything, Lizzie, darling. I'm quite content just imagining.

(Liz reaches across while managing to stay covered and gets her sword and points it at him)

Liz: Out, Jack, or you'll have no reason to imagine anything like that again. (but she smiles as she says it, secretly pleased) I LOVE IT!! and this thread...... MAKE MORE!! i need a good laugh.

Originally posted by johnnyforever
I LOVE IT!! and this thread...... MAKE MORE!! i need a good laugh. yeah add some more little scenes I or We want some uplifting in the J/E world!

going for some brownie points.... Yall are really good too

Originally posted by Swann&Sparrow
Mmm. Love the idea of them swordfighting. Elizabeth should be angry at Jack and Will is watching them. He's about to tell the Unuich that Elizabeth kissed him (cause he doesn't know that Will saw them already).

So Elizabeth fights him into his cabin, and they do a sort of fight and tango. You know, he twirls her infront of him and presses himself to her back, his sword at her throat. And he whispers something naughty about a bed, her and him. Then we see her eyes flash to Jack's cot.

Then maybe they get to the bough and he dips her half over the railing and we get a teaser kiss...or a real one...that would be awsome.

Yum.
oh i like that idea, and will watching and he just cant help but notice the chemistry between them. and he gets upset or hurt or whatever u want to call it, and then jack and liz get so caught up in there little fight of love that they forget themselves and kiss and nice big kiss, the kinda kiss you want to tell ur grandchildren about, you know? lol and will is there watching the whole time! i would love it and scream and laugh and most likely get thrown out of the theater <3

i know. its like, i am almost afraid if they take sparrabeth any further than where it already is, the theatres would melt from the hotness and everyone would have heart palpitations.

is the world ready to usher in a new era of relationship rules? i just dont know....

Fanfics take so long, I'm having a hard enough time with the sequels we all wrote together. Please go to fanfiction.net and read our stories. They're pretty hot.


You know what else would be cool? Jack taking Liz sailing on a real little boat, like a two seater and teach her to sail. He could get behind her and work the sail with her.

Liz: Like this?
Jack: No, you got to put your self into it. Observe (does it)
Liz: What a helpful demonstration (sarcasm)
Jack: Fine. Over here. (Liz goes to him and he's behind her and puts her arms over his) Like so.
Liz: Yes, that's better.
Jack: Gives you a more satisfied feeling, does it? (yes, he's aware he did innuendo)
Liz: And a big burst of confidence (she can dish it out too)
(they lock eyes)

AWWW I liked it, how do I look up your stories? are they posted randomly or can you do a search on them?

I Love this thread....please keep writing fantasies they are just great!!!

"AWWW I liked it, how do I look up your stories? are they posted randomly or can you do a search on them?"--------Misty

Go to fanfiction.net and click "search." Search by pen name and type in willofthewisp and it should list all the stuff I've posted. But the POTC ones aren't just me. They're the work of Kate, lovethemtigers, sailorleo, captainjacky, and several other people.

(meal time on the Black Pearl, shortly after "persuade me."

Jack: You'll have to eat up, Lizzie, if you're going to help dig for a chest.
Liz: (perks up) You'd have me go with you?
Jack: Of course (passes her some bread) Do eat up. Bad enough you're in a shirt too big for you already...
Liz: (teasing) Are you calling me fat, Captain Sparrow?
Jack (wisely says nothing, but starts eating)
Liz: Jack!
Jack: What's that, love? Ought to take out that compass, hadn't you? Best see if we're still in the right direction.
(Liz takes it out, but it points to him. She doesn't yet attribute this to anything)
Liz: It looks like we're still going the right way. Jack, I have to envy you. I was on this ship only as a captive, but still I wanted it for myself. Then the freedom you talked about... (trails off as she eats)
(Jack can't take his eyes off her)
Jack: Yes, well, ahem. That was all before someone decided to ruin me day with parting me from me rum, eh?
Liz (laughs): And it worked to everyone's benefit.
Jack: Except you don't have a ship for yourself.
Liz: A what? You know...
Jack: Know what? Love, when this is all over, I could give you a companion ship to the Pearl. She could use a friend, darling. And we could sail all over, taking up whatever plunder we so wanted. And I would be sure to address you as Captain Lizzie or Elizabeth or whatever you wanted.
(Liz looks awfully tempted)
Liz (quitely): Thank you. (knows she has to decline)
Jack: (knows she'll decline but doesn't want to hear her say it) Well, then there is the business of finding a chest first, isn't there?

Please continue, don't leave us like this..

OMGSH that was incredible... the scary thing is that i could see that scene being filmed... it was AWESOME... it felt SOOO real!

Aw, I'm so glad you like it! Picking up where I left off...

Liz: Yes, the chest (goes back to eating, notices she's hungrier than she thought she was) Do you usually eat alone?
Jack: Very rarely do I eat alone! I am shocked and appalled you assume I have no friends.
Liz: (with her mouth full of food) My apologies (swallows) Oh, I'm so sorry. That was rude.
Jack: Not at all, love. I like to see a woman with plenty in her mouth (waits for her to get it. She doesn't. He shrugs)
Liz: When we find this chest, does that mean we'll do battle with this Davy Jones?
Jack: You can if you like. I'd much rather call off his beastie and live happily ever after.
Liz: Oh, only a pirate's death will do for you, Jack.
(both go silent. A sense of doom enters the ship galley)
Jack: Finish your meal, Lizzie.
(Liz finishes)
Liz: Thank you. Most refreshing. And thank you for offering your cabin.
Jack: Either that or sleeping next to inebriated Mr. Gibbs. It would give you a laugh for the first five minutes and then I think you would just want to plunge yourself into the ocean.
(Liz laughs)
Liz: Then I'm sure I can manage being in the infamous Jack Sparrow's room for a night.
Jack: Captain and cabin, dearie. Do you fancy yourself too old for a good night kiss?
(Liz looks at him shocked. Her mouth drops open)
Liz: Maybe 15 years ago....
Jack: 15 years ago would have been just plain disturbing (pulls her in and locks eyes with her, but only kisses the top of her head) Get some rest.
(Liz is speechless, and leaves to Jack's cabin.)

END SCENE

awww that was soo sweet

Please, someone else do one. I'd like to read others' ideas.

God I wish I could write as good as you guys, but God didn't gave me that privilege. . I don't even know how to make DMC bloopers, I stunk big time. I could take days to write a line.

I would like too see a little mr and ms smith action were they're beating the hell out of each other then they start makeing out!!!!!

I would like to see them sword fight, then Jack takes away her sword, pushes her to the floor, he gets down and starts kissing her. Liz slaps him, but then she grabbs him and kisses him.

delete sorry

Originally posted by willofthewisp
Aw, I'm so glad you like it! Picking up where I left off...

Liz: Yes, the chest (goes back to eating, notices she's hungrier than she thought she was) Do you usually eat alone?
Jack: Very rarely do I eat alone! I am shocked and appalled you assume I have no friends.
Liz: (with her mouth full of food) My apologies (swallows) Oh, I'm so sorry. That was rude.
Jack: Not at all, love. I like to see a woman with plenty in her mouth (waits for her to get it. She doesn't. He shrugs)
Liz: When we find this chest, does that mean we'll do battle with this Davy Jones?
Jack: You can if you like. I'd much rather call off his beastie and live happily ever after.
Liz: Oh, only a pirate's death will do for you, Jack.
(both go silent. A sense of doom enters the ship galley)
Jack: Finish your meal, Lizzie.
(Liz finishes)
Liz: Thank you. Most refreshing. And thank you for offering your cabin.
Jack: Either that or sleeping next to inebriated Mr. Gibbs. It would give you a laugh for the first five minutes and then I think you would just want to plunge yourself into the ocean.
(Liz laughs)
Liz: Then I'm sure I can manage being in the infamous Jack Sparrow's room for a night.
Jack: Captain and cabin, dearie. Do you fancy yourself too old for a good night kiss?
(Liz looks at him shocked. Her mouth drops open)
Liz: Maybe 15 years ago....
Jack: 15 years ago would have been just plain disturbing (pulls her in and locks eyes with her, but only kisses the top of her head) Get some rest.
(Liz is speechless, and leaves to Jack's cabin.)

END SCENE

Willo....have i told u how much i love ur stories....wel in case i havent...I LOVE UR STORIES!! I seriously get lost in them...Gosh so much romance I LOVE IT PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!

Originally posted by Mistypirate
I would like to see them sword fight, then Jack takes away her sword, pushes her to the floor, he gets down and starts kissing her. Liz slaps him, but then she grabbs him and kisses him.

That would be HOT!!!

Originally posted by PIRATES=SEX
I would like too see a little mr and ms smith action were they're beating the hell out of each other then they start makeing out!!!!!

That would be incredibly hot as well....LoL!!!

Aw, I really like reading other people's stuff. Oh well. I'll leave this one a cliffhanger and we'll go from there.

(Jack and Liz once again stuck on an island)
Jack: Another fine mess you've gotten me into.
Liz: Me? I drew my sword long before you suggested, 'let's negotiate.'
Jack: And it might have worked....had not their backup come or their cannons fire or any such advantage.
Liz: Now Will will be looking for us. (looks wistfully out at the sea)
Jack: You mean after leaving his dearest, smartest, most closest friend in the entire world to die the whelp still wants you to be Mrs. Whelp? (this is a sarcastic line)
Liz: Jack! Getting us stranded here is one thing, but I will not have you demean Will this way. He and I......He and I.
Jack: After that usually comes "us."
Liz: Leave me alone! (walks to other side of the island)

oooo intense! me likes

OOOOO I LiKe iT!!!

this thread was really good, but it kinda died................

Ooh, Jack handcuffing her for a change. That was pretty hot!

thank you glad you liked it

me likes!

I really like it, too. More! More (with unabetting applause)!

that was really good!!

anything with Jack and liz kissing i luv! that was amazing!

i was allowed to get on here for a little while, so i decided to post a couple of these i did on the ride up here im gonna ressurect the thread again, lol.

After being rescued from purgatory and getting back on the pearl, it's night and everyone is below deck except for jack.
He's standing by the railing humming the song liz taught him, looking out to the dark horizon.
Liz comes up behind him and slips her arms around him. He looks down and sees a ring on her finger.
Liz: I missed you
Jack turns around and grabs her hands. He studies the ring for a moment.
Jack: It shows luv.
Liz: Jack, I had to...
They stand in silence for a long while holding hands, heads down.
Jack: I s'pose we'll never get our marriage then, eh?
Liz(grinning): That depends.
Jack: And why would that be?
Liz: Well, you did prove me wrong of all except one thing, didn't you?
Jack looks confused for a moment, then smiles as it clicks.
Jack: How do you propose I go about proving this then?
Liz: I can think of a few ways.
Jack: Sorry, but last time i checked, pirate ships don't usually have baths
Liz giggles and reaches down to take his shirt off.
Liz: Yes, but last time I checked, we could always pretend...

yes, this is pg-13, i guess your imaginations will just have to take it from there...lol

Hot!

OMG!! I LOVE THAT! VERY IN CHARACTER

And here's the second one...which is kinda a take on the a dance scene that everyone mentioned, but no one ever did...i dont think......

Jack stands below deck, staring at his reflection. He's bathed, and dressed in clen, if not somewhat dressy clothes...but definately not pirate.
He sighs, and walks into the cool night air.
Everyone should be asleep, but Liz is standing by the front of the ship, just like he knew she would be.
He stands beside her, grabs her hand, and kisses it.
Liz: Wow, Jack, you look so...
She trails off, lost for words.
Jack: Hygenic?
Liz: Definately.
Jack smiles nad holds out his hand, which she takes.
He pulls her close, and she lays her head on his chest.
They begin to dance, slowly at first, but gradually speeding up.
He twirls her around. When they circle back together, their eyes meet for a moment.
They pause, lips almost touching, then he dips her over the railing.
He pulls her up again, and they dance their way around the ship.
Finally, they end up back where tehy started.
Both out of breath, they stop and slowly slip away from each other.
Liz leans back against the rail, breathing deeply and staring at Jack.
Liz: Since when do you dance?
Jack: Amazing the things you pick up terrorizing the Spanish Main, luv.
Liz nods, but still looks curious.
Jack: And are there any hidden talents you'd like to share, now that we're coming clean?
She raises her eyebrows, then smiles.
Liz: Nothing new I can think of...but there is one thing we never got to finish.
She leans forward, wraps her arms around Jacks neck, and begins to kiss him.
He pulls away, and she looks disappointed.
Jack: Just one condition.
Liz: Anything.
Jack: Don't tell anyone I can dance.
Liz smiles and pulls him in again, kissing him even more heatedly than before.

and these prove how boring it is to sit in a car with your mother and brother for 2 days straight...lol

someone else should do some of these....its not as much fun to read your own...lol...please?

Originally posted by -savvychick-
And here's the second one...which is kinda a take on the a dance scene that everyone mentioned, but no one ever did...i dont think......

Jack stands below deck, staring at his reflection. He's bathed, and dressed in clen, if not somewhat dressy clothes...but definately not pirate.
He sighs, and walks into the cool night air.
Everyone should be asleep, but Liz is standing by the front of the ship, just like he knew she would be.
He stands beside her, grabs her hand, and kisses it.
Liz: Wow, Jack, you look so...
She trails off, lost for words.
Jack: Hygenic?
Liz: Definately.
Jack smiles nad holds out his hand, which she takes.
He pulls her close, and she lays her head on his chest.
They begin to dance, slowly at first, but gradually speeding up.
He twirls her around. When they circle back together, their eyes meet for a moment.
They pause, lips almost touching, then he dips her over the railing.
He pulls her up again, and they dance their way around the ship.
Finally, they end up back where tehy started.
Both out of breath, they stop and slowly slip away from each other.
Liz leans back against the rail, breathing deeply and staring at Jack.
Liz: Since when do you dance?
Jack: Amazing the things you pick up terrorizing the Spanish Main, luv.
Liz nods, but still looks curious.
Jack: And are there any hidden talents you'd like to share, now that we're coming clean?
She raises her eyebrows, then smiles.
Liz: Nothing new I can think of...but there is one thing we never got to finish.
She leans forward, wraps her arms around Jacks neck, and begins to kiss him.
He pulls away, and she looks disappointed.
Jack: Just one condition.
Liz: Anything.
Jack: Don't tell anyone I can dance.
Liz smiles and pulls him in again, kissing him even more heatedly than before.

and these prove how boring it is to sit in a car with your mother and brother for 2 days straight...lol

No savvychick....u dont understand how good u are!!! I was so captured in the moment that my eyes teared up....maybe cause we'll probably never really get a scene like this....BUT IT WAS STILL BEAUTIFUL....STANDING OVATION ONCE AGAIN!!! BRAVO!!!

Thank you i still say you guys are being nice tho

even so, i like doing them, so im workin on another one, but i probably wont get to post it til' tomorrow

Originally posted by -savvychick-
Thank you i still say you guys are being nice tho

even so, i like doing them, so im workin on another one, but i probably wont get to post it til' tomorrow

Why i want to read it NOW!! Im addicted to these...they are just wonderful!!

And no we are not just being nice....u really are good!!!

ok, i'm working on this other one, but im having trouble getting started...

oh, wait, how bout like, a sword fight scene...did someone do one of those already?

o well, if they did i'll do another...and i might be able to post it tonight...

Originally posted by -savvychick-
ok, i'm working on this other one, but im having trouble getting started...

oh, wait, how bout like, a sword fight scene...did someone do one of those already?

o well, if they did i'll do another...and i might be able to post it tonight...

i dont think anyones done a sword fight scene....try it....that sounds great!!!

k, im almost done

Originally posted by -savvychick-
k, im almost done

YAY!!!

*jaw drop*
These are awsome!
I'm a horrible writer, so I'm just reading.
Love 'em all so far!

alright, here it is

Liz and Jack are standing in his cabin, hovering over some maps.
Liz: If we take the east channel, we'll get there faster.
Jack: But the east is a major pirating route, the west is a little longer, but much safer. I do s'pose you want to get there in one piece, right?
Liz: Yes, but i think I can handle it Jack.
He raises his eyebrows.
Jack: Prove it.
Liz shakes her head and looks back at the maps
Jack: Well?
Liz: No
Jack takes out his sword and points it at her back.
Jack: Yes.
Liz is quiet for a moment, then grabs her sword and turns to face him.
They stand for a moment, swords crossed and ready to fight.
Liz makes the first move. She dips down, turns around Jack, and cuts a whole in the side of his pants in the process. He turns to meet her, looking at the tear she made.
Jack: So thats how you want to play, is it?
In response, Liz lunges forward, but this time Jack counters her, ripping her shirt.
They twirl and jab at each other, gasping for breath.
In no time they're standing half naked, barely breathing in the middle of Jack's cabin.
Liz: Satisfied?
Jack: Not nearly as much as I'd like to be.
Liz: I'm not entirely sure I'm ready for that kind of talk Captain Sparrow.
Jack drops his sword and takes a step toward her.
Jack: Oh, I think you are.
Liz drops her sword too, and closes the distance between them.
Jack leans down and kisses her, driving her back against the wall.
Liz's hands begin to wander to his bare chest, and he slips the remaints of her shirt down off her shoulders.
Jack leans back to take a breath.
Liz: Jack...we can't
Jack: Why not? We've come this far already havent we?
Liz seems to consider this, shrugs, and they resume their 'kiss'.

hope you enjoyed it damn these pg-13 restraints...but i s'pose they're appropriate, seeing as im just 13 myself...if my mom knew i was writing these....omg, i would be in soooo much trouble...lol

^^ LOVE UR SIGGY J&E SHIPPER...are u new?....well if u are WELCOME ABOARD!!!!

if anyone else has any new ideas for one of these, let me know, b/c i like doing these, they're really fun

Originally posted by -savvychick-
alright, here it is

Liz and Jack are standing in his cabin, hovering over some maps.
Liz: If we take the east channel, we'll get there faster.
Jack: But the east is a major pirating route, the west is a little longer, but much safer. I do s'pose you want to get there in one piece, right?
Liz: Yes, but i think I can handle it Jack.
He raises his eyebrows.
Jack: Prove it.
Liz shakes her head and looks back at the maps
Jack: Well?
Liz: No
Jack takes out his sword and points it at her back.
Jack: Yes.
Liz is quiet for a moment, then grabs her sword and turns to face him.
They stand for a moment, swords crossed and ready to fight.
Liz makes the first move. She dips down, turns around Jack, and cuts a whole in the side of his pants in the process. He turns to meet her, looking at the tear she made.
Jack: So thats how you want to play, is it?
In response, Liz lunges forward, but this time Jack counters her, ripping her shirt.
They twirl and jab at each other, gasping for breath.
In no time they're standing half naked, barely breathing in the middle of Jack's cabin.
Liz: Satisfied?
Jack: Not nearly as much as I'd like to be.
Liz: I'm not entirely sure I'm ready for that kind of talk Captain Sparrow.
Jack drops his sword and takes a step toward her.
Jack: Oh, I think you are.
Liz drops her sword too, and closes the distance between them.
Jack leans down and kisses her, driving her back against the wall.
Liz's hands begin to wander to his bare chest, and he slips the remaints of her shirt down off her shoulders.
Jack leans back to take a breath.
Liz: Jack...we can't
Jack: Why not? We've come this far already havent we?
Liz seems to consider this, shrugs, and they resume their 'kiss'.

hope you enjoyed it damn these pg-13 restraints...but i s'pose they're appropriate, seeing as im just 13 myself...if my mom knew i was writing these....omg, i would be in soooo much trouble...lol

SHUT UP ur 13? OMG U freaking write better than me and im 20!!! LOL!!

OMG....wow ur gonna grow up to WIN THE NOBLE PEACE PRIZE for Literature...cause u'll probably write ur own book!!!

But seriously ur mom would probably wouldnt kill u because she'd be to impressed with u!! GOOD STUFF....write more when u can...i LOVE THESE!!!

Hmmmm IDEAS.....more dancing ones....I LOVE DANCE....its the sexiest way to get to someones heart....that and through the eyes!!!

Damn she is good. That was a really good writing. You have potential seriously.

thank you

i wanna be either a writer or an actress when i grow up(if i ever do), so i guess these are good practice...lol

im thinkin about writing a fan-fic too...so i'll post it if i ever get around to it

Originally posted by PirateDiva
^^ LOVE UR SIGGY J&E SHIPPER...are u new?....well if u are WELCOME ABOARD!!!!
Yeah, I'm new.
I've lurked around for about 2 weeks, but finally decided to say something. ^^
Thank you!

yes, welcome...and ur siggy is really kool J&E shipper

Originally posted by -savvychick-
yes, welcome...and ur siggy is really kool J&E shipper
Thank you. (:

Your sig is awesome Love it.

i need to get me a siggy...do u need a special program or anything to get or make one or w/e?

i do believe i have a tad bit of a writers block...does anyone have any other ideas that i could do?

like i said, i was gonna start a fan-fic type thing, but i havent gotten very far, just thought i'd post what i do have, and get some feedback on it...so here it is

it kinda takes place after jack was rescued

Sitting in his cabin, Jack runs his fingers over hte compass, seemingly happy to be back.
Liz enters and comes up beside him, but he doesnt seem to notice.
Liz: We need to dock somewhere soon. The rums almost gone, and we've had to limit food rations.
He turns to her as though suprised
Jack: What about the fish?
Liz: What?
Jack: Fish! We're on a bloody ship in the middle of the bloody ocean. Surely one of the men is talented enough to catch us something!
Liz: But the rum. You may survive Captain Sparrow, but the rest of the crew...heaven forbid if they ever became sober. I mean, you maybe able to breath without choking on that nasty stench for once.
Jack: Well, we can't let that happen, now can we? We'll dock as soon as possible Eli--(he glances at her) Miss Swann.
Liz seems taken back at the use of her proper name, but doesnt comment. They stand in silence for a bit, then Liz starts to walk away.
Jack grabs her hand.
Jack: Why did you come after me? If you didn't miss me...what was the point?
Liz looks down and shakes her head.
Liz: What was I supposed to say? Was I supposed to confess my love for you? Tell you I couldn't live without you? That I need you? Tell Will that it was over? Leave him and finish that kiss right then and there? With everyone watching?
By now she's in tears, her voice steadily getting louder, until she's yelling.
Jack reaches out, as if to run his fingers across her cheek, but he stops himself barely an inch away from her face, and pulls it back.
Jack: No......
He holds her gaze for a breif second, then releases her hand, looking away.
Liz: Jack....You're just going to make this harder then it already is, aren't you?
He walks back over to the table where he was sitting again
Jack: It goes both ways, luv.
There's silence for what seems like eternity, then Jack breaks it, his voice rough and more like the old him.
Jack: So I s'pose we'll be stopping Tortuga then. Savvy?
Liz nods her head and walks out, eyes still bloodshot from crying, a few left over tears still clinging to her cheeks.
On the way out of his cabin, she nearly knocks Will over with the door.
Will: Liz, what's the matter?
He tries to grab her hand, make her stop, but she shakes free and keeps walking.
Will gets a dark look on his face, but doesnt go after her. Instead, he continues on into Jacks cabin.
Jack: No matter how many times I say it, no one ever remembers to knock.
Will: Yes, well, you've got bigger problems. The crew wants me to tell you tha--
Jack interrupts, clearly eager to be alone
Jack: Yes, I know, Elizabeth already told me. We need more rum and food. We're going to dock in Tortuga, savvy? Now if you dont mind...
He makes a gesture at the door, adn looks back down at the compass.
Will: Yes, i do mind. Thats not what I came to discuss Jack.
Jack: Oh, well then...it can't wait?
Will: No
Jack sighs and glances around.
Jack: Make it quick.
He puts his feet up on the table and leans back.
Will: Ok, well, the crew wants to know if--
He is cut off again as the boat crashes into something, and he's thrown off balance.
Jack runs out onto the deck, and peers over the edge, but he doesn't need to to know what happened.
Jack: How the hell did we manage to bump into an island?!? Wasn't anyone watching the ship?!?
Will emerges on the deck, and looks amazed at what happened. Liz appears after him.
Liz: We're here because I wanted us here.
Will: But...why?
Liz: Because Jack and I have some unfinished buisness to take care of. We're going to go ashore, alone, and we're not coming back until it's settled.
She glances at Will.
Liz: Got it?
Everyone nods their heads, afraid to argue with her in this mood. Everyone that is, except for Will.
Will: No! You're not going out there alone with him.
He glares at Jack, and if looks could kill, this one would have done some serious damage.
Liz reaches behind her, adn pulls out Jacks sword, pointing it at Will.
Liz: Yes I am. And you're all to stay on this ship until we return.
Crew: Aye!
Will: But--
Liz cuts him off again
Will: Aye.

Awesome post. I liked it a lot, specially the part where Liz pulls out the sword and points it at Will

thanks

im working on more...but im kinda stuck, so it might take a while

oooh finish it please!!! that was good!!

That was really good! I loved it! Can't wait to read more...

Originally posted by -savvychick-
i need to get me a siggy...do u need a special program or anything to get or make one or w/e?
Well, you could use Paint (a default program on most computers), but to make mine, I used Jasc Animation Shop 3. I bought mine, but you could google it, and get a 30 day free trial.

Very interesting.

Hmm, how about this one? It is between when Liz gets Jack to start drinking on the island and when they're both singing around their fire.


Jack: You need a little more than that, love. Like this (chugs a bottle. Liz takes a small swig)
Liz: You're absolutely right, Captain Sparrow (pretends to chug).
Jack: Now sing it again, darling. Belt it right out (gestures are getting a little more exaggerated)
Liz (laughing): Yo ho, yo ho, a pirate's life for me.
We pillage plunder, we rifle and loot.
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We kidnap and ravage and don't give a hoot.
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.

Jack: I know this part coming! Yo ho, yo ho, a pirate's life for me!
Liz: That's it! You should reward yourself (hands him another bottle)

Instead of drinking it, Jack wraps his arms around her and begins whirling her around. Yeah, he's tipsy, but not quite drunk yet.

Jack: Again, love! Same verse with that gorgeous voice.
Liz: Captain Sparrow!
Jack: Jack. It must always be Jack. Now sing!
Liz: Yo ho, yo ho, a pirate's life for me.
We pillage plunder, we rifle and loot.
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We kidnap and ravage and don't give a hoot.
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.

Jack: Onto the chorus! (picks her up like a bride over the threshold and runs into the surf with her)
Liz: You do seem to like this song!
Jack (takes a swig): I adore it! But I have to know how it sounds when I'm in the water. So again.
Liz: Again? (Jack moves in closer. We can tell she's getting more and more excited by him)
Jack: Again, love. Again! (leans in to kiss her, but she dodges)
Liz: All right, one more time. But out of the water.

Please continue

omg...i luved it

thats funny, cuz the part im writing of the fanfic i had up there has that part of the song in it...lol

Continue? I'll try, but I was planning on it going straight into the movie.

Jack: In the water, out of the water. (takes a long drink. He's not drunk yet, but he's right on the edge)
Liz: We should probably build a fire (remembers she's supposed to be drunk so she giggles)
Jack: That, darling, is the most infectious giggle I've ever herad. You will sit (staggers over to her and gently presses on her shoulders so she'll sit) and I will build a fire.
(has gathered fuel and is now lighting a spark. Liz starts pretending to fall over herself while sitting)
Jack: Watch yourself, love.
Liz: I'm sorry, Jack! (laughs) I'm anxious to sing! When is that going to be a fire?
Jack: When it bloody well wants to (pulls her over to it) You see that spark there? (sees she has a bottle, takes it from her) That little spark is all it needs for a giant fire to form and last for who knows how long.
(Liz is clearly attracted to this "poetry."
Liz: (upping the ante) Say that again, but slower (purses her lips)
Jack: I'd rather sing (goes behind her and holds her from behind, her arms against her tiny waist. We see her breathe a little more shallow)
Liz: Ahem, yo ho, yo ho a pirate's life for me
(Jack is totally wasted by now. Now it cuts into the movie where they are singing)
Jack: I love this song!

lol, me likies

Originally posted by -savvychick-
like i said, i was gonna start a fan-fic type thing, but i havent gotten very far, just thought i'd post what i do have, and get some feedback on it...so here it is

it kinda takes place after jack was rescued

Sitting in his cabin, Jack runs his fingers over hte compass, seemingly happy to be back.
Liz enters and comes up beside him, but he doesnt seem to notice.
Liz: We need to dock somewhere soon. The rums almost gone, and we've had to limit food rations.
He turns to her as though suprised
Jack: What about the fish?
Liz: What?
Jack: Fish! We're on a bloody ship in the middle of the bloody ocean. Surely one of the men is talented enough to catch us something!
Liz: But the rum. You may survive Captain Sparrow, but the rest of the crew...heaven forbid if they ever became sober. I mean, you maybe able to breath without choking on that nasty stench for once.
Jack: Well, we can't let that happen, now can we? We'll dock as soon as possible Eli--(he glances at her) Miss Swann.
Liz seems taken back at the use of her proper name, but doesnt comment. They stand in silence for a bit, then Liz starts to walk away.
Jack grabs her hand.
Jack: Why did you come after me? If you didn't miss me...what was the point?
Liz looks down and shakes her head.
Liz: What was I supposed to say? Was I supposed to confess my love for you? Tell you I couldn't live without you? That I need you? Tell Will that it was over? Leave him and finish that kiss right then and there? With everyone watching?
By now she's in tears, her voice steadily getting louder, until she's yelling.
Jack reaches out, as if to run his fingers across her cheek, but he stops himself barely an inch away from her face, and pulls it back.
Jack: No......
He holds her gaze for a breif second, then releases her hand, looking away.
Liz: Jack....You're just going to make this harder then it already is, aren't you?
He walks back over to the table where he was sitting again
Jack: It goes both ways, luv.
There's silence for what seems like eternity, then Jack breaks it, his voice rough and more like the old him.
Jack: So I s'pose we'll be stopping Tortuga then. Savvy?
Liz nods her head and walks out, eyes still bloodshot from crying, a few left over tears still clinging to her cheeks.
On the way out of his cabin, she nearly knocks Will over with the door.
Will: Liz, what's the matter?
He tries to grab her hand, make her stop, but she shakes free and keeps walking.
Will gets a dark look on his face, but doesnt go after her. Instead, he continues on into Jacks cabin.
Jack: No matter how many times I say it, no one ever remembers to knock.
Will: Yes, well, you've got bigger problems. The crew wants me to tell you tha--
Jack interrupts, clearly eager to be alone
Jack: Yes, I know, Elizabeth already told me. We need more rum and food. We're going to dock in Tortuga, savvy? Now if you dont mind...
He makes a gesture at the door, adn looks back down at the compass.
Will: Yes, i do mind. Thats not what I came to discuss Jack.
Jack: Oh, well then...it can't wait?
Will: No
Jack sighs and glances around.
Jack: Make it quick.
He puts his feet up on the table and leans back.
Will: Ok, well, the crew wants to know if--
He is cut off again as the boat crashes into something, and he's thrown off balance.
Jack runs out onto the deck, and peers over the edge, but he doesn't need to to know what happened.
Jack: How the hell did we manage to bump into an island?!? Wasn't anyone watching the ship?!?
Will emerges on the deck, and looks amazed at what happened. Liz appears after him.
Liz: We're here because I wanted us here.
Will: But...why?
Liz: Because Jack and I have some unfinished buisness to take care of. We're going to go ashore, alone, and we're not coming back until it's settled.
She glances at Will.
Liz: Got it?
Everyone nods their heads, afraid to argue with her in this mood. Everyone that is, except for Will.
Will: No! You're not going out there alone with him.
He glares at Jack, and if looks could kill, this one would have done some serious damage.
Liz reaches behind her, adn pulls out Jacks sword, pointing it at Will.
Liz: Yes I am. And you're all to stay on this ship until we return.
Crew: Aye!
Will: But--
Liz cuts him off again
Will: Aye.


holy crap that was the hottest flipping thing EVER. oh my GOsH. PLEASE CONTINUE because i am on the edge of my seat to see what happens on that island...... @!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks

im workin on it...but it still might not be up until tomorrow

OOOOO more goodiess!! you too, Willo!!! MORE!

aww! those r cute!

yeah i read it over on the other thread but glad u posted here!

lol i like that I aint had any dreams.... wat would be really cool is when the movie comes out and thast in there you'll be proud

lol, yeah!!

it was my first dream ever about pirates...weird
and the weird thing was i was so excited because i was watching it before it even came out! so none of you had seen it and i was so excited to come back and tell you guys about it! lol

omfg I never posted here

thats usually what happened with me i just found out my cuz who lives in pittsbourgh (spellin') saw DMC in MAY!!!! she goes to CGI scool and they had to analyze how good the ppl made Davy jones and i said r u gunna get to see the third one and she said prolly' but.. we were sorta had to sign a contract that said we wouldn't tell or Disney could sue us.. that shocked me so she aint seen it yet but she prolly' will and i said you have to tell me what happens and she was all no you see we have a war b/c she was into x-men and i sa it b4 it came to theaters b/c of my dad but i wouldn't tell her so we fight alot but i also found out that she is moving to Cali therefore wont see it but she's going to the premire so im really mad and rambling and.... WOW this is a long post.. maybe i shouldn't post.. oh well who cares skip it if you dont like it... well thats at the end of the story so maybe i should.. nevermind *post*

Originally posted by Chiki Mina
omfg I never posted here well you did now... welcome!

Originally posted by a-k-a-amber
thats usually what happened with me i just found out my cuz who lives in pittsbourgh (spellin') saw DMC in MAY!!!! she goes to CGI scool and they had to analyze how good the ppl made Davy jones and i said r u gunna get to see the third one and she said prolly' but.. we were sorta had to sign a contract that said we wouldn't tell or Disney could sue us.. that shocked me so she aint seen it yet but she prolly' will and i said you have to tell me what happens and she was all no you see we have a war b/c she was into x-men and i sa it b4 it came to theaters b/c of my dad but i wouldn't tell her so we fight alot but i also found out that she is moving to Cali therefore wont see it but she's going to the premire so im really mad and rambling and.... WOW this is a long post.. maybe i shouldn't post.. oh well who cares skip it if you dont like it... well thats at the end of the story so maybe i should.. nevermind *post*

oh yeah i was taking a tour of USC and they said that in their film classes they get to see alot of big movies before they come out in theaters, and the only thing i could think about was pirates-lol

ok, heres the second part of the fan-fic thingy...or w/e u wanna call it...that i started back there...and the third part should be up in a bit

Jack and Liz are in a rowboat, heading around the island.
Jack: Perchance, may I ask the nature of this little venture of yours?
She sighs and turns her gaze from the island to him.
Liz: You don't realize what island this is, do you?
Jack: Sorry luv, but there are many islands strewn through out the Caribbean, many of which look remarkably the same after a while.
Liz: Oh well, you'll remember soon enough...
Jack eyes her curiously, but doesnt comment
Jack: As long as there are no cannibles.....
They continue rowing, and soon they reach the other side of the island.
They pull the boat ashore, and Liz begins walking towards the trees.
Jack follows.
Liz: Now do you recall which island this is?
Jack looks around
Jack: Nothing comes to mind.
Liz sighs, sits down, and begins to sing, barely above a whisper.
Liz: Yo ho, yo ho, a pirates life for me...
Jack looks at ehr and joins in.
Both: We pilage we plunder we rifle and loot, drink up me 'earties yo ho, we kidnap we ravenge adn dont give a hoot, drink up me 'earties yo ho, yo ho, yo ho, a pirates life for me..
Jack walks forward and sits beside her
Jack: why'd you bring me back here?
Liz: This is where it all began, isnt it? Classic good girl meetes bad boy(she smiles)So determined to change him, she doesnt think of what might happen to her in the process(her smile falters)You've changed me Jack, for better or for worse, i cant yet tell, but it happened, and im just going to have to learn to live with it...
They sit in silence, watching the waves rise and fall against the sand, creeping slowly upward until it touches their toes. As the moon rises, it gets colder, but they dont move.
Jack feels a soft thump on his shoulder, and realizes that Liz has fallen asleep beside him. He picks her up, and carries her to the treeline, laying her down in the sand. He clears a spot for himself, and leans against a tree, watching her chest rise and fall with her breathing, slowly being coaxed to sleep himself.

ok, that part was kind've boring, but the next part gets more exciting...i promise...so bare with me herelol

Awesome list and great scene, surfchik.

kay! more post soon!

Originally posted by -savvychick-
ok, heres the second part of the fan-fic thingy...or w/e u wanna call it...that i started back there...and the third part should be up in a bit

Jack and Liz are in a rowboat, heading around the island.
Jack: Perchance, may I ask the nature of this little venture of yours?
She sighs and turns her gaze from the island to him.
Liz: You don't realize what island this is, do you?
Jack: Sorry luv, but there are many islands strewn through out the Caribbean, many of which look remarkably the same after a while.
Liz: Oh well, you'll remember soon enough...
Jack eyes her curiously, but doesnt comment
Jack: As long as there are no cannibles.....
They continue rowing, and soon they reach the other side of the island.
They pull the boat ashore, and Liz begins walking towards the trees.
Jack follows.
Liz: Now do you recall which island this is?
Jack looks around
Jack: Nothing comes to mind.
Liz sighs, sits down, and begins to sing, barely above a whisper.
Liz: Yo ho, yo ho, a pirates life for me...
Jack looks at ehr and joins in.
Both: We pilage we plunder we rifle and loot, drink up me 'earties yo ho, we kidnap we ravenge adn dont give a hoot, drink up me 'earties yo ho, yo ho, yo ho, a pirates life for me..
Jack walks forward and sits beside her
Jack: why'd you bring me back here?
Liz: This is where it all began, isnt it? Classic good girl meetes bad boy(she smiles)So determined to change him, she doesnt think of what might happen to her in the process(her smile falters)You've changed me Jack, for better or for worse, i cant yet tell, but it happened, and im just going to have to learn to live with it...
They sit in silence, watching the waves rise and fall against the sand, creeping slowly upward until it touches their toes. As the moon rises, it gets colder, but they dont move.
Jack feels a soft thump on his shoulder, and realizes that Liz has fallen asleep beside him. He picks her up, and carries her to the treeline, laying her down in the sand. He clears a spot for himself, and leans against a tree, watching her chest rise and fall with her breathing, slowly being coaxed to sleep himself.

ok, that part was kind've boring, but the next part gets more exciting...i promise...so bare with me herelol

I cant wait!!!

savvychick i loved that!!!
that could be a real scene! i can really see that happening!!!

lol, thanx

i'm having a couple of technical problems with the 3rd scene(im stuck) so it may be a while on that one

thats okay-take your time

they come out better when you dont rush them

hmm... a pirate and a lady on an island together... now i wonder what they could do...

lol. anxiously awaiting the next one! take your time.

*gets a bcuket* hurrry im drooling to death!! lol

lmao...ummm...they may be up soon...trying to end the scene now

coolie!!

alright, im typing it up now

so this is where you disappeared too well hurry up i wanna read it!?!?!

When Jack wakes up in the morning, Liz has her head on his lap, curled up against him.
He sits there, just watching her, until a rustling in the trees wakes her up.
Liz scrambles to get up.
Jack runs his fingers through her hair to calm her down.
Jack: Shhh...(he looks around) Are you sure this is the right island?
Liz: Er, well, like you said, there are many of them..and they do all look rather the same...
He rolls his eyes
Jack: Lovely, darling.
He sighs and stands up, peering into the woods behind him.
Jack: We should probably get back to the pearl. Your fiance will be worried about you.
Liz: No. We still have some unfinished buisness to settle.
Jack looks interested.
Jack: Do we now?
Liz steps toward him.
Liz: Weren't you ever...curious?
He raises his eyebrows.
Jack: Arent I always luv?
Liz takes a step forward and giggles, but instead of kissing her, he picks her up and starts carrying her towards the ocean
She tries to hide her confusion, but fails
Liz: Umm...Jack? What are you doing?
Jack: Well, that depends, how do you feel about taking a little swim...naked?
Liz grins and he sets her down. They run towards the water, leaving a trail of clothes behind them.
Attention turns away from where Jack and Liz are trying to swim and kiss at the same time, and to a pair of eyes watching from behind some trees. They're unhuman; red and cat-like. But they get scared away by the noise of something stumbling through the island growth.
Suddenly, Will steps out
Will: Eliz-
He stops short as he catches sight of them at the same time they see him.
Liz: Oh my god...Will!

dundundun...lol...well, thats it for me for tonight...and im not gonna be on for a couple days, so i figured i'd leave you wonderinghehe

ahhhh
i LOVE IT!!!!

NOOO YOU CAN'T LEAVE!!!!
when do you come back?!?!

Originally posted by -savvychick-
When Jack wakes up in the morning, Liz has her head on his lap, curled up against him.
He sits there, just watching her, until a rustling in the trees wakes her up.
Liz scrambles to get up.
Jack runs his fingers through her hair to calm her down.
Jack: Shhh...(he looks around) Are you sure this is the right island?
Liz: Er, well, like you said, there are many of them..and they do all look rather the same...
He rolls his eyes
Jack: Lovely, darling.
He sighs and stands up, peering into the woods behind him.
Jack: We should probably get back to the pearl. Your fiance will be worried about you.
Liz: No. We still have some unfinished buisness to settle.
Jack looks interested.
Jack: Do we now?
Liz steps toward him.
Liz: Weren't you ever...curious?
He raises his eyebrows.
Jack: Arent I always luv?
Liz takes a step forward and giggles, but instead of kissing her, he picks her up and starts carrying her towards the ocean
She tries to hide her confusion, but fails
Liz: Umm...Jack? What are you doing?
Jack: Well, that depends, how do you feel about taking a little swim...naked?
Liz grins and he sets her down. They run towards the water, leaving a trail of clothes behind them.
Attention turns away from where Jack and Liz are trying to swim and kiss at the same time, and to a pair of eyes watching from behind some trees. They're unhuman; red and cat-like. But they get scared away by the noise of something stumbling through the island growth.
Suddenly, Will steps out
Will: Eliz-
He stops short as he catches sight of them at the same time they see him.
Liz: Oh my god...Will!

dundundun...lol...well, thats it for me for tonight...and im not gonna be on for a couple days, so i figured i'd leave you wonderinghehe


furiousfuriousYOUR EEEEEVVVVIIILLL!!!!! make us wait till tomorrow humph!

longer than tomorrow...i wont be back on til sunday after tonight

*evil laugh*

F***!!

*gets her orbit gum*

lmao...i bought some orbitz gum today...my mom told me i couldnt get it..but i was like...mom, i NEED it...so she bought it for me...it wasnt as hard as i thought it was gonna be tho...lol

lmao my mom has it

I just love the commercial. I turn the volume up everytime i see it lool.

i havent seen a orbit gum commercial in a long time..............
but i saw the one for DMC..which kinda makes up for it in a way...

I havent seen the commercial for the DMC dvd yet

^^ I Have Its Beautiful...NOW THATS A COMMERCIAL THAT I TURN UP THE VOLUME FOR!!!! SOOOOOO HOTT!!!

Originally posted by Chiki Mina
I havent seen the commercial for the DMC dvd yet

i haven't either

savvychick needs to continue....i loved her story!!

yeah!
me no likey cliffhangers

i sry

but that'll just make u luv it more when i write it

lol okay

Originally posted by PirateDiva
^^ I Have Its Beautiful...NOW THATS A COMMERCIAL THAT I TURN UP THE VOLUME FOR!!!! SOOOOOO HOTT!!!

So far the only commercial I turn up the volume is the Orbit Gum commercial loooool. And this other commercial with the Quacker otameal bars that has a bunch of kids in a play and a soccer game. Theres this weird crazy music I love.

savvy- you're back! now i command you to continue your story!!!
lol-jk, but it'd be nice

okay heres the scene that keeps running through my head...

jack and elizabeth on an island once again...

Jack:wanna play a game?
looks at jack suspiciously
Lizzy: what kind of game?
Jack: oh just a lil' bit of fun. I'll ask you a question and you say the first thing that pops into your head
Lizzysomewhat reluctantly) okay
Jack: gold or silver?
Lizzy: silver
Jack: rum or tea?
Lizzy: rum
Jack: land or sea?
Lizzy: sea
Jack: cat or dog?
Lizzy: cat
Jack: Will or Jack?
Lizzy: Jack....
realizing what she said..
Lizzy: i mean Will
Jack: (just nods his head) of course lizzy...

what do ya think?

That would be an awesome scene

haha, i love it,
but then after that i think that liz would get really mad at him for tricking her

u know i think she prolly would get mad... thats a scene from a fanfic im writing i think i might add that...

that was a really good scene

i liked it alot...you should write more

and the fanfic is almost done i didnt get much work done in the car this time

oooooooooooooooooooo thankies! hurry with ur's i like urs!

omg...damn it...my computer just deleted everything i had....im sooo pissed*makes angry face*shit....ok, it'll just take a little longer then i thought it would*calms down*it was almost done too