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umm...... alright then. i really love poetry, but im really not that good at it. i read all these differant poems, and mine cant even compare lol ... but... oh well, here are just a few of mine, i didnt trash yet lol please comment, good or bad, id just like the truth

i wrote this forever ago: ermm

Shes gone

She walks alone
on down a road
never uttering a sound
she doesn't look back
only at the ground
she cries as she walks
her cares and feelings in her tears
that fall to the ground
her feet are torn and bleeding
from the rough road shes on
no one notices she's gone
her soul is ripped and broken
partly left behind
always hoping for the friend
she'd never find
she hopes to fly as she crumples to the ground
never uttering a single sound
as she slowly dies
she is alone on the
rugged path she's on
but i am afraid
that no one notices shes gone


heres another:

I trusted you
you turned your back
my whole world is shadowing black
you promised me you'd always care
you swore to me you'd always be there
but where are you now
as i cry alone
trying to find my lonely way home
my only companions are my deepest darkest fears
the hand that used to caress my face is now only tears
my tormented soul wreathes and screams
hoping for the end
my heart shatters
as i search for a long lost friend
i scream aloud in pain and fury
death glides along
i pray for it to hurry
what have i done to you thats so wrong
why cant we dance to just one last song
i lay down to rest for one last time
i begin to bleed from my body soul and mind
im shrouded by shadows of hate and dread
i gladly welcome death and the dead
i cry one last tear full of misery and pain
but to you all of this is only a game

and yet another lol:

Would you

Would you catch me if i fall
help me live if it lost it all
wipe my many tears away
Keep all my fears at bay
if i jumped off a building just to see if i could fly
would you try to stop me
or would u watch me die
if i held a gun to my head
would you pull it away
tell me to live just 1 more day
if i held a knife to my wrist
would u hold me close, and never let go
if i tried to die
would u stop me
or simply say good bye
if i loved you
would you love me to
or would you turn the other way
if i said i needed you, what would you say
i cry every night
as i think of you
i scream until it hurts
not knowing what else to do
im sorry for the pain ive caused
the hate you've felt
the love you've lost
and now im afraid i must say good bye
through this poetic note of suicide


like ive said b4, not very good, but please comment anyways lol

okie dokie here are some more poems


Im sorry

Theres something i feel i need to say to you
something that before i just couldnt do
everynight i sob myself to sleep
no longer praying the lord my soul to keep
i put up these walls so people wont see me cry
everyday i wonder why
why did u have to go
and leave me here all alone
they said ur in my heart and soul
and watching over me
then tell me please
why do i hurt so badly
im racked with feelings of anger and guilt
as i realize you dying alone was all my fault
i should have stayed
yet i was the one who walked away
i left you there huddled over crying
little did i know that in a few hours you would be dying
as i slept soundly in my bed
the doctors told ur family that you were dead
when i learned what happened that night
i tried with all my might
to not show weakness to anyone
i left the house running through the rain
i would give anything to stop the pain
the rain that masked my tears
began to wash away my fears
i prayed to god to kill me now
i was no longer afraid, i didnt care how
i sat and cried alone outside
though i said nothing i was screaming in my mind
its all my fault that i couldnt save you
its all my fault i thought there was nothing i could do
i would give my life for yours
yet here i sit alive
writing out this poem
wiping the tears from my eyes
theres something i have to say to you
i say it from the bottom of my heart so you kno its true
this is something ive held inside for so long
but i kno if i dont say it, i would truly be wrong
im sorry
those are the words
i needed to say
but i also felt they needed to be heard

and another:



You held onto me
and said see my dear
look around
theres nothing to fear
but when will you see the dangers are all too real
these are the feelings of hate and pain i feel
im still afraid
you slowly begin to walk away
im all by myself, afraid and crying
baby i love you, but my heart its dying
i look around, im all alone
i truly thought that you were the one
i see how wrong that i have been
to even think that u were my friend
i thought we would last
just you and me
now i see how wrong that i could be
i look into your eyes
they glitter with tears
i look into your soul
i see your fears
you look away pretending nothings wrong
but baby i see hows its been all along
you hide your fears and insecurities
i see the truth hidden behind ur mask of hate and impurities
you show me indifferance and act like you dont care
but how would you feel if i wasnt there
if i off'ed myself tonight
would you be sad
or would you put up a fight
agaisnt ur feelings
ur anger and pain
if i left you alone
like you've done to me
would you miss me? tell me baby
please
i wish i could hold you
i care about you with all my heart and soul
with you around i feel whole
im picking up the peices of my shattered dreams
im holdin my life together just at the seams
id lose my grip on life but id miss you so
i promise you baby i wont let go
you told me this fear i hold inside
was just a figment of my mind
you told me all this pain i feel
that there was no way it could be real
its all real, but dont you see
this is exactly what you've done to me
these tears i cry are over you
because you told her this same shit too
you told her you cared
that she was the only one
baby i loved you
but whatever have fun

COOL! Nice work! Neat stuff this! Though I didn't really catch the rhythm on the one before the last 'I'm sorry' and couldn't you change the last line of the last poem? It's out of place with the rest of the it. Other than that it's great!

wow.... thank you so much. I see wat you mean, ill work on changin that ... in the meantime, i wrote a couple more lol

this one is very random lol but oh well



My best friend is the one winged angel sitting by my side
with the blackened soul
and a tainted mind
the blood red rain that falls from the sky
burns my skin and blinds my eyes
The fire that burns inside is a shadow of the demons that reside
in my very soul, and mind
and while i scream aloud in pain
i struggle with these ropes and chains
my eyes are covered i cannot see
my mouth is held shut, i cannot speak
release me from the lies that hold me back
and the hate that holds me down
i scream and bleed into the ground
im so afraid to learn the truth
yet more afraid to wonder
how i could be so stupid
as to make such a fatal blunder
ur lies have destroyed my heart and soul
never again shall i feel whole
these words i write in my own blood
pour out from within my feelings of hate and love
though i speak these words im afraid they're not heard
they're my feelings of guilt and pain
littered across the paths i take
are the bodies of the slain
once so alive and free
they were the hopers the dreamers the givers
the ones i once hoped to be
my future is dark
but my past is even darker
forever i shall bear a mark
showing where you hurt me so
as im swallowed by shadows of hate and fear
people scorn and look away from me
but when will you realize
i am what you caused me to be


and heres another.... its pretty dark tho


My final good-bye

I drop the gun
my hands are shaking
people are screaming
this earth is quaking
i blink the blood outta my eyes
all i hear now
is a few feeble cries
then screaming bursts forth blocking my mind
its so hard to think
tho i kno this screaming is mine
I turn to the cracked mirror
to see who i am
ive lost myself
was this all just a part of ur plan?
im covered in blood
tho this blood is not mine
i stand alone
no longer thinking of time
Your eyes glaze over
as you slowly let go
you collapse back
into the blood soaked snow
how could i have done this?
this monster isnt me
these tears fall down my face
as i no longer wish to see
you were the only one who cared
but i killed you to
i pulled the trigger
there was nothing
you could do
i pick up the gun
my battle is over
my demons have won
you said all that shit just to make yourself feel bigger
but here i stand alone, about to pull the trigger
i place the gun in my mouth
i shut my eyes tight
i shiver from the cold
so much blood was spilled tonight
i say my final good- byes
i no longer cry
its better if im gone
ill be forgotten before long
i pull the trigger and hear a loud noise
i wake up in my bed
it was just my mothers voice
i dont kno wat to do
im so afraid ill end up hurting you
theres only 1 way to protect the world from this monster that is me
just promise me baby that you wont cry
right before i pull the trigger
ill say my final good-byes

Hey Katz Love Your Poems They Are Soo Deep
~Sierra~

HEY GURL!!!!! .............. spank you berry much cutehug. OMG, since ur a member u should post sum of ur poems cause urs are so frickin kick ass

Nice ones

Thank you hun sooo much cutehug

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
Thank you hun sooo much cutehug


Your welcome, you write good ones

Spankies, they arent that good tho lol...... ur poems are better.... u should really post them demonic

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
Spankies, they arent that good tho lol...... ur poems are better.... u should really post them demonic

They are.......Nah, they aren't good........Nah, I'm too lazy, it's a drag to type them out

I must say, I thought I resided in dark! Nh, just kidding, some real talent here! Nice work!
I like the fact that the one before 'My Final Goodbye' was written in red, it really brings out the line "these words i write in my own blood". Cool.

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
They are.......Nah, they aren't good........Nah, I'm too lazy, it's a drag to type them out

nah .......... THEY ARE GOOD ................ PLEASE DO!!!! they are sooooo good

Originally posted by Immortality
I must say, I thought I resided in dark! Nh, just kidding, some real talent here! Nice work!
I like the fact that the one before 'My Final Goodbye' was written in red, it really brings out the line "these words i write in my own blood". Cool.

Thank you soo much!!!

No problem. Keep 'em cumin

aiight, heres one i found today while cleanin out my desk. its pretty old, but its not too bad, but ill leave that up to u pimps to decide

Release me

Never again we have said
yet our lies are shown by the number of dead
we have failed to hold true
to what we promised the world
to what we have promised ourselves
i say no
we cannot back down from the truths that we hold
i try to speak to warn you all
we have seen with our own eyes
the torture of fellow human beings
yet we stand silent
not a word is spoken
i try to shout
to speak out
but my mouth is covered
and my eyes held shut
release me from the bonds that hold me back
and the chains that hold me down
i scream and bleed into the ground
how long must we ignore the truth
families are dying cryig for help
we ignore their pleas
as they are tortured and killed
release me from the hatred, the fire, the death
release me from the bonds that hold me back
let me go, let me cry, let me save their lives
let me speak, and let me see
let me change the world let me leave

OMG that is freakin good

chyea right.... i like ur avvy *cough* monkey man *cough* lol jpjpjp , i was gonna put a pic of my baby as my avvy, i was gonna put the one of him at the pep rally, but his hairs all over he place in that one

It is and hes not a monkey and u should put that pic of justin as ur avvy

its not, but lance is a monkey lol, i will put that pic as my avvy h/o

but... in the meantime, i just wrote this one, i guess i was thinkin wat it would be like to be truly alone

She fought

She fought against
those who scorned her
against those who cursed her
against those who tried to help
against her life
against death
against the crowds
she pushed everyone away
until one fateful day
she awoke to find everyone gone
now she wished for help
for care
for kindness
for love
for hate
for life
for death
as she realized
she was the only one left
she fought too hard
she fought too long
as she realized
everyone was gone

Wow thats good and ur poems are good

haha, nah ur poems are good tongue............... justin is NOT a leprechaun boitch

ur poems r good 2 gosh take a compliment and if u say ance is a monkey then justin is a leprachaun

just cause justin has red hair does not make him a leprechaun , i kno lance is not a monkey lol i was just messin around, hes still squinty, so you better come up wit a good nickname for justin tongue12
aiight, heres another one i found while cleaning out my desk. i wrote it a WHILE ago lol. i wrote it cause i hate it how ppl judge me right when the meet me, girls see me, look mme up and down, scoff, and think shes such a prep, or shes such a *****...... im not either one to tell you the truth lol.... right sierra?!?!?! RIGHT?!?!?!!? ANSWER ME NOW LITTLE MISSY?!?!?! DONT MAKE ME TAKE OFF MY BELT AND BEAT U WIT IT GURL!!!! lol jp... ere goes

Don't judge

don't judge me for you do not know me
you don't know how i truly feel
why i cry, how i will die
do not scorn me for you have no right
you do not know of my plight
you cannot know my future, as neither do i
you cannot know why i will try
to save the world from this oncoming evil, from the fire, and devistation
from ourselves
do not judge me on my flaws, look at me for my accomplishments
only love but never jugde for that is not your job
we are here to love yet we fail
we hate and jugde our neighbors
steal from and beat our friends
scorn and distrust stranger
ignoring our impending end
and now i ask you to love all you see
for we are being destroyed by our own ignorance as to what is right and what is wrong
yeat as we are blinded by our greed and hate we cannot see that the answer lies in our hearts
the problem in our minds
and the journey in our souls
open your heart, and you will see love, let love wash over you
dance in your veins, permeate your mind and soul, and engulf you entirely, then and only then will you see what fools we have been

its not as dark as sum of my other poems lol

That is soo true girl and ok ok I won't call him a leprechaun just dont call lance a monkey and I like his squintyness

You kno it gurl ............. aiight aiight, lance isnt a monkey, but dont call justin a leprechaun, or a firecrotch rofl....... yea, his squintyness is cute i guess

Ok ok so we agree

chyea lol

Good poem, very deep.

Thank you

alright, heres another poem, i just wrote it down, so its really not good, but i do spose it might have potential to amount to something ... .well, anyways here:

lies

my whole life is a lie
i tried to wipe away the tears i cry
so many things were left unsaid
i pretended to enjoy life
never letting you know of my desire to be dead
through all these lies, so many things were lost
as i pick up the gun, ill pay the ultimate cost
my soul it died a long time ago
the smile ive had is just a show
tonight, peace is what ill make
i put my finger on the trigger
my body begins to shake
tears stream from my eyes
im finally ready to drop my disguise
im not who you think i am
this girl you know is just a sham
now answer me this
are you scared to see
the tormented soul that really is me?
i drop my guards
my shield of lies shatters
now only shards
broken glass is softer than my soul
an unfinished puzzel is so much more whole
im sorry, for leading you on
this sad story is just a song
my song of death, destruction and lies
never again shall i try to fool ur eyes
i say good bye as my soul begins to fade
i pull the trigger, tonight ive paid

ok, heres another, yet again, not very good, im having total writers block lol

my little cage

im locked in this cage
theres no way out
you torment me
i ignore your shouts
i cry so hard
and i cry so long
as i look around, i realize your gone
im no longer afraid, im really pissed off
you left me when i needed you
its all your fault
you go about your life, so happy and well
while im huddled here, burning in my own little hell
the light is leaving from my eyes
and the fire dwindles in my soul
ive ripped my heart to peices
never again can i be whole
i scream so loud i no longer care
i shut my eyes tight wishing you were there
im enraged, no longer afraid
the fire that burns ur body, is just a taste of my rage
my hair whips in the wind
although the wind isnt blowing
its so cold, ur breath frosts before you
although its not snowing
that cold that surrounds ur body
and wraps around your mind
is the cold in my heart
we're really in a bind
i fall so fast, i fall so hard
my love shatter into a thousand little shards
my love for you was just a mistake
i pick up the gun, and begin to shake
u held the key
dangling it in front of me
the key to release me from my hell
the key that would spell
out my freedom
i scream even louder
i can longer think
the world is ending
ur the last link
the rain that falls from the sky is fire
setting this cage a flame
i try to escape
your the one i blame
my anger is clouding my mind'
i know im running out of time
i give up, theres nothing i can do
because i hate to say it, but i still love you
i put the gun down
i make not a sound
i would suffer hell to see you
so happy and well
im suffering and recieve nothing in return
except numerous scars, and so many burns
i battle through this pain
and strife
im locked away in this cage
that is my life

wow.... it might be a while before i post any more poems, my brain feels like a wrung out sponge lol

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
nah .......... THEY ARE GOOD ................ PLEASE DO!!!! they are sooooo good

Yah........Nah, they aren't............Aww shucks, I can't refuse a lady, but I don't want everyone reading themtongue12

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
wow.... it might be a while before i post any more poems, my brain feels like a wrung out sponge lol

Now you know how I feel like after studying.....so that's why I don't study

Nice poems Kat.

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
Yah........Nah, they aren't............Aww shucks, I can't refuse a lady, but I don't want everyone reading themtongue12



Now you know how I feel like after studying.....so that's why I don't study

Nice poems Kat.

THEY ARE GOOD .................. not everyone will read them, its the poetry corner, honestly, who do you think will read them tongue12

i never study either, though i spose i should once in awhile lol

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
THEY ARE GOOD .................. not everyone will read them, its the poetry corner, honestly, who do you think will read them tongue12

i never study either, though i spose i should once in awhile lol

No no no, they suck girl......What I meant was, I don't want to display them in a public place, I never liked displaying my work anyway

Me too, my parents tell me I'd do so much better if I studied, and yet I feel I'm doing great.

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
No no no, they suck girl......What I meant was, I don't want to display them in a public place, I never liked displaying my work anyway

Me too, my parents tell me I'd do so much better if I studied, and yet I feel I'm doing great.

THEY ARE GOOD, AND THATS FINAL!!! ....................... oic hmm

im doin alright, even if i do study, i still do the same on tests even if i wouldnt have studied

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
THEY ARE GOOD, AND THATS FINAL!!! ....................... oic hmm

im doin alright, even if i do study, i still do the same on tests even if i wouldnt have studied

Maybe to you they may be, but I think they suck........oicusrug?

Not for me, if I actually revise seriously, I actually manage to get like perfect or one mark less than perfectshock.....Though I do lose one or two marks due to carelessnesstongue12

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
Maybe to you they may be, but I think they suck........oicusrug?

Not for me, if I actually revise seriously, I actually manage to get like perfect or one mark less than perfectshock.....Though I do lose one or two marks due to carelessnesstongue12

well then, you think wrong tongue12

ur too smart lol

Aww ur poems are freakin awesome u should try droppin the rhymin thing I did its much more deep if u do

aight, i might try

Geez, you need to get some sleep girl! 1-2 'O' Clock in the morning!?
All good aritsts need rest.

haha, when i posted those poems, it was only 8:30 pm where i live ...... and yes, i do need my rest sometimes, but im certaintly no good artsist lol

Course you are, your poems are really good.

Thank you soo much, but they really arent that good. ur poems are sooo much better.

Both ur poems r good

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
well then, you think wrong tongue12

ur too smart lol

Now how can I think wrong if I am too smart

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
Now how can I think wrong if I am too smart

eh... it possible

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
eh... it possible


Not if you say I'm too smart

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
Not if you say I'm too smart

yuh-huh.... damn, why are we always arguin?

At least have the decency to argue poetically! (That was a poor attempt at a joke, sorry)

Originally posted by Immortality
At least have the decency to argue poetically! (That was a poor attempt at a joke, sorry)

It made me laugh lol, so its all good

cool, nobody ever says my jokes are funny

I fink they are lol.

not really the right forum to ask but why did ya choose 'Weeping Fairy' for your username?

umm..... i really have no clue lol. before it was Opaleye92, cause the Antipodean Opaleye is a dragon from Harry Potter, and i was born in 92... but iuno, i think fairies are kewl, so i just kinda thought of something to go along wit it..... so i was just like... .Weeping Fairy lol

Cool, I just like the word Immortality, dunno know why though.

I suppose it's the idea of living forever...

Yea, thats kewl. Though i dont think id ever wanna live FORVER.... i get fed up wit this world and the ppl in it as it is lol. I really dont think i could stand the pain of seeing the ppl i love dying, and the world as i knew it changing lol.

Yeah but seeing humanity developing is a very interesting idea, I'd love to see how everything chages through time, maybe even keep track of my decendants, that would be sooooo cool.

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
yuh-huh.... damn, why are we always arguin?

For funlookaround?

Originally posted by Immortality
not really the right forum to ask but why did ya choose 'Weeping Fairy' for your username?

She weeps a lot......I can't really explain the Fairy part except maybe she wears a short dresssrug?

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
For funlookaround?



She weeps a lot......I can't really explain the Fairy part except maybe she wears a short dresssrug?

but its not fun at all weep

i dont weep alot ...............maybe i do wear a short dress... so wat? shrug

What's that got to do with fairies though?

Originally posted by Immortality
What's that got to do with fairies though?

are you askin meh? i......i... i really dont kno shrug i never said it had anything to do with fairies

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
but its not fun at all weep

i dont weep alot ...............maybe i do wear a short dress... so wat? shrug

Oh sorryhug

Weeper.......So what? That's not good

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
Oh sorryhug

Weeper.......So what? That's not good

its otay cutehug

i dont weep weep............. you make no sense whatsoever

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
are you askin meh? i......i... i really dont kno shrug i never said it had anything to do with fairies

I was askin Demonic Pheonix, he's the one who mentioned it.

Originally posted by Immortality
I was askin Demonic Pheonix, he's the one who mentioned it.

oh. ok then

no probs

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
its otay cutehug

i dont weep weep............. you make no sense whatsoever

What does otay mean?

Everyone weeps at some time, you just happen to do it most of the time.........I know I am senselesscry


TOWARDS IMMORTALITY- Fairies wear short dressessrug?

And my name's Demonic Phoenix, not Pheonix.

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
What does otay mean?

Everyone weeps at some time, you just happen to do it most of the time.........I know I am senselesscry


TOWARDS IMMORTALITY- Fairies wear short dressessrug?

And my name's Demonic Phoenix, not Pheonix.

Otay mans OK tongue

I havent cried for a while, seeing as theres nothing in my life to cry about, thats why i havent written a new poem for a while

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
What does otay mean?

Everyone weeps at some time, you just happen to do it most of the time.........I know I am senselesscry


TOWARDS IMMORTALITY- Fairies wear short dressessrug?

And my name's Demonic Phoenix, not Pheonix.

Chill out dude, simple mistake and I don't think it's traditional for fairies to wear short dresses or anyway

I WENT TO ROME SO I WROTE THIS POEM AND THEN I WENT HOME ALONE DO DO DO DO DA DO DIDDLE DO I LIKE EXTRACTOR ANS AND STUFF THAT LOOKS LIKE CHEESE EVEN WHEN IM NOT IN A HOUSE I CAN STILL LOOK LIKE I OWN MY OWN HEAD SO UP THE RA

kewl poem frogsnot, but if you have many more, i suggest you post them in ur own thread

ok, i finally got some inspiriation for a new poem... though im not quite sure if thats a good or bad thing anymore lol. well it sux, but i just jotted sumthin down like 5 min ago so... here goes:

Drug
this drug i take
runnin through my veins
i take this drug
to wipe away the pain
the pain of the fact
that you lied to me
dont tell me anymore shit baby
cause i dont wanna hear it no more
you left me brokenhearted
when you ran off with your whore
this drug has taken over
my body soul and mind
i take this drug
cause i believed your goddamn stupid lines
please just leave me alone
dont you ever come back
ill send you this poem
while i shoot up on some smack
you said you loved me
i believed it was true
but baby dont you see
id give anything to show you how much i love you to
but its over
we're through
i hoped i would never be sayin this to you
but i doubt you care
cause that **** is easy
you cheated on me baby, just cause i wasnt sleazy
i take this drug to wipe away the pain
i take this drug, cause i was played like a game

Originally posted by Immortality
Chill out dude, simple mistake and I don't think it's traditional for fairies to wear short dresses or anyway

I know, and I didn't mean to piss you or anything.

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
Otay mans OK tongue

I havent cried for a while, seeing as theres nothing in my life to cry about, thats why i havent written a new poem for a while

Yeah sure

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
kewl poem frogsnot, but if you have many more, i suggest you post them in ur own thread

ok, i finally got some inspiriation for a new poem... though im not quite sure if thats a good or bad thing anymore lol. well it sux, but i just jotted sumthin down like 5 min ago so... here goes:

Drug
this drug i take
runnin through my veins
i take this drug
to wipe away the pain
the pain of the fact
that you lied to me
dont tell me anymore shit baby
cause i dont wanna hear it no more
you left me brokenhearted
when you ran off with your whore
this drug has taken over
my body soul and mind
i take this drug
cause i believed your goddamn stupid lines
please just leave me alone
dont you ever come back
ill send you this poem
while i shoot up on some smack
you said you loved me
i believed it was true
but baby dont you see
id give anything to show you how much i love you to
but its over
we're through
i hoped i would never be sayin this to you
but i doubt you care
cause that **** is easy
you cheated on me baby, just cause i wasnt sleazy
i take this drug to wipe away the pain
i take this drug, cause i was played like a game
Does this mean you cried this time?

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
I know, and I didn't mean to piss you or anything.



Yeah sure


Does this mean you cried this time?

A little, yes lol

Really good poem Katz its freakin awesome way better than the crappy shit I've come up with lately

U a liar gurl

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
A little, yes lol

That's nothin to lol about darling, that's to worry about.

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
That's nothin to lol about darling, that's to worry about.

I did laugh tho, at the fact that im so stupid lol

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
I did laugh tho, at the fact that im so stupid lol

Why are you stupid?

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
Why are you stupid?

I just am lol

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
I just am lol

Nah, you aren't stupid, you are intelligent. Everyone is actually.

I got a helluva lot more inspiration for poems last night unfortunately.....

Love aint free

Baby, my heart is breakin
I cant take it no more
I know you been runnin around
wit that stupid ass whore
I gave you my heart, soul, and mind
but baby, you wouldnt even give me the time
i trusted you
and look wat you did to me
they didnt lie when they said
that love aint free
it comes at a cost
and the cost was my heart
you ripped it from me baby
and you tore it apart
you text me that you love me
while you lie with her in bed
i sit here writin this poem
about to put a bullet through my head
whyd you lie to me baby
why cant you see
wat all these lies are doin to me
they're bringin me down
and breakin my soul
i feel so played
but im playin the fool
i miss talkin to you baby
our little one on ones
you were the music to my ears
and the moon to my sun
but it was all just one ****ed up lie
and your just leavin me here
to wonder why
why did you leave me
when i needed you
it was something you said
youd never do
but promises are broken
and loves are lost
and tonight ill pay the ultimate cost
the cost for love is now my life
all my battles
all my strifes
all the pleasure
and all the pain
everything lost
and nothing gained
i felt love baby
and i know it was true
it was all the love i felt for you
but love is pain
and nothing more
i pull the trigger
and hit the floor
they say love aint free
and now i know its true
i paid with my life
because i loved you

Damn girl do ur thing u can write and that is soo true I know what ur going through and we'll fix I promise

i cant write, i can whine lol...... i kno u kno girl... we'll fix ur prob, i dont see how mine can be fixed

YES U CAN RIGHT AND IT CAN BE FIXED U GOTTA TALK 2 HIM and ur problem will be fixed b4 mine will

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
I got a helluva lot more inspiration for poems last night unfortunately.....

Love aint free

Baby, my heart is breakin
I cant take it no more
I know you been runnin around
wit that stupid ass whore
I gave you my heart, soul, and mind
but baby, you wouldnt even give me the time
i trusted you
and look wat you did to me
they didnt lie when they said
that love aint free
it comes at a cost
and the cost was my heart
you ripped it from me baby
and you tore it apart
you text me that you love me
while you lie with her in bed
i sit here writin this poem
about to put a bullet through my head
whyd you lie to me baby
why cant you see
wat all these lies are doin to me
they're bringin me down
and breakin my soul
i feel so played
but im playin the fool
i miss talkin to you baby
our little one on ones
you were the music to my ears
and the moon to my sun
but it was all just one ****ed up lie
and your just leavin me here
to wonder why
why did you leave me
when i needed you
it was something you said
youd never do
but promises are broken
and loves are lost
and tonight ill pay the ultimate cost
the cost for love is now my life
all my battles
all my strifes
all the pleasure
and all the pain
everything lost
and nothing gained
i felt love baby
and i know it was true
it was all the love i felt for you
but love is pain
and nothing more
i pull the trigger
and hit the floor
they say love aint free
and now i know its true
i paid with my life
because i loved you


What happened this timecry?

Originally posted by FROGSNOT
I WENT TO ROME SO I WROTE THIS POEM AND THEN I WENT HOME ALONE DO DO DO DO DA DO DIDDLE DO I LIKE EXTRACTOR ANS AND STUFF THAT LOOKS LIKE CHEESE EVEN WHEN IM NOT IN A HOUSE I CAN STILL LOOK LIKE I OWN MY OWN HEAD SO UP THE RA
Yo, what the **** dude?! Is that even supposed to make any sense at all?

You're so insensitive Demonic PhOEnix, and I wasn't pissed last time, that was just me being me.
Excellent Poems comin in!! Nice!!

Originally posted by FROGSNOT
I WENT TO ROME SO I WROTE THIS POEM AND THEN I WENT HOME ALONE DO DO DO DO DA DO DIDDLE DO I LIKE EXTRACTOR ANS AND STUFF THAT LOOKS LIKE CHEESE EVEN WHEN IM NOT IN A HOUSE I CAN STILL LOOK LIKE I OWN MY OWN HEAD SO UP THE RA



They don't come much worse than this.

Originally posted by Immortality
You're so insensitive Demonic PhOEnix, and I wasn't pissed last time, that was just me being me.
Excellent Poems comin in!! Nice!!

Sorry, it's just that quite a few people have made an error on the last part on my KMC name, so yeah, I was just pointing it out, with no anger intended.

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
What happened this timecry?

something that wasnt sposed to happen weep

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
something that wasnt sposed to happen weep

Awwcry, no one means for these things to happen, they just do, that's life, everyone has bad things happen to them.

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
Awwcry, no one means for these things to happen, they just do, that's life, everyone has bad things happen to them.

i spose ur right

Yeah, no one goes through life without facing difficulties or problems.

GREAT STUFF!! I really relate to quite a few of them. Nice nice work

Thank you Bunny B. My boyfriend broke up with me, so ill prolly have a lot more poems comin in, when i can actually see enough to write...... he didnt even break up wit me correctly.... hes sposed to tell me to my face, so i can smack him, give him back the necklace he got me for x-mas that ive been wearing everyday, and storm away really pissed off, but no, he just wrote me a note sayin that we are 2 completely differant people, and it just isnt working out, so he thinks we should break up, so i wrote back, and gave him the note after gym class when he came outta weight lifting, and i just gave him the necklace back wit the note

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
Thank you Bunny B. My boyfriend broke up with me, so ill prolly have a lot more poems comin in, when i can actually see enough to write...... he didnt even break up wit me correctly.... hes sposed to tell me to my face, so i can smack him, give him back the necklace he got me for x-mas that ive been wearing everyday, and storm away really pissed off, but no, he just wrote me a note sayin that we are 2 completely differant people, and it just isnt working out, so he thinks we should break up, so i wrote back, and gave him the note after gym class when he came outta weight lifting, and i just gave him the necklace back wit the note

Sorry Kittyhug, though I don't really want to say much here in this thread.

Kitty I'm soooooooooooooooo sry I feel like such a shitty friend right now cuz I gave u hope and he took it all away with a snap of a finger

Originally posted by SouthernGirl814
Kitty I'm soooooooooooooooo sry I feel like such a shitty friend right now cuz I gave u hope and he took it all away with a snap of a finger

U ARE NOT A SHITTY FRIEND... GOT THAT?!?.... uve always been there for me, and i couldnt ask for more right now.

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
Thank you Bunny B. My boyfriend broke up with me, so ill prolly have a lot more poems comin in, when i can actually see enough to write...... he didnt even break up wit me correctly.... hes sposed to tell me to my face, so i can smack him, give him back the necklace he got me for x-mas that ive been wearing everyday, and storm away really pissed off, but no, he just wrote me a note sayin that we are 2 completely differant people, and it just isnt working out, so he thinks we should break up, so i wrote back, and gave him the note after gym class when he came outta weight lifting, and i just gave him the necklace back wit the note

Awww I'm really sorry darlin! hug

Don't let it get to you so much. If he didn't even have the balls to say it to your face then he is not worth it. You are young and have so much ahead of you. So many other guys would die to be with you. And you will find one who lies you for who you are. I just know it! Your great and don't let some guy get you down. hug

Originally posted by Bunny B
Awww I'm really sorry darlin! hug

Don't let it get to you so much. If he didn't even have the balls to say it to your face then he is not worth it. You are young and have so much ahead of you. So many other guys would die to be with you. And you will find one who lies you for who you are. I just know it! Your great and don't let some guy get you down. hug

Thank you sooo much cutehug...... it means a ton to me

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix


They don't come much worse than this.

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
Thank you Bunny B. My boyfriend broke up with me, so ill prolly have a lot more poems comin in, when i can actually see enough to write...... he didnt even break up wit me correctly.... hes sposed to tell me to my face, so i can smack him, give him back the necklace he got me for x-mas that ive been wearing everyday, and storm away really pissed off, but no, he just wrote me a note sayin that we are 2 completely differant people, and it just isnt working out, so he thinks we should break up, so i wrote back, and gave him the note after gym class when he came outta weight lifting, and i just gave him the necklace back wit the note

I've never actually been through that but, man, I feel for ya

Originally posted by Immortality
I've never actually been through that but, man, I feel for ya

thank you... i hope you never have to go through it

see listen 2 us just forget the dude hes not worth it ur better than him

i cant forget him ill try tho

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
i cant forget him ill try tho

Think about what I said.

Wishin you all the best W.F

I will Demonic

Thnx Immortality

U GOTTA 4GET HIM

oops.. edited

Can't wait for more girl

Sierra: I CANT! ive been tryin to

Bunny B: Thank you so much

Originally posted by SouthernGirl814
U GOTTA 4GET HIM

Not as easy as it sounds...

Originally posted by Immortality
Not as easy as it sounds...

exactly

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
I will Demonic

Thnx Immortality

Talked to him yet?

yes she has talked 2 him things r goin better u know they r kitty

things are goin alright

I hope your doing alright fairy hug

Thank you Bunny B cutehug

Daaaammmnnn girl heres the next MC Kat lol thats really freakin awesome

Hahahahahahhahahahah thnx sisi luv ya gurl im MC Banana haha nvm, thats lances name haha, i better not steal it, he might go ape on me lmao. Ima stick wit MC Kat Diesel lmao, u gave me the nickname MC, and jonathan calls me Kat Diesel so it all works out lmao. u can be MC Mist lmao

Damnnn..Really nice!

thank you sooo much Neha!

lol hahaha Kitty dont be callin me MC Mist I hate bein called Sierra Mist

w/e u say mist haha, girl, ima miss u soo much it aint even funny, shit man my eyes r red from cryin so much, i look high lol. this sux, txt me every single day or ill hunt ur ass down lmao. i love you sooo much (no homo).

ok, this is seriously my least fav poem, but i wrote it cuz its shit thats been goin on. this is about sum1 i really care about. its not good, but its summer, and ive been lazin at the pool, an ive been in a writing slump so yea.

Save me

These pills i pop
and these wrists i slit
i jus cant stop
these tears fallin'cuz u doin that shit
stoned wit all ur friends
ur jus not the same
eyes so red
u floatin so high
i hate it when u change
so ill jus say good bye
dont wanna live ur life without weed
blood pourin from these wrists
live ur life without me
i dont wanna change u
i wanna save ur life
cuz my love is true
but u cant see that
ur vision is blurred
jus like ur mind
cant go a day without acid, cig's and joints
ur runnin outta time
make a choice
drugs or life
ur joys or strife
drugs r ur way out
but wat if ur solutions to the pains of life
only end in ur demise
theyre not jus killin u
im dyin too
dont wanna see u fade
so ill jus go
go away
bullet in the head
and once im gone
im tellin u baby, it wont be long
ur dyin too
wat the **** can i do??
i dont wanna say it
cuz then itd be true
but baby, i need to save ur life
cuz i love u
i draw a ****ed up picture
i draw it with turns an twists
i draw it with this razor
ill draw it on my wrist
as i fall to the floor
u watch me die
with a pleading glance
i look into ur eyes
but ur stoned again
not giving a ****
u turn on ur music
and light a joint up

ok that is really in ur word f****d up but no offense im not startin a fight but please dont linger over his ass u can sooo do soooo much better!! please he's not worth it love ya!!

****ed up like a bad poem? like not well written?an hes not an ass, but im not gonna fight about this again lol. but at least i can check out the super fiiiiiiiiiiiiine boys now! haha

Let me take a guess, Was your ex a drugie?

Hun i love your poems!!!! That one anit so bad either.

Dude I'll be nice bout ur guys from now on I promise miss ya girl!!

yea, he was a druggie, and thank you sooo much bun bun hug

and thnx sisi it means alot to me

Please tell me what you guys think, constructive crticism and any other kind of criticism is welcome lmao.