Vath's poetry.. Thing

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Vathu
Yeah. I have some.. Work.

But most of it is copywrighted by my Girlfriend and I. Yet I'm still glad to share some with you.. She's really good. She helps me most of the time. Actually ALL the time. But hey. The following I was for my lovely girlfriend, Caitie.

Habit was.. A dud at first. But then it kind of grew into a love poem.. Glad it didn't go down the depressed path. I don't like that path..
But it was intially for me to declare my love for her and so forth..

Enjoy. =]

My Habit
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My love for her is like no other,
It's sweet and longing, Soft and true.
My love for her can blow you away.
If you care to share the sway of hearts beating and breathing, mingling.
My love for her, so simple, so sweet,
just to watch her smile, and raise the beat
of my heart with such a simple action.
Just watch me break down, and catch the fraction,
of the twinkle, of the magic. Once I know she'll be my habit.

Copyright ©2006 Tyler Dale Cox

AOR
The copyright thing it pretty neat....oh the poem. It was good. However I am a little intrigued by the title. What did you mean by "my habit"?

Vathu
Well. It seemed to fit.. But when I did think about it.. She's my girlfriend and well.. She's like a drug. Can't get enough of her. Y'know?

If not. I guess it cannot be explained. ._.;

Weeping Fairy
Awww... beautiful poem, I hope you post some more happy

Vathu
Thanks. I have some more, most of them were written by my girlfriend. At least one I wrote was written from her perspective ABOUT me. o-O

Fatima
Its great ..Vathu smile

Keep writing ..

Vathu
Thanks for the encouragement.. <_<

My girlfriend is my Inspiration. ;_;

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