Korosan
Well, the story I'm about to post is what one of my friends in Real Life's own fan fic. (the same one behind "Another Time Another Story" Fanfic) He never did finish it and has given me permission to start off where he left off. But before i do that i am going to see how many people will read
it. Please post all of your comments.
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Harry Potter and the Last War
-A Long Summer-
It had been a very long summer for Harry. His time at the Dursleys had been less than enjoyable. What had made it all the more unenjoyable was the recent loss of Dumbledore. As Harry brushed the hair out of his eyes and sat up in bed putting on his glasses he wondered, as he did daily, was it his fault? Dumbledore spent the precious few seconds he could have used preparing to defend himself on parlyzing Harry.
Not a night went by Harry didn't dream or think of the night Dumbledore died...He could still picture clearly Dumbledore on the ground at the base of the astronomy tower, people gathered around. It sadend him to think that probably one of the most powerful wizards of all time was dead. But not only was Dumbledore powerful, he was Harry's teacher, and Harry wanted to think of him as a good friend as well.
As he walked down the stairs he passed over the cupboard under the stairs and he remembered the life he had before being taken to Hogwarts. Now with Dumbledore gone he lost one of the things that made Hogwarts special.
Harry had decided not to go back to Hogwarts though. Instead he would spend one more day with the Dursleys, then, off to the burrow for Bill and Fleur's wedding which was in one week. After that he would head for Godric's Hollow, to visit his parent's graves and hopefully find a lead on the horcrux's.
Harry came down at the breakfast table and his Aunt petunia served him some eggs and bacon. Aunt Petunia had increasingly been more caring the past two years than his whole life together. There was a crash in the living room. Unfortunatly Uncle Vernon hadn't.
"Blast these confounded owls! I won't have it! I won't, I--"
Harry walked into the living room as Vernon was trying to catch an owl flying around with a letter in its hand.
"It's for me..."
The owl dropped the letter into Harry's hands perfectly, then flew back out the window where it had apparently entered. The letter was addressed to him, from Hogwarts. He knew it was mail to announce the opening of Hogwarts this year with a supplies list. He threw it in the trash.
No sooner had he done so when there was a knock on his door. He went to answer it and when he opened the door a mildly suprised and shocked look came over his face but it quickly broke into a wide grin as he saw who was standing there.
Ron, Hermione, Mr. Weasley. Behind them was what suprised harry the most. It was their ford angelina from Ron and Harry's second year trip to hogwarts!
Ch2- Flight to the Burrow
Harry stared dumbstruck. Wasn't the car running wild in the forbbiden forest outside Hogwarts? As if reading his mind, Hermoine, Ron and Mr. Weasley grinned at each other and awnsered his question before he could ask.
"It suprised us as much as it did you, we woke up the morning after Ron got back and there it was, just sitting in our front lawn! Strange isn't it? Mr. Weasley said, "We managed to fix her up and now she's as good as new, if not better!"
"Wow, uh...thats great..." Harry replied, "but I thought you were picking me up tommarow."
"Oh you know, we just couldn't wait to show you, and besides," Mr. Weasley leaned in closer, "It's getting more dangerous here than you mary realize. I will tell you more in the car."
Harry nodded and ran up the stairs to his room. He wasn't expecting them to come today. Not that he cared, he loved the burrow much more than this house. The Weasley's were always very kind to him.
As he entered the his room, he heard Ron and Hermoine come up the stairs and Mr. Weasley attempt to start a conversation with uncle Vernon. He laughed silently to himself as he remembered when the weasley's tried to use floo powder to get to Harry's house.
He was grabbing his Firebolt when Ron and Hermoine entered his room. Hermoine started stroking Hedwig as Ron helped Harry get his things together. They seemed more quiet than he remembered.
"You two are awfully quiet..."
"No we aren't, your imagining things" Ron stated quickly.
"No i'm not."
"C'mon we just want to get out of here quickly."
Harry let it go at that and carried his suitcase and belongings downstairs, Ron behind him helping some other belongings of his, and Hermoine brought up the rear carrying Hedwig's cage with Hedwig on her shoulder. Harry reached the bottom of the stairs as Mr. Weasley was finishing talking to Uncle Vernon.
"So really, egg's will not fry in one of your, toaster's was it? As I found out the hard way. And I don't mean to brag but my plug collection has gotten rather big lately...Oh Harry! are you ready?"
Harry nodded, struggling to keep a straight face, as Uncle Vernon was looking at Mr. Weasley his as if he were the craziest person alive.
"Ok then! let's get your things in the car and be off! And by the way" Mr. Weasley looked back at Uncle Vernon, "Good luck with your frying pan!"
As Harry and Ron put Harry's things in the trunk, Hermoine and Mr. Weasley got into the front seats. As Harry and Ron sat in the back, the memories flooded back of them sitting in the car while getting pounded by the womping willow, and how Ron's wand broke. Oh the trouble it caused Ron and some of the situations it created made Harry smile. As the car took into the air, instantly going invisible Mr. Weasly spoke,
"Lot of trouble been happening recently, with Dumbledore gone many wizard's and witches have gotten bolder, or given up on the side of good, and gone to voldermorts side. People dont know who to trust anymore. With each passing day his side grows stronger and stronger, while the ministry grows weaker. There are no safe places anymore."
"What about Hogwarts!?" Harry asked quickly.
"Hogwarts was safe because dumbledore was there."
Hermoine spoke up, "not true, there are various spells on--"
"It's not any average wizard Hermoine, you think those spell's keep hogwart's safe more than Dumbledore did? No, those spell's mean nothing to Voldermort, just like last year, he will find a way to get in." Mr. Weasley said plainly.
The ride was much more quiet as the remembered last year, how Draco had betrayed them, how Snape betrayed them, there was betrayel everywhere.
"What does it matter to me," Harry said slowly, "I'm not going back this year."
"What!? You have to go back Harry!" Mr. Weasley shouted at him with suprise in his voice.
"No, Dumbledore wanted me to do something, and i must finish what he started..."
"Dumbledore is gone Harry! I'm sure he wouldn't have wanted you to quit school and go on some crazy mission!"
"You don't understand..."
"We will see about that, I may not be your father but your in my care right now, and i won't have you in anymore danger!" Mr. Weasley said with finality.
As Harry was about to say more, he didn't for two reasons... One was that he didn't want to tell him about the horcrux's...not yet, and two, the burrow was in sight. They had arrived.
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I am aware of many of the grammar mistakes, but my friend asked me to just post it the way it had originally been so...there ye goes the first 2 chapters. Here comes Chapters 3-4! (PLEASE COMMENT!)
it. Please post all of your comments.
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Harry Potter and the Last War
-A Long Summer-
It had been a very long summer for Harry. His time at the Dursleys had been less than enjoyable. What had made it all the more unenjoyable was the recent loss of Dumbledore. As Harry brushed the hair out of his eyes and sat up in bed putting on his glasses he wondered, as he did daily, was it his fault? Dumbledore spent the precious few seconds he could have used preparing to defend himself on parlyzing Harry.
Not a night went by Harry didn't dream or think of the night Dumbledore died...He could still picture clearly Dumbledore on the ground at the base of the astronomy tower, people gathered around. It sadend him to think that probably one of the most powerful wizards of all time was dead. But not only was Dumbledore powerful, he was Harry's teacher, and Harry wanted to think of him as a good friend as well.
As he walked down the stairs he passed over the cupboard under the stairs and he remembered the life he had before being taken to Hogwarts. Now with Dumbledore gone he lost one of the things that made Hogwarts special.
Harry had decided not to go back to Hogwarts though. Instead he would spend one more day with the Dursleys, then, off to the burrow for Bill and Fleur's wedding which was in one week. After that he would head for Godric's Hollow, to visit his parent's graves and hopefully find a lead on the horcrux's.
Harry came down at the breakfast table and his Aunt petunia served him some eggs and bacon. Aunt Petunia had increasingly been more caring the past two years than his whole life together. There was a crash in the living room. Unfortunatly Uncle Vernon hadn't.
"Blast these confounded owls! I won't have it! I won't, I--"
Harry walked into the living room as Vernon was trying to catch an owl flying around with a letter in its hand.
"It's for me..."
The owl dropped the letter into Harry's hands perfectly, then flew back out the window where it had apparently entered. The letter was addressed to him, from Hogwarts. He knew it was mail to announce the opening of Hogwarts this year with a supplies list. He threw it in the trash.
No sooner had he done so when there was a knock on his door. He went to answer it and when he opened the door a mildly suprised and shocked look came over his face but it quickly broke into a wide grin as he saw who was standing there.
Ron, Hermione, Mr. Weasley. Behind them was what suprised harry the most. It was their ford angelina from Ron and Harry's second year trip to hogwarts!
Ch2- Flight to the Burrow
Harry stared dumbstruck. Wasn't the car running wild in the forbbiden forest outside Hogwarts? As if reading his mind, Hermoine, Ron and Mr. Weasley grinned at each other and awnsered his question before he could ask.
"It suprised us as much as it did you, we woke up the morning after Ron got back and there it was, just sitting in our front lawn! Strange isn't it? Mr. Weasley said, "We managed to fix her up and now she's as good as new, if not better!"
"Wow, uh...thats great..." Harry replied, "but I thought you were picking me up tommarow."
"Oh you know, we just couldn't wait to show you, and besides," Mr. Weasley leaned in closer, "It's getting more dangerous here than you mary realize. I will tell you more in the car."
Harry nodded and ran up the stairs to his room. He wasn't expecting them to come today. Not that he cared, he loved the burrow much more than this house. The Weasley's were always very kind to him.
As he entered the his room, he heard Ron and Hermoine come up the stairs and Mr. Weasley attempt to start a conversation with uncle Vernon. He laughed silently to himself as he remembered when the weasley's tried to use floo powder to get to Harry's house.
He was grabbing his Firebolt when Ron and Hermoine entered his room. Hermoine started stroking Hedwig as Ron helped Harry get his things together. They seemed more quiet than he remembered.
"You two are awfully quiet..."
"No we aren't, your imagining things" Ron stated quickly.
"No i'm not."
"C'mon we just want to get out of here quickly."
Harry let it go at that and carried his suitcase and belongings downstairs, Ron behind him helping some other belongings of his, and Hermoine brought up the rear carrying Hedwig's cage with Hedwig on her shoulder. Harry reached the bottom of the stairs as Mr. Weasley was finishing talking to Uncle Vernon.
"So really, egg's will not fry in one of your, toaster's was it? As I found out the hard way. And I don't mean to brag but my plug collection has gotten rather big lately...Oh Harry! are you ready?"
Harry nodded, struggling to keep a straight face, as Uncle Vernon was looking at Mr. Weasley his as if he were the craziest person alive.
"Ok then! let's get your things in the car and be off! And by the way" Mr. Weasley looked back at Uncle Vernon, "Good luck with your frying pan!"
As Harry and Ron put Harry's things in the trunk, Hermoine and Mr. Weasley got into the front seats. As Harry and Ron sat in the back, the memories flooded back of them sitting in the car while getting pounded by the womping willow, and how Ron's wand broke. Oh the trouble it caused Ron and some of the situations it created made Harry smile. As the car took into the air, instantly going invisible Mr. Weasly spoke,
"Lot of trouble been happening recently, with Dumbledore gone many wizard's and witches have gotten bolder, or given up on the side of good, and gone to voldermorts side. People dont know who to trust anymore. With each passing day his side grows stronger and stronger, while the ministry grows weaker. There are no safe places anymore."
"What about Hogwarts!?" Harry asked quickly.
"Hogwarts was safe because dumbledore was there."
Hermoine spoke up, "not true, there are various spells on--"
"It's not any average wizard Hermoine, you think those spell's keep hogwart's safe more than Dumbledore did? No, those spell's mean nothing to Voldermort, just like last year, he will find a way to get in." Mr. Weasley said plainly.
The ride was much more quiet as the remembered last year, how Draco had betrayed them, how Snape betrayed them, there was betrayel everywhere.
"What does it matter to me," Harry said slowly, "I'm not going back this year."
"What!? You have to go back Harry!" Mr. Weasley shouted at him with suprise in his voice.
"No, Dumbledore wanted me to do something, and i must finish what he started..."
"Dumbledore is gone Harry! I'm sure he wouldn't have wanted you to quit school and go on some crazy mission!"
"You don't understand..."
"We will see about that, I may not be your father but your in my care right now, and i won't have you in anymore danger!" Mr. Weasley said with finality.
As Harry was about to say more, he didn't for two reasons... One was that he didn't want to tell him about the horcrux's...not yet, and two, the burrow was in sight. They had arrived.
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I am aware of many of the grammar mistakes, but my friend asked me to just post it the way it had originally been so...there ye goes the first 2 chapters. Here comes Chapters 3-4! (PLEASE COMMENT!)