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“Although we have never met I cant help but feel like we know each other or should know each other. As I stare at you and realise that life prior to this very moment was not living but rather searching, searching for you so that I may live and breathe and enjoy these very things that we desire the very thing that we ponder. And so it has come the very movement in which you grasp my very being and existence in your hands and with a simple word can make or end that which we desire most.”

Cool, if not a bit short.
What's with "the relevance of yes and no"?

Originally posted by Immortality
Cool, if not a bit short.
What's with "the relevance of yes and no"?

Its a moment when simple words can have a lasting effect, what ever she says changes Finnigan Fins life forever its either yes or no.

Ah, I see. So..? Postin any more stuff?

I like it it makes sense even if hundreds of ppl dont understand it i do

I like it! Pretty good

Nice poem

It's not particularly groundbreaking but it's okay.

Originally posted by Immortality
Ah, I see. So..? Postin any more stuff?

Yes i have posted a new one Its called dreams of our father.

Originally posted by SouthernGirl814
I like it it makes sense even if hundreds of ppl dont understand it i do

Thanks i am glad you like it.

Originally posted by Bunny B
I like it! Pretty good

I hate to be repetitive but i find it appropriate to respond since you provided a feedback. Thank you very much i respect both positve and negative feedbacks.

Originally posted by sexyking
Yes i have posted a new one Its called dreams of our father.

I meant this thread...

immortality u should check out his other one his 1st thing is really good