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Ok so I as in school and I got bored so I wrote this little story…….

The setting is in Port Royal. Will is at the altar and sees Elizabeth walking down the aisle. Soft music playing, hundreds of people are watching her as she slowly takes each step. She gets to the altar.

Priest: Do you Will take Elizabeth to be your wife?

Will: I do

Will smiles at Elizabeth. Elizabeth smiles back but in her eyes you can see that she is making the wrong choice.

Priest: Do you Elizabeth take Will to be your husband?

Elizabeth: I…I…Um

Just than Elizabeth looks over to the back of the church. Jack enter with that sexy smile upon his face. He wants her and she wants him BADLY!Elizabeth ran down the aisle. Her dress tore and became all ratty. She jumped and wrapped her legs around Jack. They start making out, getting all hot and heavy. Music stops. Jaws drop. Will is left there…..

Will: Elizabeth, what are you doing? I thought you loved me.

Elizabeth: (still in Jack’s arms) It would have never worked out between us. I need a real pirate, not some wanabe blacksmith. Besides (now looking at Jack) I was going to leave you for him anyways.

Jack: I knew you saved me because you missed me love.

Elizabeth: A girl will do whatever she can to get what she wants. And I want you right here, right now.

Jack and Elizabeth start making out and do it up against the wall. Will is left crying at the altar………

So what do you guys think? And you are more than welcome to add on to this little story.

it's amazing! you're good!

Oooooo....WOW...I Love it...lol!!

I see Liz completely lost all shame and did it with Jack right there in front of everyone...lol!!

But then again who wouldnt lose control like that!!! LOL!!!

Great JoB!!

thank you, see i thought her doing it, in a church, infront of everyone, would show more of her pirate side, lol

Good start, but we need to add more at the beginning.

well then lets do it...i can put the final thing together when we have it completed. does anyone have any suggestions?

well, first we need to keep the characters the same. Elizabeth is not going to fall that easy in jack's arm. The story can get more interesting if she plays it hard to get.

Will wouldn't cry lol. Yeah it's funny but Will wouldn't be crying because he lost his girl.

To write story, we need a plot and setting. And most importantly for the characters to stay in tacked.

ok well, how about the part in the church, them getting married...is that still in or are we starting over fresh?

I think we should start fresh. But you did gave me an idea so that's great start on your part.

alright sounds good, so wats ur idea?

I have to make dinner. So I will be back in like 20 minutes with ideas.

save some for me!

Ok, that was fast.

WOW i thought it was REALLY good Lady_captinjack

now that ur back mina, care to share ur ideas with the group? lol

Now that I think about it, I'm not sure. A lot of people love it that way. So why make changes because one person said so?

well me, being the writer and all don't mind changing it up a bit...i did ask for ur opinon after all

i would still love to hear ur ideas mina!

yea, it would be fun to change it up a bit

Well, we can make this story with a love/hate hard to get relationship with Jack and Liz. That way it spices up the story.

Elizabeth wouldn't fall into Jack's arms that easily . The question is who will be the first to fall into temptation?

Will can be the same as DMC. A person who is determined in getting what he wants.

that sounds like a good story too!

ohhh i say jack would fall first, he wants her and he knows she wants him but we just have to get her to admit it.